Bless bless...nice feedback. I agree with you on some of the points but the others are just going to have to be in there for creative reasons. I'll be in Tampa round thanksgiving, feel free to come cypher with my friends and I.
The first puppet section was a bit too long for me.
Being in that character really ties your hands (excuse the pun) and doesnt allow the strength of your movement to come out.
Also, pay a little more attention to the story you are telling in the puppet section....when you move from center stage it is not clear why (other than being controlled)
mad props 2 pwt!!!!!!
Penningstoned420 2 years ago
No prob. Again. Sorry for being an asshole. And thanks for putting my ego in check without being a dick about it.
apainlessend 2 years ago
not sure what your talking about...but sure :)
Pwt4Fdc 2 years ago
and next time you are in Tampa let me know and we will go rip the town up!!!!
1incorrigible1 2 years ago
Bless bless...nice feedback. I agree with you on some of the points but the others are just going to have to be in there for creative reasons. I'll be in Tampa round thanksgiving, feel free to come cypher with my friends and I.
Pwt4Fdc 2 years ago
I completely understand...its your routine...do it the way it makes sense to you...that way you feel it.
Make sure that Tom lets me know when you are going to be in town and we plan it out
1incorrigible1 2 years ago
I loved the section after your cut the strings.
I would work on your transitions in that section some didnt flow together as well as they could have.
Your popping and locking is very good....I prefer a bit harder popping but that is just MY style
Also try to use more of the stage.
But that is an awesome concept just tweak it a bit...Nice job!!!
1incorrigible1 2 years ago
GREAT CONCEPT!!!!!!!!
The first puppet section was a bit too long for me.
Being in that character really ties your hands (excuse the pun) and doesnt allow the strength of your movement to come out.
Also, pay a little more attention to the story you are telling in the puppet section....when you move from center stage it is not clear why (other than being controlled)
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1incorrigible1 2 years ago
You are right.
My bad man...
I didnt mean to come off as a jerk..
Its just your movements.
They should jerk and be sharper..
you didnt allow your body to hang the way it should...
and you were too fluid...
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JMO.
mugenmultiverse 2 years ago
Thanx...see with specifics I can critique it through your eyes better. Appreciate the feedback...Peace
Pwt4Fdc 2 years ago
Just awful..
mugenmultiverse 2 years ago
care to leave me some specifics to work on? Or are you just going to be a vague Tool? because I'm all for constructive critiques :)
Pwt4Fdc 2 years ago
AHAHHAAHAHA!
whose the joker?
Pwt4Fdc 2 years ago
I still think a performance in the Joker suit would look good. Not this one, but I'm confident you'd make a good Joker.
jdean235 2 years ago