I just didn't like the parts where the lyrics go "hit the ground, hard"
You should change the "hard" part to something like "hit the ground, endddlesssssllyyyyy" and keep that note going instead of just stopping with "hard". Hopefully I said that clear enough. Otherwise, this is awesome, no joke.
I liked it, some times you screamed a little to much insted of singing (i'm not that good in english , i don't want this to sound rude ;) ) but the rest was great
love the piano and lyrics. try being a little less nasal and more forward (nasal pharynx as such)
Fun fun, keep up the great work!
Good luck!
wiseimmorto 1 year ago
Why the hell isn't this on the radio already? subscribed...
L1k3WTF01 3 years ago
wow i really like that song
2010NickJonas2010 3 years ago
beautiful OS it's a deep in heart
zorromind 3 years ago
Actually had to add my first "favorite"... This is perfect. Love you.
Actique 3 years ago
Flawless. Im jealous.
Actique 3 years ago
Okay, new favorite....along with Rose Color
You're just....amazing
ScorpiusMusic 3 years ago
woah. luv it, i LOVE your voice
glitterchica1324 3 years ago
I love this..once again.
JosephsUnderdog15 3 years ago
wow! you have a wonderful voice..
keep up the good work and gd luck for becoming famous!..maybe someday all the world will see you on t.v =]
therealme1993 3 years ago
this is awesome.
I just didn't like the parts where the lyrics go "hit the ground, hard"
You should change the "hard" part to something like "hit the ground, endddlesssssllyyyyy" and keep that note going instead of just stopping with "hard". Hopefully I said that clear enough. Otherwise, this is awesome, no joke.
wwcduck 3 years ago
I liked it, some times you screamed a little to much insted of singing (i'm not that good in english , i don't want this to sound rude ;) ) but the rest was great
AntoratheVampire 3 years ago
nice nice dont stop u are playing well
Insane906 3 years ago