So as i listened to this song i scrolled down and was reading the comments when i noticed that many people were complaining about Eko's grammatically incorrect mistakes or trying to fix his mispelling and such. Obviously i think some people should have enough sense to realize that he does this on purpose, right? It is Eko's own touch, own signature to his work. So just accept the writing and feel what he says without worrying about the way it is written. That is how you grasp what he conveys....
You were my angel, treasure, jewel, and holy grail. I loved you like I could love no other. You were beautiful and trully a single diamond in the rough. I will do enough good in this world to see you again in the next life. I promise you that. You taught me compassion, belief, and above all, what true love is. My geatest memories will be when I feel asleep in your your arms. I will never forget your heart, and hold you close to mine forever.
Eko, a little tip on the word "read." When you mean a person has finished reading something it's still spelled "read " and not "red." Just helping out so your writing can improve. This is from a long time ago but just in case! Love all your stories and songs!(:
ok um i loved most of the story. it was increadable up until the wrist slitting then sorry if i offend any1 bu it got a bit 2 emo 4 me.sori if u dnt tnk da same im just sayin . . .
i was pregnent when i was 15. Everyone exected my boyfriend aka father of my child. He didnt wont me to get an abortion. But everyone else did so i had to. And now there is this big whole in me that will never heal. I wish i would of never had that abortion. i am glad my boyfriend didn't do that.
I pushed my tear back in my eye and had tea after thinkin, " What if my boyfriend did that. " I don't know why, but then I grinned and whispered yes, he would if that happened but that probably won't. I have waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much drama in my life.
I'm sorry, but I think this is a pretty stupid story. yes, of course its sad too, but I think the girl is kind of stupid. She don't want an abortion, 'cause that would kill her baby, but later she kills herself, and by that also her baby. In my opinion that's just stupid!
@floortjj1 sooo true and if that girl new what love is she would not have killed herself all for the sake of her unborn child.does not seem sad but it seems stupid and naive
What's the song thats with the words? I love it so much, it's so sad. I like sad music! Please respond, thanks so much. I love your work, so sad. I love it! <3
@Daekoni Is Andrea Bocelli, the female singer of the song? if so, do you know the name of the song where the female sings, im dying to buy the song, btw, a very sad story, it reminds me of my best friend and her boyfriend, her story is exactly like the one you have written.... Keep up the amazing work on the song and stories
this is why when someone wants to lean on someone when making decisions and that person they want to lean on needs their own crutch, help the lean-on-ner before its too late.
and think before you act because it will come back around. i promise.
I got my girl pregnant. Wanted her to keep it. Everyone told us otherwise. We listened. Things changed. We broke up. Shes dating a girl. Im heart broken as fuck. Second girl ive ever loved, years after I got over my first love.
@Daekoni Is Andrea Bocelli, the female singer of the song? if so, do you know the name of the song where the female sings, im dying to buy the song, btw, a very sad story, it reminds me of my best friend and her boyfriend, her story is exactly like the one you have written.... Keep up the amazing work on the song and stories
I've looked again and again, but i cant find the song! (the main one, the first one that plays) If someone knows it, please tell me, im sure everyone will be thankful
This is just my choice to say, but, it would be better if she DID get the abortion. If she didn't she would eather have to let it for adoption or take care of it, which is VERY hard for a teen girl. Sad story though...
my daughters name is Eko.
stainless1911 2 weeks ago
Sigh, why must this song end? :/
377ful 2 months ago
So as i listened to this song i scrolled down and was reading the comments when i noticed that many people were complaining about Eko's grammatically incorrect mistakes or trying to fix his mispelling and such. Obviously i think some people should have enough sense to realize that he does this on purpose, right? It is Eko's own touch, own signature to his work. So just accept the writing and feel what he says without worrying about the way it is written. That is how you grasp what he conveys....
eternalflames911 3 months ago in playlist songs to break the mended heart 8
@eternalflames911 Thank you.
Daekoni 3 months ago
@Daekoni Absolutely. You are amazing by the way.
eternalflames911 3 months ago
To Lynn:
You were my angel, treasure, jewel, and holy grail. I loved you like I could love no other. You were beautiful and trully a single diamond in the rough. I will do enough good in this world to see you again in the next life. I promise you that. You taught me compassion, belief, and above all, what true love is. My geatest memories will be when I feel asleep in your your arms. I will never forget your heart, and hold you close to mine forever.
Until I gaze upon your beauty again,
JH
DeathScytheHell23 4 months ago in playlist More videos from Daekoni
Eko, a little tip on the word "read." When you mean a person has finished reading something it's still spelled "read " and not "red." Just helping out so your writing can improve. This is from a long time ago but just in case! Love all your stories and songs!(:
Ravek2010 6 months ago
i loved this soo much its a beautifull song , i have to say the story made me cry alot lol xx
zoeyredbird11 7 months ago
whats the name of the first Song?? Its a very Beautiful Song <3 i love it
SamanthaDeLapp 8 months ago
@SamanthaDeLapp It's "The Day I Will Bury You" by Nina Natasia
BriannaBoone 6 months ago
@BriannaBoone Thanks sooooo much <3
SamanthaDeLapp 6 months ago
guys,stop talking about his mistakes!eko,don't listen to them,your story is amazing!
lifechanges97 8 months ago
i cryed cause i have lived this
toppinkpeng4 9 months ago
What is the first song called?
littlesnowfox107 9 months ago 5
this give me chills! It's predictable yes but dang I hate you for making me ...
NarikoFuwa 10 months ago
who sings this song and whats it called?
lilianastar123 11 months ago
When silence screams.....who will hear me?
Did you write this for someone?
fallenflower2580 11 months ago
This is one of my faves, i just love how story goes or somthing like that [=
iluvtwilightocd 1 year ago
The end of the story was beautiful. Horrible to think of, but beautiful.
Vagfinder 1 year ago
Like the song but I found the story cheesy and didn't read it
Alishondra 1 year ago
makes me feel like cuting myself....dont judge
madgrlbaby1 1 year ago
ok um i loved most of the story. it was increadable up until the wrist slitting then sorry if i offend any1 bu it got a bit 2 emo 4 me.sori if u dnt tnk da same im just sayin . . .
therealdooty 1 year ago
I love this song and vid and story but... isn't it the baby, and the boy? :( it was a lilll annoying ;p
daves0n 1 year ago
This sounds a little like Romeo and Juliet at the end..
littlebluevanille 1 year ago
Emo, sad, kinda real, beautiful. I dont know...Cool?? Speechless
isaah1307 1 year ago
the story just made it 10 times sadder =(
brandonbsw12 1 year ago
(Sarcasm) Well this is one one the most cheerful stories I've read yet!
odadancer15388 1 year ago
The story is sad, but has too many grammatical and language errors to follow. maybe you should fix these to make the video better
GnrAero2007 1 year ago 3
OMG! what is the title of this song?!?!
lexxieanne7 1 year ago
I can't believe I'm actually crying :x
Beautiful <3
SarahKaoruJames 1 year ago
The first song is The Day I Would Bury You by Nastasia.
DeathScytheHell23 1 year ago
Funerals!!
falletel 1 year ago
u shoud write the lyrics id copy em and take em everywhere with me
yuma243 1 year ago
i was pregnent when i was 15. Everyone exected my boyfriend aka father of my child. He didnt wont me to get an abortion. But everyone else did so i had to. And now there is this big whole in me that will never heal. I wish i would of never had that abortion. i am glad my boyfriend didn't do that.
Annabrown412 1 year ago
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19A7xdrumslayerA7x86 1 year ago
I pushed my tear back in my eye and had tea after thinkin, " What if my boyfriend did that. " I don't know why, but then I grinned and whispered yes, he would if that happened but that probably won't. I have waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much drama in my life.
MrsFluffington 1 year ago
so sad i cryed most ive ever cried tht hard
bubblegumbubble3 1 year ago
wow....it made me feel....wow....
RetardedWeirdosPrds 1 year ago
damn! this song is crap - thought it was sad but it'll just make me wanna take my ears of and rip'em to pieces! XD
viceypigen11 1 year ago
@viceypigen11 the story????
RetardedWeirdosPrds 1 year ago
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What is the song before Ave Maria?
guitarHeroEmzii 1 year ago
What is the song before Ava Maria?
guitarHeroEmzii 1 year ago
Ave Maria is better sung by a woman
Jyre123 1 year ago
thats so sad i cried
tooodoodjmf 1 year ago
That was really really good, SO sad :(
DrippingBlack84 1 year ago 2
Powerfull&beautiful.
I love this.
JHernandezRawr 1 year ago
I am sobbing... truly wonderful!
Emzy842 1 year ago
beautifull truely beautifull
animegirl4226 1 year ago
nice stories.. can send to me....
hannis619 1 year ago
wow, i have no words to say after reading....
StopAnimalCrultey 1 year ago
I'm sorry, but I think this is a pretty stupid story. yes, of course its sad too, but I think the girl is kind of stupid. She don't want an abortion, 'cause that would kill her baby, but later she kills herself, and by that also her baby. In my opinion that's just stupid!
floortjj1 1 year ago 2
@floortjj1 sooo true and if that girl new what love is she would not have killed herself all for the sake of her unborn child.does not seem sad but it seems stupid and naive
scranchie 1 year ago
What's the song thats with the words? I love it so much, it's so sad. I like sad music! Please respond, thanks so much. I love your work, so sad. I love it! <3
leximarashaw 1 year ago
True love knows no limits ...
skullkger 1 year ago
what is the artist name
Ranezimea 1 year ago
@Daekoni Is Andrea Bocelli, the female singer of the song? if so, do you know the name of the song where the female sings, im dying to buy the song, btw, a very sad story, it reminds me of my best friend and her boyfriend, her story is exactly like the one you have written.... Keep up the amazing work on the song and stories
americanangel99 1 year ago
cool sound sad story....
I hate sad story *cry* but it's so beautiful xP
TheXillia 1 year ago
this is why when someone wants to lean on someone when making decisions and that person they want to lean on needs their own crutch, help the lean-on-ner before its too late.
and think before you act because it will come back around. i promise.
eternalflames911 1 year ago
modern day Romeo and Juliet with poor spelling?
jennyisvcool 1 year ago
SAD <3
GizmoLuvsRemix 1 year ago
I got my girl pregnant. Wanted her to keep it. Everyone told us otherwise. We listened. Things changed. We broke up. Shes dating a girl. Im heart broken as fuck. Second girl ive ever loved, years after I got over my first love.
sway33755 1 year ago 2
i cried
Lady5267 1 year ago
haha, thanks ♥
warlock701 1 year ago
Eko, the name of the first song ♥
warlock701 1 year ago
@warlock701 The Day I Would Bury You - Nina Nastasia :)
YeSiKaTiQue16 1 year ago
what's the name of the song??
YeSiKaTiQue16 1 year ago
Meh the girl i loved said i love you and broke up with me the next day..nothing as bad as this...
12lubcows12 1 year ago
@12lubcows12 Feels like shit dont it?
14NickieC 1 year ago
@14NickieC Hurts every day.
12lubcows12 1 year ago
promes this story is just a story and nothing like this ever happened... plz o.O
Nandanyx 1 year ago 24
@Nandanyx I am sorry but I can not.
Like I've wrote already on "Take my dreams":
~For every writer a good inspiration is key to be good at what he does.
My inspiration does not exist as it is.
I write everything as I am living it.
Daekoni 1 year ago 36
@Daekoni Is Andrea Bocelli, the female singer of the song? if so, do you know the name of the song where the female sings, im dying to buy the song, btw, a very sad story, it reminds me of my best friend and her boyfriend, her story is exactly like the one you have written.... Keep up the amazing work on the song and stories
americanangel99 1 year ago
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americanangel99 1 year ago
@Daekoni Oh my god, so this actually happened?!
KitKat90200 1 year ago
@Daekoni "if you don't live, you have nothing to write about"
great stories, poems you got here on youtube eko :) good work :)
Migas128 9 months ago
@Nandanyx Who cares, umm? We all know that. Way to point out the obvious, wow. o-e
VeraCalder 1 year ago
@Nandanyx the fact that it was written by a retarded Vietnamese boy, I highly doubt it is real
stumpyman101 1 year ago
@stumpyman101 You are dumb And Superficial . Dont ever judge someone like that'
precious565 9 months ago
nice story.
jiasid07 1 year ago
..This is sad.
netbattlemaster 1 year ago
4 people don't have a heart. </3
70 people understand pain. <3
Saoirseloveskittys 1 year ago 3
lots of typos....
ffaf295 1 year ago
love thiss :D
herepaula1 1 year ago
Decent song. Cheesy story.
jksikecy 1 year ago
@jksikecy this is a modern romeo & juliet kinda storry.
8lackwidow 1 year ago 2
@jksikecy dude how was it cheesy for us poets nothings cheesy
ethanpok 1 year ago
goosebumps O_O
tasha3596 1 year ago
Ds is d most touchin video or lines i hav evr read r seen....... marvalous. yar... :)
shyamsaran1 1 year ago
I've looked again and again, but i cant find the song! (the main one, the first one that plays) If someone knows it, please tell me, im sure everyone will be thankful
CuteLittleKirby 1 year ago
omg this is amazing. god i could never right something that good.
MsRejected100 1 year ago
This is just my choice to say, but, it would be better if she DID get the abortion. If she didn't she would eather have to let it for adoption or take care of it, which is VERY hard for a teen girl. Sad story though...
fancy19811 1 year ago
i cant find the song -_-
ihavethebieberfever1 1 year ago
what kinda parents what agree to that?!?!?!?!?! its absolutlely F***** UP!!!
ihavethebieberfever1 1 year ago
wow its so sad :'( dude awesome job
that was true love
ihavethebieberfever1 1 year ago
Wow! Amazing, so sad. Good job.
MushFuller 1 year ago
that gave me goosebumps reading that... very good man keep it up
Midwestmassacre91 1 year ago
name of artist is nina nastasia. song: The Day I Would Bury You
kumanananananananan7 1 year ago
I was happily talking with the girl I love just a few minutes ago after this I am hella cryying xD
hitokibatusai 1 year ago
hey thtx an awesum story but wats the song kalled frum the first part of the video??
pachuca507 1 year ago
What is the artist and the name?
TensaZangetsu1200 1 year ago
i am actually crying :'(
TheChloepumpkin 1 year ago
the secret life took pregnancy alot more maturly...
kelsjuliamory 1 year ago
the secret life took pregnancy alot more maturly...
kelsjuliamory 1 year ago 2
Thank you sooo much, for this beautiful song, and story !
MJ4ever290 1 year ago
Congrats!!!!
That was really touching!!!!
Can't wait to see another video from you.
ellistefmel 1 year ago
Beautiful... T_T
mili0508 1 year ago
awww i cried in the end now i got tears on my keyboard :'(
kikikainoa 1 year ago
i want the story words ..i think i will cry :'(
lililaveto 1 year ago
This song is so so beautifull but I can't find it on itunes or limewire? Any help?
317Brandon2 1 year ago
i cant find this song anywhere it is so beautifull
317Brandon2 1 year ago
from thomas loved it
thomassayshellotoday 1 year ago
oh my gosh daekoni that was so sad and touching
i think that if i was in that girls situation i would do the same thing
i'm not suicidal but passionately again abortion
having an abortion makes you a murderer in my eye and in only severely extreme circumstanses are they allowed :/
alanna4oscar 1 year ago
nicely done.. the end is a little not right, though..
merys96 1 year ago
What is the name of the song and the artist?
DieGreece 1 year ago
its preety sad
LOONYDUDES 1 year ago
awesome....
cool27376 1 year ago
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Balllinboy22 1 year ago
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Balllinboy22 1 year ago
BEAUTIFUL
XxKNIGHT0fZEROxX 1 year ago
I cried when I read this. It's so sad... It really does make you think twice about relationships... And how easily you can fall for someone...
GabsterMC 1 year ago
I love this What is the first Song called?
FallenLilGirl 1 year ago
WOW HEY YOU ARE GENIUS I Almost cried ! this is soooooo saaaad , really is this true story ? you are good if you created this :0
akczenaiwok 1 year ago
it was beautiful in its sorrow. Well done, well written - amo lacrima intus Olympus , vos partum moestitia per decor
Astrathiul 1 year ago
aww this is so sad, but i love it so much.
jessicah1234 1 year ago
@emochick4u616 Kiiim :) Thank you so much
Daekoni 1 year ago
love it..!
<3
^^.
jio2830 1 year ago
also a good sad song is Kill hannah - promise me
squigg0th 1 year ago
Awww LOVE Boccelli ... sad story though.
pachamadresita 1 year ago
@pachamadresita I had many interpretations of Ave Maria but I choose this one. It is by Schubert. Such greatness..
Daekoni 1 year ago 5
:'(
LuxXusweibchen 1 year ago 3
This reminds me of my boyfriend a lot. I miss him.
Now I know what to do to end this pain in me...
WhiteLioness100 1 year ago
the song is called The Day I Would Bury You by Nina Nastasia
kat2791 1 year ago
what song is this and cant you put the song name in the discription
bigstevo502 1 year ago
D: So Sad :(
valeriegarza1995 1 year ago 26
omigoodness...
068021856hvtt74 1 year ago 19