[DS-10] Dye / Kishin M

[reg1167]

cool tune

[NeoSound1]

Great sounds. I especially like the first synth and the lead's second phrase. The noises at 2:38 are also very interesting. You ought to improve the structure of the piece though, as it is very loose.

1:42 is an abrupt move and has too sparse a texture. 2:16 is even more abrupt with a sudden, unprepared change of key. The transition at 4:01 is smoother, but the reprise itself is too short. Perhaps repeat 1-2-4 (+ bass), 5-6-7-8 with everyone in, and then find a new way to reach p. 16.

[kylehyde28]

Nice!