i just started singing and playing and i've been trying to write my own songs and its so hard to put words to feelings. so i'm really jealous...basically
Start writing simple goofy poetry it sounds weird but it totally works. I used to hate poetry and song writing but last year in class we had to write free verse and haikus and shit so I just wrote about goofy stuff to pass the time and it just sort of clicks with you eventually now I can actually sit down and write pretty descent poetry. Start with little threee liners and haukus and eventually you will get the hang of it
you know .... when making a statement like that .... it would be just AWESOME if you (and other ppl that make similar statements) could at least get the grammar right !
for some reason you my coment lists arent populating correctly these days ... and yes, im aware i spelled "anymore" wrong .... its too early for this !! I was commenting about the guy and his sack of hammers ... he must be the bag of nails to go with that sac of hammers !!
that's just what youtube does, it shows it as a reply if you click view all comments but otherwise it just shows the newest at the top.
Then nobody realizes they're replies due to terrible observation skills ant the constant readiness to attack any comment they disagree with without question.
I find CNTRL+F speeds up the search little, but do to posting lag and site maintenance sometimes it can take a while for the comment to even get posted in the first place.
Well that aside, i really like this song, i believe it really expresses the beauty of foreplay, how the climax is not what two lovers are trying to reach only the instance where intense passion can be felt, just like love :)
this is a true thing that happens! its not a chain letter! its kinda scary at first but it really works!! paste this message into 3 comments and press ALT F4 and your crushes name will appear on the screen!!! its soo wierd
okay, advice, get some money together, find a studio, lay down a couple of tracks, put a myspace and purevolume link on your videos, find out who your favoutie artists are, find out there record labels, add thoses labels, send them your music and let them know how much of a hit you are on youtube without beeing cocky. get ur name around playing local venues and big things will come.
but if u dont want the glits and the glamour, i really respect you for just wanting to make music
As with your song, Penguin, I like this one as well! You have a fantastic voice and your songs appear to be original. May I make one suggestion, though. That you limit the guitar to the soft strum in the background or the cords when you are not singing. You have a great raspy voice!
A good way to get yourself recignized is busking. Er well.... That's what I think... I mean, say some big record company comes along hears you play? You'd be set for life!
Great job, Frank!
-Dave
PIRecordsSL 2 years ago
That is awesome. You've got some comments in languages like that one. Cool beans bud.
CoopMusic247 2 years ago
なかなかいいんじゃない?
asdfhwieufwui 2 years ago
liked it alot chorus worked really well
speechbubbleguy 2 years ago
good work boy ;)
haidsnow 2 years ago
i just started singing and playing and i've been trying to write my own songs and its so hard to put words to feelings. so i'm really jealous...basically
good luck with your music
lilyslies 3 years ago 3
Start writing simple goofy poetry it sounds weird but it totally works. I used to hate poetry and song writing but last year in class we had to write free verse and haikus and shit so I just wrote about goofy stuff to pass the time and it just sort of clicks with you eventually now I can actually sit down and write pretty descent poetry. Start with little threee liners and haukus and eventually you will get the hang of it
deh1746 3 years ago
wow thats pretty cool. thanks for replying. honestly, i didnt think you'd reply because you prolly get so many comments!
lilyslies 3 years ago
thats not him...
hh23hh 3 years ago 2
haha
TerryKrumps 2 years ago
Can't say it enough...you are an amazing artist. Please come out with an album very soon so I can buy it.
longwalk05 3 years ago 6
i second that thought :D
tacopenguiness 3 years ago 3
i third that! :P
razmataz13drums 2 years ago
i love you frank bell, :] heh
xxsydneynicolexx 3 years ago 5
you are so talented
chloe273L 3 years ago 22
amen!
veggiefreak28 3 years ago 8
aw, i love you :~)
datgurlmoni 4 years ago 6
Good stuff!
PhilipvKlaassen 4 years ago 7
great song, loved the bridge in the middle.
mattnav 4 years ago 7
nice music dude u have talent theres no doubt in tht. keep playing the tunes.
ken7l 4 years ago 4
mi sono innamorata di te!!!!elena
ossobender 4 years ago 4
MAN, YOU HAVE A AWSOME VOCALS AND YUOR GUIATR PLAYING IS REALLY GOOD I LIKE "The Peguin" song, the guitar is just so creative
TRAVISCLARK25 4 years ago 6
you are amazing :)
Fancsor 4 years ago 4
omg look at you without the hat
the voice is just as wonderfull
hairpinpackie 4 years ago 4
Over the last year or two I've lost a lot of interest in today's music. Now this... now I have something to look forward to. Great stuff!
njdevilsfan87 4 years ago 9
This comment has received too many negative votes show
i dont understand what is four play?
is it porn movie?
nicktheone118 4 years ago
no its youre an idiot
apz2 4 years ago
your dumb as sack a hammers.
bobthestick420 4 years ago
you know .... when making a statement like that .... it would be just AWESOME if you (and other ppl that make similar statements) could at least get the grammar right !
gwhancock 4 years ago 3
songs and artists purposely twist the rules. don't you know about that side of life. You poor thing!
prashant108 4 years ago
I wasnt commenting on the song, i was replying to a hatter message that i don even see posted anyore ... but that was 2 weeks ago ...
gwhancock 4 years ago
for some reason you my coment lists arent populating correctly these days ... and yes, im aware i spelled "anymore" wrong .... its too early for this !! I was commenting about the guy and his sack of hammers ... he must be the bag of nails to go with that sac of hammers !!
gwhancock 4 years ago
that's just what youtube does, it shows it as a reply if you click view all comments but otherwise it just shows the newest at the top.
Then nobody realizes they're replies due to terrible observation skills ant the constant readiness to attack any comment they disagree with without question.
MarlonOwnsYourCake 3 years ago
I find CNTRL+F speeds up the search little, but do to posting lag and site maintenance sometimes it can take a while for the comment to even get posted in the first place.
gwhancock 3 years ago
Wouldnt like to be your girlfriend lol
the3rddegree 4 years ago
Well that aside, i really like this song, i believe it really expresses the beauty of foreplay, how the climax is not what two lovers are trying to reach only the instance where intense passion can be felt, just like love :)
nicktheone118 4 years ago 6
When the fuck are you gonna release this on an album...i wanna buy it
koimaster 4 years ago 7
you are truly amazing.
tzipper25 4 years ago 3
Very cool song, great singing, great playing and nice word play in the lyrics. You have genuine talent, thanks so much for sharing!
JuanTumeni 4 years ago 2
Great talent..keep writing and singing!
walela511 4 years ago
these songs would be extra great with drums, keyboard, and bass. would love 2 hear. How old are you?
gabroder 4 years ago
i would love 2 hear what your songs sound like with drums, keyboard, and bass guitar, good work and keep it up
gabroder 4 years ago
GJ loven all your stuff man.
samsinizzle 4 years ago
In some of your songs you kind of sound like Bradley Nowell from Sublime.. It's too bad he died... But anyway, nice song.
Helolelo 4 years ago
you're like a mix between Jack Johnson, Jason Mraz and somebody else...maybe just you.
mhrush86 4 years ago 2
Your musical effects are awesome, I appreciate every aspect of this song.
LordPhycosis 4 years ago
respect
khurlyfry 4 years ago
i´m probably saying something stupid but I think your super voice lays somewhere between bob marley and jay kay. I prefer yours!!
kart600 4 years ago
hey guy.
You're really good!
Sophisticated tunes and lyrics.
MexTexican 4 years ago
This is AMAZING! Great job.
axeclash 4 years ago
greetings from the great white north......love all your tunes
keep up the GOOD WORK
love the penguin song.....k8inda steve zissou'ish and it rocks
Hammernuts1976 4 years ago
good 4 u :D
BbiD 4 years ago
everyone tries to compare you to someone, but I think you're original all the way.
thursdayhooty 4 years ago
Good work on your stuff! 5 thumbs way up !
goodsonbasinger 4 years ago
great^^
mymychan 4 years ago
man with that talent nd those nerdy glases lmao**, girls could be hauling you in hehe nice work!
GlennGuiao 4 years ago 2
Omg, you're really talented! You're going to be big. Keep it up! YOU ROCK!
MiniSoror 4 years ago
coo, vid man
kenbiro 4 years ago
Hey Dude.
You should really make a Myspace Music Profile.
Your Songs Are Amazing, even the cover ones. :)
xx
DeeYerFace 4 years ago
he has one...
shibby8hemp 4 years ago
I've listen a few of your songs and they are great! You should make a cd or something like that, you're talented...
moKoDiamond 4 years ago
You should make a cd. I would buy it
Kazuri666 4 years ago 2
i would also buy it :D i only download music, but this... i would buy his cd for sure!
da9elsolum 4 years ago
similar strumming patterns to john mayer. a little too close to no such thing...
sgtg81 4 years ago
Aaaand? That a problem? It works for this song, buddy. Leave it alone.
bobothezitboy 4 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
this is a true thing that happens! its not a chain letter! its kinda scary at first but it really works!! paste this message into 3 comments and press ALT F4 and your crushes name will appear on the screen!!! its soo wierd
neosmith1111 4 years ago
you are wonderful!! Creative, GREAT voice...you got it all. I am a momma, and you remind me of all the best kids I know
suzebrewer 4 years ago
i like this one, cool!
Scyinde 4 years ago
Not really my style, I like the penguin better, but still good.
stouchbag 4 years ago
nice emo glasses :P
and keep this up ur hella good
BoomBoy0 4 years ago
Now they make emo glasses? I thought glasses were glasses..
But I agree with you that he is good.
Mobottle 4 years ago
Man do what these guy said!
chemao 4 years ago
okay, advice, get some money together, find a studio, lay down a couple of tracks, put a myspace and purevolume link on your videos, find out who your favoutie artists are, find out there record labels, add thoses labels, send them your music and let them know how much of a hit you are on youtube without beeing cocky. get ur name around playing local venues and big things will come.
but if u dont want the glits and the glamour, i really respect you for just wanting to make music
skyeden 4 years ago 15
I see a record deal in your short future.
carpathia3882 4 years ago
realy good!!!!
mogge0304 4 years ago
we can obviously tell you love John Mayer
and I love John Mayer
so
I love John Mayer and you are John Mayer
A=B=C?
I love you!
ShanePanThePianoMan 4 years ago
awesome, love the breakdown after the second chorus!
ramage88 4 years ago 2
Too bad there are not alot of people making quality music on youtube :'(
Very good
turbis 4 years ago
your pretty good I wish I had that many people watching my videos
good luck with your music
RHPSmann 4 years ago
As with your song, Penguin, I like this one as well! You have a fantastic voice and your songs appear to be original. May I make one suggestion, though. That you limit the guitar to the soft strum in the background or the cords when you are not singing. You have a great raspy voice!
STARBARDD 4 years ago
wow. Goddamnit, you are good. It makes me jelous. I envy you, man. Good luck with your music. I hope you go far.
homosapien408 4 years ago 4
i love your music
luv2dnce663 4 years ago
its very john mayer-ish
Danbanany 4 years ago
love your music dude... keep it up!
slightlybruised 4 years ago
Yet again great song. Really loving the guitar work. Those jazz chords fit well and the chord decend sounded bluesey. Really diggin' it.
PleasantPickles 4 years ago
yes! it reminds me of john mayer too! who is my favourite artist and i've been a fan for years. so it's a compliment ;)
man, you need to make that EP really soon, because only seconds into the song, i already wanted to go to your concert or something
hurlax 4 years ago
You have to come play in my basement. I will pay you in Paintball accesories.
loopy98 4 years ago
wtf?
fender52tele 4 years ago
lol
mmmd0hnut3 4 years ago
that's really good stuff
recklessftw 4 years ago
sounds great reminds me of mayer though
medicwoods 4 years ago
is that a bad thing?
Strefford17 4 years ago
No just a thing...I like John
medicwoods 4 years ago
dude, when you'll became a star please come to Quebec !!! :P
Louisss69 4 years ago
gosh, you gotta release an album NOW!!!!
i'll buy it!!!
DrizzleLightBlue 4 years ago
not just man go on tour- go to some of the clubs around the country then if u can come to toronto
jgreenberg93 4 years ago
Whats keeping you from making a cd?
Butts04 4 years ago
why
are
you
so
GOOOD!!! WHAT THE HEECK. you better put out a cd! :D great jooob~
breakmeg 4 years ago
Yo man, this is my second comment, I think yu should try and put some of these songs on limewire or something they would insant hits!
CasioSnow 4 years ago
There's no money in LimeWire.
hesham8 4 years ago
yea, but if you get your songs out there, they'll want to put it on the radio eh. Then you'll go big
flipstick13 4 years ago
same the melody is awsome
popperscooper189784 4 years ago
I can't even describe how great this is. I only HATE the fact that you don't have a cd.
babyphat009 4 years ago
Hahahaha you are incredible. A song about four letter words? Genius...
lilgreetr11 4 years ago 2
i love your music and your lyrics, man.
keep it up and you're boud to get recognized
singingblues9 4 years ago
aaah what a voice!
tinrilla 4 years ago
A good way to get yourself recignized is busking. Er well.... That's what I think... I mean, say some big record company comes along hears you play? You'd be set for life!
morgieporgie2 4 years ago
Your style and voice reminds me of John Mayer =) Nice job!
♥TJ♥
chicklovesmusic7 4 years ago
Dude i'd buy an album if you're making one.
Gavinizu 4 years ago
amen!!!! lol keep singing friend ^^
kitty551994 4 years ago
dude my mom knows fanstasia barrinos daddy so i think you can make a deal or sumthin so so email me back i and ill get his number if ur intrested
saphirejewelscoward 4 years ago
I really enjoyed that melody, and you're really clever with lyrics. Another great song!
dittlekins 4 years ago
have u got a cd if so can u send me a link, so me can buy it!!!
kenbiro 4 years ago
he is a star or something like that? =)
yamahius 4 years ago
you should record your song
frosttypaine 4 years ago
U R Great!!!:D Are you single;)
You should do a record or something! And if you do, I want to buy it!
QueenEsperanta 4 years ago
yeah what he said VVV
fallnangelous 4 years ago
I like. I wish you luck in your recording endeavor. I'll be paying attention.
rushdog45 4 years ago
Dude your awesome!!
Please make an album on your songs ;-; If you've already did please give me the link so I can buy it. =)
kingen3 4 years ago 2
I love it !! very good song !!
oleever19 4 years ago
gingerrose1
I could listen this one over and over. Man it is nice.
gingerrose1 4 years ago
if u record in higher quality, i'll buy this song
glademaster 4 years ago
truly lovely :)
niokaa 4 years ago
Reminds me of pre-MTV john mayer. great song.
swammy05 4 years ago
like your style... awsome...cool riffs....LOL More please...
abasabas 4 years ago