hey im a new guitarist been playing for like 4 months or so and im planning on making funny songs but not with the same kind of playing most people do i like how yours songs sound and if i sent you a recording of a song im working on would you tell me what you think
1) I'm not sure if you intended on having varying paces for this song, but that kinda glared at me when I heard it. Like the finger-picking routine to the bridge to the chorus, all are at different speeds.
2) The 'where' in your 'where you hide' lines sounds weird to me. Like you tried to put too many vocal variations into that one word. Obviously, its completely your choice, but I didn't like that bit too much.
You're right, the speed variation is accidental, didn't notice it until I played it back lol... (This was uploaded just a few minutes after writing it)
Great song !
MrNonnel 10 months ago
you shud be on the place of this fake ass "musician" bieber. youre true talent
pepi560 11 months ago
Again.....very well written and performed.
reidwallace 1 year ago
Very nice
VivianAkacie 1 year ago
Oh im hiding under the sheets hurry up~!
pelpaled 2 years ago
Your all talent. Great lyrics sexy sexy sexy!
pelpaled 2 years ago
Thanks for writing this beautiful song Mirella!
with love
fred
tskfred 2 years ago
Thank you fred !
mirella514 2 years ago
Nice tune Mirella!
hazymaidens 2 years ago
Thank you hazymaidens, happy new year!
mirella514 2 years ago
always refreshing......
davidwaters69 2 years ago
Thank you david :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Hi Mirella, I've prob commented on this tune before... I still love it. It is a classic tune! All the best MN.
CerebalDystrophy 2 years ago
Thank you, and happy holidays!
mirella514 2 years ago
:) :) :)
nechako913 2 years ago
thank you!
mirella514 2 years ago
hey im a new guitarist been playing for like 4 months or so and im planning on making funny songs but not with the same kind of playing most people do i like how yours songs sound and if i sent you a recording of a song im working on would you tell me what you think
naruyo3 2 years ago
Upload it :)
Good luck!
mirella514 2 years ago
Your songs have so much grace.
Thanks so much for sharing your musical soul with the world.
miguelbaptista 2 years ago
Beautiful compliment, thank you miguel :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Beautiful ¡
You are great, congratulations friend.
Greetings
Peace
Ezequiel *****
EzequielPais 2 years ago
Thank you my friend!
mirella514 2 years ago
stumbled upon this and have to say , keep it up i love it, your singing and playing is so refreshingly genuine.
pjrock69 2 years ago
Glad you enjoyed it pjrock69, thank you!
mirella514 2 years ago
And now the praise:
1) Again, great lyrics! I'm glad you're an artist who puts some thought into it.
2) I loved the finger-picking!
Keep it up! :)
vinodv87 2 years ago
Thank you :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Ok, the criticism first:
1) I'm not sure if you intended on having varying paces for this song, but that kinda glared at me when I heard it. Like the finger-picking routine to the bridge to the chorus, all are at different speeds.
2) The 'where' in your 'where you hide' lines sounds weird to me. Like you tried to put too many vocal variations into that one word. Obviously, its completely your choice, but I didn't like that bit too much.
vinodv87 2 years ago
You're right, the speed variation is accidental, didn't notice it until I played it back lol... (This was uploaded just a few minutes after writing it)
mirella514 2 years ago
Wonderful mirella, lyrically reminiscent of Suzanne Vega,. you truly are inspired :D
~Red
SeniorRouge 2 years ago
Thank you SeniorRouge :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Excellent mirella .
I like this music,he a little resembles Bob Dylan :))
5/5
SOMAN1983V 2 years ago
That's great news!
Thank you soman1983V :)
mirella514 2 years ago
This track reminds me of something that Bob Dylan would have written. You really can't beat that.
};-)
GroovusMax 2 years ago
Wow, Thank you!
mirella514 2 years ago
Great original song! Well performed!
coolanddark 2 years ago
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
mirella514 2 years ago
Nice song - I really like your lyrics!
cadwalladee 2 years ago
Thank you cadwalladee :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Great song and performance and the movie maker effects look really cool! The image looks like a record album.
Johnfern99 2 years ago
Thanks John :)
...kind of reminds me of a Led Zeppelin album cover, can't put my finger on it though...
mirella514 2 years ago
You're definitely not talking from a book and you don't play it safe :) that's why you're bloody brilliant, and that guitar of yours is magic
jugnutgut 2 years ago
Hi rob! Thank you :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Very interesting arrangement - I like it a lot. Great job, as usual.
planetcaravan72 2 years ago
Thank you planetcaravan72, glad you like it !
mirella514 2 years ago
good job :)
brainge 2 years ago
Thanks brainge :)
mirella514 2 years ago
very deep and Mirella you have a great day
fgiugliymop 2 years ago
You too, thank you :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Very lovely. Thank you for sharing your music with us. I enjoy this one alot.
Peace n hugs,
Allen
slowhand1954 2 years ago
Thanks Allen :)
mirella514 2 years ago
interesting style,good job,nice vid....lil wobbly wade
melaniesuehine 2 years ago
Thank you!
mirella514 2 years ago
good playing ..hard to criticize your style. Keep it up :)
CursaKuma 2 years ago
Very kind, thank you CursaKuma :)
mirella514 2 years ago
beautiful
anthonybrady 2 years ago
Thank you anthonybrady!
mirella514 2 years ago
Oh Yeah! ... juz waiting for the CD :))
mel.
encinitasmel 2 years ago
Thank you Mel :)
mirella514 2 years ago
I hide under my bed sheets at night
wizardeal 2 years ago
Bring a flashlight, it's just like camping :)
mirella514 2 years ago
yeah my sheets usually look like a tent in the morning :)
wizardeal 2 years ago
Wow,I feel as if you are speaking to me!
mindfulmusic78 2 years ago
I am lol :)
mirella514 2 years ago
Then I shall take you where I hide:0)
mindfulmusic78 2 years ago
lol hahah fresh off web yummy sweet5always xoxoxhugs ricky
1straycat99 2 years ago
Thanks Ricky :)
mirella514 2 years ago
beautiful song and lyrics. thanks for sharing
miguelbaptista 2 years ago
Thank you :)
mirella514 2 years ago
It's simply incredible what you create with just your voice and your acoustic guitar !!
ALEClovesGENIALMUSIC 2 years ago
Thank you ALEClovesGENIALMUSIC!
mirella514 2 years ago
A very cool song...your original songs are the best! ***** don't hide!
tps607 2 years ago
I don't plan to, thank you tps607!
mirella514 2 years ago
you better not!!!!!!!!
tps607 2 years ago