A nice poem and a nice video. My one criticism would be the use of the slang word "wanna" That's all right for pop songs but seems out of place in poetry. I still enjoyed it though.
aaammm ... wow... reading the poem in the rythm of music ... wow ... have you tried to read/sing within the same music... in some places needs a little modificatoin, but minor, but the feeling .. wow... adagio, ma non troppo, sonore sostenuto... wow :)
A nice poem and a nice video. My one criticism would be the use of the slang word "wanna" That's all right for pop songs but seems out of place in poetry. I still enjoyed it though.
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That was beautiaful, It made me cry, I love you so much, I loved everything. Thankyou
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Thought provoking!
johndeweb 2 years ago
aaammm ... wow... reading the poem in the rythm of music ... wow ... have you tried to read/sing within the same music... in some places needs a little modificatoin, but minor, but the feeling .. wow... adagio, ma non troppo, sonore sostenuto... wow :)
ziilike666 2 years ago
Very lovely!........Jack 8 {-
77jackwhitedragon77 2 years ago
Beautiful video!
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natyetch 2 years ago
Great,just great!
ELELEF 2 years ago
Beautiful work A.L. well done, :-) xx
AliciaPTLAlicia 2 years ago
Very Nice, Very Nice
TheEagleoftheEmpire 2 years ago
woah i agree such a beautiful poem (&vid)
thurraya 2 years ago
VERY BEAUTIFUL
JEM WONG
fannyjemwong 2 years ago
beautiful poem!
Endlessfantasy 2 years ago 2
Thank you! :)
AedeusLeonora 2 years ago