Hmm... the chords was the same all the way... thats whats making it boring. It was different melodies alright, but the chords were the same. If you maybe change the chords so it is happening things in the music instead of one single bunch of three or four chords it will become more intreresting (or how the fuck you spell that word)and more fun to listen to. As it is right now it does'nt get anywere and that is one thing that music has to do. If it's should good that is...
Try to get more different melodys in the bass and the piece is even better as it is now. But I think my videos aren't as good as yours! Please comment...
Doesn't sound like disney to me. It sounds original in a way. But you are just like me when you write compositions . Stuck on making good chord progressions. Your chord progressions were repetitive, short, simplistic, yeah I do it to. Plus this is in the key of C ha.
Also you needed to develope that melody you had going there. You can't play the same thing over and over it gets boring. Use chords, and more chords get louder. More interesting bass.
quite good actually..really good! sounds a bit like disney, the beauty and the beast or something :D the sound could have been better though, but what can you do ^_^
beautiful!! i love it!!! good job!! but it's a little long
tomat0es 3 years ago
you are really good man...try and get out of the comfort zone....experiment a little man! but all in all a great effort!
arjunsarwal 4 years ago
thats cool
pspmaster4 5 years ago
me too. nice one. :)
miruyume 5 years ago
you wrote that!? i wish i could write songs...
Jaszita 5 years ago
wow soothing...
NOSFERATUalu 5 years ago
Hmm... the chords was the same all the way... thats whats making it boring. It was different melodies alright, but the chords were the same. If you maybe change the chords so it is happening things in the music instead of one single bunch of three or four chords it will become more intreresting (or how the fuck you spell that word)and more fun to listen to. As it is right now it does'nt get anywere and that is one thing that music has to do. If it's should good that is...
Loppie 5 years ago
good but boooooooooooring
jollemaster 5 years ago
Try to get more different melodys in the bass and the piece is even better as it is now. But I think my videos aren't as good as yours! Please comment...
nelo765 5 years ago
Doesn't sound like disney to me. It sounds original in a way. But you are just like me when you write compositions . Stuck on making good chord progressions. Your chord progressions were repetitive, short, simplistic, yeah I do it to. Plus this is in the key of C ha.
kyle556 5 years ago
Also you needed to develope that melody you had going there. You can't play the same thing over and over it gets boring. Use chords, and more chords get louder. More interesting bass.
kyle556 5 years ago
Fantasic, I really love it.
froopyguy 5 years ago
quite good actually..really good! sounds a bit like disney, the beauty and the beast or something :D the sound could have been better though, but what can you do ^_^
Carro333 5 years ago