Broken

[TheFearDorcha]

Very good!.....you should have more comments here!...don't know why....

[LadyFang20]

@TheFearDorcha Thank you. Glad you enjoyed :)

[FunkmasterT69]

ur facked get a job jinx is hireing down da fishplant over longcove

[LadyFang20]

@FunkmasterT69 You seriously need to work on your grammar and punctuation. A job at the fish plant wouldn't do me any good, seems I live nowhere near Long Cove. Who the hell are you to judge my employment status?

[sledgedbrain]

you would look better if you weren't so fat. fyi yaa cunt!

[LadyFang20]

@sledgedbrain well thanks for that, but my boyfriend loves me as is, and his opinion is the only one that really matters to me. Go fuck yourself :D

[AlecDraven]

You'll never be alone again.

I promise.

Good poem too.:)

[AlecDraven]

I love you.

[LadyFang20]

@AlecDraven I love you too :D

[LadyFang20]

@AlecDraven thank you my love. You mean the world to me :)

[MrKuroMaki]

I really like this poem. The third stanza, in particular, really reaches out to me. The flow of this poem was probably the best part - it was so smooth I had to listen/read it again just to let it all sink in.

VERY well written, and well-read.

[LadyFang20]

@MrKuroMaki Thank you very much for commenting. Glad you enjoyed ^_^

[Magician12345]

nice poem. i really like the line

"my shattered heart still dares to beat "

[LadyFang20]

@Magician12345 thank you :)

[LadyFang20]

.....evilyness...? Seriously? If you can't use words that actually exist to insult me, don't bother trying. It's pathetic. -_-

[13Elphaba13]

You are such a beautiful, amazing, artistic poet and woman!! love your work. I'm really into gothic music/art work etc. :)

[warrior1349]

It's gewd.^^

[LadyFang20]

Thank you ^.^

[kyledog99]

FIVGE STARS AWESOME POEM!

[LadyFang20]

Thanx :D

[ArbypwnChiefneday]

Indeed, very good poem. My family appreciates some one to make our species aknowledged.

[LadyFang20]

thanks for your appreciation

[ArbypwnChiefneday]

no problem milady

[lightninghabsfan26]

i am scared of you

[LadyFang20]

But why? You've no need to be scared, unless you've wronged me somehow. Have you?

[psychoticsuperhero]

that was rocking

[LadyFang20]

Thank u :)

[VampViewer20]

Five stars :D

[LadyFang20]

WOOT!! Thanx ^_^

[GothicQueen2008]

woohoo! first comment!

...anywho :P

i love all ur poem's sis, but this one is WICKEDD!!

[LadyFang20]

Thanx :D