Sorry for it taking so long to reply. The first words were "The Red's found there way back home." Reds doesn't need an apostrophe since it isn't showing possession (same with 'blues') and 'there' should be 'their.' Starring has 2 r's. Grif has only 1 'f.' You should invert the 'i' and 'e' in 'Sheila' also. The last one is really just my own personal opinion: I think the alien's name is Captain Crunchbite (Lol) because Roosterteeth's artist, Luke Mckay(think that's how it's spelt)calls him that
It OK. You should check spelling and improve on the transitions, but your selection of scenes is great!
TheOneAndOnlyChimp 3 years ago
I thank you for your advice and will work on those areas next time.
Horus81Raptor88 3 years ago
also I would just like to know what spelling errors I made in the video.
Horus81Raptor88 3 years ago
Sorry for it taking so long to reply. The first words were "The Red's found there way back home." Reds doesn't need an apostrophe since it isn't showing possession (same with 'blues') and 'there' should be 'their.' Starring has 2 r's. Grif has only 1 'f.' You should invert the 'i' and 'e' in 'Sheila' also. The last one is really just my own personal opinion: I think the alien's name is Captain Crunchbite (Lol) because Roosterteeth's artist, Luke Mckay(think that's how it's spelt)calls him that
TheOneAndOnlyChimp 3 years ago
lol ive watched this like 10 times and it still makes me laugh
wolfhunter33 3 years ago
its good to know that i can make a video that can make someone laugh.
Horus81Raptor88 3 years ago