(4) I looked at the feet of the escapee the bloodied mess that used to be the nurse lay silent. My stomach wretched at the sight, the figure started to walk slowly towards me. I raised the gun firmly clasped in my shaky hands. My breathing was rapid. The insane man was now a few feet in front of me, he sank down and pounced at me. His hands outstretched and ready to claw at my skin. I squeezed the trigger.
(sorry if you dont like this i just like writing stories sorry if it sucks '~' )
@Yaoi155 Lol I wish! I've always thought my stories where written very childish; just because of the fact that they are sloppy. Thanks by the way, might make me rethink my writing ability. :D
@Aritrius Thanks! I'm in the process of writing a book, I love that my writing is actually good. Thank you guys! Best way to make me want to write more :P also maybe make my comments into a book :O who knows :D lol thanks guys!
(3) I slowly backed away from the door, my back hit the back wall of the cell. SHINK, up went a flap where they would check up on on the insane. A pair of bloodshot eyes stared at me. SHINK, the flap goes down. I realized i had been holding my breath, i let it out all at once. A muffled shuffling sound came from behind the door. Then the sound of the cell door being unlocked. REEK, BOOM. The cell door creaked open then hit the wall with a slam. A silhouetted figure filled the doorway.
(2) The nurse opened the cell and pulled me inside. "a patent escaped please use extreme caution and stay here." the nurse firmly planted a hand gun into my palm. "I will be back when the patent is apprehended." she proceeded to the door. "wait what?!?" I ran after her but I didn't make it out. She slammed the door shut, a locking noise processed. "no let me out!" I banged on the hard door. A shriek of terror sounded from the other side, "no, NO!!!" then silence. It sounded like the nurse. I s
(1) Zzich -a walkie talkie buzzed. The nurse pulled it out and listened to the muffled voice on the other end- "what?... Yes sir.... Yes sir, I'll help the search" -she returned the walkie talkie to her pocket- "mam I need to get you to safety now." -the nurse said firmly as she grabbed my arm and pulled me down the cellblock- "what?! Why?" I said trying to keep up to her fast pace. We stopped abruptly at the entrance of a cell. It didn't look occupied.
@TheSomeguy101 Silence, sorry girls he is one of our guest that has been here a while. Don't worry though as long as you stay away from his cell, I mean room you should be just fine.
@10kaylabear01
Your work is amazing! You should seriously consider adding on to that story of yours, as a reader I was pulled in at the first line!
ChirstamsLover 1 month ago
so creepy, so eeire...... I LOVE IT.
80srockrpwnsall 1 month ago
this is quite catchy.
ncp8925A 2 months ago
Oooh, I love these guys so muchhhhh... My seven fav albums of their's DEFINITELY have to be
1: Carnival of Lost Souls
2: Winter's Eve
3: Grimm Tales
4: Blackthorn Asylum
5: Shadow of the Raven
6: Transylvania
7: Phantoms of the High Seas
TheaterODaRediculous 5 months ago
This song looks a bit like the theme from House by the Cemetery :)
Nevertheless, Nox Arcana is GREAT! :D I enjoy every song of them ^^
Djedefra 5 months ago
The piano solo in this song is the most beautiful piece of music ever created by man.
Drowfan 8 months ago
(4) I looked at the feet of the escapee the bloodied mess that used to be the nurse lay silent. My stomach wretched at the sight, the figure started to walk slowly towards me. I raised the gun firmly clasped in my shaky hands. My breathing was rapid. The insane man was now a few feet in front of me, he sank down and pounced at me. His hands outstretched and ready to claw at my skin. I squeezed the trigger.
(sorry if you dont like this i just like writing stories sorry if it sucks '~' )
10kaylabear01 9 months ago 3
@10kaylabear01 this is good have you ever taken a creative writing class
Yaoi155 5 months ago
@Yaoi155 Lol I wish! I've always thought my stories where written very childish; just because of the fact that they are sloppy. Thanks by the way, might make me rethink my writing ability. :D
10kaylabear01 5 months ago
@10kaylabear01 Yaoi55 is right, that was very good. With a bit of work, you could very well become a very good writer!
Aritrius 4 months ago
@Aritrius Thanks! I'm in the process of writing a book, I love that my writing is actually good. Thank you guys! Best way to make me want to write more :P also maybe make my comments into a book :O who knows :D lol thanks guys!
10kaylabear01 4 months ago
(3) I slowly backed away from the door, my back hit the back wall of the cell. SHINK, up went a flap where they would check up on on the insane. A pair of bloodshot eyes stared at me. SHINK, the flap goes down. I realized i had been holding my breath, i let it out all at once. A muffled shuffling sound came from behind the door. Then the sound of the cell door being unlocked. REEK, BOOM. The cell door creaked open then hit the wall with a slam. A silhouetted figure filled the doorway.
10kaylabear01 9 months ago
(2) The nurse opened the cell and pulled me inside. "a patent escaped please use extreme caution and stay here." the nurse firmly planted a hand gun into my palm. "I will be back when the patent is apprehended." she proceeded to the door. "wait what?!?" I ran after her but I didn't make it out. She slammed the door shut, a locking noise processed. "no let me out!" I banged on the hard door. A shriek of terror sounded from the other side, "no, NO!!!" then silence. It sounded like the nurse. I s
10kaylabear01 9 months ago
(1) Zzich -a walkie talkie buzzed. The nurse pulled it out and listened to the muffled voice on the other end- "what?... Yes sir.... Yes sir, I'll help the search" -she returned the walkie talkie to her pocket- "mam I need to get you to safety now." -the nurse said firmly as she grabbed my arm and pulled me down the cellblock- "what?! Why?" I said trying to keep up to her fast pace. We stopped abruptly at the entrance of a cell. It didn't look occupied.
10kaylabear01 9 months ago
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10kaylabear01 9 months ago
Help... HELP ME, PLEASE, I'M GOING CRAZY!!! O.O
MissDie15 10 months ago
this is the best nox arcana album
charlieprince310 1 year ago
Amazing!
HandOfUniverse 1 year ago
Let the voices speak...
Yes...yes...yes...
*Manical Laughter* YES!
NONStopGamingGamer 1 year ago 5
Don't panic we are only here to help you, "put them in room 113 and I'll see to them later"
wiesje666 1 year ago
@wiesje666 take that back put them in 1408
TheSomeguy101 1 year ago
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wiesje666 1 year ago
@TheSomeguy101 Silence, sorry girls he is one of our guest that has been here a while. Don't worry though as long as you stay away from his cell, I mean room you should be just fine.
wiesje666 1 year ago
@wiesje666:
No, NO! Don't leave me! Let me go!
menslady125 1 year ago
WAIT! I'm not insane!
menslady125 2 years ago 3
Neither am I! Can't we just take a tour? I can get out of a straight jacket so don't bother...come on, we can take them on!
NooraAmar 2 years ago 12
@NooraAmar:
OH, NO! There's too many of them!
menslady125 2 years ago
For some reason I was very attracted to Nox Arcana before I was even goth My favorite album from them is Transylvania I love all their albums..
JustinOsbo 2 years ago 11
@JustinOsbo i dont have a fovorite but i do have a least favorite
blood of angels
TheSomeguy101 1 year ago
@JustinOsbo it dosn't really matter if your goth or not ime not goth but i still love their albums
cloud45s 2 months ago 2