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  • I wish I weren't 41 and arthritic right now, or I'd be learning these moves.

  • really good! i can feel the emotion of the song in your dance. good job!! xD

  • okay, bitte. Aber nerve ab jetzt bitte jemand anderen. Ich möchte mich wirklich nicht auf dein Niveau herablassen.

  • Amazing xxx you should go on summit like britain/.america got talent x A talent show of some kinda ur epic at dancing xxxx

  • i feel less emotion here.. though she is good.

  • @lightning03able well there's no "real" jar of hearts dance so...

  • A bit fast at the beginning and a little repetitive for the chorus, but I do like the dance, very original!

  • O.O O.O O_O_O_O_O_O_______O

  • Thats not the jar of hearts dance O.o yur just doing dance moves that yur puting in that song

  • Wow<3.

  • bist du ne tänzerin??? wenn ja hör auf damiz das zieht den ganzen sport ins lächerliche!! -.-

  • @flickflack98 Mach halt mal ne Video Antwort wenn du meinst es besser machen zu können ! Ich finde sie hat das toll gemacht ! Und Rechtschreibung scheint dir auch nicht zu

    liegen.

  • @NatschoPikatschu ganz ehrlich hab ich nich nötig. ich weiss wie ich tanze und die die es intressiert, die wissen auch das das da oben nix is. und zum thema rechtschreibung: glaubst du ernsthaft, ich weiss nicht wie man deutsch schreibt?! ich hab nur noch nebenbei wichtigere dinge zu tun als auf eine korrekte schreibsprache zu achten und wenns dich stört hasse pech gehabt -.-

  • @flickflack98 Ich finde es ja sehr niedlich das dir die Rechtschreibung egal ist , weil du besseres zu tun hast , aber warum machst du dir dann die Mühe und antwortest ? :'D

  • jetzt werd´ mal nicht sentimental. Meiner Meinung nach ist es nicht sehr höflich jemanden mit seinen Kommentaren da stehen zu lassen, wenn das deine Art ist - bitte, für mich persönlich ist das dann einfach nur absurd. Ich weiss auch gar nicht warum du dich jetzt so darein hängst. Ich hab jetzt schon lange verstanden das wir, was dieses Video angeht eine Meinungsverschiedenheit haben. Aber für mich wäre das kein Grund so ein kindisches Theater zu machen, aber wenn du´s nötig hast bitte. :D -.-

  • @flickflack98 Ja habe ich :)

  • to fast..

  • I love her dancing she just needs to be more graceful and less jerky . LOVE IT THOUGH

  • i love this!! <3 would this be a type of hip hop? :)

  • not bad...

    but she is moving to fast for the song ^^

  • Lol sieht aus wie'n Hammpelmann, ich meine Hammpelfrau xD Würde mal lieber erst ins Ballett gehn bevor du irgendetwas hier hereinstellst ;D Das ist nur meine Meinung !

  • you are amazing ..:!!! ahhh i want to dance like you..!:DD <3

  • oh

    my

    god.

    this is so wonderfuul.. <3

  • you are a beautiful dancing babe x hope you put more vids up xx

  • i like it so much, keep dancing, love it

  • moved to fast but ih loved it

  • this is amazing.

  • nice!!

  • What leap was that at 1:45? It was pretty cool.

  • you are so good!!!!!

  • this is amazing!!!!!!

  • speechless

    

  • did you make this whole dance up urself???? if so, its real good!!

  • no ofence but it dosnt make sence to dance fast to a slow song. but great dance :)

  • Don't see why people are hating, she dances way better than I ever could :')

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart omg, its amazing! your great

  • i think its great and the hip hop addds like imfusis haha adn its rlly good im in shock i wish i was that good and for you to have made that up im speachless

  • this is actually a beautiful dance:) your gr8 xxx

  • seems too hip hoppy but it's really good

  • i love this! im always dancing round my room coming up with things, but then when it comes to actualy wanting to make a full dance i freeze! how do you do this?! :L its great <3

  • @lucyjaneN i actually made up a dance and when they were filming i forgot it aha xD its really hard for me to make up a whole dance as well. :P

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart

    Hahaha yeah I kinda figured that, you can tell towards the end.

    It's real good in the beginning though

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart lol well i love the new dance too xD

  • @lucyjaneN  i think this is the real dance to the video >.o

  • I want to know how you did it for an english project? I'd love to have my teacher let me do that! I love the musicality of the dance :D

  • awesome :) i have to choreograph for a class and this saved me. thank you inspiration

  • Your hair gets kinda annoying when you are dancing, but other than that, very beautiful dance.

  • try not to sing the lyrics when dancing but otherwise very good and I shall be using this as inspiration! :)

  • trust me, don't dance in socks. Anyways, you need to work on your positioning and technical parts- but otherwise its fine. I could see the emotion in the actions and your spilts were great

  • that was beautiful

  • Great work I think you need to work on your jeteas those things where you do splits in the air.

  • Du bist ne tolle tänzerin :) du machst das ech toll, meiner meinung passt der tanz nicht immer zum song, aber zu disem song ist es auch schwer eine choreographie zu entwerfen.

    weiter so :D

  • i think your a good dancer except i think that when you forget the routine, you just mess with your hair :/

  • @makeyup1

    I don't think she is nervous or forgetting her routine when she plays with her hair. That is for dramatic effect, most likely.

  • omg, why didnt you spot for that turn in the beginning?! aahhhh-_____-

  • Great work!

  • All she did was walk in circles!

  • beautiful(:

  • you need more emotion!! you're just plain-faced going thru the motions. its stiff! You need flow and emotion andpassion!!

  • sorry it realy doesnt make sence with the song i hate it but try next time kk

  • dnt listen to haters. u can dance i loved it!

  • i could do that. jut run and flail your limbs

  • I didn't like it

  • Ur awsome dancer!! Dont be so hateful people.

  • stop insulting her! i bet u couldnt do any better

  • kentucky fried chicken can dance better than that

  • zu schnell

  • I thought it was Brilliant. I would like to see the people who left mean comment's get up and do it better.. bet they couldn't :/ they are just Jealous xx

  • @AshNoelDance

    Its just a leap but have your legs in attitude.

  • Th leap at 1:45 is really cool.

  • you are very very very very very very very very very very very very very good

  • so talented! mega jealous@!

  • Wonderful !

    

  • i love it (:

  • why do people point out all the fucking negatives in these videos??? jesus give the girl a fucking compliment and GTFO

  • to fast for the song but its good^^

  • its a really pretty dance :) i feel like movements should be more soft and together though even if thats not the way its choreographed

  • i really love how you dance, but they not armonize with the tempo of the song, cause moves look faster than the song

  • Beautiful

  • I love the dance.... i think it would be even better if there were more piroettes, fuetes, alsecond turns, etc. Love the dance you did in general though... :)

  • I think you did amazing :)

  • Lol brilliant dance but then I read the description and just thought omd! "it's something i've actually gone through" stop feeling sorry for yourself. Good dancing though :)

  • great job!!! U should put up a how to do vid

  • i like her hair a lot

  • She looks a bit like the girl from paranormal activity. No. just me?

  • ur beat is too fast :)

  • no offence but u really need to tie up ur hair

  • this i svery good keep up the good work 1

  • This kinda makes me wanna get into dance again (:

    I loved it!

  • have you read the discription?

  • AMAZINGGGGG<3

  • That was a really good. :)

    This'll sound weird but I love your hair. ... X)

  • Its a good dance but not to this song sorry :L

  • it was okay needs improving tho

  • Gave me goosebumps, it adds so much meaning when you watch the lyrical dancing :')

  • i actually think its really good and creative you just need to work on your teqnique :) good job x

  • 0:21 was cool

  • trying not to be rude or anything but i didn't like it at all. you need to follow through with the movements, they looked very choppy and didn't really go with the song. secondly DON'T lip sinc...it's not a good thing and distracts from the dance. and try to put more emotion into it, the song is so deep and i didn't really see a connection. next, work on technique, especially pointing your toes, flexed feet aren't pretty. again i'm not trying to be rude, just wanna help out! (:

  • ummmm your dance was nice but i think u should not lip read as when i watched this i got distracted by ur lip reading but overall it was great!!

  • i really liked this a lot, you're awesome girl so keep it up!! :)

  • Good job, but don't lip sing it's easy to because you've heard the song so many times (I know I've danced for 13 years) try and focus on emotin more, and be confident so you won't be shakey!

  • You are definitely a good dancer, but I just feel like you were doing a move to every beat. try to break it up by slowing it down or speeding up the choreography at points, you know what I mean?

  • @libby444555 that a the style of dance. Don't hate cos your not that good.

  • not  very good , you dnt really dance just prance about !!!! :/

  • awesome dance i thought you were really good !!!!!

  • Typical drill team dancer attempting lyrical.

  • The moves need to be made more fluid and less walking around try add more movements! otherwise great and I subscribed! If you get a chance check by my channel I have quite a few dances on there aswell! Also great song choice and great flexibility! x

  • 2:00- 2:15 is like just running

  • What is this?

    a crappy dancer improving so type of hiphop in a warehouse...wtf

  • Very good work, but you need to work on teh details ;)

  • Even tthough u were a little jerky in movement,this is my FAVOURITE dance for Jar of Hearts :D OK I admit I cried from watching this. GOOD JOB! :D

  • the choreo was really good and you definately have talent but there is always room for improvement in every routine. i would say that you need to express that anger that you felt by "attacking" the choreo dont let it settle for what it is. Dont just let the song portray the emotion, dance this as if u are showing every pain u have ever felt to the world. But it is stile AMAZING :) definately not a robot :D

  • this is really great, and yes be strong but show that your werent always strong, show the pitty you feel for every other girl who didnt know better.

  • i don't understand why 23 people don't like this video.

    In my opinion, you're very very good, I can see perfect technique and EMOTIONS, yup I can. You're not "ROBOT", do not listen these guys.

  • I think you're a fine dancer but I thought you were a bit jerky with your movements, try to make it a bit slower and more graceful.

    Otherwise good job.

  • I think the people were watching were like... wtf?

  • I think this is really great! :D I'm also choreographing a dance to this song, and I have been using your dance to kind of get some of my ideas flowing so thank you(: I want to be a dancer SO BAD and you're so inspiring(:

  • @CuppedCakedFilms thanks :) and no not at all i wish everyone said what they wanted like you :3 this was made a long time ago and since then i have had gymnastics training actually aha xD thanks again :)

  • you should stop lipsyncing while dancing

  • You need to add more to your choreography. Much of the dance was just you walking or spinning around the stage to beats, or flinging your hands out, or to your heart or head. Its funny because I do the same exact thing when I freestyle. But those moves don't cut it for an actual dance. It takes longer to choreograph something of substance because you have to really pick apart the music and create moves to match it, but that's what separates the great from the boring. The 1st 50 sec was good.

  • i dont understand why there are so many negitive comments. i looooooove this, and i think you did an amazing job. :)

  • try not to sing it while your dancing :)

    otherwise great :)

  • Great use of the space and some of the move suited the music very well I am a dancer myself and I am also dancing to this song but for school. This is really good keep it up :)

  • the music and everything is great love it (:

  • i relly like this (:

  • Her steps were good but the music was too slow

  • she is good just try and not to sing when you are dancing, i want to watch you sing ore than you moving :)

  • looks like a talent show routine... uhgg

  • @brittywitty19 all routines are supposed to show talent, you really dont have to be so negative i get that it needs work.

  • @brittywitty19 lets see u do better?

  • Wow! This is the best dance to Jar of Hearts I've seen yet :)

    I've only been dancing a few years..and I would kill to be as good as you :)

  • Practice! Practice!Practice! Your good, but it couldve been better .

  • Jesus ! Dont flick your leg giirll while doing that jump ! keep em straight !

  • This is absolutely amazing! And you choreographed it!?!?! You have talent!! I would kill to be as good as you!!!

  • Ignore all the hate your amazing and this coreography is SO good !

  • i think i could have done better nikki

  • @LightningAssassin1 fuck off richard aha

    

  • @LightningAssassin1 Thats not very nice..

    she did good!

  • you are absolutly amazing girl! xxxxxxxx

  • You're really good!

  • don't sing along with the lyrics that's the most annoying thing ever. point your toes pleaseeee. and look up and straight forward not at the ground it's making your balance all wack.

  • Your choreo was great! However, work a little harder to make things cleaner and it should make it phenomenal! Best I've seen so far couldn't take my eyes off ya!

  • well. dance isnt easy and its isn't nice. if someone would have told you this then you would have been even better now.

  • lift your legs!!!!!!!!!! ugh lol your attitude is killing me lift it it should hurt! and your fish role please straighten and spred your legs.and your jete lift your back leg and hold the pose longer.

  • @lellyville i did this a long time ago, I've gotten better and if your going to give me criticism you should try not to be so rude..

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart that was harsh ...keep your judgment to yourself! i think you did great! dont listen to hatin ass people!

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart sorry but im not trying to be mean but if you ever want to do dance professionaly, you'll have to be able to take critisism, harsh or nice! ;) x

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart I think you were awesome, and you were really good, and Like you said in the description "but it means a lot because its something I have actually gone through." I have been though something like it, too. Its called my life, lol but im only in 6th grade, and it still goes on. BUt your amazing, u should go on America's got Talent. :) Good Luck

  • @lellyville You know not everybody is a perfect dancer. And I'm sure you cant do every move perfect, where are your videos of you dancing? Why aren't you showing off your amazing skills to the world?? I thought she did a phenomenal job. A great dance and dancer if you ask me.

  • @lellyville youre killing me being so rude you do it see how hard dance really is so **** off loser be nice next time and remember lets see you do it >:]

  • @lellyville y do u wnat her to open her legs more??u shoudl perverted

  • okay dance team. you really need to work on your technique its ..... lacking. but the dance would be really pretty if you could execute the technique more graceful

  • It's good :) A couple of helpful criticisms: Some of the movements seem cut short and could be followed through a little more, but it looks good so far. One thing most dancers are taught is not to sing while dancing ;) I could tell you really got into it, which is fantastic to see as it is a great song (and a great dance) but singing kind of draws the attention away from the dancing... But amazing chore!! :)

  • I really like it :) you have some really cool chore in there, some very original stuff like in 0:45! keep choreing your own stuff cause your very good :) x

  • AMAZING

  • i loved it so much

  • dude, shes amazing! idk what u guys are talking about...haha. @CleanseMyBrokenHeart , do you think u could watch my jar of hearts dance that i posted and give me tips? i made mine more ballet, since im only 13 and my contemporary sux, so yeah. haha. some pointers from you would be amazing...if u even see this comment...haha. ur a great dancer, and the hater is jealous(;

  • How did u learn this

  • @04sexybeast04 I choreographed it xD

  • Can u do tus dance step by step before july plzzzz

  • Are you a cheerleader as well?

  • @hannaheaustin no lol :/

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart It almost looks like you're doing cheerleading moves. It's interesting.

  • This is amazing, I was wondering , if you could make a video of the song, cut? this version, it's the same as mine for my lyrical dance this year and I would love to put it up , but I think it would be annoying for people to wait through another chorus while I stand there, lol, is there any way you could make a video of this song so I can convert it onto my itunes? ( I will do that , just need the video ) , please and thank you <3 AMAZING btw!

  • @frenchkitty1000 I'll try :P xD I'll have to see if i have the cut version that i used 

  • @CleanseMyBrokenHeart okai , thanks so much!

  • This is reaall good babe. <3

  • I don't think you should really be singing to the song while you're dancing, but overall I think that is was all right.

  • Wow, you look like my VBS leader. It was all this week. It ended though... hehehe... You are really good!!!

  • no... You are good.. But does any dancer know how to dance TO the music anymore.