@flickflack98 Mach halt mal ne Video Antwort wenn du meinst es besser machen zu können ! Ich finde sie hat das toll gemacht ! Und Rechtschreibung scheint dir auch nicht zu
@NatschoPikatschu ganz ehrlich hab ich nich nötig. ich weiss wie ich tanze und die die es intressiert, die wissen auch das das da oben nix is. und zum thema rechtschreibung: glaubst du ernsthaft, ich weiss nicht wie man deutsch schreibt?! ich hab nur noch nebenbei wichtigere dinge zu tun als auf eine korrekte schreibsprache zu achten und wenns dich stört hasse pech gehabt -.-
@flickflack98 Ich finde es ja sehr niedlich das dir die Rechtschreibung egal ist , weil du besseres zu tun hast , aber warum machst du dir dann die Mühe und antwortest ? :'D
jetzt werd´ mal nicht sentimental. Meiner Meinung nach ist es nicht sehr höflich jemanden mit seinen Kommentaren da stehen zu lassen, wenn das deine Art ist - bitte, für mich persönlich ist das dann einfach nur absurd. Ich weiss auch gar nicht warum du dich jetzt so darein hängst. Ich hab jetzt schon lange verstanden das wir, was dieses Video angeht eine Meinungsverschiedenheit haben. Aber für mich wäre das kein Grund so ein kindisches Theater zu machen, aber wenn du´s nötig hast bitte. :D -.-
@NatschoPikatschu Meiner Meinung nach ist es nicht sehr höflich jemanden mit seinen Kommentaren da stehen zu lassen, wenn das deine Art ist - bitte, für mich persönlich ist das dann einfach nur absurd. Ich weiss auch gar nicht warum du dich jetzt so darein hängst. Ich hab jetzt schon lange verstanden das wir, was dieses Video angeht eine Meinungsverschiedenheit haben. Aber für mich wäre das kein Grund so ein kindisches Theater zu machen, aber wenn du´s nötig hast bitte
Lol sieht aus wie'n Hammpelmann, ich meine Hammpelfrau xD Würde mal lieber erst ins Ballett gehn bevor du irgendetwas hier hereinstellst ;D Das ist nur meine Meinung !
i think its great and the hip hop addds like imfusis haha adn its rlly good im in shock i wish i was that good and for you to have made that up im speachless
i love this! im always dancing round my room coming up with things, but then when it comes to actualy wanting to make a full dance i freeze! how do you do this?! :L its great <3
trust me, don't dance in socks. Anyways, you need to work on your positioning and technical parts- but otherwise its fine. I could see the emotion in the actions and your spilts were great
Du bist ne tolle tänzerin :) du machst das ech toll, meiner meinung passt der tanz nicht immer zum song, aber zu disem song ist es auch schwer eine choreographie zu entwerfen.
I thought it was Brilliant. I would like to see the people who left mean comment's get up and do it better.. bet they couldn't :/ they are just Jealous xx
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I love the dance.... i think it would be even better if there were more piroettes, fuetes, alsecond turns, etc. Love the dance you did in general though... :)
Lol brilliant dance but then I read the description and just thought omd! "it's something i've actually gone through" stop feeling sorry for yourself. Good dancing though :)
trying not to be rude or anything but i didn't like it at all. you need to follow through with the movements, they looked very choppy and didn't really go with the song. secondly DON'T lip sinc...it's not a good thing and distracts from the dance. and try to put more emotion into it, the song is so deep and i didn't really see a connection. next, work on technique, especially pointing your toes, flexed feet aren't pretty. again i'm not trying to be rude, just wanna help out! (:
Good job, but don't lip sing it's easy to because you've heard the song so many times (I know I've danced for 13 years) try and focus on emotin more, and be confident so you won't be shakey!
You are definitely a good dancer, but I just feel like you were doing a move to every beat. try to break it up by slowing it down or speeding up the choreography at points, you know what I mean?
The moves need to be made more fluid and less walking around try add more movements! otherwise great and I subscribed! If you get a chance check by my channel I have quite a few dances on there aswell! Also great song choice and great flexibility! x
the choreo was really good and you definately have talent but there is always room for improvement in every routine. i would say that you need to express that anger that you felt by "attacking" the choreo dont let it settle for what it is. Dont just let the song portray the emotion, dance this as if u are showing every pain u have ever felt to the world. But it is stile AMAZING :) definately not a robot :D
I think this is really great! :D I'm also choreographing a dance to this song, and I have been using your dance to kind of get some of my ideas flowing so thank you(: I want to be a dancer SO BAD and you're so inspiring(:
@CuppedCakedFilms thanks :) and no not at all i wish everyone said what they wanted like you :3 this was made a long time ago and since then i have had gymnastics training actually aha xD thanks again :)
You need to add more to your choreography. Much of the dance was just you walking or spinning around the stage to beats, or flinging your hands out, or to your heart or head. Its funny because I do the same exact thing when I freestyle. But those moves don't cut it for an actual dance. It takes longer to choreograph something of substance because you have to really pick apart the music and create moves to match it, but that's what separates the great from the boring. The 1st 50 sec was good.
Great use of the space and some of the move suited the music very well I am a dancer myself and I am also dancing to this song but for school. This is really good keep it up :)
don't sing along with the lyrics that's the most annoying thing ever. point your toes pleaseeee. and look up and straight forward not at the ground it's making your balance all wack.
Your choreo was great! However, work a little harder to make things cleaner and it should make it phenomenal! Best I've seen so far couldn't take my eyes off ya!
lift your legs!!!!!!!!!! ugh lol your attitude is killing me lift it it should hurt! and your fish role please straighten and spred your legs.and your jete lift your back leg and hold the pose longer.
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart sorry but im not trying to be mean but if you ever want to do dance professionaly, you'll have to be able to take critisism, harsh or nice! ;) x
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart I think you were awesome, and you were really good, and Like you said in the description "but it means a lot because its something I have actually gone through." I have been though something like it, too. Its called my life, lol but im only in 6th grade, and it still goes on. BUt your amazing, u should go on America's got Talent. :) Good Luck
@lellyville You know not everybody is a perfect dancer. And I'm sure you cant do every move perfect, where are your videos of you dancing? Why aren't you showing off your amazing skills to the world?? I thought she did a phenomenal job. A great dance and dancer if you ask me.
@lellyville youre killing me being so rude you do it see how hard dance really is so **** off loser be nice next time and remember lets see you do it >:]
okay dance team. you really need to work on your technique its ..... lacking. but the dance would be really pretty if you could execute the technique more graceful
It's good :) A couple of helpful criticisms: Some of the movements seem cut short and could be followed through a little more, but it looks good so far. One thing most dancers are taught is not to sing while dancing ;) I could tell you really got into it, which is fantastic to see as it is a great song (and a great dance) but singing kind of draws the attention away from the dancing... But amazing chore!! :)
I really like it :) you have some really cool chore in there, some very original stuff like in 0:45! keep choreing your own stuff cause your very good :) x
dude, shes amazing! idk what u guys are talking about...haha. @CleanseMyBrokenHeart , do you think u could watch my jar of hearts dance that i posted and give me tips? i made mine more ballet, since im only 13 and my contemporary sux, so yeah. haha. some pointers from you would be amazing...if u even see this comment...haha. ur a great dancer, and the hater is jealous(;
This is amazing, I was wondering , if you could make a video of the song, cut? this version, it's the same as mine for my lyrical dance this year and I would love to put it up , but I think it would be annoying for people to wait through another chorus while I stand there, lol, is there any way you could make a video of this song so I can convert it onto my itunes? ( I will do that , just need the video ) , please and thank you <3 AMAZING btw!
I wish I weren't 41 and arthritic right now, or I'd be learning these moves.
macguyvergirl 5 days ago
really good! i can feel the emotion of the song in your dance. good job!! xD
DanaCharlotte123 1 week ago
okay, bitte. Aber nerve ab jetzt bitte jemand anderen. Ich möchte mich wirklich nicht auf dein Niveau herablassen.
flickflack98 1 week ago
Amazing xxx you should go on summit like britain/.america got talent x A talent show of some kinda ur epic at dancing xxxx
saslouise1 1 week ago
i feel less emotion here.. though she is good.
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TamaraMichelleMusic 1 week ago
@lightning03able well there's no "real" jar of hearts dance so...
Kaddiebeth 1 week ago
A bit fast at the beginning and a little repetitive for the chorus, but I do like the dance, very original!
CandleBebe9902 1 week ago
O.O O.O O_O_O_O_O_O_______O
Lightning03able 2 weeks ago
Thats not the jar of hearts dance O.o yur just doing dance moves that yur puting in that song
Lightning03able 2 weeks ago
Wow<3.
musicisinme143 2 weeks ago
bist du ne tänzerin??? wenn ja hör auf damiz das zieht den ganzen sport ins lächerliche!! -.-
flickflack98 2 weeks ago
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NatschoPikatschu 2 weeks ago
@NatschoPikatschu ganz ehrlich hab ich nich nötig. ich weiss wie ich tanze und die die es intressiert, die wissen auch das das da oben nix is. und zum thema rechtschreibung: glaubst du ernsthaft, ich weiss nicht wie man deutsch schreibt?! ich hab nur noch nebenbei wichtigere dinge zu tun als auf eine korrekte schreibsprache zu achten und wenns dich stört hasse pech gehabt -.-
flickflack98 1 week ago
@flickflack98 Ich finde es ja sehr niedlich das dir die Rechtschreibung egal ist , weil du besseres zu tun hast , aber warum machst du dir dann die Mühe und antwortest ? :'D
NatschoPikatschu 1 week ago
jetzt werd´ mal nicht sentimental. Meiner Meinung nach ist es nicht sehr höflich jemanden mit seinen Kommentaren da stehen zu lassen, wenn das deine Art ist - bitte, für mich persönlich ist das dann einfach nur absurd. Ich weiss auch gar nicht warum du dich jetzt so darein hängst. Ich hab jetzt schon lange verstanden das wir, was dieses Video angeht eine Meinungsverschiedenheit haben. Aber für mich wäre das kein Grund so ein kindisches Theater zu machen, aber wenn du´s nötig hast bitte. :D -.-
flickflack98 1 week ago
@flickflack98 Ja habe ich :)
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@NatschoPikatschu Meiner Meinung nach ist es nicht sehr höflich jemanden mit seinen Kommentaren da stehen zu lassen, wenn das deine Art ist - bitte, für mich persönlich ist das dann einfach nur absurd. Ich weiss auch gar nicht warum du dich jetzt so darein hängst. Ich hab jetzt schon lange verstanden das wir, was dieses Video angeht eine Meinungsverschiedenheit haben. Aber für mich wäre das kein Grund so ein kindisches Theater zu machen, aber wenn du´s nötig hast bitte
flickflack98 1 week ago
to fast..
TanikoHorigome 2 weeks ago
I love her dancing she just needs to be more graceful and less jerky . LOVE IT THOUGH
LeeSavannah 3 weeks ago 2
i love this!! <3 would this be a type of hip hop? :)
Cupcakefunlove 3 weeks ago
not bad...
but she is moving to fast for the song ^^
FaustKorsas 3 weeks ago
Lol sieht aus wie'n Hammpelmann, ich meine Hammpelfrau xD Würde mal lieber erst ins Ballett gehn bevor du irgendetwas hier hereinstellst ;D Das ist nur meine Meinung !
lupefiasco89 3 weeks ago
you are amazing ..:!!! ahhh i want to dance like you..!:DD <3
LiikeMee12 3 weeks ago
oh
my
god.
this is so wonderfuul.. <3
Nina56660 1 month ago
you are a beautiful dancing babe x hope you put more vids up xx
Sinead2301 1 month ago
i like it so much, keep dancing, love it
Damnlass 1 month ago
moved to fast but ih loved it
stephii009 1 month ago
this is amazing.
athena2517 1 month ago
nice!!
MONTREALTIGER 1 month ago
What leap was that at 1:45? It was pretty cool.
annagracemanrox 1 month ago
you are so good!!!!!
Snakeskill 1 month ago
this is amazing!!!!!!
FallenAngelsSoal 1 month ago
speechless
KatieB220 1 month ago
did you make this whole dance up urself???? if so, its real good!!
cleobebeastin99 1 month ago
no ofence but it dosnt make sence to dance fast to a slow song. but great dance :)
funnyshows2050 1 month ago
Don't see why people are hating, she dances way better than I ever could :')
damnmisunderstood 1 month ago
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart omg, its amazing! your great
lucyjaneN 1 month ago
i think its great and the hip hop addds like imfusis haha adn its rlly good im in shock i wish i was that good and for you to have made that up im speachless
crazyNfreeky 1 month ago
this is actually a beautiful dance:) your gr8 xxx
Theloopylassxx 2 months ago
seems too hip hoppy but it's really good
SimplyMeStephanie 2 months ago
i love this! im always dancing round my room coming up with things, but then when it comes to actualy wanting to make a full dance i freeze! how do you do this?! :L its great <3
lucyjaneN 2 months ago 10
@lucyjaneN i actually made up a dance and when they were filming i forgot it aha xD its really hard for me to make up a whole dance as well. :P
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 2 months ago 3
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart
Hahaha yeah I kinda figured that, you can tell towards the end.
It's real good in the beginning though
MrTheKMKShow 1 month ago
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart lol well i love the new dance too xD
Polkiujy100 20 hours ago
@lucyjaneN i think this is the real dance to the video >.o
mermaidsinblue231 5 days ago
I want to know how you did it for an english project? I'd love to have my teacher let me do that! I love the musicality of the dance :D
Pennel11 2 months ago
awesome :) i have to choreograph for a class and this saved me. thank you inspiration
StellaStar661 2 months ago
Your hair gets kinda annoying when you are dancing, but other than that, very beautiful dance.
xxRetroDJxx 2 months ago
try not to sing the lyrics when dancing but otherwise very good and I shall be using this as inspiration! :)
LoverofDancexox 2 months ago
trust me, don't dance in socks. Anyways, you need to work on your positioning and technical parts- but otherwise its fine. I could see the emotion in the actions and your spilts were great
blackbutterflywiings 2 months ago
that was beautiful
ashley58650 2 months ago
Great work I think you need to work on your jeteas those things where you do splits in the air.
rainbowstar74 2 months ago
Du bist ne tolle tänzerin :) du machst das ech toll, meiner meinung passt der tanz nicht immer zum song, aber zu disem song ist es auch schwer eine choreographie zu entwerfen.
weiter so :D
Soullaugh 2 months ago
i think your a good dancer except i think that when you forget the routine, you just mess with your hair :/
makeyup1 2 months ago
@makeyup1
I don't think she is nervous or forgetting her routine when she plays with her hair. That is for dramatic effect, most likely.
DreamyOwl73 2 months ago
omg, why didnt you spot for that turn in the beginning?! aahhhh-_____-
MakeupTeen94 2 months ago
Great work!
PureLightHealer 2 months ago
All she did was walk in circles!
nevershouttalexia 2 months ago
beautiful(:
woeitskatherine 2 months ago
you need more emotion!! you're just plain-faced going thru the motions. its stiff! You need flow and emotion andpassion!!
Beeustace711 2 months ago
sorry it realy doesnt make sence with the song i hate it but try next time kk
brendalizpr7 2 months ago
dnt listen to haters. u can dance i loved it!
BloodyBlackHearts21 2 months ago 23
i could do that. jut run and flail your limbs
cheerxcrazi197 2 months ago
I didn't like it
CuteWunnyBunny 2 months ago
Ur awsome dancer!! Dont be so hateful people.
twilightbeauty2 2 months ago
stop insulting her! i bet u couldnt do any better
zstarla101z 2 months ago
kentucky fried chicken can dance better than that
BethxXxJamxXx 2 months ago
zu schnell
ffusvjena 2 months ago
I thought it was Brilliant. I would like to see the people who left mean comment's get up and do it better.. bet they couldn't :/ they are just Jealous xx
ThatStereoGirl 3 months ago
@AshNoelDance
Its just a leap but have your legs in attitude.
Poptartluver2929 3 months ago
Th leap at 1:45 is really cool.
AshNoelDance 3 months ago
you are very very very very very very very very very very very very very good
rinikassy 3 months ago
so talented! mega jealous@!
TheShaunStack 3 months ago
Wonderful !
bumbumbabsi 3 months ago
i love it (:
CupcakezRawsume 3 months ago
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DONT READ THIS CAUSE IT ACTUALY WORKS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DONT POST THIS YOU WILL DIE WITHIN TWO DAYS. NOW UV STARTED TO READ THIS DONT STOP. TIS IS SO SCARY. PUT THIS ON AT LEAST FIVE VIDEOS IN 143 MINUTES WHEN YOUR DONE PRESS F6 AND LOVERS NAME WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO SCARY CAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS
spekals 3 months ago
why do people point out all the fucking negatives in these videos??? jesus give the girl a fucking compliment and GTFO
blackopsbeast22 3 months ago
to fast for the song but its good^^
KennySouthparkfan 3 months ago
its a really pretty dance :) i feel like movements should be more soft and together though even if thats not the way its choreographed
ukuleilei2846 3 months ago
i really love how you dance, but they not armonize with the tempo of the song, cause moves look faster than the song
KIRARImitsuki 3 months ago
Beautiful
MabelSmith90 3 months ago 15
I love the dance.... i think it would be even better if there were more piroettes, fuetes, alsecond turns, etc. Love the dance you did in general though... :)
tissil1 3 months ago
I think you did amazing :)
akbrgurl145 3 months ago
Lol brilliant dance but then I read the description and just thought omd! "it's something i've actually gone through" stop feeling sorry for yourself. Good dancing though :)
RyanAdamSmalley 4 months ago
great job!!! U should put up a how to do vid
izzosings101 4 months ago
i like her hair a lot
MichiannaVIDZ 4 months ago
She looks a bit like the girl from paranormal activity. No. just me?
PeaceChic3 4 months ago
ur beat is too fast :)
134doris 4 months ago
no offence but u really need to tie up ur hair
SophieGymnast6797 4 months ago
this i svery good keep up the good work 1
LaurenW68863 4 months ago
This kinda makes me wanna get into dance again (:
I loved it!
torilemond 4 months ago
have you read the discription?
NICOLETKW 4 months ago
AMAZINGGGGG<3
misscakeylove 4 months ago
That was a really good. :)
This'll sound weird but I love your hair. ... X)
TheNebulaangel 4 months ago
Its a good dance but not to this song sorry :L
KimmyAngel01 4 months ago
it was okay needs improving tho
Lucycoolio31 4 months ago
Gave me goosebumps, it adds so much meaning when you watch the lyrical dancing :')
oceangirliscool 4 months ago
i actually think its really good and creative you just need to work on your teqnique :) good job x
MrBeaaans 4 months ago
0:21 was cool
dancinpelican 4 months ago
trying not to be rude or anything but i didn't like it at all. you need to follow through with the movements, they looked very choppy and didn't really go with the song. secondly DON'T lip sinc...it's not a good thing and distracts from the dance. and try to put more emotion into it, the song is so deep and i didn't really see a connection. next, work on technique, especially pointing your toes, flexed feet aren't pretty. again i'm not trying to be rude, just wanna help out! (:
heckahhyahh 4 months ago
ummmm your dance was nice but i think u should not lip read as when i watched this i got distracted by ur lip reading but overall it was great!!
11xxkevinxx99 4 months ago
i really liked this a lot, you're awesome girl so keep it up!! :)
Rride3 4 months ago
Good job, but don't lip sing it's easy to because you've heard the song so many times (I know I've danced for 13 years) try and focus on emotin more, and be confident so you won't be shakey!
magicblackwolf32 5 months ago
You are definitely a good dancer, but I just feel like you were doing a move to every beat. try to break it up by slowing it down or speeding up the choreography at points, you know what I mean?
mlynchrules1 5 months ago
@libby444555 that a the style of dance. Don't hate cos your not that good.
MolzyHolzy 5 months ago
not very good , you dnt really dance just prance about !!!! :/
libby444555 5 months ago
awesome dance i thought you were really good !!!!!
iloveRoxyandRippley 5 months ago
Typical drill team dancer attempting lyrical.
Nitnee27 5 months ago
The moves need to be made more fluid and less walking around try add more movements! otherwise great and I subscribed! If you get a chance check by my channel I have quite a few dances on there aswell! Also great song choice and great flexibility! x
pengflake99 5 months ago
2:00- 2:15 is like just running
joenickjloverALOT 5 months ago
What is this?
a crappy dancer improving so type of hiphop in a warehouse...wtf
yewshouldshutup 5 months ago
Very good work, but you need to work on teh details ;)
elizzann 5 months ago
Even tthough u were a little jerky in movement,this is my FAVOURITE dance for Jar of Hearts :D OK I admit I cried from watching this. GOOD JOB! :D
chineeDOTaimee 5 months ago
the choreo was really good and you definately have talent but there is always room for improvement in every routine. i would say that you need to express that anger that you felt by "attacking" the choreo dont let it settle for what it is. Dont just let the song portray the emotion, dance this as if u are showing every pain u have ever felt to the world. But it is stile AMAZING :) definately not a robot :D
GleekificationXOX 5 months ago
this is really great, and yes be strong but show that your werent always strong, show the pitty you feel for every other girl who didnt know better.
xxcatyxx555 6 months ago
i don't understand why 23 people don't like this video.
In my opinion, you're very very good, I can see perfect technique and EMOTIONS, yup I can. You're not "ROBOT", do not listen these guys.
abiou9090 6 months ago
I think you're a fine dancer but I thought you were a bit jerky with your movements, try to make it a bit slower and more graceful.
Otherwise good job.
xiradasend 6 months ago
I think the people were watching were like... wtf?
RaNomGiRl308 6 months ago
I think this is really great! :D I'm also choreographing a dance to this song, and I have been using your dance to kind of get some of my ideas flowing so thank you(: I want to be a dancer SO BAD and you're so inspiring(:
LautnerLuvable 6 months ago
@CuppedCakedFilms thanks :) and no not at all i wish everyone said what they wanted like you :3 this was made a long time ago and since then i have had gymnastics training actually aha xD thanks again :)
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 6 months ago
you should stop lipsyncing while dancing
stupidxemoxmushroom 6 months ago
You need to add more to your choreography. Much of the dance was just you walking or spinning around the stage to beats, or flinging your hands out, or to your heart or head. Its funny because I do the same exact thing when I freestyle. But those moves don't cut it for an actual dance. It takes longer to choreograph something of substance because you have to really pick apart the music and create moves to match it, but that's what separates the great from the boring. The 1st 50 sec was good.
hudis78 6 months ago 22
i dont understand why there are so many negitive comments. i looooooove this, and i think you did an amazing job. :)
MissDance98 6 months ago
try not to sing it while your dancing :)
otherwise great :)
blah2brilliant 6 months ago
Great use of the space and some of the move suited the music very well I am a dancer myself and I am also dancing to this song but for school. This is really good keep it up :)
koolkat0212 6 months ago
the music and everything is great love it (:
sheeatsbugs 6 months ago
i relly like this (:
sheeatsbugs 6 months ago
Her steps were good but the music was too slow
pinkprimaballerina 7 months ago
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she is good just try and not to sing when you are dancing, i want to watch you sing ore than you moving :)
TheKara8 7 months ago
she is good just try and not to sing when you are dancing, i want to watch you sing ore than you moving :)
TheKara8 7 months ago
looks like a talent show routine... uhgg
brittywitty19 7 months ago
@brittywitty19 all routines are supposed to show talent, you really dont have to be so negative i get that it needs work.
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 7 months ago 12
@brittywitty19 lets see u do better?
kiera791 3 months ago
Wow! This is the best dance to Jar of Hearts I've seen yet :)
I've only been dancing a few years..and I would kill to be as good as you :)
Jamatre97 7 months ago
Practice! Practice!Practice! Your good, but it couldve been better .
iTerriLacombe 7 months ago
Jesus ! Dont flick your leg giirll while doing that jump ! keep em straight !
TheSydniieAter 7 months ago
This is absolutely amazing! And you choreographed it!?!?! You have talent!! I would kill to be as good as you!!!
HawkNelsonRocks411 7 months ago
Ignore all the hate your amazing and this coreography is SO good !
BerryGleeky 7 months ago
i think i could have done better nikki
LightningAssassin1 7 months ago
@LightningAssassin1 fuck off richard aha
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 7 months ago
@LightningAssassin1 Thats not very nice..
she did good!
akbrgurl145 3 months ago
you are absolutly amazing girl! xxxxxxxx
BaybeeHollie888 7 months ago
You're really good!
anothamusicluvahh 7 months ago
don't sing along with the lyrics that's the most annoying thing ever. point your toes pleaseeee. and look up and straight forward not at the ground it's making your balance all wack.
AllysonCook 7 months ago 2
Your choreo was great! However, work a little harder to make things cleaner and it should make it phenomenal! Best I've seen so far couldn't take my eyes off ya!
TheTinydancer7777 7 months ago
well. dance isnt easy and its isn't nice. if someone would have told you this then you would have been even better now.
lellyville 8 months ago
lift your legs!!!!!!!!!! ugh lol your attitude is killing me lift it it should hurt! and your fish role please straighten and spred your legs.and your jete lift your back leg and hold the pose longer.
lellyville 8 months ago 7
@lellyville i did this a long time ago, I've gotten better and if your going to give me criticism you should try not to be so rude..
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 8 months ago 13
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart that was harsh ...keep your judgment to yourself! i think you did great! dont listen to hatin ass people!
angelicmartinez007 7 months ago
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart sorry but im not trying to be mean but if you ever want to do dance professionaly, you'll have to be able to take critisism, harsh or nice! ;) x
HollyJ981 6 months ago
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart I think you were awesome, and you were really good, and Like you said in the description "but it means a lot because its something I have actually gone through." I have been though something like it, too. Its called my life, lol but im only in 6th grade, and it still goes on. BUt your amazing, u should go on America's got Talent. :) Good Luck
JayJay2818 4 months ago
@lellyville You know not everybody is a perfect dancer. And I'm sure you cant do every move perfect, where are your videos of you dancing? Why aren't you showing off your amazing skills to the world?? I thought she did a phenomenal job. A great dance and dancer if you ask me.
orkidluver97 8 months ago
@lellyville youre killing me being so rude you do it see how hard dance really is so **** off loser be nice next time and remember lets see you do it >:]
AlyssaBieberLOOVER1 7 months ago
@lellyville y do u wnat her to open her legs more??u shoudl perverted
JayJay2818 4 months ago
okay dance team. you really need to work on your technique its ..... lacking. but the dance would be really pretty if you could execute the technique more graceful
lellyville 8 months ago
It's good :) A couple of helpful criticisms: Some of the movements seem cut short and could be followed through a little more, but it looks good so far. One thing most dancers are taught is not to sing while dancing ;) I could tell you really got into it, which is fantastic to see as it is a great song (and a great dance) but singing kind of draws the attention away from the dancing... But amazing chore!! :)
Caseytehspacey93 8 months ago
I really like it :) you have some really cool chore in there, some very original stuff like in 0:45! keep choreing your own stuff cause your very good :) x
jusbeenJAZZIFIZZLED 8 months ago
AMAZING
dancing2thebeat1 8 months ago
i loved it so much
04sexybeast04 8 months ago
dude, shes amazing! idk what u guys are talking about...haha. @CleanseMyBrokenHeart , do you think u could watch my jar of hearts dance that i posted and give me tips? i made mine more ballet, since im only 13 and my contemporary sux, so yeah. haha. some pointers from you would be amazing...if u even see this comment...haha. ur a great dancer, and the hater is jealous(;
7NonoGirl7 8 months ago
How did u learn this
04sexybeast04 8 months ago
@04sexybeast04 I choreographed it xD
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 8 months ago
Can u do tus dance step by step before july plzzzz
04sexybeast04 8 months ago
Are you a cheerleader as well?
hannaheaustin 8 months ago
@hannaheaustin no lol :/
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 8 months ago
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart It almost looks like you're doing cheerleading moves. It's interesting.
hannaheaustin 8 months ago
This is amazing, I was wondering , if you could make a video of the song, cut? this version, it's the same as mine for my lyrical dance this year and I would love to put it up , but I think it would be annoying for people to wait through another chorus while I stand there, lol, is there any way you could make a video of this song so I can convert it onto my itunes? ( I will do that , just need the video ) , please and thank you <3 AMAZING btw!
frenchkitty1000 8 months ago
@frenchkitty1000 I'll try :P xD I'll have to see if i have the cut version that i used
CleanseMyBrokenHeart 8 months ago
@CleanseMyBrokenHeart okai , thanks so much!
frenchkitty1000 8 months ago
This is reaall good babe. <3
dancenowuhhuh 8 months ago
I don't think you should really be singing to the song while you're dancing, but overall I think that is was all right.
godric6 8 months ago
Wow, you look like my VBS leader. It was all this week. It ended though... hehehe... You are really good!!!
crazyanimallover247 8 months ago
no... You are good.. But does any dancer know how to dance TO the music anymore.
renaxwells 8 months ago