@sonofwalt : thanks for the comment and that last original of yours--you knocked it out of the park! When you say you knew her--do you mean you literally knew "bb" or the poem just reminded you of someone in your life? Just wondering... peace :)
really appreciated the juxtoposition of perspectives; the almost prejudging tone and then the movement to appreciation of the other person's view/ way of iving; very engaging thank you !
Great! I'm trying to describe you in my mind, David. What is it about your art? You pick on the same sorts that the great beat poets used with such aplumb. But you write about them with eyes that have seen the next millennium... no that's not quite it either, HA!
(Or is that another word that means something different on my side of the Pond? Forgive me for my ignorance, but I'm not young enough to know everything.) [Thanks to Mr O. Wilde for the use of the line.]
Well, I'm glad we agree on something, sweetie! Get it right next time,OK? I do crude: YOU do snide!
(By the way, even though you're not from my side of the Pond, you obviously know what the British word 'wank' means. Therefore you'll know there's certainly no verbal misuse on my part when I call you a wanker!)
Ah, who knows, my friend? Perhaps even if for but the moment she, in her liquid lusciousness, is patron saint to all the back-alley seedy and inebriated and even you, in tow, are having a touch of your own religious experience.
Well done, Mr. Curtis. The scenery was interesting without being distracting, and the dusk or dawn set the mood nicely. Your reading of this was very nice. I liked how your poem was a realistic snap-shot of life only the lucky have seen, but so few of us could have written it as well. Five stars, Mr. Curtis, deserving of every one.
Our compliments to David Randall Curtis, and our commiseration over the traffic issue. Although we have yet to escalate (windshields smashed by a blindman's cane turn most tail), we understand that a jacketed .45 penetrates most any engine block.
liz1060: Thanks a lot. There is one thing this has in common with that poem and that is both talk about people out in the middle of a road oblivious to traffic.
oh wow! I read it *as is* which translated into an intended metaphor for drinking too much -- *avid for hangovers* -- I guess I have Freudian slop for brains!
Love it! I ran across this as a response to Nyki's song - Broken Hearts and Dental Floss Seams. Beautiful!
77plainjane 5 months ago
Great one!
Easy
JamesWalterOrr 1 year ago
omg, I think I know her!
sonofwalt 1 year ago
@sonofwalt : thanks for the comment and that last original of yours--you knocked it out of the park! When you say you knew her--do you mean you literally knew "bb" or the poem just reminded you of someone in your life? Just wondering... peace :)
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago
You oughta come to paris. Weather's pretty decent nowadays. You could write.
StLennyBruce 2 years ago
StLennyBruce: I am sure it is nice. But I think you could inspire a thousand more poems than any city could ever hope to. :)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
I have to say, this is one of my all-time favorites. I think of all your poems, this one has the most beauty in it.
MsWriteNow 2 years ago
"a hangover is a small price to pay for such wonder"
TheILLiteratePoet 2 years ago
We have given that some thought.
Hangovers seen to be avoided simply by reusing to sober in the first place.
WetlandsRemediation 2 years ago
a perfect line :)
shapeofabox 2 years ago
youve done it again ,mr curtis!!! beautiful ,mega stars to you.
nukecat 2 years ago
when does Mone get to recite a poem?
btw..great poem. You have a style all your own, bro.
clayLavl 2 years ago
As long as it doesn't ruin your liver.
maninwhitedress 2 years ago
bravo!
krinkly 2 years ago
Your way with words and expression is masterful ^^
"I don't understand her
and don't pretend to;
I just enjoy watching
my bar-hopping firefly
light up the city;"
Absolutely loved it! =)
TheRavenOfPoe 2 years ago
This is beautiful.
mooohamhead 2 years ago
nice one david , 5*****
love is all
trevor sizzle
Sizzletube 2 years ago
Ack slash the ""s on that
IraqIsWhack 2 years ago
"You're pretty when I'm drunk" LOL good stuff 5 stars
IraqIsWhack 2 years ago
I don't know what to say about this one except i like it somehow.
80stimeagain 2 years ago
kcatthedog: Thanks for the comment... you have a good eye (or should I say ear) -- peace!
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
really appreciated the juxtoposition of perspectives; the almost prejudging tone and then the movement to appreciation of the other person's view/ way of iving; very engaging thank you !
kcatthedog 2 years ago
magnifique! :D
mnilandcom 2 years ago
Life would be so dull without the free spirits!
dashpoet 2 years ago
DashPoet: Right you are sir! You'll buy the first round I take it? :p
Thanks for the comment ;)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Excellence David! Fabulous atmosphere! Much enjoyed! Cheers!
EdMuirton 2 years ago
She's only wonderous because she defies all logic. Still.... I have to admit,... that's kinda hot.
UntamedBlueLight 2 years ago
And the hits just keep on coming!
Largo64 2 years ago
Greatness again.5*s
DRU131 2 years ago
Strolling with The Harlot of Revelation again?- Ask her about the No Hangover Deal......
ChannelChameleon 2 years ago
ChannelChameleon: Why do I have this sinking feeling that when the Harlot of Revelation comes--that will be the last time anyone gets laid. :p
Thanks for commenting!
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
I wonder if She has millions of Sisters here already.........
ChannelChameleon 2 years ago
Great! I'm trying to describe you in my mind, David. What is it about your art? You pick on the same sorts that the great beat poets used with such aplumb. But you write about them with eyes that have seen the next millennium... no that's not quite it either, HA!
Good work as usual!
Peace,
|A/
Awwa1 2 years ago
Awwa1: Thank you for the kind words...
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Excellent, as always, babe!
(Apologizes to Gen for 'wanking' out on another collab? The word 'wanking' presumably doesn't mean the same in the US as it does here in the UK!!!)
Pam x
Pamfino 2 years ago
Haha. How very snide.
@DRC: Well read, as usual (and well written, of course!)
korimito 2 years ago
Snide? WTF? Crude, yes: snide, no.
(Or is that another word that means something different on my side of the Pond? Forgive me for my ignorance, but I'm not young enough to know everything.) [Thanks to Mr O. Wilde for the use of the line.]
Pamfino 2 years ago
Ah, no, it was a misuse of the word on my behalf. Crude is much better.
korimito 2 years ago
Well, I'm glad we agree on something, sweetie! Get it right next time,OK? I do crude: YOU do snide!
(By the way, even though you're not from my side of the Pond, you obviously know what the British word 'wank' means. Therefore you'll know there's certainly no verbal misuse on my part when I call you a wanker!)
Pamfino 2 years ago
Pamfino: actually, a lewd-crude-snide-wanker pretty much sums me up! :p
Thanks for commenting!
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
korimito: Ha... I read this as "snipe" at first... if anyone ever offers to take you on a "snipe hunt" -- don't go! Thanks for commenting! :p
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
she must be hot
FreeAdviceForMen 2 years ago
FreeAdviceForMen: And she likes her men like she likes her whiskey--aged and mellow :p
(stole that from an old blues song)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Priceless in the nicess way 5*'s
PoetLina 2 years ago
Is there not a less happenstansical way to become a visionary? Loved it...
MarasVeil 2 years ago
Ah, who knows, my friend? Perhaps even if for but the moment she, in her liquid lusciousness, is patron saint to all the back-alley seedy and inebriated and even you, in tow, are having a touch of your own religious experience.
harleynanda 2 years ago
harleynanda: Well, I do know that I feel closer to God with every drink! :p
Thanks for commenting ;)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Well done, Mr. Curtis. The scenery was interesting without being distracting, and the dusk or dawn set the mood nicely. Your reading of this was very nice. I liked how your poem was a realistic snap-shot of life only the lucky have seen, but so few of us could have written it as well. Five stars, Mr. Curtis, deserving of every one.
Nyhee7 2 years ago
Nyhee7: Thanks very much... you are too kind sir... ;)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
I'm with twohawks: "loopy lost angel" is brilliant. I'll be saying that phrase over and over to myself all day. :) Fabuleux, mon grande chou!
Rouxdeaux 2 years ago
it always strikes me how much of a gift your perspective is - more giving, empathic and beautiful with each glimpse.
heatherlynblue 2 years ago
I much like "like a loopy lost angel" and the end works wonderfully.
Nice stuff, David. *****
Roy
twohawksfucking 2 years ago
I don't know what to say except I hope you didn't marry this one too...
Nice work and I'm glad you're getting some sun.
PlayboyHerbie 2 years ago
Excellent... (Said in Mr Burns voice).
ZenP 2 years ago
Superb, as always. ***** and favourite.
RowanFortuneWood 2 years ago
Nicely done young old bean *****stars;)
windham666 2 years ago
Now I'm wondering if the cars were actually slamming their brakes for you.
CousinoMacul 2 years ago
CouinoMacul: Naw, usually the bastards speed up when they see my ass! :p
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Our compliments to David Randall Curtis, and our commiseration over the traffic issue. Although we have yet to escalate (windshields smashed by a blindman's cane turn most tail), we understand that a jacketed .45 penetrates most any engine block.
WetlandsRemediation 2 years ago
:-)
rozeboosje 2 years ago
Beautiful.
blackcat355 2 years ago
"a hangover, is a small price to pay, for such wonder" its all sow romantic....
santiagodevill 2 years ago
Sweet...
Colston 2 years ago
Nicely done old bean *****stars;)
Kabuki0009 2 years ago
Kabuki0009: Don't call me "old bean" unless you love me! :p
Thannks man! ;)
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
You sure can turn a guy's head old bean ;P
Kabuki0009 2 years ago
Kabuki0009: I always suspected you were a slut & cheap & easy! bwa ha ha ha! :p
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
This reminds me of your poem "I Guess You Had to Be There" ... maybe because both of them remind me of being 20 years old ... 5*
liz1060 2 years ago
liz1060: Thanks a lot. There is one thing this has in common with that poem and that is both talk about people out in the middle of a road oblivious to traffic.
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
just oblivious to everything, as I recall ... working my diplomatic immunity before it passed the use by date ;)
liz1060 2 years ago
you still get hung over avid?..^_^...
it looks like its a splendid day out your window!!
5 ******
elviradark6 2 years ago
oops excuse my type-o..*David* =)
elviradark6 2 years ago
oh wow! I read it *as is* which translated into an intended metaphor for drinking too much -- *avid for hangovers* -- I guess I have Freudian slop for brains!
liz1060 2 years ago
a new one for my book ! =)
elviradark6 2 years ago
Excellent!!!
janeczka 2 years ago