loved your vocal lien upon the track, great lyrics as well, just you need to practice a little more and you will be a great screamer, for clean, emm not good try a different tone of voice, and if you can some one to master and edit and normalize your vocal, honestly best vocal cover i heard on youtube, great job mate! keep it up!
i like this man! awesome lyrics, i totally think they work perfectly with the song. the balance is just off the hook. congrats on that, and also, for a first time screamer i thought it sounded pretty good. plus since this was some time ago i bet you're better now. keep practicing because i can really see a bright talent growing within you :)
actually pretty good lyrics. alright screaming,but then again. this was a year ago and i bet youve gotten better. youve got talent in you. :) it sucks,i cant write lyrics over music. i either come up with em at the same time, or write lyrics before.
Hey man, sweet cover. i like your lyrics and ur vocals aint too shabby (: thought i'd ask though first, I'd really like to do my own vocal cover using you're lyrics, but i'd give you full credit and post it as a video response. need to practice my screaming and just experiment with the song. good job.
Learning to scream and sing is a hard and time consuming process and it sounds like a lot of how you're singing and screaming is coming from your chest voice. It would probably sound better if you used your diaphragm, at least when you sing. Also watch your enunciation. It's good to remember to sing the parts as if you were talking them out. Good Lyrics.
why the fuck did you have to scream? to hide the fact that you can`t sing? `Cause that`s fucking pathetic... the lyrics are good but there was no need of any screaming because that maces the song sound like horse`s fart.....
Nothing worng with COD and it has no part of being good or bad at screaming if your looking for a cod battle message me and i will kick your ass cause you deserve also i play music and cod and i will still kick your ass.
alright dood hear me out. ur screaming is whisper scream. i used 2 use that myself ( take a look @ my scream cover's on my channel u'll see) but like it really does tax ur vocal chords even though u don't feel it and I highly recommend learning like false cord or fry cuz i'd h8 to see u screw urself up b4 u even learn properly. the lyrics a great though and it fits really well. constructive criticism here ^^ not trying 2 b harsh
Because he was.. It's called whisper screaming (being gun shy) and
it's easier on the throat.. which I'm sure that's why he was doing the whole whisper scream thing since he said he didn't know how to scream right yet. No need in ruining your vocals before you even learn.. but really.. no need in posting a vocal cover over a great song either (without learning how to scream first)
Naaah I like it quiet for sure, no offense but this song doesn't have the feeling as to being a scremo type, it reminds me of As I Lay Dying - I Never Wanted, if you heard it, it kind of has the same feeling of sense if you know what i mean. I like it better without vocals cuz it has more meaning than it having vocals.
We all start out somewhere. I remember the first song I started screaming to was Miss Murder from AFI. But the majority of my growth in screams came after I started listening to Killswitch Engage more. Just work on those screams, man. And try to put more power into your clean vocals. Show some improvement and you'll shut up all those people who post bad comments. How long have you been doing screams? Just out of curiosity.
@DarkSaint91 This was my first attempt ever at screaming anything. I didn't inhale like everyone is complaining about but I did scream from the saliva in my throat and not from the gut. I tried it and couldn't grasp it and it hurt the hell out of my throat. So that's what led to the shitty screams. As for the cleans, those need more work too. As I said in the description I am not doing this at all to advertise my screams. They suck. I just wanted people to hear my take with lyrics on the song.
You know what worked for me to scream without hurting my vocals? To push all that noise out from your belly! I know that sounds weird because when I use to hear ppl say that I would be like wtf that isn't even possible. It is.. I just inhale like I'm going to make myself burp until I feel a pop but don't burp and don't exhale without screaming. Idk.. It works for me and it doesn't hurt my throat at all.
@DarkSaint91 Haha, the ironic thing is, KSE is what got me to learn screaming, they are really good for practice especially Alive or Just Breathing album ^_^
Quiet good. Did you write the lyrics yourself? They're good, seriously. Else I found some influence of All That Remain in the solo. It reminds me The Air That I Breathe(my favorite one) sometimes
Quiet good, did you write yourself the lyrics? They're good, seriously! Else I find a little influanciation from All That Remains in the solo, it reminds me The Air Thai I Breathe sometimes
First point this is not scream, this is growl and i think it doesn't fit at all the song. In my opinion a sweet and soft voice would be perfectly suitable for it and some times a scream would be ok. As the music style reminds me bullet for my valentine, this is my opinion. You are free to answer me with yours.
Nice, lyrics are pretty good... your screams are nice, though your clean vocals could use some practice :)
I might be making a vocal for this song too, sooner or later... I have an idea on how the lyrics should go. Hope you see the vid when im done with it :)
i thought the lyrics were awsome! SO EPIC *skin tingled* thumbs up if you agree! (also could imagine the lyrics too, as some kind of war on a battleground of some sort) AWSOME!
@LORDLOSS18 He was recording with garageband, so I'm assuming straight into a Mac laptop lol, it's gotta be hard to record anywhere near decent with a mac.
paused the video as soon as you started no offence i don't enjoy screaming covers they always sound bad when an amateur does it but then again when does screaming ever sound good.
Good lyrics but your Throat going to damage hard soon soz. But keep it! If you practic more and replace this video that would be wonderfull^^ Keep it up son
Dude try watching zen of screaming, this is not scream, and you will only damage your throat and vox by "screaming" whisperly ;) Though this kick-ass song rly needs a vocal :)
hey man this is an awesome first screaming vocal cover i believe that the vocals do fit the song and again as constructive criticism you should practive your vocals more because you do have potential man this is awesome for a first screaming cover.
Also i must reply to Fagheeh42's comment, screw you he tried where is your attempt this guy has potential ever hear of the phrase practice makes perfect asshole.
well i really do believe that the lyrics fit the song wonderfully but the vocals could do with a bit of work. i do sincerely mean this only as constructive criticism.
Im really surprised nobody realized it. But your whispering these screams.... everybody can scream when they do that.... but that dosnt cut it. You did ruin the song with yur fake ass screams. But this is nothing against Musicman1066. Learn how to really scream.... so far i consider this a fail.
lyrics are good the screaming can use some work but its not terrible... work on ur lows and def outward scream. But lyrics definetly fit well with the song bro (:
ur not using your diaphram man, from the gut man FROM THE GUT!!! Don't whisper screams. Ur really good but maybe you should try Zen of Screaming, it helped me alot, especially the vocal training mp3s
Brilliant lyrics, fits perfectly with the song. Change some words here and there, keep working at your screaming, and get a better quality cover. It was good, only the clean parts sounded pretty crap.
Big question... Could I do a cover with your lyrics? Your's are the best I've seen and I'd love to try. All lyrical credit will be given to you!
VaileZildejen 2 months ago
loved your vocal lien upon the track, great lyrics as well, just you need to practice a little more and you will be a great screamer, for clean, emm not good try a different tone of voice, and if you can some one to master and edit and normalize your vocal, honestly best vocal cover i heard on youtube, great job mate! keep it up!
lionrock3 5 months ago
Dudes wispering
shitshotZ 6 months ago
Darth Vader can sing!
ratienzo 6 months ago
I love your lyrics... Your attempts are very good (:
sweetywolf09 7 months ago
more emphasis plz
caseyguitarist 7 months ago
i like this man! awesome lyrics, i totally think they work perfectly with the song. the balance is just off the hook. congrats on that, and also, for a first time screamer i thought it sounded pretty good. plus since this was some time ago i bet you're better now. keep practicing because i can really see a bright talent growing within you :)
intii93 7 months ago
best Finn cover, that a hear. good job maan.
MetaalForever1 9 months ago
The lyrics are awesome! who cares if the screaming isn`t all that great...whoever wrote the lyrics has some serious talent
theyoyoyoyorobert 9 months ago
The lyrics are actually really good
ArtificialFlavaFTB2 10 months ago
actually pretty good lyrics. alright screaming,but then again. this was a year ago and i bet youve gotten better. youve got talent in you. :) it sucks,i cant write lyrics over music. i either come up with em at the same time, or write lyrics before.
kairisbrother 10 months ago
SCREAM.......work harder man,..the lyrics is good
armanazuki08 11 months ago
mannn ignoree all the bad comments man!! this is not badd at all. atleast you attempt to do vocalss, just need a better mic or something
toxictwinsmne 11 months ago
really good but the screams are really soft need more volume
hobowithagguitar 1 year ago
Excelent try man. Just try workin a little bit harder on those screams and you'll nail it. BADASS Cover anywho :D
XxWarzonexXxDeathxX 1 year ago
Hey man, sweet cover. i like your lyrics and ur vocals aint too shabby (: thought i'd ask though first, I'd really like to do my own vocal cover using you're lyrics, but i'd give you full credit and post it as a video response. need to practice my screaming and just experiment with the song. good job.
xxxsticksxxx 1 year ago
omfg....
Deslans 1 year ago
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Deslans 1 year ago
I liked it ^_^
Bac837 1 year ago
Im no screamer myself, but that is like whispering . . . if anything. . .
thedonutboy21 1 year ago
Learning to scream and sing is a hard and time consuming process and it sounds like a lot of how you're singing and screaming is coming from your chest voice. It would probably sound better if you used your diaphragm, at least when you sing. Also watch your enunciation. It's good to remember to sing the parts as if you were talking them out. Good Lyrics.
dragscrpn 1 year ago
hey i like your lyrics but ur screaming could be better and the clean part aswell
bilbotitface 1 year ago
why the fuck did you have to scream? to hide the fact that you can`t sing? `Cause that`s fucking pathetic... the lyrics are good but there was no need of any screaming because that maces the song sound like horse`s fart.....
t1paka 1 year ago
You play too much CoD.
TheTacomonkeyz 1 year ago
@TheTacomonkeyz
Nothing worng with COD and it has no part of being good or bad at screaming if your looking for a cod battle message me and i will kick your ass cause you deserve also i play music and cod and i will still kick your ass.
darkside616 1 year ago
You got talent man C: just need to improve it some but i like it XD
Chris12Redfield 1 year ago
alright dood hear me out. ur screaming is whisper scream. i used 2 use that myself ( take a look @ my scream cover's on my channel u'll see) but like it really does tax ur vocal chords even though u don't feel it and I highly recommend learning like false cord or fry cuz i'd h8 to see u screw urself up b4 u even learn properly. the lyrics a great though and it fits really well. constructive criticism here ^^ not trying 2 b harsh
VideoPoserz 1 year ago
man where do u live iv been screaming for over 3 years now and dig ur beats we should jam or even do a web cam jam
cmentalppl 1 year ago
i think it's silent scream
2headbanger2 1 year ago
i like it
ThePoop1230 1 year ago
are you inhaling?
itagwildstyle 1 year ago
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@itagwildstyle i think it's silent scream
2headbanger2 1 year ago
i didnt like your growl tecnique
sounds like wispers...
but the vocals fits in just fine
DarkLord1610 1 year ago
I actually like the whispering sound
Thatmetaldude590 1 year ago
you´re intro scream schould come earlier and longer ...
Mettwustbroetchen 1 year ago
Sounds like hes whispering into the mic.
jillraydave 1 year ago
@jillraydave
Because he was.. It's called whisper screaming (being gun shy) and
it's easier on the throat.. which I'm sure that's why he was doing the whole whisper scream thing since he said he didn't know how to scream right yet. No need in ruining your vocals before you even learn.. but really.. no need in posting a vocal cover over a great song either (without learning how to scream first)
PassionOfTheDevil666 1 year ago
@PassionOfTheDevil666 Gattcha. I just think the vocals would be 10X better if it didn't sounds like a whisper.
jillraydave 1 year ago
aswesome, except for anyone that does vocals to musicmans stuff always screams :/
ChasingFlies 1 year ago
Try singing on the Chorus parts, instead of growling / screaming.
Aldeel91 1 year ago
@Aldeel91 check my version of his cover out! :)
KlRKhammet 1 year ago
LOLOLOL nice whispering attemps at screaming.
bfmv2004 1 year ago
Nice man sounds cool, just keep working at it and you'll get better with practice. Nice effort though, keep rocking it out!
guitarfan200 1 year ago
hmm i dislike ur growls
but ur singing is even worse
Shishawunder 1 year ago
nicenice
XWarLegionX 1 year ago
sorry dude but I prefer the instrumental. Your voice is pretty evil for your age but thats just not my taste.
GUITARJUNKIE8 1 year ago
Naaah I like it quiet for sure, no offense but this song doesn't have the feeling as to being a scremo type, it reminds me of As I Lay Dying - I Never Wanted, if you heard it, it kind of has the same feeling of sense if you know what i mean. I like it better without vocals cuz it has more meaning than it having vocals.
MisticWays 1 year ago
We all start out somewhere. I remember the first song I started screaming to was Miss Murder from AFI. But the majority of my growth in screams came after I started listening to Killswitch Engage more. Just work on those screams, man. And try to put more power into your clean vocals. Show some improvement and you'll shut up all those people who post bad comments. How long have you been doing screams? Just out of curiosity.
DarkSaint91 1 year ago 8
@DarkSaint91 This was my first attempt ever at screaming anything. I didn't inhale like everyone is complaining about but I did scream from the saliva in my throat and not from the gut. I tried it and couldn't grasp it and it hurt the hell out of my throat. So that's what led to the shitty screams. As for the cleans, those need more work too. As I said in the description I am not doing this at all to advertise my screams. They suck. I just wanted people to hear my take with lyrics on the song.
roebackm 1 year ago 4
@roeback
You know what worked for me to scream without hurting my vocals? To push all that noise out from your belly! I know that sounds weird because when I use to hear ppl say that I would be like wtf that isn't even possible. It is.. I just inhale like I'm going to make myself burp until I feel a pop but don't burp and don't exhale without screaming. Idk.. It works for me and it doesn't hurt my throat at all.
PassionOfTheDevil666 1 year ago
@DarkSaint91 Haha, the ironic thing is, KSE is what got me to learn screaming, they are really good for practice especially Alive or Just Breathing album ^_^
iSAUSAGE 1 year ago
no inhales dude, takes the energy from the song
viola0shredder 1 year ago
yr melody, i think the best of the cover vocal this song; however, the screaming is not that good. \m/
minhmeoquay 1 year ago
*Inhale inhale inhale* Hmm.... No... *Barf*
m1k3z0r2 1 year ago
Lyrics are similar to (Down from the sky and Scream Aim Fire) nothing original in the lyrics....
MyReturningNightmare 1 year ago
Quiet good. Did you write the lyrics yourself? They're good, seriously. Else I found some influence of All That Remain in the solo. It reminds me The Air That I Breathe(my favorite one) sometimes
Archeum94 1 year ago
Quiet good, did you write yourself the lyrics? They're good, seriously! Else I find a little influanciation from All That Remains in the solo, it reminds me The Air Thai I Breathe sometimes
Archeum94 1 year ago
Quiet good, did you write yourself the lyrics? They're good, seriously!
Archeum94 1 year ago
SONG GREAT WITHOUT VOCAL... i mean,don't ruin this guy mm1066 song! :D
celicniopanak 1 year ago
are you inhaling?
itagwildstyle 1 year ago
FAIL
Heatlink1 1 year ago
sounds good, but redo the cover once ur better at singing
Stektsopp 1 year ago
First point this is not scream, this is growl and i think it doesn't fit at all the song. In my opinion a sweet and soft voice would be perfectly suitable for it and some times a scream would be ok. As the music style reminds me bullet for my valentine, this is my opinion. You are free to answer me with yours.
madkekasino 1 year ago
i liked this song without vocals.
pkfighter343 1 year ago 2
@pkfighter343 try listening to my vocal cover version
matel1836 1 year ago
How fucking dare you rip off this song with your pile of a shit whipsering voice you fucking suck.
dropkickbeast 1 year ago
@dropkickbeast lol. maybe you should try listening to my version? i hope you aren't as hard on me lol
matel1836 1 year ago
1 word for this video...fail
TheKKK6666 1 year ago 4
@TheKKK6666 Make a better one yourself then, retard.
omonoiatis8 1 year ago
is this me or the vocals are whispers, its nice but as many said vocals are just teribble , good luck mate)
lmaiesfo 1 year ago
The lyrics are good, but the vocals are fucking terrible. It sounds like you're using saliva instead of doing an actual vocal fry. Practice more
franticdisembowlment 1 year ago
Nice, lyrics are pretty good... your screams are nice, though your clean vocals could use some practice :)
I might be making a vocal for this song too, sooner or later... I have an idea on how the lyrics should go. Hope you see the vid when im done with it :)
MetaloidMind 1 year ago
As many others said, the lyrics are pretty damn sic. The vocals aren't too bad. Sometimes it sounds like you lose your rythym.
But hey, it goes well with the song imo. I like the flow you have for it.
PS: Call me crazy, but does anyone else think this song and these lyrics would go PERFECTLY with the movie 300?!
override83 1 year ago
@override83 eh... maybe before every metal song in existance ended up going ''PERFECTLY" with the movie 300
bondman2004tippy 1 year ago
Lyrics are amazing, new vocalist prefered, no offense =).
tormentedchewy304 1 year ago
<3 u Musicman1066 =D Xx
sweetdory16 1 year ago
i wunna see matel1836 do this cover withthee lyrics o:
lackasa 1 year ago
Gargle with brown liquor xD makes your voice deeper (no homo)
iamlienheart 1 year ago
you should re do this sometime in the future (: work on your vocals!
StevenStormTrooper 1 year ago
inhales?
StefanTheSerb 1 year ago
@StefanTheSerb no..there is no "s" in inhales
amtheriver 1 year ago
i thought the lyrics were awsome! SO EPIC *skin tingled* thumbs up if you agree! (also could imagine the lyrics too, as some kind of war on a battleground of some sort) AWSOME!
PeanutTheShark 1 year ago 3
Props for the kid who wrote these lyrics. :) Not bad at all.
xWastedTalentxx 1 year ago
Hmmm.. I kinda imagined this to be like a killswitch engage song. xP
VapourXY 1 year ago
i hope those arent inhales :/
1metalhead238 1 year ago
vocals are good and it all runs well just a lil work on the actualy vocals and your set bro :)
howdithappen 1 year ago
Hmmm...I thought it was a tad bit gay...jk man nice cover jarred...try a bit less suck next time tho. And keep my damn scene shop clean next year ; )
MikeytheMadMan 1 year ago
personally. this the best vocal cover for this song.
cerealkiller097 1 year ago
great theme going on it has a flow to it. i know the recording was a bit rough but still... the context is awesome
clos039 1 year ago
You're kind of quiet.
StormyWofford 1 year ago
Sounds good but lyrics could be more original
FallingFromTheLight 1 year ago
dude lyrics are good but get someone else to do the vocals atleast exhale ...
dropkickbeast 1 year ago
Redo this with some better equipment and work on the screams a lil, sounds pretty badass though... could be an amazing fuckin song
xxlilpolkiexx 1 year ago
Sounds like your struggling with the screams a bit, almost like a whisper at times. Are you inhaling?
keyser66guitarist 1 year ago
not bad man keep it up!
MetalPower86 1 year ago
err, the vocals are gappy, if u get me, like sumtimes ur quiet then reall loud. but (sicc) anyways
LORDLOSS18 1 year ago
@LORDLOSS18 He was recording with garageband, so I'm assuming straight into a Mac laptop lol, it's gotta be hard to record anywhere near decent with a mac.
GuitarTech94 1 year ago
Good job baby. I love you. <3
lindseyiscooool 1 year ago
Im loving the lyrics!
But I agree with thepolishbikeride the vocals are a little weak..
But you've got potential so dont give up man!
(THIS SONG KICKS ASS)
bobgreene5050 1 year ago
paused the video as soon as you started no offence i don't enjoy screaming covers they always sound bad when an amateur does it but then again when does screaming ever sound good.
OverlordXeros 1 year ago
@OverlordXeros it's all preference.
julianEZ890 1 year ago
@julianEZ890 Yeah sorry man i wasn't in the best mood when i posted that .
OverlordXeros 1 year ago
@OverlordXeros no worries.
julianEZ890 1 year ago
Good lyrics but your Throat going to damage hard soon soz. But keep it! If you practic more and replace this video that would be wonderfull^^ Keep it up son
fifs6 1 year ago
Holy Shit you done well with the lyrics. Nice one man!
W0LFofTHeNIGHT 1 year ago
good job
Mopphuhn 1 year ago
this is fuckin amazing !!
PyZuu 1 year ago
Dude try watching zen of screaming, this is not scream, and you will only damage your throat and vox by "screaming" whisperly ;) Though this kick-ass song rly needs a vocal :)
n0win0u 1 year ago
hey man this is an awesome first screaming vocal cover i believe that the vocals do fit the song and again as constructive criticism you should practive your vocals more because you do have potential man this is awesome for a first screaming cover.
Also i must reply to Fagheeh42's comment, screw you he tried where is your attempt this guy has potential ever hear of the phrase practice makes perfect asshole.
Good cover ROEBACKM....KEEP ROCKIN!
LifeIsPlug 1 year ago
well i really do believe that the lyrics fit the song wonderfully but the vocals could do with a bit of work. i do sincerely mean this only as constructive criticism.
thepolishbikeride 1 year ago 37
Im really surprised nobody realized it. But your whispering these screams.... everybody can scream when they do that.... but that dosnt cut it. You did ruin the song with yur fake ass screams. But this is nothing against Musicman1066. Learn how to really scream.... so far i consider this a fail.
Satroparalite 1 year ago
1:22 I loved how your screaming sound dude so fucking brutal, are there a band with a similar kind of scream? claps for your cover man keep it up
xjosexfreakmanx 1 year ago
vocal patterns and lyrics were awesome, just work on the screams some more and this song will be sweet.
weemankyle 1 year ago
the lyrics were good man. i think it had a little bit of an Arch Enemy feel to it. keep working on it. :) \m/
SATANS6DEMON6SPAWN6 1 year ago
the screaming was ok but your going to fuck your voice up like that, the lyrics themselves were really good.
The1BigBoss 1 year ago
you should learn how to scream correctly or else you're going to fuck up your vocals. Noone wants that to happen
Asulaydyingcrying 1 year ago
good, but u should really work on ur screaming
Guitarlover762 1 year ago
lyrics are good the screaming can use some work but its not terrible... work on ur lows and def outward scream. But lyrics definetly fit well with the song bro (:
metalmaniac57 1 year ago
u fucked the song up
FAGEEHA2 1 year ago
dude learn how to do an outward scream. it will sound way better
pwnage51 1 year ago
@pwnage51 i agree
doodoonutz 1 year ago
ur not using your diaphram man, from the gut man FROM THE GUT!!! Don't whisper screams. Ur really good but maybe you should try Zen of Screaming, it helped me alot, especially the vocal training mp3s
Mret1 1 year ago
pretty sick man i like the lyrics
Snowkid182 1 year ago
Dude totally wicked bro i dont know any other then aewsome man
01marth 1 year ago
Brilliant lyrics, fits perfectly with the song. Change some words here and there, keep working at your screaming, and get a better quality cover. It was good, only the clean parts sounded pretty crap.
Hellfire7896321 1 year ago
Awesome
Joneperkele 1 year ago
Sounds cool man!
musicman1066 1 year ago 54