Deaf Whispers Chapter 1(english)

[MrOverlord69]

World of warcraft theme music.. very nice touch.. very fitting.

[lussifer99]

this is amazing XD ur so much better then me ^^

[ExplosiveNature]

Dude this is amazing, really good, disappointing you didn't carry on. Please, get back in to it, your really awesome.

[xXnikmanXx]

cool

[paraisoanime]

its great the best!! how old are you

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

when i made this cchapter i was 17

[japansarcanist]

yea a got a 21x21 wacom tab so i could collage and work take alot of my tme but ill see wut i can do

[japansmataro]

luv it.... i could make an anime episode of it if u want...u rock man

[iscay666]

i wish this was an anime that would be awsome cool work i don't read mangas but this one really kept me reading awsome

[lala34567891234567]

one simple word:nice!

[haruno44]

Wow! it's realli good luv the music and vid and plus i'm jelous tht u can draw better than me...

[PlatinumFyah]

...I was making my own, but compared to this...Mine sucks, lol..Great, I got all discouraged =\

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

hey man, do not get discouraged... it only limits your abilities...i too got discoureg when i saw a friend of mine that kicks my ass making manga.... but you just cant let it get you down. Now my friend is also my "rival" xD.

i hope to see ur work...and if you want i cant give u some tips.

peace

[tigertagning]

cool!

you're a kinda good painter! X3

[DeMitrix9435]

Not to be rude or anything but: " How can he creat fire out of nothing "

Me saying: " How do u create a big magic sheild out of nothing "^^ :P

Love the story, plz when does chapter 3 come out?

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

hahaah Lionel meant without even casting a spell or code....the big ass shield was casted 1st^^

, the 2nd chapter is on youtube ass well

[DeMitrix9435]

I know that 2nd chapter is out

[DeMitrix9435]

To be right its warcraft music, not only World of warcraft music, and i think its good.

[jamesday94]

lol wow music

[SmileForMe360]

Hey, I like this, keep up the work. Don't listen to dorks, they are mostlikly 7-16 year olds who don't know how to be nice.

[Apollo5600]

This is great, don't let the baboons here discourage you. The ones who speak badly are children who expect you to have something on par with professional manga. Keep working at it and you will succeed. I recall I found some manga websites that assisted people with their manga or had information that I fould fascinating. Unfortunately, my abilities in drawing are meager at best so I did not persue it. I stick to my attempts at writing.

[StickmanEMK]

WOW Respect! in my opinion, this is great!

[anbu0102]

not bad but sorry to say it but the drawings are not good enough

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

yeah, i think your right, but im working hard to better my drawings, erd chapter will hace much better drawings, ive progressed alot in the last months, i hope u like them ^^,

thanks for ur criticism :)

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

i meant 3rd chapter

[RockMySoxCuzImKool]

nonono... ur really good! O.O

[homeafghani]

haha man this a great tric xD

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

i really dont think its a good trick, the tittle sais ¨Not naruto manga´´ its the same as saying ¨this is not naruto manga¨ so... unless people cant read... its not a trick ... well... it kinda is xD because human nature makes people wonder wht this is :P

[teched246]

why would you have to put not naruto 399 if its not episode 399?

[jaimeduendeozzzkr]

because people would get confused

[pprv]

man...this is very great, i will put my manga to on youtube, maybe...i dont know yet, because, i dont have one...XD, ..

congrats...

[marciovannelli]

Is this your first work?

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

yep ^^

[justoncho]

the drawings are good but the story seems a bit sheety, i bet the good father iskilled by his friend, and his son will train ti avenge him, or something like that. Even though good job

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

xD, nice try but no... :P

Im no great writter but im not that obvious either. if u wanna check out the storyline wait for the next chapters. thanks for your criticism

[unhappy55555]

oh, man, that's very nice work, if you realy dit it by your self :) waiting for other episodes

[biustas]

start anime :D

[KeNSHiN1981]

yah its cheating

[chiteface]

The concept and story is good. Dialouge is decent, art work is phenomenal. A little cliched, but if you were to slow down and let the story tell itself and let the characters develop instead of trying to cram all the explaining into a short span you could have a sweet manga. Good start. I'll be watching.

[chiteface]

The concept and story is good. Dialouge is decent, art work is phenomenal. A little cliched, but if you were to slow down and let the story tell itself and let the characters develop instead of trying to cram all the explaining into a short span you could have a sweet manga.

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

thank you for your suggestions ^^ , im not a great writter so ur probably right, ill do my best :)

[sextract]

me das asko

[anlox]

you are fuck,.

[nilston]

nice fella, enjoyed the european fantasy lore style, love my japanese stuff but nice to see something closer to home.

[DeMitrix9435]

really nice done, cant wait for next chapter.

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[zezio8]

lol why does it say NOT NARUTO MANGA 399!!

im just curios good job btw.

[yupi22]

^^ I liked it, it is really good; but "not" <-- ¬¬ isn't

[TonyHawk357]

PENDEHO!!!! de PUTA!!!! ka

[POWRE2]

kool, did u make this?

[jaeric13]

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[ShinigamiKyra]

Sorry but I really think you comment your own manga... This really sucks... Sorry for being so direct, but you must draw the lands better, not just people... People better too( if you are capable that I think no)...

And please, change your title... or delete this video from youtube, cos this is not a manga, this is a hard shit!!!

[Tinopa2]

This cool but the way you make people watch it is kind of cheating "not naruto manga 399"

(I'm going to this too for my serie)

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

xD well I am sorry people cant understand what "NOT" means xP its funny :P

[PhilyEc]

Its obvious you put that in to get more views, since it would show up in the search box =S

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

well... just because it shows when you search something else doesnt mean u have to watch it.

My intent is not to get more views, its to make my video appear

[boboko34]

sylvanas, its remaind me to the night elf hero at warcraft 3

[Spenxaz]

that what i thought too...

[luimeli]

kemate no sirvees para nada ^^

[UCHIHAmustafa]

whats a shit

[KarJD333]

this is cool...Good Job!!

[kiyosuke]

wow this seems very interesting..i likie lol...keep going its pretty good n_n

[ElementSk8rXX789]

I like it. Its exciting. I'm favoriting it. and read the other one!

[timmey55]

lol at 3:16 it says Anole...lol

but good job dude this is fantastic!

[GaaraLuver96]

O.O amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaziiiiiiiiiiing­........make more of these i luv em.hope they get published 1 day!!!!^_^u should make tutorials

[lulucanela]

this is really good, like GREAT!!

[o0eviltwin0o]

Hey! About the inking~ You could try getting Manga Studio! That would seriously make it look like you could sell and publish these. It's owned by TokyoPop too ^.^ !!! It's pretty cheap on e-bay and amazon as well~ Ur pro-ness can elevate!!

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

all my drawings/inkings are handmade...I dont want to use a pc to improve my work ^^

thank you for your suggestions tho  ;D

[dilirent]

u did this manga(i mean creat this!, i seriuosly think this is the next great manga it will be better than naruto, and show more originality like naruto does*i hope u dont mind me comparing ur work to naruto* but this is a master piece)

[dilirent]

where is chapter 3. i am waiting for it

[xxc3lld4m4gexx]

dude.you could totally be a pro, have you ever thought about going to the tokyo-pop tryout conventions?...it could be your chance to make it big

Wes

[Silentj04]

This is a very good manga, great points on originality of story, very little similarities to Naruto but I dont think his biting off from it, drawings are decent but the story and progression really get you hooked on it. Keep it up man and post new chapters whenever you make new ones, its a HIT buena suerte

[boomerang1103]

wow u are so amazing at drawing mangas!! keep them cumin im totally hooked!!!!

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

you seriously dont know how happy u guys make me with those comments ^_^

[242220]

I've seen this guy drawing this things and he is amazing... he is really talented... I already saw the second one !! and I have no words to describe it... I can't wait for the third one !!!

[Shashimir]

ke tiempo le dedicaste mas o menos a este capítulo?

[Sunny101190]

i love yout mangas!!!

[adream2late]

this is ok and all... but its supposed to be from right to left

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

am not japanese, and in my country comics are from left to right sry =/

[Katara3]

this rocks man I wish I could draw manga, I can draw everything but manga but I write the stories for all my friends manga's.

[jackgoesmeow]

dude i liked it but for some reason alot of the names sound as if they were from warcraft...sylvanas is a hero in warcraft....

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

i know, i'm going to change her name in 2nd chapter

;)

[sesshomaru322]

Great comic you made. How old are you by the way? I just want to see how old a person has to be to have drawings skills of this level.

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

ill be 18 in about a month xD!

[babalookazoomicwho]

The eyes are lopsided in alot of the pictures it looks really odd.

[berserk182]

wow this is sick i luv it

[kagebunshin321]

very good...when is the next one gonna come up?

and u gonna ever take it to a publisher?

[wusip]

you mother

[Loca4Anime]

oohh... it looks really interesting..it's not perfect in some areas..but it's really good! and it's homemade ...oh.. and to me it does seem like a mix of arthur..and kinda naruto..but is it only me or does alexandro's dad look like vegeta from dbz?

[huey2k7]

just wonderin because ure comicS are preetty great y do u say its naruto, people will jus look for deaf whipers lol and how often will u produce dis manga and on what day please :)

[dunique]

well done! i like it, its got a good flow to it, keep it up.

[konami000]

this is very nice im gona put mine on soon how u like it chek my profile every once and a wile to c if i put it on yet thanxs

[tangdaballa]

this is like a bootleg of naruto and king authur mixed.

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

well umm... if u think about it...every story is like something else.

but how can u tell that if you oly saw the 1st chapter xD

[kagebunshin321]

i could in to this...

[Gaara1475]

nice!

[Accune]

Congratulations on your own comic.

[PatrickMusgrave]

i liked it was pretty funky, must take u ages though, lol and btw lady sylavans is a wel known warcraft charecter

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

omg ur right! im going to have to change her name.

thnx for the headsup  ^_^

[demetric17]

I uploaded naruto chapter 358

[lazyass225]

Wow that was really good, I like it. Make sure you think up a really good plot tho, cause drawings aren't everything. I think you have something big. GOOD LUCK!

[Revenantazra]

Wow, this is really good. You only had one miss spelled one word, sais=says maybe said would sound better though--and one grammer mistake. "To be Continu(ed) not to be continue. NICE though!

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

oh...and im not from spain, am from Chile  ^-^

[Uzumakii82]

ok to be frank, I wasn't liking it at first. But after seeing some action it was better. Have more action and killing. Yeah needs more deaths ALot of deaths. (Trust me!) I believe in you!

[yellowflashTHa2nD]

this is a wierd manga is it home manga or is made from a big company

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

it is a home made manga xD, u can even see some of the pencil traces

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[qwerty60000]

did u mnake this urself? its insane

[jbillycrack]

this shit is bangin but dont try to make it alot like every other manga out there and i better see a dominican in it in the future

[KittyDigest]

Hey, that was really coolXD i liked it alot

4/5 lacking in screentones but hey, you can't have it perfect>__<

[AlexanderDaItalian]

you're spanish aren't you? I understand it by the laugh "jeje" just spanish ppl use to say that.. lol

[HybridAres]

i like your drawing styl, some proportions ad angels could be improved but all up i like it, ^_^

[jay3248]

so when is the next chapter cuming out?

[charlessy]

Wen he said Anole i thought it was A mole lol

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

you guys can see alot of the plot on my trailer...it is right there on video responses ^_^

[babalookazoomicwho]

Ah it was ok. nothing speacial though.

[killerme09]

oops i posted something twice cause it did'nt get posted so i got confused :/ and i know i got another friend who does that.

[BOWSHIKABOWBOW]

Okay this was very good, 4 out of 5. Now, here comes some critizisim, work on our dialoge and darwings where you draw there full bodies, also work on enviorments. other than that it was great. i too am an artist.

[killerme09]

dude, salsa whats ur problem gosh if you don't like it don't cause trouble and comment oh and by the way bloodbrush did u do all the drawings by urself i'm impressed^^

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

yea... >.< it took me a while.

oh and i apologize about the naruto name, its kinda hard to get ppl to watch somethign new. anyhow...it sais "NOT naruto manga".. so...if u watch it hoping to see naruto...u have to be a lilttle dumb Xd!

[killerme09]

dude salsa whats ur problem gosh if u don't like it don't comment or rate it all ok!

[hellgorama]

i hate the fact that u put " not naruto manga 358" to get attention. But still this isn't the load of shit that certain others put to annoy us. i have to say 4/5 (4 cuz u included the name of another manga to get ppl to look at your own one, which i think is illegal if u start makin money out of it), still i hope to see your manga get published or even made into anime, coz it's startin to look interesting.

[salsa02]

i hate it because it sucks you hore

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

IT SOUNDS LIKE BITCHY PERSON TRYING TO GET ATTENTION?

lol, whtever dude, if u hate it thats fine with me ^_^

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

if u dont..its just bitching xD

[salsa02]

i give it a -1 out 5 it suck damn hore this crap sucks

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

LOL, I enjoy criticism, but only if u have arguments to say it.

if u hate it, pls explain ur reasons.

peace!

[bleachandnarutofan]

very nice, hope to see this on tv one day

[salsa02]

sucks ass

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

is that good? xD!

[ZzpinkchicksZz]

'sucks ass'= means that's its really really bad, oh and saisa02, keep you're rude opinions to your self! i thought it was pretty good!

[CARLFETIERE]

dude this is excellent salsai02 shutup if u dont like it keepe ur bad comments to urself! did u put naruto manga 358 cuz u kne people wouldnt watch a new manga?

[robertapardo88]

woww i love your manga, estare esperando tu segundo capitulo con mucha emocion, ponle mas humor, te quedo de miedo excelentes dibujos

[naruto2017]

bravo even i cant do that lol well i like the drawings i dnt care if nxt will be 1 month but ill wait patiently

[hellgorama]

me neither, i kno one other guy that can do manga, but he says he aint gunna focus much on it. Well i hav to say the story is interesting, couple of the chracters seem to look like they're from Dragon Ball Z, and the lady sylvanas thing is from warcraft 3 (im just guessing not criticising).

[VashTheStampede777]

surprisingly interesting

[charlessy]

this is incredible nice drawings nice story and VERY VERY unique 5/5 wud be really gud if u make more

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

thanks for the support guys. am already working on the 2nd chapter. it will take me like 1 month i think cuz am doing it all by myself.

[pahotoisafckenlier]

its no problem since its very long so its like 2 chapters

[xXxBloodBrushxXx]

Excuse my english, it is not my first lenguage so i might have made some mistakes -_-.

plesase rate and comment.

[itachinightmare]

could stuff bearly any mistakes if people say summin i got ur back ur english is better than most people thier were just a few spelllin erros but u could understand what you were saying so it all good