You can't breathe between white and sails, it's white sails! And you must control that left hand waggling. The piano is shit and doesn't help, but you've a lovely voice. I want to hear more. Please do another version with a legato from the C's to the F's at the end of each verse.
Voice foward more -(did you warm up properly?). Sometimesvowels not extended.
Word painting . . "Wheel's kick" needs accent. More cresc. on the 2nd line of verses. Vary tempo. Use "fl" in flung and the "sp" in spray, to give impression of waves. "Laughing Fellow Rover" sing with chuckling rhythm. much quieter on "Quiet Sleep . . .".
Tempo generally too slow!
Good contrast between vib. and straight voice - more of that on some lines, e.g: "quiet sleep".
It's pretty good. You have a good sound. You had a pretty good "British" feel. I would have loved to hear more dynamic differences. The dynamics are my favorite part of this song and it was pretty much the same dynamic throughout. I also wanted to hear a sea captain in you. I didn't feel anything close to that in you.
You can't breathe between white and sails, it's white sails! And you must control that left hand waggling. The piano is shit and doesn't help, but you've a lovely voice. I want to hear more. Please do another version with a legato from the C's to the F's at the end of each verse.
Englishtenor2 7 months ago
Beautiful tone and clarity. Effortless.
martinjp1958 1 year ago
Voice foward more -(did you warm up properly?). Sometimesvowels not extended.
Word painting . . "Wheel's kick" needs accent. More cresc. on the 2nd line of verses. Vary tempo. Use "fl" in flung and the "sp" in spray, to give impression of waves. "Laughing Fellow Rover" sing with chuckling rhythm. much quieter on "Quiet Sleep . . .".
Tempo generally too slow!
Good contrast between vib. and straight voice - more of that on some lines, e.g: "quiet sleep".
hamstavideos 2 years ago
exelent singing!!!! but the piano sound like its full of socks!!
frozenpheonix666 2 years ago
Also forgot to mention it needs a sense of excitement. You MUST go down to the sea again, etc.
Darkstalion 3 years ago
It's a little slow, and you need to sort your breathing (a better speed will help), but shows promise. Watch your A vowels, they're too open.
Darkstalion 3 years ago
It's pretty good. You have a good sound. You had a pretty good "British" feel. I would have loved to hear more dynamic differences. The dynamics are my favorite part of this song and it was pretty much the same dynamic throughout. I also wanted to hear a sea captain in you. I didn't feel anything close to that in you.
Dynshai 3 years ago 2
cool, exactly the same as what i thought lol
ALSO, u should put more emotions in it
kingofbuuwa 3 years ago
My brother wanted me to turn this 'crap' off
but you already know that
im ashamed for not commenting this
i think its amazing
sing at my birthday
I love you
xx
eatyourfudge 3 years ago