I really love this film & the music is also nice )) just done this story by school & it really useful :) BTW, r those cast in video r entertainers ? since their act pretty natural :))
This video was awesome, I hope you don't mind, but I showed it to my Modern Lit. classes today and they all loved it! We just read the short story the other day. You did an awesome job!
AMAZING! We were reading this story a few days ago in Critical Thinking. I was very much surprised when my guess of the story being about an abortion was correct.
@gpaez01 seriously i have not flagged anything, i made several videos, some of them have much more critical postings than yours. much more. thanks by the way for your honest posting. i appreciate it. Again, I don't flag any of my comments. why should I flag yours then. no need to think it was me who flags comments. Because I'm not. Peace.
Very nice adaptation. I am an English professor who uses this Hemingway story as an example of subtext in dialogue, and I think you've found a creative way of telling the story and balancing the anachronisms of the period with a modern sensibility. The female actor is particularly good in conveying her subtext. Good job!
this is good stuff!- I like your choices.. I think it needed a little more empty space though with less dialogue perhaps? It just seems like there was more time in the script maybe more empty awkward silences
Im Gegensatz zu typisch deutschen Filmemachern, die dieses oder ähnliche Themen wahrscheinlich mittels laienhaften „Naturalismus der dann das „Problem unübersehbar darstellen müsste und dieses wie immer mit dem typisch deutschen Problem-Sendungsbewusstsein, der hier seit den 80ern eingesetzt wird, "umsetzen" würden!!
Auch die Schauspieler sind hervorragend, die man für solche kleinen Projekte mit ihrer Professionalität auch nur in Hollywood findet..
Die bewusste Kameraführung mit den Nahaufnahmen, die den Zuschauer für die Stimmung sensibilisiert und sie im Dialog und in der Stimmung mitnimmt, ist hervorragend um sie im Sinne von Hamingway „zwischen den Zeilen" lesen zu lassen! .........
Diese Kurzgeschichte von Hemingway ist nicht gerade einfache „Kost und zeigt wie man diesen Stoff mit ästhetischem und professionellem Anspruch, trotzdem sensibel und bravourös umsetzen kann
ohne dabei den Stil von Hamingway auch - Das bewusste weg lassen- zu ignorieren, sondern einsetzen kann.
Selbst die trockene Hitze an diesem Tag, die Hemingway auch in dieser Kurzgeschichte beschreibt, ist zu fühlen!
Der hergestellte Spannungsbogen ist bemerkenswert und hervorragend hergestellt!
Beautiful
peachykeenlimabeen 3 weeks ago
woow it's amazing :)
marcianoiil 2 months ago
THIS MOVIE IS TERRIBLEE!!!!!!!
sperpokefan 2 months ago
Very Nice Job on this
andiesoxfan 2 months ago
I really enjoyed the video it captured the emotions better then i imagined. thank you bc of this video my paper will be that much better.
MrMicflo1 2 months ago
I really love this film & the music is also nice )) just done this story by school & it really useful :) BTW, r those cast in video r entertainers ? since their act pretty natural :))
crystal200919 2 months ago
Good job. Who is this beautiful woman?
SirCecilSeltzer 2 months ago
She is so upset at 2:42 she looks at him like.. I am going to slap the ish out of you.. Just let the air in.. REALLYYYY? ..LOL
dyonnegalata 3 months ago
This video was awesome, I hope you don't mind, but I showed it to my Modern Lit. classes today and they all loved it! We just read the short story the other day. You did an awesome job!
malzy07 4 months ago
AMAZING! We were reading this story a few days ago in Critical Thinking. I was very much surprised when my guess of the story being about an abortion was correct.
Dank951 4 months ago
Very pretty woman.. great acting
dyonnegalata 4 months ago
Nice job on this! I was entertaining thoughts of directing this piece. No need to now:)
kalzone2112 6 months ago
@kalzone2112 haha! thank you very much! :)
johnson280 5 months ago
fantastic! i love the switching.
oalchrs 10 months ago
This is well directed and also this story is of great depth
narendeepan 10 months ago
This is fantastic! Great job!
julia2563 11 months ago
I´ve just red the story and this is a nice way to present it, thanks for post it.
norecamemen 11 months ago
this is bootleg, but the better of what ive seen so far
TwiNerd27 11 months ago
i love your take on it... bril!!!
lalala1234bleh 1 year ago
this video really goes towards abortion aspect of the story.
BenjaminBV1 1 year ago
lovely. the short story and the video :)
troubliesome 1 year ago
@troubliesome thank you very much!! :)
johnson280 1 year ago
This has been the most creative and the best interpretation around here by far. Would it be okay if I use it in class?
victoriaralf 1 year ago
@victoriaralf yes sure. Thank you for asking and many thanks for your nice comment :))
johnson280 1 year ago
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gpaez01 1 year ago
@gpaez01 seriously i have not flagged anything, i made several videos, some of them have much more critical postings than yours. much more. thanks by the way for your honest posting. i appreciate it. Again, I don't flag any of my comments. why should I flag yours then. no need to think it was me who flags comments. Because I'm not. Peace.
johnson280 1 year ago
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gpaez01 1 year ago
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gpaez01 1 year ago
You did an awesome job!
ladonnadhamlin 1 year ago
Very nice adaptation. I am an English professor who uses this Hemingway story as an example of subtext in dialogue, and I think you've found a creative way of telling the story and balancing the anachronisms of the period with a modern sensibility. The female actor is particularly good in conveying her subtext. Good job!
superbru 1 year ago
this is good stuff!- I like your choices.. I think it needed a little more empty space though with less dialogue perhaps? It just seems like there was more time in the script maybe more empty awkward silences
deathimmortal 2 years ago
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wilsonloughjc 2 years ago
Im Gegensatz zu typisch deutschen Filmemachern, die dieses oder ähnliche Themen wahrscheinlich mittels laienhaften „Naturalismus der dann das „Problem unübersehbar darstellen müsste und dieses wie immer mit dem typisch deutschen Problem-Sendungsbewusstsein, der hier seit den 80ern eingesetzt wird, "umsetzen" würden!!
Astrid513 2 years ago
Auch die Schauspieler sind hervorragend, die man für solche kleinen Projekte mit ihrer Professionalität auch nur in Hollywood findet..
Die bewusste Kameraführung mit den Nahaufnahmen, die den Zuschauer für die Stimmung sensibilisiert und sie im Dialog und in der Stimmung mitnimmt, ist hervorragend um sie im Sinne von Hamingway „zwischen den Zeilen" lesen zu lassen! .........
Astrid513 2 years ago
Diese Kurzgeschichte von Hemingway ist nicht gerade einfache „Kost und zeigt wie man diesen Stoff mit ästhetischem und professionellem Anspruch, trotzdem sensibel und bravourös umsetzen kann
ohne dabei den Stil von Hamingway auch - Das bewusste weg lassen- zu ignorieren, sondern einsetzen kann.
Selbst die trockene Hitze an diesem Tag, die Hemingway auch in dieser Kurzgeschichte beschreibt, ist zu fühlen!
Der hergestellte Spannungsbogen ist bemerkenswert und hervorragend hergestellt!
Astrid513 2 years ago 2