Naruto Next Generation Chapter 1 Fanfiction Manga

[TheImadorkduh]

Wait what does jiriaya mean by i knew ur father NARUTO NOT DEAD!! or am i reading it wrong

[SonYoukon]

Jiriaya is dead.

[SonYoukon]

Jiriaya

[XxRavenBlazexX]

art and storyline is good but can you make the words more clearly thank you ps can't what for part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XP

[honorwolf007]

awsome me like

[nerfed145]

its kinda hard to tell the charachters apart

[hextough]

ITS KINDA HARD 2 READ THE WORDS

[Egamnam]

Lol, I have my own Next Gen. It seems like the only thing we have in common is that Hinata is married to Naruto who is Hokage.

[xDrAGonMAssTeR502x]

I like it!

[SmiffyPresentation]

what do you use to draw this???

[Recklesssennin]

when is part 2 ganna come out?

[smi2o2o]

Nice! OMG Konohaman? That made me laugh so load my mom had to shake me to help me breathe..... XD

[leron1994]

wow this is good

[Nisinator1]

I'm guessing you're not up to date with the manga. There were a couple of things that contradicted it quite a lot that I won't say just in case.

But apart from that I really enjoyed reading it! It was a great adaption and likeness of what Kishimoto himself would have written and for that I thank you for giving me that read! =P

I'm actually in the process of writing my own fan fic but I'm really bad at drawing. Any tips for a fellow Naruto fan =P?

Great job!

[RandomizedMonkeys]

@Nisinator1

I'm in the same boat as you. Well I guess I can draw but not well enough for youtube (Unless I want heaps of comments that say "YOU SUCK AT DRAWING")

anyway, I use rpcs. I have my own NNG storyline too.

[UchihaItachi1919]

lol,also with the fanfic manga im tryin to make i realized that is really hard to put together families.

[kaylazy136]

wat happed to sasusakus kid?

[larry1672]

Sorry to say Sauske does not have a child, but where there is bad news there is good news, and in this case Sauske will be making an appearance, but not until later in the story line.

[yippie4me444]

make more i cant wait till the other one comes out please hurry the wait is killing me ive been waiting a very long time and we all know waiting sucks sometimes but this a abolute torture a cliffy those things suck so dont make ur fans wait

[larry1672]

Sorry I don't have a computer any more, it'll still be quite awhile until the next part comes out, indeed waiting does suck horribly...but I will try to get it up some time. Please don't torture yourself over it. Thank you for your intrest.

[RandomizedMonkeys]

Come on Dude it's been a year or more and there is one of these. you know heaps of people want to see more! If you say you'll make another one and keep going then i'll subscribe!

[dracopoet]

this is realy good i cant wate till u get nore out

[cynorab]

is cute story. I love. Its really sad jyraya is dead in official manga.

[larry1672]

Yeah I'm aware of Jariya's sad death, but there is a reason he is alive in my fanfiction version that does not clash with the real one.

[MicroSkate19]

make more!

[larry1672]

Eventually my patient friend, I just have really bad computer troubles that are preventing further progression.

[MicroSkate19]

lol i just realized that naruto and hinata r her parents

[larry1672]

Ha ha, yeah I was thinking of having Sakura being her mother before I started but Hinata was the better choise overall since now the main character will have a Kekkei Genkai.

[sasusaku1982]

very good i cant wait for more but it was kind hurt to read but i figured it out ^^ plz make more

[larry1672]

Yeah the future installments will be neater and more clear to read. Sorry for the trouble.

[armycruz]

make more please!!!

[SassySakura1997]

LOL FUNNY!!

[SherbertKitten]

I WANT PART 2!!!

[fullmetal927]

man this is GREAT ...........you better make more chapters

[larry1672]

I will have more posted eventually, also a side story consisting of my original characters. (Meaning not the children of premade.)

[taraflan99]

@larry1672 make more dude

[HinataStrawberry]

Konohamaru:That's your second outburst, Kouji.

Now sit down and shut-up.

[Blackstars59n]

xD i luv that part lol

[Jamora]

stupid storyline, but good artwork.

[larry1672]

The story is yet to unfold.

[Georgenmi]

@larry1672 r u gona make anymore not 2 b a dik but i h8 it wen ppl start tingz but dnt finish

[chocolateangel97]

nice why is jarhiya so mean lol like shai she cute but wish she was more like naruto alilte

[SmallShadows]

I always thought naruto and hinata's daughter name would be hina but thats just my opinion and idk if they had a kid also it's just fanfiction so idc later an nice vid I enjoyed it

[sdotyoungin]

awesome good work

[youkaiwoman01]

Awesome!

[ichigokunx]

dude this is fucking homo i can't see shit its fgly

[ShojoOtakuAngel]

this is a freaking good story! everything adds up from where it is now only thing is jariaya dies by pein little bit ago.....still good freaking work ive seen in awhile!

[8991231]

if it was more neater and fix the words this could be the next naruto series

[userpoutsas]

dude not good enough

[saku3339]

is therte going to be any romance? and where is sasuke's and sakura's son/daughter?

[larry1672]

Yeah Shai will start to like the boy that caught the shurikens...unfortunately he becomes a bad guy but thats a spoiler...and Sasuke and Sakura don't have a kid because Sasuke is still bein an emo...

[saku3339]

first- who the heck is shai? u mean sai?

second- so sasuke an emo, meaning -he and sakura aren't together?

third- if u do mean sai then sai's a BOY!

[larry1672]

Uh, Shai is the main character you know Naruto's daughter...its a fan fiction I made her up...and Sasuke left the village hence he and Sakura don't have a kid.

[saku3339]

thanx a lot for telling!!!!

[animewannabees123]

yeah she's right!

i want part 2

[Hinaruandnaruto77]

Cool Make the next one soon ok. 100000000000000000000000000000­00000000000000000/100

[CwVc11]

uhh jiraiya is dead ...tsunade would be dead by then why not a new hokage ...naruto only having 1 tehqniqe hes gonna b stronger then his dad and hes not gonn marry hinata thatjust weird ..but great job on the artwork how long did it all take

[larry1672]

I know Jiraiya is dead...its a cliff hanger that appears in later chapters, Tsunade isn't dead, shes about 75-78 now, and there is a new Hokage comming like I said in the later chapters, Naruto has more than one technique and whats wrong with Hinata she likes him and later on he figures it out and bam. But thanks for the comment it took quite sometime, weeks thats all I know.

[ayesha12383]

I'm sorry to say this but there is so many naruto next generation.Did sombody know who made the very first naruto next generation since there's alot now.

[larry1672]

Yeah I figure there is alot of em', but what will one more hurt? Thank you for your comment none-the-less.

[mitsukikunoichi]

yay!