You Are Mine (A Jacob And Renesmee Story) Ch.1

[sexychick859]

She is such a lucky person to be so close to jake!!!!

[larkat50psd]

only taylor launtner can be renesmess partner.no one else will do.pay him want he wants.

[andii228]

why is bella thorne therE?

[sweetshitbitch]

ew why a jonas brothers song????

[sunnymunroe210]

OH MY GOD PPLES YES IT IS CECE FROM SHAKE IT UP OTHERWISE KNOWN AS BELLA THORNE!

[sunnymunroe210]

@FearingNightmare ya its bella thorne

[debrac14]

on o:20 it looks like cici from shake it up

[sunnymunroe210]

@debrac14 cuz it is

[shaliyah31]

wtf is goin on wit that sond that shit is old as hek

[mandy22122]

ok at 00:18 it soo looks like cece from shake it up lol

[sunnymunroe210]

@mandy22122 cuz it is

[CybunnyFanatic]

Is the girl at :20 Bella Thorne from Shake it Up?

[sunnymunroe210]

@CybunnyFanatic yes

[xLadiiKx]

I SOOOOO CANT WAIT FOR BREAKING DAWN!!! I DONT WANNA WAIT ANY LONGER!!!!

[Funbunny64]

SWEET! omg that's so sweet jacob ROCKS! TEAM JACOB!

[DevinJane14]

love it already

[MissAnimalLover4ever]

At first I was just like wtf? This is just a slideshow....then I read the "desciprtion".

[TheSpagettiGurls]

@MissAnimalLover4ever i know...it usually does that in like storie like these 

[jhade1212]

why dosent need to be that long of descript and wat where you talking about i didnt really understand

[jhade1212]

i am so suprised that jacob would play with her she a vamp dont they wanna kill vampiers

[grovepar]

at 0:23 that could be a perfect renesmee if her hair were just a little bit more brown. i always imagined her a little pale though

[lilraven4832]

i think stefanie should a write a follow up series that goes through renesemee and jacob's life. i'd love to see how bella would handle havin jacob as a son-in-law lol!

[Funbunny64]

@lilraven4832 Ur SOO right! PLEASE STEPHENIE MEYER I'M BEGGING CAUSE I DON'T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO DO..... PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!?!?! and that would be SO cool and funny!

[jacobeclipse101]

They are SO cute together!!!!

[weirdalyankosin]

OMG IT'S JACKIE CHAN!!!

[Tlongacre269]

The girl at :35 I think is that girl from underworld lol first names Kate but I 4get the last. I can't wait to see who they choose!

[ACPerez3]

The "Renesmee" at :36 would be good. she fits the description really well. I wonder who they're gonna pick!!! So excited!

[400yellowjello]

Your an amazing writer :) Very clear and detailed. I loved it.

[CassieDude91]

who is 0:35 ?

[Makoroful]

0:35 was ow I pictured renesmee

[TheJennyJewel1]

Who's the girl next to taylor on the pic with the tree and the dog at 0:20???

She0s sooo cute!!

[1candycane11]

love it

[EvanescenceLyrics1]

0:22 ... thats weird.. thats my baby picture! WTF, if people are taking that from my myspace and putting it on google please stop or whatever..i swear to god i have other pictures like that of me...D:

[TheJennyJewel1]

@EvanescenceLyrics1

If thats true... You're sooooo cute!!!

Lovely!!!

[DaNcEcHiCk1424]

#23 is sooooooooo cute!!!!!!

[sarahtuberville144]

ok that is how the book describes them both!good job gurl!i subscribed it was sooooooooooooooooooooo freaking awesome!

[verovilla92]

That girl is Bella Thorne (in 0:20 ) she was in my own worst enemy with Taylor!

[Gummytastic]

the one in 0:20

[Maryssa1996]

the girl in 20 is how i imagined her a little bit older.

[hollywoodbgirl]

0:35 really pretty girl..:D

[MusicStarz1990]

0:38 who is that

[ItsTheFishingShow]

at 0.23 that girl has the hair i imaginated haha

[KaylaAliceBFF]

You shouls seriously be an author this is like my 7th time reading it

[leopards77]

video is good.

[twilightfreak101ify]

tht girl at 0:10 is PERFECT renesmee!!!!

[ruebners]

it`svery great. 0:35 is perfect.

[twilightgirls1617]

Who's the girl at 0:35?

[TAPAIE101]

i hate jacob but good video!

[princessmcdoy]

im with u sista! team edward all da way!

[WeDontFearYou]

what song is this?

[MegJonasCullen]

Its the old version of "When You Look Me In the Eyes" by the jonas brothers.

[CassieDude91]

@WeDontFearYou "when you look me in the eyes" by Nick Jonas ( young voice + present voice)

[ubberkool2010]

I ike the story it is good.

[keycaine]

please make another on but make it longer please please please i loved this

[unofficalalicecullen]

WOW! i loved it! did u posy anymore of the story? if i subscribe would u send me more?

[Efleee]

I think Renesmee looks like the little girl on 0:22 from the video. :)

[Analicious09]

0:35 is the perfect girl for renesmee.who is she? i could imagine her with jacob.

[twilightgirls1617]

The girl at 0:35 looks exactly how i picture renesmee! who is she?

[muzicforlif3]

i lovee thiss!!! OMJ! (OH MY JACOB!.)

[WillowxSecrets]

awesome :)

i just started my own jenesmee

story cuzza this. :D

[clublokez]

oh here it is

[ThatGirl360]

i love this!

[twilightfreak0242]

this was ok. not very realalistic though

[MegJonasCullen]

Well the twilight stuff isn't SUPPOSED to be realistic. It's about vampires, right? I'm sorry you didn't like it.

[Jarismita123]

It's ok. Though I don't get why people fret over doing stuff by Jacobs Perspective. I would be better 2 do it 4m Nessies side. She has a better sense of knowledge & idea.

[bumblebeesquare]

wow, thats really good, i think you should consider finishing this :]

[emilyontheinternet]

awesome you are a really really good writer!!

[elizabethminaya]

omfg this is just amazing luv it awesome like the story a wholeeee lot keep writing plizzz!!!!!!

[iluvboyswhosparkle]

omj!!!!!!!!!!!! meg thats great keep writing please

[imawesomeinsomanyway]

omg plz post soon

[girl41150]

Wonderful Meg! Luv this fan-fic!

-Meg

[bellababy132]

is the pic at 0:38 renessmee?

[twilightrocks1357]

this video is awesome good job!!!!

[type1diabetesgirl]

omg awesome

[Wizards232]

woooooow this is awsome

[ilovenickjonas13210]

omg awesome!!!!!

[clublokez]

awsome

[ShadowX2511]

OMG THIS IS AWESOME!