@Dragonmaw what are you kidding? Really? This is really well done. The story is good for a short film, and since it was only animated by ONE person, that just gives even more credit towards being great. The animation itself is clean, the backgrounds are well done. Everything is perfect.
did you dont know? o__O, An UFO comes from the sky, and takes the bodies, after that, they make experiments and they becomes into Robot-aliens- Samurais!, and live forever! @__@
Eh, it was all right. The animation in the actual sword fighting wasn't very fluid at all, especially the impact of the swords when they clashed and the pacing of the slashes in general. On top of that, a lot of the heads/faces had some slight issues that needed tweaking in various shots.
speaking as someone involved with the project, we are more than aware of this. Its all easier said than done my man, and with the amount of work that goes into even the smallest sequence, on a first try, sometimes you just chalk it up to learning experience. I'd like to draw your attention the segment at 3:07-3:29 as an example of work completed late in the project, after said learning experiences.
this is so nice!!!!!. im still learning animation. but what program did u use?? please tell me T_T. man this is really nice keep up the great work!!!!!
Awesome. I don't see how this is sexist. Did you design the characters yourself? One of the comments mentions that it is fanart but I don't recognise the characters (although I will admit I haven't kept up with the genre for a few years now).
I think that it was very well done, all of the movements are smooth and clean, this has obviously taken a long time to perfect. Although the ambient music track wouldn't be my choice, I appreciate every ounce of labor you have put into it.
i highly doubt he's being sexist. that quote is just meant to emphasize that she might be too sensitive/caring to live the lifestyle of a warrior. Not only that, but it seems as this was in older times, where that belief is common among men. Though it clearly shows he cared for her.
This was very well done i think, i enjoyed watching it. :3
i just wanted to say, i was involved in the story and we were aware that some might take offense. No real offense is intended. The character's viewpoint IS sexist, he lived in a sexist time, but the meaning is meant to be about emotions in general. This is something the fictional character WOULD have said. His lines may also be taken ironically, since in actuality Murasaki behaves well in accordance with the ideals of the samurai warrior. The action contradicts the dialogue.
Maybe the fight could've been a bit more suspense and action- but since I am an animator myself *and just a starting one XD* I know how hard it is to make it all dynamic like that. The mood of it was beautiful- I think the best scene was the one from the past- as they were children. That was really beautiful!
it was great it was so sad that they had to turn on each other you can tell that they had trouble fighting each other but in the end one had to die...and you can tell from her pain of having to kill him... which she was problably forced to do by her master...gave her so much grief that she had no choice but to end her life as well
It's called a 'short film'. Besides, have you ever watched any anime? There are countless examples of childhood friends or comrades being pitted against each other. Besides, I don't think the point of the story is the why, but rather just the reality of life and death struggle that can happen even between friends and lovers.
So next time please don't spam the comments section by repeating the same question over and over.
oooh very nice! the animation is really good, though a few more inbetweens during the scene unter the cherrytree and during the close-ups at the end would've made it perfectly fluid.
The only thing I can really critique though is the quality of the the voice and the acting...the quality wasn't as good as the rest of the sound and the girl's acting lacked emotion :/....
wow very beautiful indeed! your award was well deserved, ive tried my hand at some animations with flash etc, what do you prefere to work with? after all each artist to their own
The transition between the flashback and the rest of the film was kind of weird, and the subtitles have a few typos.
However, the art is gorgeous, the proportions spot-on, and lovely character designs. The animation is very smooth, except for the crow in the beginning, when it was sitting on the tree.
It starts out a little slow, and then goes a little too fast, but overall, it's fantastic. ^^ Just my cup of tea. c:
Hello I'm a Seneca student currently in 3rd year. I watch you on DA as well. Thanks for posting your film up as I've wanted to watch it ever since I read that it won an award in the US. I thought it was really beautiful and an amazing thing that you and a few of your friends put this together. Your hard work is really evident. Congratulations to you and all the members that worked on it. :)
The animation was great, and though I'm sure it was a pain in the ass to animate it all, it could have used a bit more action. Also, the way the guy fell at the end was more funny then sad...if it'd been more slow motion than the standoff at the beginning, it'd be more effective.
Actually, I think it's good he falls fast, other wise it would have been overly dramatic... I think the fact that he fell in such a fast simple insignificant way added to the drama without making it melodramatic.
omg. I've watched this 4 times and It's still as awesome as when i first watched it. You are like freakin awesome. Lol my anime clud at school adores your vid, well the girls do. =^-^= The guys like it they just won't admit! Much love From Tar Heel State!
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that was sad but lame...
I mean that in a artist point or view... I mean..the characters were just to jittery... and the animation didn't flow.. the only thing that looked good was when the bird flew past the words on the screen.. that was it...
Oh...wow...I'm crying right now...I NEVER cry for films, but this one just blew me away. The characters, concept, and exceptional plot all came together because of your skillful animation. I love it - I have to go watch your deviantART account now. *hug* Thanks for showing us all something really special.
wow, Mikey. that was truely beautiful!! thank you so much for finally posting this here. i felt like it was a privilege to watch. i can see why it won Best Anime; the story was breath-taking and you presented everything so well. i hope you continue to animate and try new venues. best of luck!
I am crying. Fffuu--
MyIdiosyncrasies 3 months ago 2
I loved it. The acting could be better though, still it was a touching story.
TatsuraJ 7 months ago
this film is why white people shouldn't make anime. barf.
Dragonmaw 1 year ago
@Dragonmaw what are you kidding? Really? This is really well done. The story is good for a short film, and since it was only animated by ONE person, that just gives even more credit towards being great. The animation itself is clean, the backgrounds are well done. Everything is perfect.
billion117 8 months ago
Oh my god, i love this movie! I always cry at the ending and i love the character designs for murasaki and ichiro.
kittychic4444 1 year ago
Pretty good, but the voice acting made me grimace
lin2k4 1 year ago
the animation was awesome but the voice acting sucked hard D:
Kyuka 1 year ago
You... Are.... Amazing!
Izzy244 1 year ago
*sniffles*
OhioNeko 2 years ago
WOW, not what I was expecting, but still beautiful.
Amazingly animated and touching.
pamplemousse100 2 years ago
so sad...
nice work...
nanouko93 2 years ago
Very Nice. ^^
XxXBeyondBirthdayXxX 2 years ago
Nice work.
SethKearsley 2 years ago
so sad! D: TOO SAD! D: i wonder what happens to the character's bodies? do they get eaten by wolves? or does the bodies just freeze?
129815 2 years ago
did you dont know? o__O, An UFO comes from the sky, and takes the bodies, after that, they make experiments and they becomes into Robot-aliens- Samurais!, and live forever! @__@
orochirob 2 years ago
*gasp* really? :O thats.... awkward >__>
129815 2 years ago
@orochirob I knew it!
ForgottenTennyo 2 years ago
xDD
orochirob 2 years ago
That was very moving. I love the animation & colors. Very riveting.
MetalSonicMkIV 2 years ago
That was kind of depressing, but in a good way!
brookekun 2 years ago
Were they just sparring or trying to kill each other?
chocorobochan 2 years ago
if Midyan91 is right, I am amazed!
ElWhippyMehico 3 years ago 2
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The Japanese version of Romeo and Juliet?
isaksays 3 years ago
oh god this made me cry! awesome job!
biohazard22791 3 years ago 3
Not enough frames, certain scenes does not flow properly because it "skipped". And need to work more on facial expressions.
The bg music's tune was good though.
FirstClassHunter 3 years ago 5
wow, awesome job for amateur animation.
the colors and backgrounds are amazing but i think the artist need to work on his faces, especially the female face from side view.
great stuff!
rgm501theoriginal 3 years ago 4
great job!
HybridRain 3 years ago 2
Amazing stuff.
origamipein18 3 years ago 2
i saw this before on deviantart
psikopatadam 3 years ago
i dont get it
whyhedodat 3 years ago
wow... out of all the animations i've seen on youtube, this is by far the best.... good job, i love it.
markie1985 3 years ago 3
AMAZING :')
HOGwild1133 3 years ago 2
Amazing, found this linked from your DA so I had hight expectations - well met sah!
0800DialTurk 3 years ago 2
haha, i found this on DA, too!
WHEEO! i know an animator! (well, i havnt been aknowledged yet, but meh)
IKakashiLove 2 years ago
What you did in 5 minutes, many movies can't accomplish in 90. There was dignity & beauty in the pace of it. Character & atmosphere were great.
geoff1188 3 years ago 4
Eh, it was all right. The animation in the actual sword fighting wasn't very fluid at all, especially the impact of the swords when they clashed and the pacing of the slashes in general. On top of that, a lot of the heads/faces had some slight issues that needed tweaking in various shots.
Dwakey 3 years ago
speaking as someone involved with the project, we are more than aware of this. Its all easier said than done my man, and with the amount of work that goes into even the smallest sequence, on a first try, sometimes you just chalk it up to learning experience. I'd like to draw your attention the segment at 3:07-3:29 as an example of work completed late in the project, after said learning experiences.
s2ev8 3 years ago
I didn't say it was easy, it was just weird seeing how many people commented saying "THIS IS THE SHIT, IT'S AMAZING OMG"
Actually, I had an issue with the entire animation not flowing. Especially 3:07-3:29 ;/ Like the parry in 3:25? So awkward.
Dwakey 3 years ago
this is so nice!!!!!. im still learning animation. but what program did u use?? please tell me T_T. man this is really nice keep up the great work!!!!!
garada9 3 years ago
he used flash
Midyan91 3 years ago
hahaha go cut yourself em- :(
mzathemind 3 years ago
hey V you were my first watch and my current desktop!
mzathemind 3 years ago
I am truly astonished.
Karoish 3 years ago 2
This animation amazes and touches me everytime I see it. You've done an amazing job and I can't wait to see more of your work
capturethesun0 3 years ago 2
dude, awesome!
some of the greatest art i've seen.
hopefully i can do as well as you have, gah, you make me wanna draw more lol.
seriously great piece, hopefully i'll see more soon
SoakinTears 3 years ago
you're Amazing!
it made me cry!
such a strong story!
damn im crying again! lol
you're a friggin genius man!
AlexTheColombian 3 years ago 2
I first watched this on d.A. and I still loves it! Keep up the great work!
midnitecherriblossom 3 years ago 4
it's so beautiful!
lorwynne001 3 years ago 2
thats awesome i wish it was longer
kibatheman 3 years ago
wow this is beautiful!
gnarleytoe 3 years ago
Awesome. I don't see how this is sexist. Did you design the characters yourself? One of the comments mentions that it is fanart but I don't recognise the characters (although I will admit I haven't kept up with the genre for a few years now).
neogfx 3 years ago
I think that it was very well done, all of the movements are smooth and clean, this has obviously taken a long time to perfect. Although the ambient music track wouldn't be my choice, I appreciate every ounce of labor you have put into it.
KomicalFox 3 years ago
very badass wish it was a a whole movie.
tenro100 3 years ago
T__T So...Sad D:
rina123456 3 years ago
very great. wow!
Evancry 3 years ago
OMG maaaan reaaaaaaaaaaly grate work ;) I LOVE IT ;) hope u'll make some movie :D
Angie686 3 years ago
Stunning, just stunning
pokegohan 3 years ago
OMFG THAT WAS SO GREAT I GASPED SO HARD WHEN SHE CUT HIM and cried when they died....I want to buy this dvd when I get the money its so good!
FayeleeDarkclaw 3 years ago
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I did not enjoy this film.
"That is why a woman can't be a warrior"?
Fucking sexist, much?
Kipcha92 3 years ago
i highly doubt he's being sexist. that quote is just meant to emphasize that she might be too sensitive/caring to live the lifestyle of a warrior. Not only that, but it seems as this was in older times, where that belief is common among men. Though it clearly shows he cared for her.
This was very well done i think, i enjoyed watching it. :3
eng3l 3 years ago 20
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its a little sexist, yeah.
but women in general just arent made for war. some women are, but guys already have the mindset for it when they are born.
thats just how it is.
not all men, but most, are naturally geared towards war.
not all women, but most, just naturally arent.
missyaley 3 years ago
As a woman, I find nothing sexist in this movie.
Period.
mornmeril 3 years ago 22
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As a woman, I do.
Period.
emmywy 3 years ago
i just wanted to say, i was involved in the story and we were aware that some might take offense. No real offense is intended. The character's viewpoint IS sexist, he lived in a sexist time, but the meaning is meant to be about emotions in general. This is something the fictional character WOULD have said. His lines may also be taken ironically, since in actuality Murasaki behaves well in accordance with the ideals of the samurai warrior. The action contradicts the dialogue.
s2ev8 3 years ago
I really liked it.
It was really sad!
Except his falling at the end...
I cracked up, and I couldn't feel sad about her dying after that. I was just laughing too hard... it was just -sad musiccc... PLOP-
EvangelineLark 3 years ago
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Great, thanks for the spoiler.
BlinkLOL 3 years ago
Spoiler? lmfao.
It's like 6 minutes long.
Most read the comments AFTERwards.
-shrugs-
EvangelineLark 3 years ago 9
Really really great GREAT work *w00ts*
Maybe the fight could've been a bit more suspense and action- but since I am an animator myself *and just a starting one XD* I know how hard it is to make it all dynamic like that. The mood of it was beautiful- I think the best scene was the one from the past- as they were children. That was really beautiful!
natsumi33 3 years ago 3
it was great it was so sad that they had to turn on each other you can tell that they had trouble fighting each other but in the end one had to die...and you can tell from her pain of having to kill him... which she was problably forced to do by her master...gave her so much grief that she had no choice but to end her life as well
mmko8706 3 years ago
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Why did she have to kill him? I don't understand.
SailorKairi 3 years ago
Probably because he was going to kill her if she didn't kill him, derr.
Anyways I thought it was lovely. The only thing that bothered me, I know it sounds weird, was the sound of the wind blowing. It sounded odd. >>;
shmiel26 3 years ago
You don't have to be mean about it, but thank you for your input.
It was lovely, but too short :/
SailorKairi 3 years ago 2
SailorKairi brings up a good point, While it was a good film, It wasn't self incapsulated, The audience was drawn to wonder about a history.
M0man 3 years ago
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Why did she have to kill him? I don't understand.
SailorKairi 3 years ago
It's called a 'short film'. Besides, have you ever watched any anime? There are countless examples of childhood friends or comrades being pitted against each other. Besides, I don't think the point of the story is the why, but rather just the reality of life and death struggle that can happen even between friends and lovers.
So next time please don't spam the comments section by repeating the same question over and over.
TziporaCat 3 years ago
well im sorry again. sometimes when i click something my dial up will click it numerous times and I cant help it
I was just curious and YES I have watched anime...a lot.
SailorKairi 3 years ago
oooh very nice! the animation is really good, though a few more inbetweens during the scene unter the cherrytree and during the close-ups at the end would've made it perfectly fluid.
The only thing I can really critique though is the quality of the the voice and the acting...the quality wasn't as good as the rest of the sound and the girl's acting lacked emotion :/....
operngeist 3 years ago 5
that was a frikin awsome anime. it was short but was really cool! there should be more of these. ^-^
kittycatwomen123 3 years ago
This is brilliant. There's a lot of emotion in this film. No wonder ehy you won. Anime is the coolest way to make a cartoon.
stelkin656 3 years ago 2
amazing!
miniPICOSO 3 years ago
That...That was beautiful... I'm still crying over here! Excellant!
kunoichimistress 3 years ago
wow very beautiful indeed! your award was well deserved, ive tried my hand at some animations with flash etc, what do you prefere to work with? after all each artist to their own
avatarfan22122 3 years ago
I loved it i just wish there was a plot twist like the guy killing her or something.
nintendodsdark 4 years ago
The transition between the flashback and the rest of the film was kind of weird, and the subtitles have a few typos.
However, the art is gorgeous, the proportions spot-on, and lovely character designs. The animation is very smooth, except for the crow in the beginning, when it was sitting on the tree.
It starts out a little slow, and then goes a little too fast, but overall, it's fantastic. ^^ Just my cup of tea. c:
Zenagaserpent 4 years ago 3
congrats! i only got a youtube account recently... so now i can finally comment! yay! i love this video and am glad you got on tv and whatnot.
foodistasty 4 years ago
very impressive
pctheninja 4 years ago
The animation is astounding, however the plot and the soundtrack were kind of banal.
But it's an amazing work nonetheless.
Saryune 4 years ago
mmm.... its okay. ^^
xjenny2000x 4 years ago
this is really good!! ^^ there could be more action but that would take a lot of work :3 anyways i love your video :)
HolyPhoenix 4 years ago
Hello I'm a Seneca student currently in 3rd year. I watch you on DA as well. Thanks for posting your film up as I've wanted to watch it ever since I read that it won an award in the US. I thought it was really beautiful and an amazing thing that you and a few of your friends put this together. Your hard work is really evident. Congratulations to you and all the members that worked on it. :)
chibizaki 4 years ago 3
Unbelieveable!!! For somone creating an fan-movie is incredible!! Short Movie but full of great drama and action.
MatrixXZ20 4 years ago
very beautiful work.
100IRIS001 4 years ago 2
OMG YA HAVE A TUBE ACCOUNT TOO!!!! well that is AWSOME!!!! -Slaver12 on DA
CatLover113405 4 years ago
The animation was great, and though I'm sure it was a pain in the ass to animate it all, it could have used a bit more action. Also, the way the guy fell at the end was more funny then sad...if it'd been more slow motion than the standoff at the beginning, it'd be more effective.
DarkfireDraco 4 years ago
Man I haven't thought about the way he falls and now every time I wwatch I start laughing. It kills all the mood. You corrupted my mind XD *pouts*
phoenixrage333 4 years ago
I tend to do that to people. Sorry. xD
DarkfireDraco 4 years ago
Actually, I think it's good he falls fast, other wise it would have been overly dramatic... I think the fact that he fell in such a fast simple insignificant way added to the drama without making it melodramatic.
Diana1885 4 years ago
You do have a point, and it can be seen either way. But...after how slow and dramatic the rest of the action was, it seems a bit too abrupt to me.
DarkfireDraco 4 years ago
omg. I've watched this 4 times and It's still as awesome as when i first watched it. You are like freakin awesome. Lol my anime clud at school adores your vid, well the girls do. =^-^= The guys like it they just won't admit! Much love From Tar Heel State!
Fabuloussagi 4 years ago
I liked that a lot! Now to go watch you on DA ^^
downfallofkenzellar 4 years ago
But all in all I do like it.. the story was good and the do think it was good work
LiluSMoon 4 years ago
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that was sad but lame...
I mean that in a artist point or view... I mean..the characters were just to jittery... and the animation didn't flow.. the only thing that looked good was when the bird flew past the words on the screen.. that was it...
all well.. the story was okay I guess
LiluSMoon 4 years ago
wow! that was amazing! i hope i get money soon to see it ALL! :D
SakuraDrops0001 4 years ago
Thank you. YOU ARE AMAZING ARTIST! ^_^ (though I've already written that in deviantart XD)
phoenixrage333 4 years ago
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BORING!
The story wasn't really...good. The animations were really great though. Actions were boring. Story was original but too expecting.
Nintendor 4 years ago
That. Was. Amazing.
OokamiRai 4 years ago 2
kanashii..kanashii T-T..
but why were they fighting in the first place :(?
Shiiransama 4 years ago
i think that ishiro had sccumbed to the evil side so her childhood friend kill him thats why she commit suicide
lordpinkwar 4 years ago
that, and then they somehow got into a rivalry when they were kids. i think murasaki secretly loved ishiro, too, and that's why she comitted suicide
Zuyuri 4 years ago 2
...so sad...I hope your future animations aren't so sad. Yes, FUTURE ANIMATIONS. <hint hint. :|
MyIdiosyncrasies 4 years ago 2
Oh...wow...I'm crying right now...I NEVER cry for films, but this one just blew me away. The characters, concept, and exceptional plot all came together because of your skillful animation. I love it - I have to go watch your deviantART account now. *hug* Thanks for showing us all something really special.
You deserved that award.
waiting4wings 4 years ago 2
Brilliant man :)
RazmusStarscream 4 years ago
that's absolute talent right there!
iseedeadpeople13 4 years ago
Wow....just....wow...
whatadisaster 4 years ago
Wow, in 5:44, you managed to make us love and know these two characters, and feel an emotional story about two friends.
Plus, it looks amazing, you deserve money, and lots of it lol
bonFreakingJovi 4 years ago 6
;-; so saaaad, you did a great job!
KrossedDaoshi 4 years ago
wow, Mikey. that was truely beautiful!! thank you so much for finally posting this here. i felt like it was a privilege to watch. i can see why it won Best Anime; the story was breath-taking and you presented everything so well. i hope you continue to animate and try new venues. best of luck!
ayamei1 4 years ago
i honostly had my breath taken away it was omg just beautiful i also watch you on DA keep up the AMAzing work and please continue to animate!!!
ShadowChild009 4 years ago
This is really great!!!
greyceri 4 years ago
I've only seen you grow a little, but in that time you've grown so much! Continue to grow and aspire to the greatness you will be renowned for.
jazzknh 4 years ago
the whole thing was amazing
but the music could have been better O:
albinokittie 4 years ago
Wow! Now that's something else!
ArtisanAlchemist 4 years ago
Made of win.
Just had to say that.
Larrmon 4 years ago
You just got a 5 Star rating from me! Great work man!
kevindeanbarlow 4 years ago
You have no idea how much you pwn. <3 Please continue animating.
NarutosChik 4 years ago