Good stuff Romeo lol, I've seen you with a guitar but but never seen you write songs and sing. Been quite awhile I guess, and being the recluse individual that I am this should prompt me to start my own musical endeavors hahaha.
I liked it :] i really did. Its cute haha. Some of your melodies and lyrics were quite good.
Word of advice though, watch your meter. The rhythm on lyrics is quite important. (example: "all alone tonight" sort of throws you off in the verse, which can be handy when used right. but here i feel like a stronger feel could help) The chorus is good up until the last line.
Other than that just be careful :] you've got some songwriting skill, really!
<3 I kinda think this is my favorite one Ang! I LOVE IT... =D
Stop being so good at everything. =b
IcyBluAngel 11 months ago
Good stuff Romeo lol, I've seen you with a guitar but but never seen you write songs and sing. Been quite awhile I guess, and being the recluse individual that I am this should prompt me to start my own musical endeavors hahaha.
crzer07 2 years ago
I liked it :] i really did. Its cute haha. Some of your melodies and lyrics were quite good.
Word of advice though, watch your meter. The rhythm on lyrics is quite important. (example: "all alone tonight" sort of throws you off in the verse, which can be handy when used right. but here i feel like a stronger feel could help) The chorus is good up until the last line.
Other than that just be careful :] you've got some songwriting skill, really!
Closure777 2 years ago
your lyrics have always been beautiful.
little B
thelittleone24 2 years ago
Romeo that was beautiful it brought tears to my eyes :)
XxDirtyPiratexX 2 years ago
haha, were they dirty tears?
tigger000 2 years ago