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  • :O Amazing.

  • GASP!

  • awe poor Demi,

    :(

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  • gfhshfdahgfdshdf

    lol

  • OMG post moree

    kdhjbruhsdjtavb

  • woo

  • awesomenesss!!!!!!!!!!!

    kdhjbruhsdjtavb

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb, lol!!!!!!!!! :D

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb jk YOU KNOW THE PERFECT SONG FOR THIS!!JUST SO YOU KNOW BY JESSE MCCARTNEY IT FITS PERFECTLY!!

  • im defff reading it! :]

  • LOVED IT!!!

  • auhsuashuashuashauhsaushu oeiaoeiaoeiaoeiaoeiaoi

    funny.I liked it

  • dfgdfhrheargfe

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb

  • Sweetness love it!!

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb

  • fdsjjmfesbkj.!woot!

  • ghilfsufsduirelsgtnb!!

    This story rocks=)

  • ajsdjkhsdfjnl. i love your story(:

  • Your so talented!!!

  • these stories rock

    you've got a talent for writing

    i sound like a right dork there don't I lol!

  • dfgxdcfhxfgjhsfg!

  • hjusafjbafjbdj haha jk! your a wicked good writer! :]

  • jklhasdjfhjasdhfjhasjdlfhjlsk-­i am soooooooooooooooo reading this!!!!!!!!!!!

  • dude my sisters name is Alley, well aley

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb

  • omj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Hey I like your stories.

  • you seriously need to post more of this...

    please...?

  • she is making chapter 8 right now

  • MORE :]

  • I'm soooo hooked, I love the story!! Keep posting! :)

  • NEXT ONE! I DEMAND IT!

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb!

    hah i got it exactly like yours XD

    well i just read all the way up to this one today and i have to say there great!

    well keep writing. :) -Autumn XOXO

  • HFKJDHKLJSHFODOSHKLJ:!!! i LOVE this story! Make another!! Lmao, seriously!!! :]

  • dfgdfgdfgdfgd

  • ghdhndfnhdfndfgndfgn loved it

  • asdggnjkuyukrtykkkrty

    btw your story is great

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb.

    haha i love tis storeh :D keep working!

  • oh snap!

  • when are you gonna post again??

  • Im the 1000 viewer!! Yay!!

    LOVED it! Oh and...

    jlfbngkjefnblhrk

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb

    I love this story!

  • zyxwvutsrqponmlkjihgfedcba!!! haha!!!!

    next one?!pleasee:]

  • this story is sooooo interesting!!!

  • gh5u3rgue jqhvuk3gyrbrgh ur very very welcome

    oh and I LOve It

  • :) Great, when Ch. 8 coming?

  • wow these r real good.!!!

    u need to post more. haha

    its like a high five.... YOU CANT LEAVE ME HAGIN' its just illogical...and i cant have it. haha

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb! Your stories are awsome!

  • more,more,more,more,more!

  • ljksafhfdiolJNXDLK,SAHDKBKJhlk­jshflk'

    Ha, lol. You got me hooked. Ima subscribe.

    Please post more soon. =)

  • Please write the next one soon!

  • AHHHH!! C'mon!! I'm fricken DYING here!! *tear* POST MORE EXTREMELY SOON! I don't know what I'll do with myself if you don't. PLEASE!!!!!!!! I'm begging!

  • omj!write more plzzzz...:D

  • hfjslbfhjabfcbl lol =] love all the drama in it.keep writing...it's awsome.

  • omj!!

  • these r really good, its kinda emotional:( lol

  • when r u posting? and kdhjbruhsdjtavb!!

  • Oh my gosh, these are addicting!

  • I know! Aren't you happy I sent them to ya? (; Ahhh... I'm dying without these. She hasn't posted in a long time O.O

  • whoa!! ur series is really good!! i'm subscribing!

    i can't wait for the next one!!

  • more soon please!!

  • Demi is a.. SFJSAFHLSADLSJDKALIUCVNX.

    I don't like her in this story.

    (:

  • Wow That was Really Good

    Xoxo,

    Annisa

  • POST PLZ!! MORE! ur really good, and u need to post more often..bcause i am ADDICTD!!!

  • OMJ AWESOME! next one next one!

  • i read!

  • i read

  • gjfytry

  • Love it you should post more!!

  • please i just started reading these and you have to post more i loved them

  • Post More Please!? I'm getting tired of reading everbody stories over and over again.

    -JonasWriter

  • It's Thursday.... ;)

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb.

  • OMG even Demi knows :O

    oh Joe, what're you going to do

    btw I love this chapter :)

  • love it keep writting pleaz!!!!!!!

  • dude ive said it once and ill say it again, you are the BEST writer EVER! your so good! please keep writing

  • fddjnhzs;lol

  • awsome!

  • NO ok u cant do this to us!!!! its llike torture having to wait for the next chapter!!!! ughhhh

  • awe sorry i'll post thursday, i am grounded rite now,. srry!

    Stephie

  • wow girl you should have seen me when i read this!!

    i was like ":0 HOLY SHIT" lmao

    i luvz your story =)

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb hah jk its really goood keep writing!

  • you have sixy nine text comments, so put up the next one :)

  • nmmnmbmnbmnbmbmvmb

  • dude, please update soon... I just started reading your story, and I like it alot... One of the best i've read, and trust me, I read ALOT of stories...

  • fmfgfsskjftkdks... Jk! I love it and can't wait for more!

  • amazing:)

    loved it, post the next soonnnn !

  • OMJ i love it!

    Post soon pleease !

  • why hasn't there been any new ones lately!

  • this is a new one, lol?

    StephieJonas

  • this is great! check out my channel people!

  • omj!! ur story is soo completely amazing!! ur soo good at writing and i cant get enough of this story!! lol post more soon!

  • wow. this is the best series i have EVER read. i used to like mine... but yours is my fave now. your stories are so intense and descriptive. please write more soon!

  • awe thanks, ur comment means a lot :]

    StephieJonas

  • ha cool. but really but i cannot wait until thursday. i am in so much suspense...!

  • ah!

    CONTROVERSY!

    i love it!

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb

    read it and loved it(:

  • loved it hope u post soon =]

  • love it hurry w. the next one

  • ohmyohmyohmygoodness. loveeee ittttt

  • cool

  • omg!!whats wrong with them!!!

    like aaguugh

    lOved it!!

  • BUSTED!!!!

  • wowowowowowowow that was pretty great,loved it*

    -mikki&hope

  • is your name (or one of your names) hope?

    cuz thats my name too and i dont know like anyone with the name

    haha wow im randomm

  • wtf does that have to do with this story?

    lol

    StephieJonas

  • sorry i was just reading the comments and noticed it.

    but if it makes it better i really like your story and your doing a really good job

  • ohh hah athats okay, i was jut wondering like why u put that on there, thanks for the comment.

    hahaha i wasn't mad, just wondering, lol

    StephieJonas

  • lol one of us is hope

    ;)

    -mikki&hope

  • really good!

  • wow!!! i love it.

    your an awesome writer.

  • awesome!!!! i loved it!

  • hi lhuved it even knoweb i already read it. and txz for the dedication

  • so good

  • loved it!

  • kdhjbruhsdjtavb

    lol

    TSK DEMI TSK!

  • Aww. I don't know who to feel bad for, Demi or Joe. They both feel sad :(

  • Eeeeeeeep! :)

  • YAYYY good good

  • thx, means a lot :]

  • WOW!!! That was great1

  • awesome! (:

  • gfjrtngntkk lol

    Aww I love thiss one

  • Amazing I so love this

  • LOVE IT.. please post MORE/SOON..

  • Im reading! and im loving, ur story is awesome and i cant wait for the next chapter.

  • WOO!UPDATES!

  • hey girlie thz for dedicating a chapter 4 mre! but i luved it!

  • AMAZING!! never stop writeing this!! I WILL SUBSCRIBE FOREVER!!! ^.^

  • boyy.. thats why yu put the song AWAY before yu leave the room.. yu dont leave it on the bed.. geez... anywayss... awesome as usual =P

    post post!! much love <3

  • well the story had to go that way or else other events couldn't happen in the upcoming chapters. and things are gonna happen, oooohhh! haha but yea thanks for commenting

    StephieJonas

  • ohh i feel bad for demi

    but this is interesting so keep writing

    FASTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT­TTTTTT

  • OMG YOU GUYS SOMEBODY UNSUBBED ME :'(

    thats so depressing, omgsh why would they do that? oh my oh my.

    Stephiejonas

  • Please put up the next chapter tomorrow! I beg you!

  • i will don't worry, lol

  • ohh its gonna be good, and there will be quite the scene going on, trust me, the upcoming chapters will be jam packed with drama. so dont u worry :]

    and blingalicious, i love that!

    StephieJonas

  • AAAHHH!!! i loved it!! MORE!

  • amazing.

    ALJKFLKSDJF.

    haha.

  • LUV IT!!!

    Post more!!

  • ahaha i love that, thanks :]

    StephieJonas

  • ahh goodness hwat took u so long

  • writers block, so sorry :]

    i didn't know how to put this chapter, cuz a lot happens in upcoming chapters, and i didn't exactly know how to write this one so that it wouldn't give away too much just yet. i am srry for keeping you all waiting, next chapter will be up tommorrow.

    love always,

    StephieJonas

  • haha that's what she gets for reading it. Love it!

  • love it! more soon please

  • omj!!!!!awesome chapter

    post the next chapter soon!!!

  • AAHH!HURRY!

  • More. Soon. Please?

  • tommorow, i promise, cuz i have no school, yay! party like a rockstar, lmao i am listening to that right now, haha.

    anyways thanks

    StephieJonas

  • AWESOME!!!!

  • I LOVE IT!!

  • awesome i luv it!!!!

  • hurry with the next one please!

  • oh my god! poor demi! awesome story!

  • omg i love this one!! :)

  • oh my god!!! please plese most another its amazing!! hurry haha

  • ahhh so happy we finally got another chapter!!

  • awesome :)

  • aww...poor demi....this was an AWESOME chapter!!! what r u talking about???

  • So good!

    Please hurry!

  • finally!!! its been 4ever!!!!!!

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