If you are in the Bay Area in California, check out "HereAfterHere," an original show about what we think after we die. It includes videos such as this one, theatre, dance, and magic, all accompanied by original music. Check out hereafterhere(dot)com for more details!!
Those pristine pediments, those breathtaking crescents, those elegant... Whoa. You're waxing weird again. "Geeking out," in the American vernacular. Mop that moue off your mug as you ascend the ever-steeper plains, clad in the red James Dean jacket so many mirrors have duplicated, but hitherto with little success.
Fossick in a palatial mansion for lycanthropy serum. Lapse into a brown study, and from that pass into a signal malaise, in which capacity the veriest trifles assume gargantuan proportions. You can't wrench your gaze away from them, even when the luminous blue isms thronging on the cobbles and flagstones come clumping in to warble like a heavenly quire of William Morris wallpaper birds.
Untether the restive balloons dotting the firmament like red fire ants condemned to constant rebirth by Caesarean operation, venturing farther and farther from the cleaver of intellectual butchery with which you bisect the monistic One. Remember me to the dissenting minorities. Tell 'em Hangdog sent ya.
poetry revolves around atmosphere and emotion more than logic. Poems can have meaning, but they use metaphors and language to create a mood that people connect with on an unconscious level. Trying to dissect a poem in such a cold amd clinical way is totally missing the point of what poems are meant to do
On Sunday, 12th October 2008, the Jury of the 4th ZEBRA Poetry Film Festival decided. The ZEBRA Prize for the best Poetry Film went to Juan Delcán, USA for the film 'The Dead', based on the poem 'The Dead' by Billy Collins.
I need a person to do this kind of animation for a poem being read in a doc I'm shooting. I will pay good money, per hour. I'm going to leave this note with others on youtube who are really good with this sort of thing. First one back to me will get the project. Are you interested?
Otto is starting to reconsider some of the choices he has made. The things we want for our selfs and believe they are the best for us are not necessarily the things we choose. Our judgment is blinded by our desire for our belief, so we make a choice hoping it is our belief. Deep down we know that we are wrong ...we will always be wrong because our belief was not meant to be..........
(This got long but dammit I'm posting it!) "They watch the tops of our heads" at 1st blush seems a literalist's failure of imagination - but since that's surely not the full import, the point is... What? That our forebearers reckoned too much concerning the afterlife? That we have failed our fathers' vision, so only such absurdly slanted 'what ifs' remain? That once vital human spaces have indeed become so debleted, abandoned, so lamely literal?
(PART 3) they can finally enter our dreams, (an even older idea of the departed) rejoin us, involve us in their larger lives, ours having grown shallow in unseeing... our dreams (of older ways of living) the last field of a richer, fertile imagining?
"Tender is the Night". (Fitz's image of DD turning out the light.) There is a warmth at the close, a shared dark, a sense of joining.
@breeeegs I can definitely agree. Still sometimes I like to try interpret a poem the way you might an interesting dream. I don't think it comes down to reading TOO much into it though!
My pro. gtrist friend said reducing a song to a mere series of chords DOES often take away some of its magic. Like trying to see a poem as a series of chimes struck (creating harmonies, dissonances etc, creating thematic structure) I guess. It's fun, worthwhile... but more like a dream, it can never be so precise.
I think he's saying people believe you go to heaven when you die, and then he proceeds to describe some imagined implications of that in a clever way. I think it's pretty good, because of the "drugged perhaps, by the hum of a warm afternoon" line, and there's a veiled cynicism throughout that I share.
There's a common reference in western culture to loved ones who have died "looking down on us", which taken literally, results in the strange imagery and unlikely scenarios described throughout. I didn't intend my interpretation as a condemnation of religious faith. Everyone has the right to believe in whatever they wish. I was only commenting on his description of the highly unlikely proposition that the dead retain their physical form in some way and sit up in the sky "looking down on us".
i think that poster is referring to the reader doing a dedication; many authrs pau homage to deceased greats, sungers do the same ting with re-makes if ckassic songs, when done with skill and good taste everyone loves it. U think Mr Collins - and his heirs - might appreciate such a dedication.
@FleshTorturer if i were mister collins, id be glad someone liked my poem so much that they went to all that work to show others the poem in a different way
ah yes, pu3rchaotic, finally i found someone i can drive a nail through, you being one with no emotion and all. it'll be fun, it's sanitized and i'll even do the cleanup.
On Sunday, 12th October 2008, the Jury of the 4th ZEBRA Poetry Film Festival decided. The ZEBRA Prize for the best Poetry Film went to Juan Delcán, USA for the film 'The Dead', based on the poem 'The Dead' by Billy Collins.
A project of the Literaturwerkstatt Berlin in cooperation with interfilm Berlin.
Billy does better when he avoids philosophy. I like the animation, though. This one needs to be "beaten with a rubber hose" to get the meaning out in the open, where we can vote on it.
marmas, I'm taking your advice. Will buy one of BC's books today.
Billy Collins was a 2-term Poet Laureate of the US, and Poet Laureate of New York. I admire his fearlessness about being funny and charming - he's criticized for it by some. There is always a bit of surprise in the humor (the disarming element) and always truth.
i fink u shuld try 2 rite her 1 urself, i im she she like urs better, even if its shit, rather dan 1 a total stranger rote 4 u! after all dey dnt kno her or how beautiful she is, but u do!
Billy Collins is probably more popular than he should be ... or at least judging by the # of Utube views (zoo you too, remember that one?). 675thousand+??!! For a poet? Surprising. ...not in a bad way ... now everybody go buy one of his books.
hey i found that guy all u were looking for. he is just posting more of his work online on his blog. cant beleive i found him. his site is loveslaws(blogspot(com
i enjoy how the poem uses modern everyday things like sandwiches and shoes whilst using the surreal content and interesting imagery as a sharp affective contrast.
You are so right! I absolutely despise people who, instead of discussing (or fighting) their difference in views, just simply give you a thumbs up or down. I bet I'm going to get at least 2 thumbs down right now.
Strapped of cash so writing on here, you might like or hate the new surrealist poetry and prose book, "To The Surprise Of The Protected" - download it free at surpriseoftheprotected dot com
If you like this poem (like I do, I love it) you should check out 'Across The Clouds' by JNeffLind. It's animated poetry in the same style as Billy Collins. Fun, unpretentious, but meaningful. I tried to post it as a video response here but for some reason they won't let me.
Beautiful. I must assume this was featured by Youtube??? It deserves its own glass case in the virtural display. Beautiful imagery. I imagine a new canvas on the walls of art shows. Poetry in motion.
Billy Collins is called the most accessible poet of our time. I love his imagery. I really enjoy the interpretation depicted in this animation. Good work!
hello bhangrachick, "the dead" analysed in a summary? "wait like parents for us to close our eyes" is them waiting for us to join them, when we die (close our eyes). the whole poem is very relaxed, doing ordinary things like "making a sandwhich" "putting on our shoes" "in a field or on a couch" these are all ordinary things, this is meant to make the reader/listener/interpreter feel more understanding and feeling for the aspects of the poem.
that they are lifting their oars again at the end and waiting, is because they are waiting for us to die, so that they can "row themselves slowly through eternity" with us. this is what i have guessed, anyway!
shit, what a fucking asshole you are. He´s just giving an opinion, and one I agree with, a little. The voice is a little too dull and makes it sound uninteresting instead of giving that "dead" feeling to it.
A lot of thanks
halynamyroslava 2 months ago
lmao
bramdonga19 5 months ago
If you are in the Bay Area in California, check out "HereAfterHere," an original show about what we think after we die. It includes videos such as this one, theatre, dance, and magic, all accompanied by original music. Check out hereafterhere(dot)com for more details!!
catjoekun 5 months ago
Those pristine pediments, those breathtaking crescents, those elegant... Whoa. You're waxing weird again. "Geeking out," in the American vernacular. Mop that moue off your mug as you ascend the ever-steeper plains, clad in the red James Dean jacket so many mirrors have duplicated, but hitherto with little success.
dnggitg 5 months ago
Fossick in a palatial mansion for lycanthropy serum. Lapse into a brown study, and from that pass into a signal malaise, in which capacity the veriest trifles assume gargantuan proportions. You can't wrench your gaze away from them, even when the luminous blue isms thronging on the cobbles and flagstones come clumping in to warble like a heavenly quire of William Morris wallpaper birds.
dnggitg 5 months ago
Untether the restive balloons dotting the firmament like red fire ants condemned to constant rebirth by Caesarean operation, venturing farther and farther from the cleaver of intellectual butchery with which you bisect the monistic One. Remember me to the dissenting minorities. Tell 'em Hangdog sent ya.
dnggitg 5 months ago
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03kuruma 6 months ago
I don't know why people are so upset about this. It was lovely. Even if you think it's taking the poem too literally it was still an enjoyable video.
LizaLips1 6 months ago
poetry revolves around atmosphere and emotion more than logic. Poems can have meaning, but they use metaphors and language to create a mood that people connect with on an unconscious level. Trying to dissect a poem in such a cold amd clinical way is totally missing the point of what poems are meant to do
breeeegs 6 months ago
A fabulous poem!
Rhapsodist11 7 months ago
On Sunday, 12th October 2008, the Jury of the 4th ZEBRA Poetry Film Festival decided. The ZEBRA Prize for the best Poetry Film went to Juan Delcán, USA for the film 'The Dead', based on the poem 'The Dead' by Billy Collins.
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I need a person to do this kind of animation for a poem being read in a doc I'm shooting. I will pay good money, per hour. I'm going to leave this note with others on youtube who are really good with this sort of thing. First one back to me will get the project. Are you interested?
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chintubb 9 months ago
Beautiful, mate. Simply beautiful.
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zezoka82 1 year ago
Awsome!!My favorite Poem of Billy Collins! :)
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hauusddfd 1 year ago
Billy Collins has a genius for making the everyday sound totally mundane.
BernsteinCharles 1 year ago
@BernsteinCharles Which marries perfectly with your genius for making the retarded sound pointless.
LithikRob 1 year ago
Oh that's good. I like this a lot.
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WildaXanthe 1 year ago
I liked the bit with the banana
13cheesus14 1 year ago
I dont like the narration, it reminds me of the one kid in class that needs to sound everything out, in 11th grade.
21ricky666 1 year ago
"and wait, like parents, for us to close our eyes" poiuytresawdxfgchjbklm!!!! that line is the most beautiful
pedodebruja 1 year ago
That's why you shouldn't masturbate outdoors.
davidls11 1 year ago 3
this brought me right down to the softest part of the earth after a very bad day.
circethesorceress 1 year ago
Aw that is so sweet :C made me sad tho
smile678 1 year ago
you're good
ShifaaBashir 1 year ago
Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
FableDoe 1 year ago
I've gotta read more Billy Collins!
DreamCatcherInTheRye 1 year ago
grat animation and it emphasises this great piece of poetry
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seathoughts 1 year ago
The Dead is one of the first poetry by Billy that I read and not got hook by all his other work! Amazing writer! So simple and beautiful!
MrChange31 1 year ago
This is awesome! I want a copy for my animation collection!
pjdance 1 year ago
and another
lpatinol 1 year ago
Nice thought!
HeartBrokeDownBlue 1 year ago
Otto is starting to reconsider some of the choices he has made. The things we want for our selfs and believe they are the best for us are not necessarily the things we choose. Our judgment is blinded by our desire for our belief, so we make a choice hoping it is our belief. Deep down we know that we are wrong ...we will always be wrong because our belief was not meant to be..........
TheHdview 1 year ago
I love it!
I just made my first animation
ladytoothfairy 1 year ago
I wish to make a piece of poetry to define the emotion of others, please subscribe to me because I might be making videos reading off poetry of mine.
hailztotherawwwr 1 year ago
that's an awsome poem. Period.
toocoolone1 1 year ago
Beautiful poetry read by beautiful women...search - Silkworms Ink
TheAmpersandMan 1 year ago
It was simple. But that is what makes it good.
BryanToomey 1 year ago
Weak.
Poemsapennyeach 1 year ago
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PoetaIncognita 1 year ago
true poetry in the making.
godsonstoned 1 year ago
What the hell was that?
fastfatty987 1 year ago
i love poetry but this peice sucks very badly im srry but i agree.
FerSureLissa 1 year ago
that was a beautiful animation. thanks for making my day!
stoplookingatmexuan 1 year ago
Beautifully animated and i love the poem!
kijkopdewereld 1 year ago
eating and sandwich XD
goldmetaman 1 year ago
Oh man, this is so deep. Wait.....no......it was just gas.
dirtypants428 1 year ago
LMAO
gaysucks1 1 year ago
(This got long but dammit I'm posting it!) "They watch the tops of our heads" at 1st blush seems a literalist's failure of imagination - but since that's surely not the full import, the point is... What? That our forebearers reckoned too much concerning the afterlife? That we have failed our fathers' vision, so only such absurdly slanted 'what ifs' remain? That once vital human spaces have indeed become so debleted, abandoned, so lamely literal?
marmas58ink 1 year ago
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marmas58ink 1 year ago
(PART 2) It's light verse, perhaps. (seems I've read more than one reviewer crit. BC as such.) or OTOH handles it's implications lightly/deftly.
And the ending, they fear we can see them too?! (Like parents to resume a few hrs' rounder life once the kids are 'put down'.) Or, eyes closed,
marmas58ink 1 year ago
(PART 3) they can finally enter our dreams, (an even older idea of the departed) rejoin us, involve us in their larger lives, ours having grown shallow in unseeing... our dreams (of older ways of living) the last field of a richer, fertile imagining?
"Tender is the Night". (Fitz's image of DD turning out the light.) There is a warmth at the close, a shared dark, a sense of joining.
marmas58ink 1 year ago
when you read that much into a poem, you destroy what makes it beautiful in the first place
breeeegs 6 months ago
@breeeegs I can definitely agree. Still sometimes I like to try interpret a poem the way you might an interesting dream. I don't think it comes down to reading TOO much into it though!
My pro. gtrist friend said reducing a song to a mere series of chords DOES often take away some of its magic. Like trying to see a poem as a series of chimes struck (creating harmonies, dissonances etc, creating thematic structure) I guess. It's fun, worthwhile... but more like a dream, it can never be so precise.
marmas58ink 6 months ago
@marmas58ink Wow...I really don't understand what your point is here. You didn't really make one though so that's probably why.
Your verbiage is giving me a headache...
Ben2242 1 year ago
I think he's saying people believe you go to heaven when you die, and then he proceeds to describe some imagined implications of that in a clever way. I think it's pretty good, because of the "drugged perhaps, by the hum of a warm afternoon" line, and there's a veiled cynicism throughout that I share.
insertsloganhere 2 years ago
care to share why the cynicism?
st3phanie2002 2 years ago
There's a common reference in western culture to loved ones who have died "looking down on us", which taken literally, results in the strange imagery and unlikely scenarios described throughout. I didn't intend my interpretation as a condemnation of religious faith. Everyone has the right to believe in whatever they wish. I was only commenting on his description of the highly unlikely proposition that the dead retain their physical form in some way and sit up in the sky "looking down on us".
insertsloganhere 2 years ago
Meh
NietzscheanMan 2 years ago
hii :)
plz see my freinds poem, i think u may like its the same style
watch?v=RNg8G9Qes1k
peace
mado9111 2 years ago
Maybe it is too deep for me, but I don't like the poem. The animation is kinda cool.
Hellboy667 2 years ago
Nothing is the only thing that's perfect.
bawdmawn 2 years ago
nothings perfect
bawdmawn 2 years ago
I wonder, why this video doesn't have 5 complete stars? it's a good poem with a good animation... 5 stars
edgaram69 2 years ago
I read some of his work and they are pretty amazing!
kylemorne100 2 years ago
Oh, wow...my favorite line: "the glass-bottomed boats of heaven." So beautiful!
poofbegone29 2 years ago 14
Wonderful!
smartbluecat 2 years ago
bizzarro
xlxDaGxlx 2 years ago
I love it!!!
PromethianLight 2 years ago
beautiful the animation works excellent with the poem and the voice!
ebbsingen 2 years ago
Hum of a warm afternoon... Awesome poem
stennisl 2 years ago
interesting O_o;; ((BECCA WAS HERE -go stiegal!!!-))
whsdancer123 2 years ago
Teh guy is a poet and that is great, but I still think I have written better. Not trying to offend anyone who loves his work or anything, but yeah.
Veganizemecapn 2 years ago
Veganizemecapn, I checked. You haven't. ;-) It ain't bad, it just ain't better.
scart69net 2 years ago
Yes, I agree, you are much better.
teainthesahara 2 years ago
it was pretty dam decent of him to lend his voice to stephen hawkins.
markwhat44 2 years ago 3
hahahahhaa
osamauremama 2 years ago
Subtle humour 0:15 they row their boat rowing in the wrong direction
zozovii 2 years ago
I love all his work!
OracleX 2 years ago
Great video =D
scripteur09 2 years ago
human nature.
good and bad,
love and hate,
poor and rich,
friend and enemy,
sad and happy,
housed and homeless,
aalive and dead.
THATS LIFE im afraid.
forestgumpaed 2 years ago
This is beautiful. Great animation.
mySTEREOFiDELiC 2 years ago
i love this! great animation and the poem is very interesting
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MrRancher02 2 years ago
I don't think Mr. Collins would appreciate that.
FleshTorturer 2 years ago 7
i think that poster is referring to the reader doing a dedication; many authrs pau homage to deceased greats, sungers do the same ting with re-makes if ckassic songs, when done with skill and good taste everyone loves it. U think Mr Collins - and his heirs - might appreciate such a dedication.
reneforallitsworth 2 years ago
@FleshTorturer if i were mister collins, id be glad someone liked my poem so much that they went to all that work to show others the poem in a different way
gwenfruity 1 year ago
This is amazing
kalixfornia 2 years ago
i have to memorize this poem, this helps
randomxselena 2 years ago
Weird, but so nice
GamekeeperX 2 years ago
wird
fractallaaake 2 years ago
really nice
tranzitthawt 2 years ago
weird...cool.
PyroIsPoetry 2 years ago
wow.. That was Great.. love how the animation works with it!~~:))
zaraaaazar 2 years ago
That was cool.
ThinkingVisually 2 years ago
that's not true, maaan! the dead want braaaaainz
m4lvolio 2 years ago
cool
i saw this in class today
PivotAvenger 2 years ago
hello i love you.
laceyissparkly 2 years ago
interesting.
jess16saint 2 years ago
Nice poem. He sounds like Microsoft Sam.
MusicalEutopia 2 years ago 3
this is good poem
butterfish21 2 years ago 3
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thats cool but not to be mean but r u EMO
pu3rchaotic 2 years ago
ah yes, pu3rchaotic, finally i found someone i can drive a nail through, you being one with no emotion and all. it'll be fun, it's sanitized and i'll even do the cleanup.
thisIsSteveC 2 years ago
i thought this was gonna be a sinister poem wen i saw i.. now such luck ='(
DarkestItachi 3 years ago
nicely animated....
danmessias 3 years ago
creepy
allyourevilbase 3 years ago
interesting
Woethepoeticmind 3 years ago
On Sunday, 12th October 2008, the Jury of the 4th ZEBRA Poetry Film Festival decided. The ZEBRA Prize for the best Poetry Film went to Juan Delcán, USA for the film 'The Dead', based on the poem 'The Dead' by Billy Collins.
A project of the Literaturwerkstatt Berlin in cooperation with interfilm Berlin.
zancomo 3 years ago 2
i love this project ;)
shapeofabox 3 years ago 3
This is great
Runo2123 3 years ago
cool stuff.
higgyhackford 3 years ago 4
Words for a hippie funeral...not bad I suppose, if you're a hippy.
This would also word in a horror film...
Or as an introduction to a psychedelic rock song...
Or something a kid would recite to their grandparents to get on their nerves.
video7audio 3 years ago
Billy does better when he avoids philosophy. I like the animation, though. This one needs to be "beaten with a rubber hose" to get the meaning out in the open, where we can vote on it.
johnjohnson68510 3 years ago
ooooo do it do it do it do it
lol
statham8200 3 years ago
do wat u nutter...
lmao.. mii chicken just fell over teehee!!!
lambojivequeen 3 years ago
i do believe she did
lol
statham8200 3 years ago
no hun grammer, is shit as in verb, u know it is bein shit rite now type fing!!! an yes i did, even i can write better dan dis!!
lambojivequeen 3 years ago
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this peom is SHIT!!
lambojivequeen 3 years ago
THE shit. this poem is THE shit, my friend. because, obviously, you didnt just insult a former poet laureate of the united states?
XcaptainXobliviousX 3 years ago 2
A masterpiece all around!
MortySklar 3 years ago 3
boss this laaa
hansfree007 3 years ago
nice film, is it based on a true story?
wiffybiffy 3 years ago
Yes. I believe so.
jasonstheory 3 years ago
watch this film at ZEBRA Poetry Film Festival in Berlin! 9th to 12th October at Cinema Babylon:Mitte
Poesiefilmchen 3 years ago
hello
Poesiefilmchen 3 years ago
wow. That was really great.
PhiladelhiaWolf 3 years ago
marmas, I'm taking your advice. Will buy one of BC's books today.
Billy Collins was a 2-term Poet Laureate of the US, and Poet Laureate of New York. I admire his fearlessness about being funny and charming - he's criticized for it by some. There is always a bit of surprise in the humor (the disarming element) and always truth.
satnitcboy 3 years ago 2
this is great! really great! Love the animation & voiceover.
uberdansounds 3 years ago
the voice is actually billy collins himself
house25 3 years ago 3
Can yo uguys give me a poetry words a lovely one and funny ones because I want to give it to my girlfriend PLEASE SEND IT TO ME ^_^
imao07 3 years ago
i fink u shuld try 2 rite her 1 urself, i im she she like urs better, even if its shit, rather dan 1 a total stranger rote 4 u! after all dey dnt kno her or how beautiful she is, but u do!
lambojivequeen 3 years ago
Billy Collins is probably more popular than he should be ... or at least judging by the # of Utube views (zoo you too, remember that one?). 675thousand+??!! For a poet? Surprising. ...not in a bad way ... now everybody go buy one of his books.
marmas58ink 3 years ago
Perfect words. Perfect animation. Perfect narration.
castlemoat 3 years ago 3
Didn't realise stephen hawkins was asked to read this?
Lol.
Incredible poem tho.
allthekentsmen 3 years ago
hey i found that guy all u were looking for. he is just posting more of his work online on his blog. cant beleive i found him. his site is loveslaws(blogspot(com
booge53 3 years ago
...through the glass bottom boats of heaven, as they row themselves slowly through eternity..."
(great phrasing and imagery)
This is perfect and amazing. I love it!!
COPPERHEAD842 3 years ago 2
This guy is great. Thanks.
agile1111 3 years ago
i like it but by just saying the dead almost makes it scary...alot of people have died that i would want to be watching over me
if it was people that have died that i love then this is loevely :)
MahinaSinger 3 years ago
das kapier ich nicht
Cloud1992abc 3 years ago
i enjoy how the poem uses modern everyday things like sandwiches and shoes whilst using the surreal content and interesting imagery as a sharp affective contrast.
hamy515 3 years ago 2
if you listen very closely (you might need to wear headphones), you can hear the teeny tiny sound of the girl taking a puff of her cigarette.
ThatShortGirl5 3 years ago
i love this...
CrazyToya16 3 years ago
graceful and beautiful imagery...
MilesMuhldoon 3 years ago
sick . all of it! SILLY I LOVE YOU
peteoet9 3 years ago 2
I like the poem.
bipolarscizo 3 years ago 2
PS If you have a comment then send it on the website - thumbs up or down is boring!
prosaicwritings 3 years ago
You are so right! I absolutely despise people who, instead of discussing (or fighting) their difference in views, just simply give you a thumbs up or down. I bet I'm going to get at least 2 thumbs down right now.
Nickthejedi1 3 years ago 4
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prosaicwritings 3 years ago
I got so inspired! Wonderfull!
MalmoSofia 3 years ago
I liked it. =)
Lynar2324 3 years ago 2
If you like this poem (like I do, I love it) you should check out 'Across The Clouds' by JNeffLind. It's animated poetry in the same style as Billy Collins. Fun, unpretentious, but meaningful. I tried to post it as a video response here but for some reason they won't let me.
Best,
J
JNeffLind 3 years ago
I swear this man is a genious.
Nickthejedi1 3 years ago
Beautiful. I must assume this was featured by Youtube??? It deserves its own glass case in the virtural display. Beautiful imagery. I imagine a new canvas on the walls of art shows. Poetry in motion.
Neotrific 3 years ago
Billy Collins is called the most accessible poet of our time. I love his imagery. I really enjoy the interpretation depicted in this animation. Good work!
ShutlOrbit 3 years ago
I really must say this is amazingly good and it deeply moves ppl
silasiscool 3 years ago
The animation is okay.
jakvid 4 years ago
It's better than 'ok'... in fact it's awfully darn good.
The movements are very purposeful... forces and weights 'feel' right.
The style is very light and airy as befits the poem.
venusboys3 4 years ago 3
cant u see the simpleness of animation so the poent would be more close to humanity?
AkanMeister1 3 years ago
can sum1 PLZ help me..i dont understand it but duin it as as levels PLZ PLZ PLZ EXAPLIN!!
bhangrachick 4 years ago
hello bhangrachick, "the dead" analysed in a summary? "wait like parents for us to close our eyes" is them waiting for us to join them, when we die (close our eyes). the whole poem is very relaxed, doing ordinary things like "making a sandwhich" "putting on our shoes" "in a field or on a couch" these are all ordinary things, this is meant to make the reader/listener/interpreter feel more understanding and feeling for the aspects of the poem.
hardstreetbambi 4 years ago
that they are lifting their oars again at the end and waiting, is because they are waiting for us to die, so that they can "row themselves slowly through eternity" with us. this is what i have guessed, anyway!
hardstreetbambi 4 years ago
uhh! this is very very very... good!
374Lon 4 years ago
It's really beautifoul! I've written some poems myself
SarahsLittleIsland 4 years ago
Nice poem and animation.
The guy kind of sounds like he needs to escape his "white bread" life though.
I'm still waiting for the drug commercial
and all that pleasant scenery on the tv, that type of voice.
jjhunter916 4 years ago
Bravo. I am sending this out to friends and family. It's beautiful.
arezentes 4 years ago
i loved the illistrations..i write poetry and am getting kinda well known for it in my town..writing's how i speak basically. i love it.
avenger0507013 4 years ago
Hey this is neat! I love it.
Enright9591 4 years ago
I loved it. This is great.
taurusbrooklyn 4 years ago
I enjoyed it. Short and different. Going to check out the rest of your work now...
accesssacramento 4 years ago
nice linebreak: drugged perhaps/
by the hum of a warm afternoon
axd3392 4 years ago
great mophing.
juzme09 4 years ago
shit, what a fucking asshole you are. He´s just giving an opinion, and one I agree with, a little. The voice is a little too dull and makes it sound uninteresting instead of giving that "dead" feeling to it.
you exaggerate too much, asshole.
YOSOL 4 years ago
I'm with daywithering, it's supposed to be dull. I wouldn't want that read any other way.
Prefect poem, perfect reading, perfect animation.
MisterLobster 4 years ago
Agree with you with the poem, but doesn´t the voice sound a little bit too... ummm... "computer-like"?
it´s perfect, I like it alot and the animation too, but the voice sounds like if it was taken off the computer... I don´t know,maybe it´s just me.<