The Yellow House (part one)

[theripper7675]

great poem

[tiesarefun]

-begins to cry hysterically-

i think i have indeed found another amazingly beautiful/creative/DID I SAY AWESOME/wonderful channel, becuz you are not only an awesum writer ur an AWESUM WRiter

-punches the subscribe button like my life depends on it- ^_^

[TheBrokenGentleman]

*sips tea* ♥

[irisheyes4you]

being a poetry fan, I loved your poems. Just found your channel today, so going to subscribe, great poems.

[eddusfledermaus]

thank you so much! I've got one more video in this sequence, after that I'll be recording some single pieces, much more poetry to come!

[fetchmemyaxe]

im not a massive fan of poetry; yet i loved this, especially the fragmented nature of the piece. It feels like memories resurfacing.

[eddusfledermaus]

aw, thank you! I'm pleased you liked it! I was worried people would find it a bit confusing.

[davis911228]

I don't think it is the slightest bit confusing. I think it's relatively literal at times. It sounds like journal entries. It's good and has a nice rhythm. It's the performance that sells it. It looks like you made an extra effort to make this video somber.

[PatchworkPorpoise]

Beautiful. I want to smile and weep at the same time!

[eddusfledermaus]

aww, thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it!

[raullara]

thoroughly enjoy this :)

[eddusfledermaus]

I'm glad you liked it! I was worried it would make people cringe!

[NurseStefan]

I'm weak, thank you.

[eddusfledermaus]

Thank you!

[audionautix]

I have had a casual relationship with poetry my whole life. We pass on the street on occasion. I do know enough to know you are very good. This seems so...intimate. Like I shouldn't be intruding.

Such a space...a banquet.

[eddusfledermaus]

aww, thank you very much, that's a wonderful compliment! You are very welcome at the banquet, don't worry!