The author is scorchingly aware of the primal forces which truly conduct human behavior. For example, the lines referencing enslavement and worship speak to the hierarchy in which all living things exist, with its implicit struggle for dominance, the engine of evolution. Also consider the Oedipal context of the conclusion with its hint of fleshly appetite
Many have considered such forces, but few in such a personal and honest manner, and fewer yet with such a profound gift of expression*****
I often feel enslaved by silence these days, it is so frightening to speak.
Sometimes I think we are all they have left, and all we have left is that hunger to understand, for truth is the opening flower and trust is rain upon the parched land.
this is a masterpeice. i think that ill worship the silence because in the end for me i have not a choice. for in the grip of gold i could not stand aside for i am held from the inside.
LOVE IS THE ENERGY - It's transcends all - passes thru many - just tune the receiver - and feel it all around you. Spirit of life if not for the love - a barren desert without sun - a purposeless walk thru time - a connection orphaned - a dry tear duct - life has no meaning if not for love - enriched energy awakening the soul - to new and renewed strength - an essence that never dies - and lives thru transceivers - in every form of life. (I'd have left this on your front page - if twas possible)
wow, didn't see that end coming. intriguing and pleasant to watch. imho, only to enhance audience apprec. - i would not use typing font, because a wipe or fade in might match the gentle guitar better...hard to read the words when they are moving. volume of guitar over-powers your voice, and you have a great voice, hard to hear your words sometimes. really enjoyed this!!
don't buy it - art is art - be you... with total license to please oneself - and perchance it may attract interest of another - and you know the interest is reality duality parallel... or buy it - to sell it... and wonder! Now that's MY opinion! ;=]
I relate to the loved my brother more - can you spell traumatized - for life - ... It's a hue - that tints.. that maybe few - know the lens - which filters - and focuses - and blurs... a permanent glitch - which allows the thought - "fuck that bitch". Moving prose AnnE M - I see the "T" - and she was good!
SO TRUE, SO HONEST.
LOVELY VOICE, TOO.
THANKS!
WingedDow 1 year ago
Ace... just finished listening
listening again and again and again...
respect from Dublin
sweeney1965 3 years ago
thank you! ^_^
much love from arizona! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 2 years ago
I love this, I look forward to more of your videos
Beautiifulliarxoxo 3 years ago
thank you my dear! ^_^
i'll do my best not to disapoint ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
deep!
this one gets 2 snaps as well
RaxxieSpeaks 3 years ago
right on! ^_^ thank you!
hugs for you!! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
The author is scorchingly aware of the primal forces which truly conduct human behavior. For example, the lines referencing enslavement and worship speak to the hierarchy in which all living things exist, with its implicit struggle for dominance, the engine of evolution. Also consider the Oedipal context of the conclusion with its hint of fleshly appetite
Many have considered such forces, but few in such a personal and honest manner, and fewer yet with such a profound gift of expression*****
bootleggersouth 3 years ago
you consider deeply a great many things...
it makes me very fond of you! ^_^
your perspective is refreshing and i look forward to more of you! ^_^
we may very well be two sides of the same coin... ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
All I know is that my soul recieves your words as a religious communion.
bootleggersouth 3 years ago
i offer them willingly as flesh and blood for a new rebirth ^_^ to be recieved was the only thing missing... thank you! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
wow totally unbelievable poetry. thanks for posting!
RICKNASTE 3 years ago
cool words and smooth jazz a great combo I enjoyed it!!!
malfattimusic 3 years ago
thank you! ^_^
so glad you enjoyed it!
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Whoaa, this is amazing! I love your style.
NeishaAnnTV 3 years ago
thank you! ^_^
i'm so glad you took the time to listen!
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
What a killer last line! Lovely.
smartbluecat 3 years ago
thank you my dear! ^_^
i appreciate you swingin' by to have a listen!
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
A great reading and awesome video Too *****stars;)
Kabuki0009 3 years ago
thank you so much! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Ahh AnnE, AnnE, this is great!
Easy
ezseeker 3 years ago
thank you so mush Easy! ^_^
i'm getting so excited...
i'm thinking of jumping the gun...
i just can't wait to lay my truth stuff on ya!
^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Love your stuff! Your a great poet!
christopherinsc1981 3 years ago
thank you again ^_^
and the feeling is mutual for sure!!
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Breathtaking, breathtaking...
You're an inspiration.
I often feel enslaved by silence these days, it is so frightening to speak.
Sometimes I think we are all they have left, and all we have left is that hunger to understand, for truth is the opening flower and trust is rain upon the parched land.
In these webs the dew is glinting.
RainyJuly 3 years ago
now it is my breath that is taken ^_^
it was my fondest wish in all this that i might reach you (and those like) ^_^
your words are beautiful and prove to me that i have... so thank YOU! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Often hated for what we desire.
Very true. 5 stars
ellyunfortunetly 3 years ago
thank you! ^_^
but doesn't it feel good sometimes?
the truth is the truth...
even if we are the only ones who know it ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Will you worship the silence?
Or will the silence enslave you?
Maybe I will become the silence itself, and know peace, knowing silence is an integral part of me.
Very, very good.
yawehking 3 years ago
thank you! ^_^
you are wise to know that differance...
and beautiful for your wisdom ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
5/5
spiderskull999 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Sometimes I also wonder?
5 stars !!!
oneangryspirit 3 years ago
but hopefully never for too long ^_^
thanx for listening and thanx for wondering! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
I like this. I think a video of silence would be something good too...making people stop a little!! Enjoyed your recording - thank you :) Sunbeam
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
thank you so much! ^_^
i like your idea too, that would be interesting ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
true poetry in every word you spoke.
just wonderful and lovely use of words.
kgekeg 3 years ago
thank you! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
your very welcome! ^_^
kgekeg 3 years ago
A class act all the way - five stars
DavidRandallCurtis 3 years ago
thank you!
i try ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
You know.. That may be your thing.. Words and no face.. I like it..
Great poem. Love it.. The words are so true. Great music.
Pººhßear
PoohBear02003 3 years ago
thank you so much! ^_^
who knows, it might be...
but then again you never know...
we shall see said the blind ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
sometimes i wonder
if id be any good
at making someone happy
like a person should
sometimes i wonder
if how i feel is bad
but then i see the words you write
and i dont feel so sad
xx
ashtray999 3 years ago
^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
introspective as a vision under the stars wondering
twdmusic 3 years ago
thank you! ^_^
i enjoy the way your heart sees ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
this is a masterpeice. i think that ill worship the silence because in the end for me i have not a choice. for in the grip of gold i could not stand aside for i am held from the inside.
wolfgang8u 3 years ago
^_^
you delight me more than words could express!
^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
You do have a gift, so keep on wondering!
1Axeman1 3 years ago
thank you so much!!
your comments have really made me smile ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Smooth poetry, vocals and music. Refreshing. Gotta listen to them all.
yixiazi 3 years ago
thank you so much! ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Good job! Nicely done!! And thank you for subscribing to me.
thatvegasguy 3 years ago
LOVE IS THE ENERGY - It's transcends all - passes thru many - just tune the receiver - and feel it all around you. Spirit of life if not for the love - a barren desert without sun - a purposeless walk thru time - a connection orphaned - a dry tear duct - life has no meaning if not for love - enriched energy awakening the soul - to new and renewed strength - an essence that never dies - and lives thru transceivers - in every form of life. (I'd have left this on your front page - if twas possible)
CommentSense 3 years ago
^_^
i'll open my page to comments just for you
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
wow thats deep. you think differently than others. thats a good trait.
justcdog 3 years ago
thank you very much!
i feel the same way about you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Awesome!
finsburyparksk8er 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
hmmm ...interesting 5*
wTARTZAw 3 years ago
hmmm... ^_^ thank you!
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Excellent, excellent.
rhosebard 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
wow, didn't see that end coming. intriguing and pleasant to watch. imho, only to enhance audience apprec. - i would not use typing font, because a wipe or fade in might match the gentle guitar better...hard to read the words when they are moving. volume of guitar over-powers your voice, and you have a great voice, hard to hear your words sometimes. really enjoyed this!!
BedheadBlog 3 years ago
thank you for the compliments ^_^
and thank you for the suggestions too ^_^
i'm still learning all this "technology" stuff, but i think i'll get the hang of it eventually ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
don't buy it - art is art - be you... with total license to please oneself - and perchance it may attract interest of another - and you know the interest is reality duality parallel... or buy it - to sell it... and wonder! Now that's MY opinion! ;=]
CommentSense 3 years ago
^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
amazing! 5/5
TailstheGuardian 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Awesome & great awesome 5/5 XD
lycan305 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
awesome 5/5 great music!!
Cheesemonkey6699 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
I relate to the loved my brother more - can you spell traumatized - for life - ... It's a hue - that tints.. that maybe few - know the lens - which filters - and focuses - and blurs... a permanent glitch - which allows the thought - "fuck that bitch". Moving prose AnnE M - I see the "T" - and she was good!
;=]
CommentSense 3 years ago
thank you kindly...
though truth be told, i am the "bitch"
and the traumatized ^_^
i love it, but... "T"??
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
AnnT EM - Dorothy's aunt... ;=]
CommentSense 3 years ago
^_^
wow, now i am impressed!
hardly anyone gets that...
you are truely my kind ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Brilliant!
The scientifically impossible I do right away
The spiritually miraculous takes a bit longer
ClapSotronics 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
the path you walk is not for everyone...
but you walk it well ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
amazing ♥♥♥♥♥
VOCIFERLOL 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
you are so sweet!
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
Nice :D
cruelpn 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
very touching
50Dudes 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago
funny
coolsteven2 3 years ago
thank you ^_^
TheUnitedFreak 3 years ago