[Storyline RSMV] My Immortal [HD] (GROSS GORE PLEASE WATCH)

[dragzz1]

So good. I actually almost cried...

[DragonxxxFire]

A good rsmv doesn't need to have good effects or high popularity.

A good rsmv needs a good song with a good story.

[Credit91111]

You should enter this in the Golden Gnome Awards for this year too :o

[djpwnag3]

tht riped me open amazing kep att it def like 5stars and subed

[robbysaw]

holy shit r u a story writer best vid ive ever seen this made me subb respect hope to see more from you just awsome story is everything and youve shown it...

[Credit91111]

@Burningarrowpictures. Ohh, why? D: Your videos are amazzinngggg

[Credit91111]

Take great pride in your work. You say this is your first video, Sole, but it seems like you've made hundreds...This is just plain amazing... Of all the RSMV videos I have seen, this is by far the best one I have ever seen. The plot...The plot was so touching...I loved every momet of this video. You have amazing skills, I hope to be as good as you. Good luck with your other videos.

[BurningArrowPictures]

@Credit91111

Thanks for the long comment =O. In retrospect, I did spend a lot of time on this video, probably more so than any of my other videos. The video you helped me with last night (or this morning lol) is gonna be my last.

[WhyWeWont]

i love this..

[Skillfulcombat]

best rsvm ever made

[CitrineVlogging]

I accually cried and i'm still crying that was so touching

[darthbonsly]

Qwow this has enough relevance to my vid to be a prequel O-o.

[darthbonsly]

@darthbonsly how did i type in a q

[TheSpaceArena]

I cried during this video! It is so touching! :')

[smudgecraft]

wow, just wow i wish everyone could make Rsmv's Like you it was brilliant :')

[dougo3000]

Wow every time he comes down as a angle I get a shiver in my spine! This is amazing 10/10

[ltatherocklu]

4:53 and after - got teary eyed and my heart sank :'(

6:04 - let it all out

[50penguin]

in my life ive probably favourited 3 rsmvs and this is about to be one of them... plz can somebody tell me why it has 5k views

[aimster4560]

Amazing storyline, I loved it(: Great rsmv for it being back in 2009. <333.

[iHitLowest]

Well, since I'm so obsessed in using Photoshop, I'd probably use that to create that kind of scene ^_^

[iHitLowest]

I really love the bit when the guy's spirit comes back. That was VERY emotional, so hats off to you for doing that :]

If I was to edit that scene, at one point I'd edit a close-up scene with the guy touching the girl's cheek, just to create more emotional impact. :D

[coheedandtom]

Considering its RS, Damn good job.

[moondax]

I cried for this video, it's so touching!!!!!!

[dougo3000]

I got goosebumps when he came back as a angle.

Great vid

[TehTej]

normally, i don't favourite RSMVs.

this is just amazing.

[dougo3000]

i <3 it great vid =D

[angelzamy]

it made me cry ty for showing the world the meaning of that song and the meaning of love through a way that is not taken seriously but u made it as serious of even more serious then it could of been irl

[9606ivan]

are my eyes pising again :,( ? what did u use for record your vids? plz reply

[Diomonds4]

this was really awsome i love it but so sad

[Diomonds4]

omg make more

[flinzitor]

4:52 is just "WOAW" really!

[marcioleit]

Man, I really loved this <3

I think you like drama has i watch your videos, and let me tell you this, its perfect *.*

[Diomonds4]

Amazing... First time this song has ever made me cry wnhen I'm not singing it ...

[Joccy335]

what's the intro song?

[BurningArrowPictures]

@Joccy335

The Silk Road -Tan Dun

[TheEisDragon]

4:52 EPIC

[TheEisDragon]

This is AMAZING

[nicholasmarklincoln]

awesome video. gosh storyline owns too.

[kalay2008]

This is amazzzing! ;D

You seriously need to make more. ^^

[Iplayphone]

really nice. i liked the way you incorporated all of the items rs had to offer for this sort of vid. the ghost robes and then going back and having him follow her. nice touch

[apupnamedgrace]

:onice hope u win storyline

[TheHolyMannn]

i love it :) sub.

[SaradominStar]

i like this :)

good job!

[SaradominStar]

i like this :)

good job!

[BurningArrowPictures]

@makeupislifefyi

A Love Before Time - Coco Lee

[deathtoearth666]

You are without a doubt the best video maker. Both of your videos have such a raw emotional core. The storyline is pure perfection. By the ending sequence I was already in tears. You deserve to have much more subs. I can vision a career in film for you. The script was brilliant. This IS the best RS video on youtube, and probably the best video on youtube.

[Andr3wco7]

Both of your videos had amazing storylines. I found a new great video-maker.

[zac12897]

story line is so good. 1:23 and i already commenting

[Xs0uthX]

OMG 5/5 IF i could rate!! just watching the storyline was GR8 Already and 2 mins of this vid made me sub :D

[Spore19962010]

OMG AMASING 5/5 I LOVE IT VERY SAD.

[0gawjuz0]

so sad... "sniffle

[whistlechris]

y do you choose the really girly type songs??

[yoyayoya101]

that was great. i didn't think that i would be good since there was no voices but i guess it made it more epic. anyway, the part during the song when the camera was turning and the guy disappeared at about 4:38 was just amazing! 5/5 (if i could rate)

[NutzCracked]

This was just too amazing. Great job! 5/5!

[warriorl22]

wow , love the story line :) very touching.The music suits the video alot also that smashes my first vid :)

[BurningArrowPictures]

Thanks, I try to choose the best song for the credits of my videos.

[Qruuz]

Yeah, it's a great song

And also the way they look so professional... =o

[simle505]

i dident like the song but who cares? most amasing storyline ive ever seen!!!

[TheBer352]

Really nice, great story! =D

[DimensionnX]

Great storyline! Very well done! Could do with a few more effects to add emotion/synchronize with the song. 5 stars for sure!

[ClaSecreto]

Simply perfect

Loved it do much :')

*Edu Boy PT*

[lolmaster455]

wait , ? didnt you put this is another RSMV competition too?

i reconise this vid in thousands ..

[pandafi96]

wow awesome storyline =D

gratz on winning the contest

[AznKhmyboy]

Best Vid Ever.

[MarkACurtis]

omg i luved it!!

[staceymp0wnz]

you're so amazing. you deserve way more views and subscribers. i loved it. if i could rate if would be 5/5 ofcourse : )

[4Ownedproductions]

grtz

[Sugarplum241]

that was bloody amazing!! :(

[rafeiro1993]

Congratulation on the Best Storyline,

Subscribed :)

[Tehpinkproductions]

Seriously almost made me cry dude very well done, one of the best video i've ever seen..

[runescapetaco1]

Omg omg omg omg omg

that was amazing. the storyline was perfect and the intro was awesome. best rsmv ever ! this deserves so much more views

add me on rs sparky6268

10/5

[nolaf3]

nice story never think about at myself!!!!

[4nightsvengeance]

touching, you've got talent. :)

[InvokedFury]

Dude I've been searching since 2006 to say this to someone...

That was the most amazing video I've ever seen. NO RSMV has EVER made me cry before and feel so touched. You are amazing, and I can't wait to see more!

5/5, sub, favorite, comment!

[eminemzero56]

lol?

[WalnutWallet]

I will be thinking of my girlfriend everytime I here this song, that was amazing.

[OnlineGamer117]

I don't say this too often, or actually, i don't think i have ever said this..

You are a very talented director!

[Kikki118]

I loved the first part of the storyline.. well the storyline in general, but it didn't affect me from the middle and out. Still good though :)

[Caboc5]

Wow.. VERY NICE!!

Its not often that you watch videos that have such an emotional impact on you. Very well done!

[despairbring]

breathaking.

[ykmankyl]

another thing, is just wow

honestly, like the intro to the end. i just realized but. it really gave me goosebumps watching this because its so well put together.

from the the green screen effects you used in the "haunting" line

from when the man disappears behind a tree right as she says "tell myself that you're gone"

its all just, wow. amazing video.

we need more video makers like you (:

~Yk

[ykmankyl]

because so far. this isnt just you're first RSMV. its you're first video IN GENERAL.

and already you have it flooded with comments about how they understood the story, and actually cry over what they saw.

thats a true work of art when you touch viewers THAT deeply with something that you yourself created.

and on you're first time?

thats absolutely amazing 'o_O

[ykmankyl]

wow. thats really something when you can actually touch somebody emotionally through songs and editing and such. its honestly amazing that this is you're first video and first rsmv (:

you'r already familiar with the editing tools and everything an experienced video maker would take ages to learn :o

if this is you're first approach to video making, then im eager to see how you entertain people in the future :D

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[jtlegends]

This has a great, making people cry, storyline...it made me cry...

This is really touching, death is something terrible.

If the one you love the most dies...You wouldn't be sure what to live for anymore..you just want to be with that one.

I know what i'm telling you right now, this has happend to me...

Thanks for reminding me of the good times with her.

[greengirlbecca]

that made me cry :'(

a truely beautiful rsmv, the best i've seen yet. you're extremely talented and would be a great director one day.

5 stars, sub and favorite :)

[polorunescape5]

Wow...just wow

What an original piece of brilliant film-making. This is the most breathtaking and powerful directing debut I have ever seen. You will be the first master director of this RSMV making generation...I know you will.

5/5 Bravo

[12blair12]

Favorited, ilove it.. made me cry,

im a guy , i know what its like though.

[dazeno24]

wow this almost made me cry o.o

[breached25]

oh my god.. that is very emotional too me, and i'm a guy, if this doesnt affect your mood by making you sad, you have no heart!!

[Dakotaisemo23]

Im I guy and this is actually kind of touching.

[rspicto]

You'd make one hell of a director.

[YouAreAllFreaks]

beautiful

[nekotheduper]

man i cried so hard because it made me think of my dad i miss him so much your teh best video maker ive seen yet. and prolly will be the best

[Lightfire770]

Wow this was really outstanding. Considering its your first RSMV I can tell you can be one of the best vid makers today.

The storyline was flawless in my opinion, editing as well, when he came back, I sorta felt happy but sad too. Not many RSMV do that, this showed what true love is.

[StickWasHere]

I understood it so much, I wanna die for the girl I love now, but, I don't think I can. :'(

Kyleigh <3 (I love you forever. and it'll stay that way, forever until the day I die, I will not let you down, I will fill in your blanks in your life. I will not let go. I will not step on you, I will pick you up. Forever)

[zezomax1]

This video almost made me cry.

[zezomax1]

This is an AMAZING storyline. I think you deserve 1000000000000000000000000x more views!

[TheTouche007]

That was an amazing storyline. I'm really impressed with the ambitious scope of this video. Not many suceed in making such a monyumental video for their first one. This video is a landmark storyline RSMV. Almost had me crying 5/5

[Eitei3]

Beautiful!! :D

[lolmaster455]

omg !!!!!

very very very very nice storyline !!!!!!!!!!!

99999999999/5

subbed!

[dawgs552080]

w00000t u did it u won 1st for storyline!!!!!!!!!!!w00000000t

~falcans 1~

[BenBoi173]

I'm impressed with you guys, you're pretty new on the scene and your comments seem to be popping up all over the place, the standard to which you work is incredible as opposed to all of the crap that gets posted here, you guys are musically talented in the examination side, you seemed to be able to pull the story out of, and execute the telling of it, quite well.

5 Stars, Subscription, Favourite.

[pol007koi]

really nie i hope to see more 5/5 , faved and subbed

[pol007koi]

i ment nice :p

[VictorUndead]

Amazing. All that comes to my head, kept me in suspense the whole video, when the song started I got a chill down my back.

5000/5

Subbed, and faved.

[m1rr03dmage5]

very good storyline some of the fake text looked a little crazy but there were a lot of good clips with editing that matched the storyline very well

Overall 5/5 would rate higher if i could

[MasterChris725]

wow, this is what every RSMV should be like...not a lot of effects and a great storyline....and a lot of hard work....

you did an amazing job for your first =)

congratulations.....a lot better then I could ever do.

[Chiszle]

Yep, now it looks easy to have an rsmv that isnt like luckybucket's vids.

[BurningArrowPictures]

I read your message about how everybody copies luckybucket...so, you're saying that this is original?

[zonerunescape100]

i say this is the best RSMV ever made no joke. the scope was breath taking and the storyline amazing. Defineitly set a standard for storyline rsmvs. So original and never seen.

-soz for bad english-

[kingmiddo]

are you the rock lol? filming all this :P

[BurningArrowPictures]

Yup, most of it lol...a lot of scenes took a loooooooong time to film.

[xxDaredevil20xx]

This was very amazing, the first rsmv that I felt emotions while watching. My body was shivering through some parts of it. Very nice!

5/5 x 100000000

[AcademyAwardsRS]

This is simply the best storyline-based RSMV, and one of the best one RSMVs overall. The storyline was thrilling and heart-wrenching at the same time. Emotionally resonating...This is definitely going to be one of my nominations in my contest.

5/5

[BurningArrowPictures]

Wow...tbh I thought you were gonna flame my vid. I saw you flame Tehmutednoob's vid (which I thought was pretty good ):

Thanks anyway

[EvnaOfficial]

Simply amazing. My favorite RSMV officially :)

[tehnoobtvshow]

I agree with Polo, the "stretching is a good thing". Idk why people are complaining about the stretching, it's not even really stretching. He just showed the whole character and the scenery. It's genios how he showed the scenery, it made it feel more theatrical and it helped us connect with the characters. The creative transitions through the windows,fireplace and lake were very creative. the storyline was amazing. it felt like a movie. best storyline i have ever seen. 5/5 fo sho

[polorunescape2]

Wow, and this was your first video AND RSMV? This is truly a monumental RSMV. It has such an epic scope, not to mention an emotionally-wrenching story. I believe that this will become a landmark RS Video, for RSMV makers and Runescape Movie makers. As for the screen stretching, I thought it was a good thing. It helped with the atmosphere and scenery.

5/5

[warriorzin]

It's good but the storyline is rather cheesy.

Not to mention you got some screen stretching during the vid and it looks kinda un-pro.

BUT this is fucking amazing for a first rsmv.

Keep making videos and you'll get better, maybe you'll become like the noob box even?

5/5 Awesome first time video.

[fieldgranade3]

this IS your first rsmv!?!? this is too awesome to be first rsvm ;D this is just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­ooooooooooooooooo good to be first rsmv! subbed!

[oipjo]

Awesome video, must have taken a while to edit and let alone to make it. Nice work ;)

[dawgs552080]

iv watched this vid countless times and i love it more n more everytime good job

~falcans 1~

[BurningArrowPictures]

Don't forget to leave a comment; I'd really like to have some of your opinions.

-Noticing influx of ratings, but less comments-

[TourniquetLove]

Omg this is amazing.

[ElyahProductions]

Amazing storyline. Perfect editing, it wasn't over-edited. Very creative transitions. I really liked the parts when the camera went through the windows and the lake, I've never seen that before. You chose really good locations to film at. The storyline was brilliant. It was actually consistent throughout the whole RSMV. That's never been done before. I also loved the intro. It was epic. You're going to win best storyline for sure.

[Summerdaygirl]

Very good for a first video. (:

[Girochen]

very good video, especially for your first. High quality, a storyline, original transitions. One thing you should fix though (unless it was intended) was how a lot of the clips were stretched/squeezed to fit the screen.

[Loveisfun123]

amazing storyline totally agree its was perfect!! ♥

[ray1042]

Brilliant Storyline! I don't even know if it's even possible to make it better! It's a very strong video, and you've chosen perfect places to record... Thy God I love this video! This video gave me goosebumps because it's so strong! I'm gonna sub because YOU ARE INSPIRATIONAL!

[lol1993lol]

amazing storyline! This is one of the best rsmv's with storylines that I have ever seen! AND this is one of the few that made me crye a bit

:'(

Amazing work, keep it up

[LooneyNate]

1k viewer and amazing for your first rsmv ;]

[YouSuckProductionsz]

I didn't really like the editing, but since it's your first video, i understand that,

i REALLY liked the storyline, its the best i have EVER seen in a rsmv, maybe you should make videos like Evil Yakuza.

Great job, especially on the storyline 5/5

[BellaLaXeon]

Beautiful story line, absolutly amazing. Amazing for a first rsmv, well done. :)

[kizza12500]

OH MY GOD!

I Cried A Little :(

Such A Beautifully Touching Storyline,Filmed To Perfection, Filmed With Heart And Soul, Not Time And Impatience.

5/5 Great Work.

[TheTouche007]

Yo man this was one sick vid. defintly gonna win the contest. the intro was effin epic. when he blew that kiss i orgasmed. ending was genius. credits was amazing. watching this rsmv was like watchng a movie, i felt for these charcters. ur gonna make it far in life. i really liked ur locations, it was perfect. 5/5 4sure.

[At341rs]

i liked the vid =]... but not to be a hater, this is in my oppinion but i think that having a long intro gets people away from rsmv's :/ even so edited nicely :D and for a first vid awsome =]

[cheal9]

I thought it was very good, I loved the storyline. :D

So sweet. :3

[rsvideos4life]

This is a revoulutionary video. It's the first RSMV to have a CONSISTENT storyline. The editing is perfect. It doesn't have all the unescessary flashes. The storyline is the best i've EVER seen in any RSMV. The locations chosen for the RSMV are spectcaular. The screenplay is very touching and very beautifully written. This is a guarantee for Best storyline and best overall video and editing.

[VoldamortX]

This.. is beyond epic. The storyline fits amazingly well with this song. It shows you put in a lot of effort into everything. I'm hoping you're in the top, on the September Contest because you definitely deserve it.

This video is honestly too good to even rate a 5/5 :P

[racons2]

WOW!!! that was incredible!! amazing !! loved the storyline! and the effects were perfect!! 5/5 faved

[Dead4life9]

my heart shizzles when the guthix gives a blow kiss to his gf at 1:19

[thrasher829]

I like the general storyline of the video, and the light editing, because it is obviously not need, but, why is the video stretched out so oddly?.

If it wasn't like this, the video would have been 20x better, if you ask me.

Storyline WAS one of (if not the) best in an RSMV, but I can't get over that stretching...

[LOOSYGOOSandTNT]

WOW this is ur FIRST?! no way. the storyline fit the song just perfectly, idk how u did it tbh xD only thing is what other people have said, the close ups, and the text sometimes being like stretched, otherwise it was amazing, the storyline was consistent throughout the whole video, something not many ppl do. i just...wow...no way thats a first video, lmao i was watching the intro like talking to the screen going dont do it#$%&# that doesnt happen often ill tell u that.

[SkylarkLenny]

That was a VERY interesting take at an RSMV.

Your creativity in transitions was very nice. Your placement of characters and harmony between colors and atmosphere was really good.

The Story you created fit the song very nicely - although i was a little confused at first what happened between them, i caught on a little after lol. I liked your use of Green Screen to create landscapes. Careful with close-up scenes, the text came a little stretched and warped. Overall, nice vid good job :D 5/5

[BurningArrowPictures]

Thank you so much. I'm going to post a response to this comment on my channel. I'm really glad that you liked it.

Note:

Like yours, the one complaint I've received on this video are the close-ups. When you're referring to real close-ups, do you mean like the one at Mudskipper Point (cuz I used that one). Also, I know how it may appear that all I did was zoom up on the characters (especially when they're sitting), but I didn't.

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[BurningArrowPictures]

First, I got the close-ups of the characters at Mudskipper Point. Second, I took footage of an empty chair. Then, I green-screened the close-ups of the characters on the separate footage of the chairs so it would look like they were sitting.

If there is any way to improve my close-ups, please leave me a message.

[oxipureoxi]

omg dude well you had us there with u doing stuff for a loooong time..

[BurningArrowPictures]

Well, I hope you feel it was time well-spent. If not, I'm sorry for wasting your time =(

[oxipureoxi]

umm you forgot me? -- zach man81 wtf man

[BurningArrowPictures]

Sorry...

I said in the description that I had lost at least 9 extras. Apparently, you are one of them. I'll add you in the description.

[ColorMeCARL]

that was awesome!!

5/5 :D

[BurningArrowPictures]

Sorry, but I have to remove that comment. I'm really glad that you liked this RSMV, but I can't allow you to flame the judges...makes me look bad + I believe that everyone is entitled to their own opinions (I know that it looks like I'm blocking yours, but if you comment in a less "radical" way, I promise I won't remove it). Sorry

[Beserker333]

so touching

[TheJoeKenny]

siik vid, hard song to pick for your first RSMV but you fucking owned it i <3 it keep up good work, they can only get bettter

[monsterofcookiez]

Wow I actually HATED this song when I first heard it on the radio, but you made me like it with that story line, really sappy :P I liked it

5/5 fo sho..

[liamfrombb8]

...O_0 i wouldnt of thought that music would of gone that well , but i mean omg this is amazing and im not entering the september contest lool 5/5!

[ExtremeScaping]

Favourited and rated 5/5

Why i'm saying this, i'm saying it with a tear in my eye.

Definently some of the most amazing things i've ever seen done in a Runescape video.

So outstanding!

-Shadow of x7

[bestofrunescapevids]

cool video. nice storyline

faved it 5/5

[purpohpenguin]

dang bro wish i coulda helped more ;[

nice vid anyways, loved the storyline and the ending ;)-tape3 (99/99 magic)

[Sk8erbabe137]

wow!!!!!! 5/5 man! sick effects!

[W1CKED155]

good video mate 5/5 good story line =]

[xxbowen840xx]

Epic man =]. But my oppinion would be that its a very emotional rsmv, if you get what i mean. Its like life made into a video and I like it, 5/5, subbed, and added on yt =). Usually this wouldent be my kind of thing, im more of the hardcore edditing type, i know how to tell a good edit from a bad one ive watched enough vids... This is a good one, especially as its your first , very nice job man , keep going, keep at it sun =].

[BurningArrowPictures]

I'm really glad that you enjoyed this RSMV. For my first RSMV, I wanted to leave each viewer with the feeling that they just witnessed something great. However, I knew that as a beginner with Sony Vegas, I couldn't do it with editing alone. So, I worked on this storyline, and Elric supplied me with the script. I hope that each of you felt the way that xxbowen840xx did. Thank you for watching.

[Barca101000]

lol dude awsome ass vid

Its be gold from rs :P

Best movie i have ever seen!!!!!!!!

5/5 bro ur an awsome director!

[toldjya]

loved it.

[deathshot199]

Amazing... I am speechless... no words really to describe it but amazing... my favorite rsmv by far... 5/5, subbed, featured.

Aceofclubs37

[HellsDuo]

AMAZING! Just Phonomenal! (altho quality could be better in some parts) very Very VERY! Nice job!

Exelcent Storyline

Superb Actions/ Timming

Felt like an accual Theatrical Move/ Theater show!

[xDutchxNLxOwnt]

Hey , Nice video :) and cool storyline i think you'll make it far in the contest..

GL with it :)

[coldbold44]

you got best storyline for suree

[lightningxstruck]

At first I didn't get the storyline, but while I watched it I slowly got it :3

Great video and song choice ^^

Ella Lou c:

[BurningArrowPictures]

Thanks

[BurningArrowPictures]

Thanks for all the great comments ! I'm glad you liked the storyline !