the world is to hard, but dont stop tryin, niggas out hatin, dont stop, till yu retirin. i can serve it up, hotter then a fryin pan, im on my sunny d, and i can break yu lemonade stand. bitches want me cuz im the man, but i leave the game upside down like a hand stand. i could serve it up long, or i can keep goin, niggas on they cancer shit. im out livestronging....here come listen to ray, im the freshest mind walkin this earth on the greenest day...=]
yo i feel everything you sayin man and you said it in a way that your comfortable expressing yoself fuck what the hata's say keep at it if we quit doing what we do cause a someone elses negativity we aint had no right spittin in the first place
your mixing needs some work...it was hard listening to this. From what I heard it was okay...kinda generic on the whole "the worlds messed up" front... didnt really say anything new. but you have a nice flow!
Couldn't have summed it up better myself. It's very generic and generic hiphop doesn't sell. This is very comercial amatuer hip hop trying reincarnate the old days. To sell albums these days you really have to put 100% into every line you drop and don't rush tunes but work hard on 'em. This guy could go far with work, he's a damn good rapper.
This is a very good song! This beats all that no talent stuff like talking about money and how many chains you got. This is talking about a story. That's some real shit right there! I agree with nyckillaheat, this should be in a movie or something.
see u listen to cormega nd dis shit nice
makavelisaucy 1 year ago
nice work my nig!!1
krossedout911 1 year ago
LP opposite of B A D.
wizztay 1 year ago
Dmx destroyed that beat already :) but i like dis too keep doin your thing .... 1
DMX912 1 year ago
nice man............
sandiego360 1 year ago
wavy still
SE27DONSPLINTZ 1 year ago
the world is to hard, but dont stop tryin, niggas out hatin, dont stop, till yu retirin. i can serve it up, hotter then a fryin pan, im on my sunny d, and i can break yu lemonade stand. bitches want me cuz im the man, but i leave the game upside down like a hand stand. i could serve it up long, or i can keep goin, niggas on they cancer shit. im out livestronging....here come listen to ray, im the freshest mind walkin this earth on the greenest day...=]
rayall100 1 year ago
real good , i like u rapping on positive note
TINKYTIGA 1 year ago
Good song.
EncriptedHipHop 1 year ago
This was ill
GallonsProductions 1 year ago
the lyrics are definately on point. keep it up my brother.
Killawatt323 1 year ago
bel lavoro, ma taglierei un pò le alte frequenze!!!
GoldUnreal 1 year ago
Good Shit...I Fucks wit
KallMeKris2 1 year ago
Great lyrics♥♪♫
'like it:-))))
Stay cool:-)
GoGo
Goggy021 1 year ago 6
yo i feel everything you sayin man and you said it in a way that your comfortable expressing yoself fuck what the hata's say keep at it if we quit doing what we do cause a someone elses negativity we aint had no right spittin in the first place
dueceandkountry 1 year ago
always sick stuff man......open for colabs any time hit me up with a beat and lets colab
DirtyDoesnt 1 year ago
That is dope man!
axelpayne69 1 year ago
iv heard this instrumental on a dmx track and a cnn song too
can any one tell me where its originally from?
boligrapho 1 year ago
this is nice man
better then the shit round today
u ever go big in the game dont go mainstream
boligrapho 1 year ago
hamma
90sDc 1 year ago
sickness keep goin homie
beanze12341 1 year ago
favorite song right here!!
McAwesome54 1 year ago
Your songs are always sick!
Emphaysez 1 year ago
dis is pretty sick
DaGTLkiiD1 1 year ago
get it my nigga...i fuks wif dis. 100% chea.
jrobb06 1 year ago
yo this shyt is hard...where u from if u tryna get a track done im in jersey lol hopefully u sumwhere arou nd here holla at me
dakidramos 1 year ago
damn bro this good right here, I could realy jam 2 this nice!!
check out some of my Music and comment (ORiGiNAL100%)
Peace
solosound303 1 year ago
did you make this beat bro, if soo its sick
Nice lyrics to man
Stay UP!
raven1010 1 year ago
not bad at all
Somybiz 1 year ago
Not bad my dude. i think that was mary j. instrumental for those that dont know, needs mixing lil more but you should be in the booth my dude...
DcodeAlliance 1 year ago
Very good
Vegiemoon 1 year ago
your mixing needs some work...it was hard listening to this. From what I heard it was okay...kinda generic on the whole "the worlds messed up" front... didnt really say anything new. but you have a nice flow!
Nunchuck 1 year ago 3
@Nunchuck lmfao
madworldprod 1 year ago
@madworldprod
What you laughing your ass off at? I'm really interested...
Nunchuck 1 year ago
@Nunchuck
Couldn't have summed it up better myself. It's very generic and generic hiphop doesn't sell. This is very comercial amatuer hip hop trying reincarnate the old days. To sell albums these days you really have to put 100% into every line you drop and don't rush tunes but work hard on 'em. This guy could go far with work, he's a damn good rapper.
axelbowendale 1 year ago
nice! keep wokn
nyoear 1 year ago
feeling this joint right here my boy. like the classic sample and i'm feeling the flow. ur lyrics are telling me a story, and the chorus is nice.
Killawatt323 1 year ago
I like the beat the melody reminds me of some song that I used to listen to back in the day
It sounds very good for radio listeners
Good job
Keep up the good work
rphyllis1 1 year ago
nice beat man good lyeics good job.good luck keep it on...
lildriveby7 1 year ago
This is a very good song! This beats all that no talent stuff like talking about money and how many chains you got. This is talking about a story. That's some real shit right there! I agree with nyckillaheat, this should be in a movie or something.
dannygzuko71695 1 year ago
nice respect from germany
PDMAlonzo 1 year ago
*-*
PHILOOtheSTARSHOOTER 1 year ago
this reminds me of hiphop when it was still off the chain good work man. this song should be in a movie or something
nyckillaheat 1 year ago
nice:)
codieboakes 1 year ago
Fresh song, good work on the lyrics, you should check my song called Sinners Paradise it's similar to this. Holla
DarkSideCrewtv 1 year ago
I love your sound and your soul!!!
xoxoxo Hunter
hunterpecunia 1 year ago
That's the shit I'm talking about.
fivestarchris 1 year ago