Dramatic Monologue

[ActYourButtOff]

Place to share your monologues with other aspiring actors for free @ "How's My Acting". Link is in my channel or Just "Google" it

[swpesto]

Thanks! :-)

[samratdp]

Good one ! I suggest you link this to DynamycDesi site - you can win awards for your talent there.

[swpesto]

Thanks for the tip and nice comment. I will!!! :-)

[Bfolks84]

hey good work! Check out my monologue and let me know what you think! Thanks.

[performingmadness]

It seemed a bit happy to be a dramatic monologue...

[timvdh123]

gr8

[joshscott911]

im not trying to be mean, but are you jewish. also at the end, you said all the color was drained from you dads lips. how did they do that, and why

[swpesto]

I'm Catholic by birth but part jewish from my mother's side by a couple of generations, so I have sensitivity in the jewish people. I love them. Where I mentioned "the color was drained from his lips..." meant that he felt sick and was mortified that his daughter had to encounter such hate and discrimination. It would be enough to make anyone want to throw up to tolerate such discrimination.

[carlstewart]

Hey, Sarah. I like it! I see the slightly "cheery" beginning as the character's efforts to keep a positive mindset, but finding that reality is just too overwhelming in the end. I personally think it's a good transition. I'd love to see more!

[swpesto]

Thanks, Carl!:)

[loquaciousthe3RD]

i don't know how old you are. but if i listen to this you really sound like ...what age character are you playing? you sound young, basically.

i like it.

[swpesto]

I am playing about a 25 year old. I do have a young-sounding voice though.

[mitchell1515]

im sorry but you did not do that very conviencing at all...better luck with another monologue maybe?

[skiman93]

?????????? listen, just because ur upset that ur not as good, and never will be, isn't any reason to put down another talented actress

[greenwallsRcool]

its good.. but your a little to cheery in the beginning

[swpesto]

Thanks, yeah, I need to differentiate between my own personality and my character!:) You are very helpful.

[samusamu]

i don't mean to be mean. it's just advice... but if you want to convince me you're telling me a story about your best friend from 7th grade, you should probably say her name with out messing up. think about what you are saying and believe in it... you do in this video is recite lines, that's not acting.

[NormaJeanComedy]

You're super!! Make more vids girl!!

Would you like to be in some with Bev and/or Norma Jean?

Let me know!

[swpesto]

Yes! I would love to!:)

[ddsharper]

i don't understand that last sentence. all the color was drained from the????? what.

[swpesto]

"...all the color was drained from his lips."

[ddsharper]

good job.

[swpesto]

Thank you!:)

[hatfoe]

What a honor, but im watching you from ur computer right now.. does that creep u out?

[hatfoe]

u must put more youtube video's i need to see more of you, u are great!

[swpesto]

I will!:)

[hatfoe]

My favorite Comic/actor!

im on my way to meet you and spaz. Muah!

[swpesto]

Hatfoe, you so silly! I think you are one of my favorite commenters. HEHE!

[dukeaholic21]

wow. that was sad. coming from u, i didn't think that was possible.