I honestly find your multiple critical comments quite annoying, Luvdomus. The "clumsy phasing" is a result of being confined to the movements of Rod's lips and the strict requirements of a :30 spot that is written to advertise something... and not simply tell a story. Your other comments were flat out inaccurate. At first you said a word didn't exist, and when shown that it DID... you backpedaled by saying it just sounded wrong. Care went into these... and yes, YOU may have done differently.
Terrific editing and extremely clever re-use of Serling's intro to "It's a Good Life". "I forgot to share when your journey begins," though, is clumsy phrasing and not something that the highly literate scriptwriter would have set to paper.
Great job!
silvapaul 1 year ago
That was great.
Teflon65 2 years ago
I honestly find your multiple critical comments quite annoying, Luvdomus. The "clumsy phasing" is a result of being confined to the movements of Rod's lips and the strict requirements of a :30 spot that is written to advertise something... and not simply tell a story. Your other comments were flat out inaccurate. At first you said a word didn't exist, and when shown that it DID... you backpedaled by saying it just sounded wrong. Care went into these... and yes, YOU may have done differently.
g0onie 2 years ago
Terrific editing and extremely clever re-use of Serling's intro to "It's a Good Life". "I forgot to share when your journey begins," though, is clumsy phrasing and not something that the highly literate scriptwriter would have set to paper.
luvdomus 2 years ago