Wow... usually I don't like this type of music... his is so different, it doesn't sound like every other roc/pop song out there. Its great and its an original. Not many people can do that. You should put it out on record. you've got a lot of talent, i'd definitely help you if i could... i showed a couple of my friends and it didn't surprize me that they also loved it!
me gustan tus temas ,no comprendo bien las letras pero la melodia vocal la encuentro preciosa al igual que tu voz ,que dominas bien ,no pares de tocar , cantar,y componer,aprovecha la juventud que es una fuente genial de inspiracion , la llama se apaga rapido .salud
That was awsome! You are definitly something special. I keep thinking to myself "I should download this on my ipod" but you dont have a record yet! I'm sure you will have one soon though! Good luck on everything!
The vocal is powerful and clear and looking into your eyes there is definitely somebody home. The lyrics are pro worthy.
However, the delivery for this song is wrong. It sounds angry and hurt rather than perhaps wistful and pained. So you need to reconsider your interpretive approach to it. The vocal melody is a little weak, especially in the beginning, but a full rock arrangement might cover for that.
The guitar playing was urgent and echoed the conviction of your vocal. Good job.
Lets see if I can put this in perspective... my usual listening tastes include death metal, melodic death metal, power metal... basically alot of heavy stuff.
Now after saying that, I'll say this is one of the neatest original songs I've ever come across. You've got alot of talent, definitely something I'd like to see more of. :) You should put out some mp3s of recorded songs, that would help spread the word. I know I'd help to spread it.
thanks i'm glad you like it! im working on a little recording setup just need a couple more things so hopefully i'll have some mp3's out after christmas time. meanwhile i'll be working on some new stuff. youtubin' it etc.
"I wrote this song not long after my cousin passed away..."
Wow Lisa! Real nice new tune***** It's sad that it was inspired by loosing someone that means a lot to you. I hope he'll come into your dreams and let you know he's OK...
omg!!! ur awsomee!!
i wish i could write
a song as good as yours!!!
U'VE GOT A BIG FAN HERE!!
marlineta 2 years ago
Great stuff.
jeffbanjo 2 years ago
Wow... usually I don't like this type of music... his is so different, it doesn't sound like every other roc/pop song out there. Its great and its an original. Not many people can do that. You should put it out on record. you've got a lot of talent, i'd definitely help you if i could... i showed a couple of my friends and it didn't surprize me that they also loved it!
cat02137 3 years ago
thank you so much!
lisadvet 3 years ago
What a great voice!
oldnrone 3 years ago
me gustan tus temas ,no comprendo bien las letras pero la melodia vocal la encuentro preciosa al igual que tu voz ,que dominas bien ,no pares de tocar , cantar,y componer,aprovecha la juventud que es una fuente genial de inspiracion , la llama se apaga rapido .salud
indigentema 3 years ago
That was awsome! You are definitly something special. I keep thinking to myself "I should download this on my ipod" but you dont have a record yet! I'm sure you will have one soon though! Good luck on everything!
GodBlessAmerica42 3 years ago
The vocal is powerful and clear and looking into your eyes there is definitely somebody home. The lyrics are pro worthy.
However, the delivery for this song is wrong. It sounds angry and hurt rather than perhaps wistful and pained. So you need to reconsider your interpretive approach to it. The vocal melody is a little weak, especially in the beginning, but a full rock arrangement might cover for that.
The guitar playing was urgent and echoed the conviction of your vocal. Good job.
robibm2003 3 years ago
Lets see if I can put this in perspective... my usual listening tastes include death metal, melodic death metal, power metal... basically alot of heavy stuff.
Now after saying that, I'll say this is one of the neatest original songs I've ever come across. You've got alot of talent, definitely something I'd like to see more of. :) You should put out some mp3s of recorded songs, that would help spread the word. I know I'd help to spread it.
BowserBoy 3 years ago
thanks i'm glad you like it! im working on a little recording setup just need a couple more things so hopefully i'll have some mp3's out after christmas time. meanwhile i'll be working on some new stuff. youtubin' it etc.
lisadvet 3 years ago
thats soooo nice well done! i sometimes write my own songs as well ! hahaha well done!
LuvBigEarrings5 3 years ago
"I wrote this song not long after my cousin passed away..."
Wow Lisa! Real nice new tune***** It's sad that it was inspired by loosing someone that means a lot to you. I hope he'll come into your dreams and let you know he's OK...
You look and sound great otherwise :^)
ParadiseEarth1 3 years ago
strong. brilliant ;)
vivaladil 3 years ago
Great song Lisa. And yeah, death sucks. Especially for those of us left behind.
Isodig 3 years ago
nice song and voice
enchantress82 3 years ago
really nice song
RIP your cousin
xoxoZashleyoxox 3 years ago
sorry to hear about your cousin - death sucks - great song though!
toddsmith00 3 years ago
subbed
depointless 3 years ago
Wow 5/5
Illogicalation 3 years ago
One of my favorites!
TheSawRemix 3 years ago
very good! :D
supered86 3 years ago
u got some real talent you got my sub :-)
FragUPlenty 3 years ago
very powerful
-jPaul
JPaulDiLucci 3 years ago
outstanding. and RIP to your cousin
bcj999 3 years ago 6
Sounds like he was a great guy. Awesome song!
shawnmcnair1 3 years ago