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From: yannyfoxx
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  • Perfect example of 'crossing the line' in the first 3 shot.

    Day 1, page 1, Don't cross the line during dialogue sequences. The man and child are looking left to right;

    so therefore the librarian should be looking right to left.

    I bet the film editor screamed at the camera person for allowing the director to make such a basic mistake!

    It's like spelling your name wrong on the first page.

  • Sound could be clearer in some parts but on the whole very good! Very proffessional.

  • yeah, levels havent been fully sorted but im gonna do that before college ends haha

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