UNIDENTIFIED, by Warner Brown. Parallel Lines | Phillips Cinema.

[Shadowcorporation]

@Superman98967 thanks man. an extended version is in the works

[EROTICgSUS]

sick ass art! you got the SHINE holmes!

[suckinondatthang]

This movie looks sick as hell when are you planning to put out a trailer?

[Shadowcorporation]

@suckinondatthang Thanks! we did a teaser for this one *remove space in .com* youtube.co m/watch?v=HS6O5vYmFMw but a new trailer will be in the works soon and hopefully together this year! Check out our facebook for updates facebook.c om/UNIDFILM

[MusicAfterSilence]

The story seems weak. Even though this doesn't show much the whole alien invasion thing has been done to death now.

[Shadowcorporation]

@MusicAfterSilence Not the way we will approach the feature. It is about an alien invasion that may or may not be happening. It will be part industrial espionage thriller mixed with rainbow 6, much less a sci-fi. The dialogue for this short wasn't mine. So it doesn't represent the script I've been developing for 3 years. I do agree that in the short time we had, the story for this specific short could have been much better. TK-170 will be very different @everyone else who liked it, thanks!

[omnicd]

post the latest Britney Spears bullcrap MV and you get 1,000,000+ views in a few days/hours. Make your own feature film and you get less than 5000 views in 3 months. I have the same problem as you, bro' ! So tired of the mass media and their followers...

[123Kenge]

This trailer relies too much on special effects to sell the point. I love the opening, but after that it falls flat. Its put together awkwardly that when I watch it I do not understand what is happening. Why are people flying through the sky? Also some of the dialogue said in the trailer just sounds plain silly. I suggest a musical ensemble-one pumping at the start, melo at the middle and drama, a more defined 2nd and 3rd act. Removing the last 10 seconds of dialogue to replace dramatic music.

[Shadowcorporation]

@123Kenge this was Ridley Scott's dialogue. entrants used for the contest. This establishes from an alien perspective entering earth's atmosphere, taking samples, then abducting someone important. you see a UFO in the sky after that. It's clear. I've composed music since I was 14. Music/film is subjective. There are many ways to do it, but we did the best we could in the time allowed & this great effort my awesome team put in on 0 budget. It's not perfect..but our screenplay will blow your mind.

[Kinoguari187]

please tell me this is gonna be a real movie.

[Shadowcorporation]

@Kinoguari187 yes it will be, with iraq war veterans involved. I'm working on the script then we need to get funding for the feature.

[Kinoguari187]

@Shadowcorporation cannot wait it'll be a great movie i can tell

[whatdirectionisthat]

wtf is this?

[Shadowcorporation]

@whatdirectionisthat a submission for Ridley Scott's contest. He provided filmmakers with 6 lines of dialogue for it.

[whatdirectionisthat]

@Shadowcorporation oh in that case its really good i thought it was a real movie

gj (Y)

[megamaa]

@Shadowcorporation This movie could use some notification by the general public.

[Shadowcorporation]

@megamaa thanks

[Screwschom]

Love the use of the marin civic center ! Homage to Gattaca or just convenient location ?

[Shadowcorporation]

@Screwschom Thanks! it was part homage to Gattaca, THX-1138, and Frank Lloyd Wright's work is just awesome..it was conveniently close too :)

[mrsbronze]

Did you make a documentary about black tap dancers??? If not, sorry. Great film.

[darthmaxrat88]

yes. of course man. thanks alot i gotta work alot harder lol. im just happy someone can still make good independent films like this. really? thats cool haha. btw i love alien at the end :) looking forward to up coming work

[darthmaxrat88]

shadowcorporation. YOU R WHAT FILM MAKING IS ALL ABOUT! Breathe and Unidentified both perfectly done and my favorite topics of the post apocalypse and the unknown. so basic but so full of feeling. i want to make films like this one day. please keep up the epic work. thank you...

ps: maybe something about dinosaurs in your next film lol :)

[Shadowcorporation]

@darthmaxrat88 Thanks man! that means alot to meI and I like your videos too. Keep it up, you can do it. I did have an idea 15 years ago, but it didn't deal with "walking" dinosaurs..but who knows lol :)

[Shadowcorporation]

Thanks for the nice comments everyone, it's more appreciated than you know! Public voting begins on AUG 23rd. Thanks for the support and glad you enjoyed!

[Shadowcorporation]

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7ankoosh

1 day ago

thanks a lot warner again great vid man. its omar btw :)

Shadowcorporation

1 day ago @7ankoosh Dude thanks for your work on the character, I'm in debt. it came together better than i imagined :)

5FunnyMinutes 1 day ago

That was out standing and left me wanting a whole lot more ,dude you got some talent there m8..

[Shadowcorporation]

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vanzetti1927 2 days ago

it looks awesome. very creepy in the paranoid sort of way. good luck man!

dreadfilms 2 days ago

You're one of the few filmmakers around that I know who actually has a real solid talent driven course of action. The equally attractive aspect about your films is that the style is so far away from my own. Keep at it, good sir.

dreadfilms 2 days ago

7ankoosh 2 days ago

thats a great short warner, hope you win man

[fancydee1]

great adore the alien (thumbs up)

[amalmahmoud1980]

and shadow of colors is amazing really

[amalmahmoud1980]

great work , i like this video

[hayzum86]

That was a really sick and creepy alien...

[husane1000]

pretty damn sweet

[7ankoosh]

man its great, i respect your passion !!!

[B52sguy]

This is actually very true. There are some things the unwashed public does not need to know. Cannot grasp the idea of alien subserviance. But it is true, nevertheless.

Joseph F

Portland, OR USA

[Shadowcorporation]

@B52sguy I agree. There is a certain irony to it all.