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  • ur shit is coo i like it but BUT constructive criticism. what ever u used to record the quality wasnt so good u can hear the room ur in it might be ur mic

  • thats some ill versus's think itd be iller if you slowed em down a little and added more flave like you did at the end of the first verse... ill tho...

  • @northern187 thanks a lot. Appreciate the feedback. Give my new records a listen like, "The Last Resort", "Fiend Soliloquy" and many more. I'm much better than when I recorded this record. Thank you again.

  • I love honest, low-fi truth! Check my song out man, I made it for Dilla and Ma Dukes

  • acll me mcdonalds cuz im lovin it lol

  • one of the most fundamental things in hip hop is to tell a story, and its done right here, smooth

  • @RaGInBaLLeR23 thank you man. Check my new song out.

  • pretty tight flow, it's like I'm there.

  • lyrics is real no doubt and the way u made it it ur own with the beat is hot no doubt u gotsomething its just the flow thats needs 2 b polished lots of breaths inbtween wich messed up the delivery timeing but u got talent keep workin

  • wack lyrics horrible flow no delivery u gotta work on that quality to....long way to go dun ruin a pete rock beat agian

  • Do u gotta have copyright permision to produce this stuff?

  • Not as long as I'm not profiting off of it, it is a remix released w/ no monetary gain, so no.

  • (F)reely(L)etting(O)ut(W)ords.

    nuff sed?

  • I like how you go against the beat, kinda like your boxing with it. Some might say you dont have a flow but you def do, its just one thats so different from the norm. Lyrics are deep and the ending had me like "damn...." but keep doin your thing and polish up that flow cuz you can make a name for yourself

  • LISTEN TO MY VERSION ITS CALLED {Khalif Quadir Roll Wit It}

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  • Speaker of the obvious, why don't you talk about the lyrical content or the flow?

  • it's sick man

  • that flow ma dude.

    u got it

  • Hey thats kool i like your flow man but the sound is poor quality and only a suggestion but let some one else do the cut instead of right after flowing jumping into the cut like that it makes it sound rushed i know its raw cut but is good to get some feedback to you..

  • thanks man, I plan on re-doing this track soon.

  • im not here to hate but there is no rhythm n no flow..plus the chorus is not so good...i think u need to work on ur rhymes n keeping up wit the beat n stop stumbling so much.. just a little advice n u gotta show respect cuz im being str8 up n u cant hate that!!!!!!

  • Thanks for your comment. You do know this is an old song I did right? Why don't you check out my newer songs and let me know what you think of those, If you like them please subscribe.

  • This shit is hot, son. You got some flow, kidd. I can feel this.

  • brilliant!!

  • yo nice song. keep at n it much love bro

  • love song man , nice

  • its hot!!! I LUV IT!!

  • comment my new vid

  • awesome!5/5

  • u was right. i liked both but i love baby doll more. :)

  • cool

  • nice lyrics and flow dog. You need a better mic though so we can really hear yah spittin this fiyah

  • very niZe!

  • great lyrics... i loved the hook... real catchy... had to fav.. do u have vids where you show you...

  • indeed..support creativity and rate

  • nice

  • You know it! ;)

  • dam i luv it man its great

  • into the favorites you go!

  • Cool joint....

  • Thanks!

  • Hope you all enjoy this video! Please rate and comment! Subscribe to check out my other videos! Thank you!

    ~ RiG

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