I'm sorry, but you pissed me off from the start. I wish more people would realize that there is a HUGE difference between a Thriller and a Horror. Yes, the two intermingle, but it's either a Thriller with traces of a subgenre of Horror, or vice-versa, NOT a 'thriller/horror'. Second, does this not have a title? Sure, I clicked on it, but I'd be 5x more intrigued by an interesting and creative title. I watched about a 1:30 of it, but the poor camerawork and general lack of direction killed this.
Too much head room, needs to be cut tighter in shots. The acting isn't believable. If you lost 10K, wouldn't you be freaking out a little more than that? Should the pace not be faster?
I thought the opening sequence was very well done and you had some interesting shots. The ending seemed a bit convoluted though. Was he the body all along? Did he die from a regular punch or did the other person use something like an iron to hit him? I kinda got lost on that. I would like to see some of your other work though. This wasn't bad at all.
Hi, my name is Ben Amos and I also make films, check out my film called Crazy Lights if you want. I like the film you did . . . I myself have to make a horror genre opening sequence for my class. Your cinematography could have used some tracking but your MES is good and story basis is good also, good stuff!
it's a good short film,loved the location you picked the hallways and doors but at the end it was lacking a little,im confused did he die of gunshot or a punch to the face?
I liked the music, but the movie itself was pretty confusing. I had to scroll down to read the post before me to understand it. Overall though, cool idea and some good shots like the phone hanging down.
I'm sorry, but you pissed me off from the start. I wish more people would realize that there is a HUGE difference between a Thriller and a Horror. Yes, the two intermingle, but it's either a Thriller with traces of a subgenre of Horror, or vice-versa, NOT a 'thriller/horror'. Second, does this not have a title? Sure, I clicked on it, but I'd be 5x more intrigued by an interesting and creative title. I watched about a 1:30 of it, but the poor camerawork and general lack of direction killed this.
pineapplebaron 4 weeks ago
@pineapplebaron You sir, are a f**kwit
barude2x 1 day ago in playlist Best Vids
@barude2x Haters gonna hate. Problem?
Cheers.
pineapplebaron 6 hours ago
oh wow when the dude hit the other guy i jumped and choked on my gum (i am fine now) but that was really good.
kristen4698 4 months ago
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i didnt like this movie at all.....really bad sorry
187278 7 months ago
Too much head room, needs to be cut tighter in shots. The acting isn't believable. If you lost 10K, wouldn't you be freaking out a little more than that? Should the pace not be faster?
theBCdream 9 months ago
the worst short film ever made
polo567890 1 year ago
i liked the idea, it was alright... some good shots. please use original music... also lighting good have been better. good job tho
MRBananaMan87 1 year ago
That was fun to watch and I liked the editing. Good work.
jabariabramson 1 year ago
Nice work
allicsirp123 1 year ago
good short! =] guy is a cutie !!
ElAmorDelCancion 1 year ago
i gotta say....i didnt like the story....but the acting and post production is awesome...
papan1990 1 year ago
eellooo mateeee lool
superchargedM90 1 year ago
Seriously man...I liked it a lot...Its people like you that I learn from...I get my inspiration from you guys...good job...hope to see more...
V/R
1TeddyValdes 1 year ago
u rippedd the music from silent hill
lbvedj 1 year ago
your point being?
Scamster9t9 1 year ago 5
It had the scary mood/tone. Any chance you could tell us what the soundtrack/music is? I like it. Was this shot on film?
boamuro 1 year ago
I thought the opening sequence was very well done and you had some interesting shots. The ending seemed a bit convoluted though. Was he the body all along? Did he die from a regular punch or did the other person use something like an iron to hit him? I kinda got lost on that. I would like to see some of your other work though. This wasn't bad at all.
666slink 2 years ago
Hi, my name is Ben Amos and I also make films, check out my film called Crazy Lights if you want. I like the film you did . . . I myself have to make a horror genre opening sequence for my class. Your cinematography could have used some tracking but your MES is good and story basis is good also, good stuff!
MrJenkyn 2 years ago
it's a good short film,loved the location you picked the hallways and doors but at the end it was lacking a little,im confused did he die of gunshot or a punch to the face?
JJenvy 2 years ago
This is bloody good for a student film.
You have a huge potential!
I hope you follow through with films.
xcantkillthispridex 2 years ago
i didnt understand shit that poorly sucked
1991murilobrito 2 years ago
NICE JOB
beepsbobby 2 years ago
The music was good especially at the start well done bro it made sense at the end.
jazino123 2 years ago
could've done with a tri-pod
hotgremlin 3 years ago
I loved this,and I admire the choice of music in it as well!
cloudstrifeishottxx 3 years ago
I liked the music, but the movie itself was pretty confusing. I had to scroll down to read the post before me to understand it. Overall though, cool idea and some good shots like the phone hanging down.
Bleak300 3 years ago
wait was he supposed to be that dead guy in the end
bigboss8675309 3 years ago
yeah basically the main guy has a premomonition of his own death so only he sees the dead body on the floor at the start
Scamster9t9 3 years ago
ahh very cool ending btw once i got it 5/5
bigboss8675309 3 years ago
@Scamster9t9 you know you kind of spoiled it for me by replying to this comment :(
s3v3rth3stars 1 year ago
i would have enjoyed the film- except i am now blind because of the opening credits were so bright
barude2x 3 years ago
British chicks are hot. What the hell kind of building is it that they're in.
poorly made but i loved the opening and closing credit effect. they were a little bright though.
NickLongbottom 3 years ago
THIS IS REALLY GOOD
bubblehip 3 years ago
wicked! somereally cool shots! and music was tense
Caffeinated08 3 years ago
nicely made,PHIL THE DRILL FOR PRIME MINISTER
barude2x 4 years ago