Science This Morning -Part 1 (Gene Patenting Segment)

[skitolive5]

dude why are you against someone giving tips to them, this isnt perfect so why wouldnt they want these tips

[yavanna1969]

content is great - dont change a thing. Screw these guys giving "pro" tips.

[howwitty]

(Also it didn't cut after they finished talking)

This is just a minor thing, but for continuity I would suggest wearing the same clothes (although again, maybe originally this was in seperated 'news' segments. Also you might have wanted to reshoot the scene which you could hear the train whistle in.

Good job overall - very interesting :)

[howwitty]

Very interesting film, I have a couple of suggestions:

I don't know if you were using the mic on the camera, but the audio was a little weird.

The cutting was a bit awkward at some points, for example you would see the news anchors (?) smiling for a few seconds before they started talking. I realise this is for the 'news' feel, but it was a little weird because it didn't seem as much like a news program as it did a documentary.