@231152johny - Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. I really do appreciate what others have to say and think about my songs. This one started out as a "silly" little love song. I really believe the world needs more of them.
Hey, just wanted to say that this video is very sweet. I cried from the simplicity of it and because you remind me of my father. He played the acoustic guitar when I was little and would write cute and simple songs like this and sing them to me when I was sad. I just moved half-way across the country away from him going out on my own and I miss him so much. Thanks for reminding me of him. =)
@Drassielle - I also have a song posted called "The Pain Never Does Go Away". After 6 years, I was able to write about my feelings after having lost my only son to a drug overdose. He was 31 years old, but he still was my only son, and the pain never does go away. The lyrics to this song are very "generic" and could describe so many different scenarios. Give it a listen, if you can find the time...thanks for the kinds words and for taking the time to comment. Appreciate it...
@johnnieguitarII Define pleasant: affording pleasure; being in harmony with your taste or likings; "we had a pleasant evening together"; "a pleasant scene"; "pleasant sensations"
(of persons) having pleasing manners or behavior; "I didn't enjoy it and probably wasn't a pleasant person to be around"
I loved its simpleness. Who cares what others think, when you are in love you know it. If that feeling comes at first site, who is to say you are wrong. I love it!
@madhatterten - I had Paul McCartney's "Silly Love Song" in mind when I wrote this. His statement in the song, "You'd think the world has had enough silly love songs...I look around me and I see that isn't so...oh no." And I just let the "silly" idea of falling in love at first sight fall into play. My sister said, "I fell in love at first sight, then I took a second look..." LOL...she makes me laugh.
@johnnieguitarII I love that you took the time to reply! BTW, I found your video linked from Ronald Jenkees, you might want to check him out if you don't already! He is a musical genius, a savant in my eyes! I want to see more from you!
@13amin70 - You needn't drown in electronic music. I have several electric guitars, but I prefer the nylon classical acoustic sound of a guitar. It has the sound that was there before electronic guitars and gadgets.
@johnnieguitarII Ronald Jenkees is the inspiration to my piano skills that i have today :)
search: laid back organ jam click on the first one
by the way the reason i said RONALD IS STILL ALIVE is because he doesn't make as many videos as he use to do and lots of people think he's dead because he stopped making music for so long. i was just exaggerating that ronald is still alive :)
i like the sound of your voice, it's really calming and relaxing, i just stumbled upon this while i was sitting on my balcony enjoying a beautiful evening, and you made it even better
Really enjoyed this tune John, your lyrics have a very open and honest quality about them, nothing too flowery..Once again the guitar playing is spot on, nice work mate, robbo
@robbolandsvids - Hey Robbo, thanks for the comment. I appreciate your taking the time to listen and comment., it really means a lot to me. I keep looking for song ideas and keep coming back to "silly little love songs", and the world sure has room for more of them.
@TheRealjohnny2k - We are rehearsing a version of this song with the band. I have come up with an interesting arrangement for it. We hope to post it this week end.
@Rietkamp - You're not the first person to tell me that. It is what a songwriter strives to compose, a song that is catchy, has a hook and one that the listener keeps in their head after hearing it. It is not something that can be achieved with every song you write. Thanks for listening and the comment. I really appreciate it.
@DeanNTia - Haven't you ever heard that song, "Love is beautiful, the second time around"??? Frank Sinatra sang it. But we've brought it to 2011 way by doing it with the band..."I Fell In Love At First Sight" by 2nd Tyme Around. We are now the 4th edition of the 2nd Tyme Around. And they said that the 3rd Tyme Is a Charm !!! Oh and for your information ( FYI ) you're not as bad as me. I'm the worst !!! ;-)
A fine song, with fine lyrics. I'd like to post a video response, linking my One Guitar song, because they are two songs saying perhaps the same thing. Thanks for posting this one.
Hello Johnnie, I really enjoy your authentic way of making music!
Don't know if you ever plan to visit Amsterdam but if you do so,you're invited to come to my place for one day and professionally record your songs. If you can't make it all the way to Amsterdam than I hope that someone else in your neighbourhood will give you the same opportunity! I will be the first one who will purchase your CD :-) Thank you for your music
@joffryarthur - I appreciate the offer and I must say that I don't plan on being in Amsterdam in the near future, however you are certainly making it desirable to consider. Thanks for the kind words of encouragement, that in itself speaks volumes to my ears. I couldn't ask for more.
very nice song! I don't think that there can ever be enough love songs! love is such a deep topic, it touches everyone in a different way, it's worth telling about in a million songs :)
@OldShatterhand1985 ..I am working on a multi-track version of it, playing two guitars, bass, drums and keys. Currently working of the harmonies. I'm not done with it yet.
@pandrade7 ...It seems like it's been snowing around here forever. A tropical beach sounds good right about now. No ice, no snow, too nice, let's go !!! Thanks for the comment.
@SouBrazil ...Ola Meu Amigo Ramon, Thank you for your kind words. Hope all is well with you. This is just another one of my silly little love songs. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I wish the lyrics were less romantic. A little bitterness and pain in the words would have been great The chord sequence is nice as well as the playing.
@JGarcia658 ...Bitterness and pain and then the song would have been; "I knew it the first time I saw you, a real stabbing pain in my back. I knew that we would be divorced soon, you'd already planned your attack. I knew there was no other someone, could fill me with such dispair...For you have made me a believer...That our love is going nowhere..." No I'm sorry...it doesn't work for me...but I could have wrote it that way....LOL
Ha, ha: I meant a little bit of despair and insecurity. For example listen to the lyrics of I Go to Pieces by Peter and Gordon, If I Fell by John Lennon, Before and After by Chad and Jeremy, Time Won't Let me by The Outsiders, Don't You Care by The Buckinghams, stc. In other words many classic love songs have to do with unrequited love. IMHO your lyrics are too sweet. OTOH, the music is very strong and very interesting. That is why I crave different lyrics.
@JGarcia658 I knew exactly what you meant, but I was approaching this one as another silly love song, like McCartney's "Silly Love Songs" with the shmultzy lyrics that ARE too sweet. Anyone who could fall in love at first sight would definitely fall into that category. What you are suggesting is a total rewrite of the lyrics entirely, with maybe even a different title. Interesting...I'll play with your suggestion. At any rate, thanks for the feedback.
@elcerry ...I appreciate your kind words and glad that you enjoyed this song. I'm working on an arrangement to do it with my band, 2nd Tyme Around. I've worked out some nice harmony lines for it. Can't wait to record a version of it with the band.
@bryanrobertson ...From concept to performance? It took about 45 minutes to write the lyrics. Some times they come easy. I wanted to keep the "hook" in each verse and in the refrain as well.. There was actually one other verse that I didn't use, because it was made up of verses one and two. The melody just came to me as I sang the lyrics for the first time. I'll say the total time from concept to perfromance was a little over an hour. Thanks for asking
Great song!!!! Greetings to you John.
231152johny 4 months ago
@231152johny - Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment. I really do appreciate what others have to say and think about my songs. This one started out as a "silly" little love song. I really believe the world needs more of them.
johnnieguitarII 3 months ago 2
This was pretty good, great job.
MrDeathticle 7 months ago
@MrDeathticle - Thanks.
johnnieguitarII 7 months ago
@NZMuttenchops - Thank you.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
Simple and sweet. Touching :)
MurkyNightmist 9 months ago
@MurkyNightmist - Thanks.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
Hey, just wanted to say that this video is very sweet. I cried from the simplicity of it and because you remind me of my father. He played the acoustic guitar when I was little and would write cute and simple songs like this and sing them to me when I was sad. I just moved half-way across the country away from him going out on my own and I miss him so much. Thanks for reminding me of him. =)
Drassielle 9 months ago
@Drassielle - I also have a song posted called "The Pain Never Does Go Away". After 6 years, I was able to write about my feelings after having lost my only son to a drug overdose. He was 31 years old, but he still was my only son, and the pain never does go away. The lyrics to this song are very "generic" and could describe so many different scenarios. Give it a listen, if you can find the time...thanks for the kinds words and for taking the time to comment. Appreciate it...
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
such a nice chinese cigarette voice
wannabeescatman 9 months ago
@wannabeescatman - I never smoked Chinese cigarettes. I don't even smoke American cigarettes. Smoking is not a good thing...especially for voices.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago 5
@johnnieguitarII say that to elbow :) but its good that u dont so u can make music longer ^^
wannabeescatman 8 months ago
@wannabeescatman - I don't know what saying anything to an elbow will do, but I do love making music.
johnnieguitarII 8 months ago
This was good! :D
Axtros1024 9 months ago
@Axtros1024 - Good is not bad.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
How pleasant.
madhatterten 9 months ago
@madhatterten - Pleasant is better than unpleasant.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
@johnnieguitarII Define pleasant: affording pleasure; being in harmony with your taste or likings; "we had a pleasant evening together"; "a pleasant scene"; "pleasant sensations"
(of persons) having pleasing manners or behavior; "I didn't enjoy it and probably wasn't a pleasant person to be around"
I loved its simpleness. Who cares what others think, when you are in love you know it. If that feeling comes at first site, who is to say you are wrong. I love it!
madhatterten 9 months ago
@madhatterten - I had Paul McCartney's "Silly Love Song" in mind when I wrote this. His statement in the song, "You'd think the world has had enough silly love songs...I look around me and I see that isn't so...oh no." And I just let the "silly" idea of falling in love at first sight fall into play. My sister said, "I fell in love at first sight, then I took a second look..." LOL...she makes me laugh.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
@johnnieguitarII Hahahahahahahahahahahah!
madhatterten 9 months ago
@madhatterten - Exactly...
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
@johnnieguitarII I love that you took the time to reply! BTW, I found your video linked from Ronald Jenkees, you might want to check him out if you don't already! He is a musical genius, a savant in my eyes! I want to see more from you!
madhatterten 9 months ago
A wonderful song! Youtube needs more talented people such as yourself
themightyredwood 9 months ago
@themightyredwood - thanks, your words are very kind and I truly appreciate them.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
realy surprise nice such a nice feeling in this song
great .. hope she feels the same way
billyboy80 9 months ago
@billyboy80 - thanks
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
sir you've got the simplicity and beauty that moved a kid drowned in electronic music....this kid
13amin70 9 months ago
@13amin70 - You needn't drown in electronic music. I have several electric guitars, but I prefer the nylon classical acoustic sound of a guitar. It has the sound that was there before electronic guitars and gadgets.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
RONALD IS STILL ALIVE!!!
ForgeableGamer 9 months ago
@ForgeableGamer - Who is Ronald? I'm glad he is still alive and well, I hope.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
@johnnieguitarII Ronald Jenkees is the inspiration to my piano skills that i have today :)
search: laid back organ jam click on the first one
by the way the reason i said RONALD IS STILL ALIVE is because he doesn't make as many videos as he use to do and lots of people think he's dead because he stopped making music for so long. i was just exaggerating that ronald is still alive :)
ForgeableGamer 9 months ago
@ForgeableGamer My thought exactly.
2justice4no1 9 months ago
i like the sound of your voice, it's really calming and relaxing, i just stumbled upon this while i was sitting on my balcony enjoying a beautiful evening, and you made it even better
orbulon 9 months ago
@orbulon - So glad you found it. Thanks for the kind words.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
epic beard man !! :D
treesapa 9 months ago
@treesapa - I'm growing it even longer....
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
I like this. Great work!
lomaw 9 months ago
@lomaw - Thanks
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
@lomaw - Thank you so much.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
Great song! Sharing this with all of my friends.
canaanjohn 9 months ago
@canaanjohn - Appreciate it.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
Very nice song, keep it up :)
Babyolja1337 9 months ago
@Babyolja1337 Thanks for the feedback.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
Great song and performance! keep doing them my friend, whether you want to get signed or just doing them for the pleasure, i wish you all the luck :)
Loadstarproductions 9 months ago
@Loadstarproductions - I'm just having fun with the whole YouTube experience. Like the old song says; "Que Sera Sera."
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
Love it <3
TheAlmightyFSM 9 months ago
@TheAlmightyFSM - Thanks for the kind words.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
@johnnieguitarII Thanks for the goose bumps, lol.
TheAlmightyFSM 9 months ago
Ronald Jenkees favorited this :) great job
Muirselgas 9 months ago 37
@Muirselgas - Just doing what I love to do, that is rhyming words and writing songs.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
Hey John, that is great! Well done!!! keep it going mate!!
Acoustictalk 9 months ago
@Acoustictalk - Thanks.
johnnieguitarII 9 months ago
@johnnieguitarII thats amazing :0
arceusex 9 months ago
Really enjoyed this tune John, your lyrics have a very open and honest quality about them, nothing too flowery..Once again the guitar playing is spot on, nice work mate, robbo
robbolandsvids 10 months ago
@robbolandsvids - Hey Robbo, thanks for the comment. I appreciate your taking the time to listen and comment., it really means a lot to me. I keep looking for song ideas and keep coming back to "silly little love songs", and the world sure has room for more of them.
johnnieguitarII 10 months ago
Bful voice, well done
orangejunk20 11 months ago
@orangejunk20 - Thanks for the comment !!
johnnieguitarII 11 months ago
Good job, John!
TheRealjohnny2k 1 year ago
@TheRealjohnny2k - We are rehearsing a version of this song with the band. I have come up with an interesting arrangement for it. We hope to post it this week end.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
This song has potential. If you've heard the song, it stays in your head.
Rietkamp 1 year ago
@Rietkamp - You're not the first person to tell me that. It is what a songwriter strives to compose, a song that is catchy, has a hook and one that the listener keeps in their head after hearing it. It is not something that can be achieved with every song you write. Thanks for listening and the comment. I really appreciate it.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
late, but leave my green thumb
Lumdatalbahn 1 year ago
@Lumdatalbahn - Thanks
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Cool
AnyeForti 1 year ago
@AnyeForti - Short and sweet....
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
very nice song well written!!
TheChip89 1 year ago
@TheChip89 - Thanks for listening.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Super CONGRATULATION
chtiguitare 1 year ago
@chtiguitare - Thanks
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
This is a great work. Dug it!
Escagedo3rd 1 year ago
@Escagedo3rd - Thanks. I appreciate you taking the time to view it and comment.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
I fell in love at first sight.... then I took a second look! I'm just as bad as you are Johnnie! but I DO like the song... love ya... Elaine
DeanNTia 1 year ago
@DeanNTia - Haven't you ever heard that song, "Love is beautiful, the second time around"??? Frank Sinatra sang it. But we've brought it to 2011 way by doing it with the band..."I Fell In Love At First Sight" by 2nd Tyme Around. We are now the 4th edition of the 2nd Tyme Around. And they said that the 3rd Tyme Is a Charm !!! Oh and for your information ( FYI ) you're not as bad as me. I'm the worst !!! ;-)
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
I realy like your progression ! with the bass changes. very tight tune!
yootesa1515 1 year ago
@yootesa1515 - Thanks again and again.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@yootesa1515 - Thank you. Again.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
I realy like your progression ! with the bass changes. very tight tune!
yootesa1515 1 year ago
@yootesa1515 - Thanks again.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
I realy like your progression ! with the bass changes. very tight tune!
yootesa1515 1 year ago
@yootesa1515 - Thanks
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Very nice song !
Bigerjoel 1 year ago
@Bigerjoel - Thank you kindly.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
You are such a good songwritor c:
EILIVdrummer 1 year ago
@EILIVdrummer - I'm just doing what I love to do. Rhyming words and writing songs. I appreciate your kind words.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
you're like the love child of james taylor and randy newman. Spectacular.
sweatysocksprod 1 year ago
@sweatysocksprod - Two of my favorite songwriters...especially Randy Newman, I love his work. Thank you for the very kind words.,
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
How VERY sweet!.... THANK YOU for sharing!...and keep believing!
UllaLindstroem 1 year ago
@UllaLindstroem - Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment. I do appreciate it.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@UllaLindstroem - Thank you for listening and your kind words.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
and your welcome and i gotta say u have a awesome beard my friend :)
MusicLoverJoe 1 year ago
@MusicLoverJoe - And I was thinking about shaving....
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@johnnieguitarII its too epic to shave i love your beard :)
MusicLoverJoe 1 year ago
@MusicLoverJoe - I starting to look more and more like Santa Claus....LOL
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@johnnieguitarII Nothing wrong with that :)
MusicLoverJoe 1 year ago
@MusicLoverJoe - Ho Ho Ho I don't know about that !! ;-)
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
A fine song, with fine lyrics. I'd like to post a video response, linking my One Guitar song, because they are two songs saying perhaps the same thing. Thanks for posting this one.
TheFolksinger 1 year ago
@TheFolksinger - I'll check it out....
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
very nice :)
MusicLoverJoe 1 year ago
@MusicLoverJoe - Thanks.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
GOOD ONE my friend !!
chris
XxXtatsisXxX 1 year ago
@XxXtatsisXxX - Thanks Chris. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@XbrittanyXlasheaX - I appreciate the fact that you did. Thanks for the kind words.. ;-)
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Beautiful song sir !! Would like to have this one on my portable music player :) Is there a way to get this song in a recorded version?
Regards from Germany!
SouthernMan101 1 year ago
@SouthernMan101 - It will more than likely be on the next CD with my band "2nd Tyme Around". We have a channel here on YouTube.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
nice!
villesangel69 1 year ago
@villesangel69 - Thanks
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
I love getting ur love songs xxxjd
wasteddaycollection 1 year ago
@wasteddaycollection - I love giving them. Thanks.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
very beatlesque... actually quite lovely.
Scope105 1 year ago
@Scope105 - "Beatlesque" that's a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
I like the chords change,the story and the melody! It is a nice song!
tofmelon 1 year ago
@tofmelon - I appreciate your taking the time to listen and to comment, thanks.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Hello Johnnie, I really enjoy your authentic way of making music!
Don't know if you ever plan to visit Amsterdam but if you do so,you're invited to come to my place for one day and professionally record your songs. If you can't make it all the way to Amsterdam than I hope that someone else in your neighbourhood will give you the same opportunity! I will be the first one who will purchase your CD :-) Thank you for your music
joffryarthur 1 year ago
@joffryarthur - I appreciate the offer and I must say that I don't plan on being in Amsterdam in the near future, however you are certainly making it desirable to consider. Thanks for the kind words of encouragement, that in itself speaks volumes to my ears. I couldn't ask for more.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
yes , There should be more Love Songs
Great Job Bro
Enjoyed this
Robin Ariel Ross St Claire Holgate
robinarielmedia 1 year ago
@robinarielmedia ..Thanks for the words of encouragement. I really do appreciate your thoughts.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Thank you friend!
piamorex 1 year ago
@piamorex ...You're very welcomed...thank you...
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
nice song
militaryvideo 1 year ago
@militaryvideo ..Thank you so much.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
really nice song, bravo!
Joviron 1 year ago
@Joviron ...Thanks
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Awesome Job!! Love the song!! Keep up the great work!!
MoonGoddess71 1 year ago
@MoonGoddess71 ...Thanks
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Nice song, well performed cheers (not so silly, listen to some of the beatles lyrics!)
pinknblues1 1 year ago
@pinknblues1 ..Thanks for the words of encouragement. As Sir Paul said in his "Silly Love Song...Love isn't silly at all."
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
very nice song! I don't think that there can ever be enough love songs! love is such a deep topic, it touches everyone in a different way, it's worth telling about in a million songs :)
OfficialM8Music 1 year ago
@OfficialM8Music .."A million love songs cannot explain, the magic, joy, the love and pain,
You've given me an inspiration, to sit and write a new creation.
Another love song from the heart, When will it end, when will it start.
No, there can never be enough, Songs of love and all that stuff.
Love is deep, I heard you say, and touches everyone in a different way.
I'll close and thank you once again, We'll talk, but we just don't know when."
I'll stop now....lol
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
nice song John!
MrMarikanu 1 year ago
@MrMarikanu ...Glad you liked it.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
lovely song! thank you for sharing ;)
maruhoney 1 year ago
@maruhoney ..Thanks for listening...
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
It's a very nice song... but You shoul record it more professional... Then that will kick ass... Cheers!
OldShatterhand1985 1 year ago
@OldShatterhand1985 ..I am working on a multi-track version of it, playing two guitars, bass, drums and keys. Currently working of the harmonies. I'm not done with it yet.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@johnnieguitarII That will be so good song than...keep workin... than share it with us please :)
OldShatterhand1985 1 year ago
@OldShatterhand1985 Perhap a video of my band, 2nd Tyme Around doing it. We have a channel here on YouTube.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
This is a very nice song ! Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
marjannonaka 1 year ago
@marjannonaka ..Thanks for listening and commenting. I really do appreciate it.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Great song and great job! For some reason, this song reminds me of a tropical beach vacation. :)
pandrade7 1 year ago
@pandrade7 ...It seems like it's been snowing around here forever. A tropical beach sounds good right about now. No ice, no snow, too nice, let's go !!! Thanks for the comment.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Very beautiful this music. This music transmit peace and love. Pretty as a sunny day. =)
Thank you for share my friend.
SouBrazil 1 year ago
@SouBrazil ...Ola Meu Amigo Ramon, Thank you for your kind words. Hope all is well with you. This is just another one of my silly little love songs. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@johnnieguitarII, Hi John, your music is really Beautiful. Congratulation!
Deus te abençoe meu amigo.
SouBrazil 1 year ago
@SouBrazil ...Muito obrigado, meu amigo.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
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SouBrazil 1 year ago
very nice
makemebad35 1 year ago
@makemebad35 ...Thanks
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Outstanding song John!
iamjohnnyprice 1 year ago
@iamjohnnyprice ...Thank you Johnny Price. I appreciate your listening and commenting.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
i like it
Framat
2009framat 1 year ago
@2009framat ...I like your comment...short and to the point...thank you.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Pro quality performance and composition.
I wish the lyrics were less romantic. A little bitterness and pain in the words would have been great The chord sequence is nice as well as the playing.
JGarcia658 1 year ago
@JGarcia658 ...Bitterness and pain and then the song would have been; "I knew it the first time I saw you, a real stabbing pain in my back. I knew that we would be divorced soon, you'd already planned your attack. I knew there was no other someone, could fill me with such dispair...For you have made me a believer...That our love is going nowhere..." No I'm sorry...it doesn't work for me...but I could have wrote it that way....LOL
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
@johnnieguitarII
Ha, ha: I meant a little bit of despair and insecurity. For example listen to the lyrics of I Go to Pieces by Peter and Gordon, If I Fell by John Lennon, Before and After by Chad and Jeremy, Time Won't Let me by The Outsiders, Don't You Care by The Buckinghams, stc. In other words many classic love songs have to do with unrequited love. IMHO your lyrics are too sweet. OTOH, the music is very strong and very interesting. That is why I crave different lyrics.
JGarcia658 1 year ago
@JGarcia658 I knew exactly what you meant, but I was approaching this one as another silly love song, like McCartney's "Silly Love Songs" with the shmultzy lyrics that ARE too sweet. Anyone who could fall in love at first sight would definitely fall into that category. What you are suggesting is a total rewrite of the lyrics entirely, with maybe even a different title. Interesting...I'll play with your suggestion. At any rate, thanks for the feedback.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
just the bottom half reminds me of santa clause
iceymanjack 1 year ago
@iceymanjack ...The bottom half of the song or the bottom half of my beard?
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
you wrote this? nicely done, i love the composition.
gjgjg123 1 year ago
@gjgjg123 ...Yes I wrote this song...and thanks for your kind words...
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Sweet song!Made me feel good:)
guitarlawyer75 1 year ago
@guitarlawyer75 ...I'm glad to hear that it made you feel good...I felt good about it right after I sang it for the first time. Thanks again.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Awesome!! I enjoyed this very much. All the best and thumbs up. G.
guruofpiano 1 year ago
@guruofpiano ...Thank you so much for taking the time to give it a listen...I really do apprecitate the feedback.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Hi John, this is a beautiful song, very authentic.
Best wishes, Guenter
GuenterGeurts 1 year ago
@GuenterGeurts ...Thanks for you comment. I really do appreciate your opinion. Best wishes to you as well.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
hey there john! it's always a pleasure to hear your new songs, but these time you really nailed it!
i loved the chord progression!
elcerry 1 year ago
@elcerry ...I appreciate your kind words and glad that you enjoyed this song. I'm working on an arrangement to do it with my band, 2nd Tyme Around. I've worked out some nice harmony lines for it. Can't wait to record a version of it with the band.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Perfect !
djdede 1 year ago
@djdede ...Thanks.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
Hey Johnnie,
I REALLY enjoyed this one. Beautiful words and I love the chord changes!! Very well done. You are the man!!!!!!!!!!!! BSP
BeatleSongPlayer 1 year ago
@BeatleSongPlayer ...Coming from a Beatle Song Player that means a lot. Thank you so much.
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago
A fantastic composition....and performance. I really enjoy original material.
Just curious, how long did it take you compose this piece from concept to performance?
bryanrobertson 1 year ago
@bryanrobertson ...From concept to performance? It took about 45 minutes to write the lyrics. Some times they come easy. I wanted to keep the "hook" in each verse and in the refrain as well.. There was actually one other verse that I didn't use, because it was made up of verses one and two. The melody just came to me as I sang the lyrics for the first time. I'll say the total time from concept to perfromance was a little over an hour. Thanks for asking
johnnieguitarII 1 year ago