SARNUS - Tears of Vitriol (DEMO)

[gaara9994]

Great stuff mate!

[BLASPHEMY85]

yeeeeeeeee!!!!

exelent!!

[timtom29]

kommt fett

[IINoMorePainII]

Awesome my friend!

One of the best demo i've ever listen to!

Come on ! I want More!!!! :D

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lyrics start at 0.17

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belay the im not crazy bit at large comment.

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scream audible-

im not crazy youre the one whos crazy!

im not crazy i am a pretty baby!

im not crazy madness will unfold!

keep me strapped in the chair ill do my best to keep control!

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heres some random lyrics i made for your piece sing it alternating from soft to scream audible tho not death metal scream.

tears of the virgin mary, tears of vitriol, down in the blue hell hole. paranoia takes control.

tears of the virgin mary, tears of vitriol. feel the embrace of silk on asphalt and know your heart is cold.

for the slow guitar solo-

cant you see? (spoken)theyre all against me!(louder spoken) cant you see!(shouting)

guitar mash up after- im not crazy!

[SnoopY123654789]

nice...nice...nice...AWESOME!!­!i love this song...i love sarnus :D

[Domm2405]

WOHA!!!

[evanashcraft]

Would be better without the whammies in my opinion just saying...

[Domm2405]

LOL, where have u found those whammies?

[TwistedInk94]

nice^^ i like it

[DeathMetalFan310]

its an awsome demo love the guitar, get a really good deathmetal or goregrind vocalist

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start of beginning of lyrics at 0.17

[Domm2405]

I'll try 'em, THX!

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2.28laaaa, laaa (melodic), feel it bend your mind (whisper spoken) feel it twist and turn, bet your life a million to one were the only ones who burn. (exstatic shouting) be hospitable to your guests, be gracious to your guests, be honourable to your guests, be humble to your guests.put them in the i.c.u, put them in the i.c.u, put them in the i.c.u

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1.48 be hospitable to your guests and get them a stay in the i.c.u. be hospitable to your guests and put them in the i.c.u.

 get them ringside seats-to a beautiful bedside view.

[PANDA2174]

It's a.....different i really don't care if there's a singer but you need at least a bigger solo. To me it all sounds like one jam session. The drummer is good though.

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scream audible-

im not crazy youre the one whos crazy!

im not crazy i am a pretty baby!

im not crazy madness will unfold!

keep me strapped in the chair ill do my best to keep control!

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heres some random lyrics i made for your piece sing it alternating from soft to scream audible tho not death metal scream.

tears of the virgin mary, tears of vitriol, down in the blue hell hole. paranoia takes control. tears of the virgin mary, tears of vitriol. feel the embrace of silk on asphalt and know your heart is cold. for the slow guitar solo- cant you see? (spoken)theyre all against me!(louder spoken) cant you see!(shouting)

guitar mash up after- im not crazy!

[Domm2405]

Havaianopt, Shmuckla... thank yeh 4 yer comments! I'm workin' on a new song and it will be 100 times better than this one!

THX, Metal be with yeh!

[Havaianopt]

I'm real jealous of your music, keep the very good work.

But then it just needs a voice and a heavier riff somewhere, but the music is very nice, clean riffs through the song, congrats!

[Shmuckla]

I usually don't like amateur bands that much, but your materials are nice!

[daloce031]

this' not music!

[caxondomix]

u need a lead singer

[maggot4life9]

man ur really good give me a message when u make more

[c2c2p1]

bit of blair witchus, needs to be scaryer, hallower, this great btw i like it. it reminds

me of a movie or slide show i saw in my younger years of a doll that was always in

a differnt place of an old abandon mantion

[c2c2p1]

the vid...songs great

[c2c2p1]

does this statue have pitch black eyes?

or r they brown?

[c2c2p1]

of course id pick the statue

[Domm2405]

Haha, what 4???

[c2c2p1]

something along the lines of a scare crow

[Exnovum]

Nice, keep it up mate and good luck :)

[c2c2p1]

or wut does the weaping statue symbolyze?

whitness to horror? left behind? victemized?

hatered for internal saspended animation that

has been cast on it? seriusly?..

[Domm2405]

Well, that's the point, it's up to u to decide!

It can mean one of the lot or two, or even everithing! It depends on how u feel this song.

[c2c2p1]

this is a song id listen to the i took

over the world, driveing through the desret

on a harley. there will only be a few left,

relitives and maybe a few friends. so the

statue weeps because even though i came to rule all, u canot rule a statue.

[c2c2p1]

after i* GD you tube need to let ppl

edit

[Mystarvingbambina]

ahuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!! me=happy! lol

another great song of yours....but what's the weeping statue? It's gorgeous..!!

[joltblue]

sweet, do you play the guitars? or is it guituar pro? either way its awesome. i love the feel of it. i never can get the right passive angry sound like you got goin on. i think i cool do a really cool job of this on mine guitar. sounds of a nu metal burzum. got chords? sounds like a, but a little flat? really cool tune

[Domm2405]

THX, man!

The tune is 5 tones under the Open C Tunning.

Angry indeed!

And yes, I play guitar... this one was made with the GP though, hehe...

[thorus842]

METAL Be With you!!!^^

[Domm2405]

That's right, METAL! hehe, the only Immortal...

[Domm2405]

I think I'll upload an MP3 of this song if the others will like it...

[greendayrpunk]

this is really great , great work, were can i get ur guys music i love it???

[Domm2405]

Well, this was meant to be a light remake of the song Cursed... I changed it so much that it turned out to be a new song, lol

ENJOY

[thespoonofdeath]

nice, it kicks ass