[Nya-chan Production] The Loneliness of Sae

[RYUTAZA]

this is sparta!!

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hah, couple of kickass bits (33s and 1:22s). You need to keep the movement/dynamics flowing though. The problem with editing anime is the lack of movement in many shots, it really helps to zoom or pan or increase the rhythm of your cuts when the movement dries up (e.g. could pan the bg at 41s).

ps. i don't normally know what i'm talking about, but this is one of those things i wish i'd been told at the beginning :|

[wolfiinka]

Nah, can't see moving the scene after the 33s mark, there was a feeling of stillness intended.

But maybe I could've panned the start a little more (the talking faces)

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even a really tiny bit of movement keeps things flowing.

omg.

you so ooooold :D

/is even older ;_;

[Kirarak]

great job, very interesting mood.