"In-Game" Original Series Teaser

[Standardchannel01]

This is actually pretty good in terms of plot and character personality.

[ClicedFTW]

WTF that was so brutal! I love this!

[khwv056]

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooool

[Theunratedr2]

Sorry But I disprove of this series, The animation Looks faulty and the comedic references are unappealing.

[1ard]

do u plan on doing an actualy serries with this? like u make episodes?

[khwv056]

@1ard he is using flash pro cs5 to make  anime

[Hm0oBoI]

next part please

[Dukandra]

Damn that was stylish

[LightflashZ]

Is this anime going to be like with arcs like "Rescue Sasuke arc" or just random enemies with no story like "Shinryaku Ika Musume"

[TaijutsuJoshua]

I'd love to see more videos of this. Do you have any more?

[Gogeta5SSJ]

lol "Have fun killing Trolls, well except this Troll!" Troll Face FTW

[timmythach]

An internet series? Definitely.

But on professional television? Maybe in the future...When everything is crap,

[dragonxanimation]

lol its just videos games xD

[inuku7459]

ROFL!

[Gogeta5SSJ]

lol hilarious and awesome

[EmoGhost1995]

Troll face lol

[Naurto92]

I'LL TAKE A CHIP AND EAT IT.

(Death Note)

[PhiferWolf]

I enjoy this as a series, i would love to see it cleaned up a bit and would gladly watch it!

[TheAeroMechanic]

"You sir fail at life!" Winning.

[LadyJane2876]

This should be on Adult Swim. I'm being totally honest! Animes usually are seen on adult swim more than Comedy Central and G4. The Adult Swim seems pretty picky though because they either chose popular animes or just ones that might look appealing to them and their viewers. Your anime is very entertaining and comedic which Adult Swim will definitely look into! Please start up this series!!!

[radichead]

Why do some parts look shitty and some parts look epic?

[amarantharaine]

Haha...I love it! The dialogue in the beginning is a bit awkward but it just gets better after that.

[firedragon33332]

This is awesome! When is episode 1 coming?

[LightflashZ]

When is this coming out (Episode 1 of In-Game) PLEASE I REALLY NEED TO KNOW , BUT PLEASE DON"T ANSWER WITH SOON THIS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

[thedarkginko]

im just good drawing at paint cuz they dont move :/

[TheGawain13]

OMG I loved this! could you tell me more about "In Game"?

[jjeshjod]

wait, is this a series? i couldnt find any more videos D:

[smyton4tw]

@ParaNoia61193 lol, no its ok!

[smyton4tw]

@ParaNoia61193 Thanks :D but actually I didn't reference from them. It's just the way a mod would address a player. As for Advent Children, I never watched that.

[michaelwatsonful]

@smyton4tw Who did the voices?

[SuberbardHD]

@KnightsXAnimationz we are working in a way that doesnt need much animating skill

[SuberbardHD]

hey everyone me and My Team are making a brand new anime and we need someone that can animate properly we already have at least 10 skilled people working on it so if anyone is interested send me a message.

[TheRickochet90]

Lmao funny. Make this!!

[xKatsuragiKeima]

Please make this a series, I would love to see it

[Railfan1TV]

Make a series!

[xMaudykaulitz]

Oh my gosh, this was faking hilarious, haha! "Except this troll" Nick, awesome. No other words needed. Haha!

x

Maudy, the netherlands.

[highschool12100]

40 is that kakashi and obito combined

[johnnyhrex]

OMG I LOVE YOUR ANIMATIONS :D

[obeytheblood]

A TAKE A SWORD AND STAB YOU WITH IT.

*Death Note reference.

[KingZolem]

@obeytheblood More of a parody of how in most anime they'd do a five minute or more monologue of 'how'.

[heatsboi23]

dude in the green kinad look like kakashi

[0rangeblitz]

adultswim. id watch

[TKnightcrawler]

It'd be a funny series.

[Niveous23]

this was pretty damn good, i would watch this on adult swim...def

[etaa]

"I noticed that you were doing some nasty exploiting....,,,,, and shit talking.." LOL that cracked me up real good.

[xpotential007]

Love it

[matte316]

Really nice animated and good humor.. LOVED IT :3 This is just the kind of show i would like to see on tv! :D

[ericmarvel1]

wath the program is this??

[SuperShiznit11]

This was really good,and I like your OC's,they look good,but it feels like a spin off of Naruto.

[ColeSlawSausages]

this looks like something i could get into, i can really see a future with this

[Dave102693]

Oh wow lol

[RexcorJ]

Could use some work, but it's definitely a good teaser. I'd love to see the full version, with trolls killin' trolls...

EXCEPT THIS TROLL!... Yeah, nvm me.

[johnnydel2327]

except this troll xDD

[dangergadet]

... and shit talking. lol awesome

[DBZandBleachFans26]

wow.

[Heart155]

That was great. Is this based off of Shadowbane, or your own game, or what? I haven't seen any of your work since Shabane kinda ended

[Dantexz17]

man i love it! xD troll face XD whaaat xD

[DavisTheClock]

Animation isn't bad. But it's not good either. You have potential though, it's easy to see you'll get much better with practice.

Although the idea itself isn't fantastic. Where's the danger if it's just a game. The action scenes become kind of pointless. A comedy could work (and it seems that's sort of what you're going for). But... personally I've always thought video game worlds are bad for a setting. It becomes much harder to connect with the characters if they aren't even real characters...

[whitefang4000]

This is amazing! I love this vid soo much! It's extremely well animated, and it's hilarious!

[AGENTSpinachPizza]

xD 1. The moderator reminds me of me because:

a. no one gets his references to stuff

and

b. he tries to "salvage his dignity" after humiliation by making strange poof-away's/bye-bye's/exits/I forgot what else it's called.

2. This animation is awesome. 0:

3. The only reason I know this is an MMORPG-based thing is because of MapleStory. Yes, the thing you didn't know about in the comment to xSasu. :D Tee-hee.

4. It DOES look sorta Naruto-esque. 0:

[codosanuka]

"Have fun killing trolls... Well...

...EXCEPT THIS TROLL!!!! *Trollface* "

[JoshArtisto]

"How? I take my sword.....and stab you with it."

[spidertoxinsadesweex]

GET IT ON ADULT SWIM THEY ACCEPT ANYTHING ANIME THEY CAN GET

[holone1]

Allright Smyton, I cant wait. When is the serie done? I know you said that you dont promess thouse thinks. But how much have you animator? I juust wanna know >_<

[KaosEspada]

what software do you use to make your animations?

[diley163296]

Such a great idea :D

[ChakraWarrior2012]

Brilliant. An anime based on an MMORPG, genius.

Could use a little touching up, but otherwise, really great.

You have a plot yet?

[SwordSkill2]

lol! That would be Eric der Vogerweid if he lived... XD!

[1GODOFWAR1]

LOL I didn't get his Internet reference when I saw this a while ago. I get it now.

[davidfirecloud]

what is the song 1.20

[KaosEspada]

please make more! :D

[RandomXxAnimexX]

i hope that guy doesnt catch me hacking :D

[MniJim]

also THIS NEEDS 2 B ON G4 O_O

[MniJim]

I got that refrence :)

[BUGHUNTER6]

How long is the guy with the green hair going to stand like that :P 0:34

[stickks9875]

Okay why is this not a show...dammit this god should be

[lipailong2]

Pretty good seeing as it's done by one animator. It actually outclasses some of the animation in Naruto(which is hilarious) and only has one serious flaw. It leans to much toward Naruto-style anime.

[smyton4tw]

@lipailong2 Thanks man :D and I agree. I'm working on my own style. After Kakashi vs Sasuke, I'll be making another short clip.

[whitefang4000]

@lipailong2 I'm sort of confused as to how it's Naruto-style. Naruto is anime, anime is a style, not a genre (trust me a I did a project on it). Basically almost all anime looks the same. Yes people make slight changes like hair and eyes here and there, but essentially, anime is the same. You look at two eps from different animes, it looks as though it was made by one person. Sorry if I sound offensive or anything, i'm not trying to be, i'm just confused by what you mean.

[Inuvash255]

@whitefang4000 however, withing the style of cartooning called anime, there are substyles. Every series as a style as to way it is drawn. For instance, Sailor Moon isn't drawn the same as Dragon Ball Z, and FLCL isn't animated the same as Bleach. The style you see in this video really leans toward a Naruto style, seen in the clothing choices, build, and faces of the characters.

[whitefang4000]

@Inuvash255 Alright, I see. I still don't see too much Naruto in this video, but I get what your saying. Thank you.

[lipailong2]

@whitefang4000 It's the way the characters act and speak. It's the way the action plays out. Watch Naruto, then watch Soul Eater then watch Cowboy Bebop. The differences are obvious.

[SCRanting]

@lipailong2 no not really, if naruto animated lower than this their fans would give them so much shyt, even 167 looked better than this, i just hate people like you who just bitch and moan, when you cant do any better

[lipailong2]

@SCRanting I'm bitching when I'm giving somebody else praise lol? Yet you reply to a 6 month old post bitching about me having an opinion. Hypocrite.

[100max100]

2:00 LOL!!!!

[FinalFantasy773]

Really great man. As for your question. It seems like a great show idea for Adult Swim rather than G4TV, which last I checked, hasn't been playing shows like this or Comedy Central) plot wise. Animation could use some touching up, but overall, it seems like a fun watch. Keep it up. Are you still working on this project?

[iYuumei]

I'd love to see this on a network! It's the love for Roleplaying combined with amazingness and epic lulz! The moderator makes me think of my fellow Admin on this website I work at, combined with a moderator we actually do call a Druid XD The voices are still a bit in the development, but that's probably coming my point of view since I well... act... sorta XD I

I'd love to see this as a real tv show. If I had the cash, I'd definitely help donate for the cause! Any other way I can help with this?

[CI369]

Awesome Rocket Sauce!

[LvsTheworld]

haha I would watch this on Adult swim.

[animefoolycooly]

thats awesome!!!!!!!! know what are the programes you us again and how much would it cost? cant wait till i make animeations like that!!!! ^^!

[shinobi4082]

Wow XD

I don't even know where to START on this one.

1.) Noobs

2.) "You fail at life."

3.) 'I take my knife, and I stab you."

4.) "Have fun killing trolls!"

And last but not least...

THE TROLL FACE.

THAT. WAS. AWESOME! And very hilarious, too^^ It was full of L33t. XD

[kahminah]

Lmao....Noobs

[Temarifanforlife]

lmao

[09ACBrown]

Damn i just have to subscribe to your vids man your so talented

[ITannor]

Rofl

[123455866201Aaron]

Lol so funny

[lolboy258]

"you sure fail at life"

[respeckmusic]

"in game seems pretty awsome. you got talent mayne cant wait to see the next episode

[alecc178178178x2]

i felt like i just watched an episode of Gintama, its epic,lame, n funny at the same time :|

[E15]

wow dude, just win OwO

[PivotAkatsuki]

I demand more "In-Game".. well if you have time and intrest that is :3

[TheAferLifeProject]

WHAT IS THE NAME OF THE AUDIO IN THE BACKGROUND! i might use it for my animation^^

[MrMusicDork]

Well... I take my sword.. And I STAB YOU WITH IT!!! EPIC.

I laughed soo hard. You should definitely continue with this.

As for the recent scene it's either the one where the nod is on top of the dome or the first 5 seconds.

[amishitaru]

awesome just awesome



[bockyhal]

This is made of pure win, please let this be a series !

[Lechusabot]

Very good, however I believe it would be much better if it wasn't about MMO's, you'd have a larger audience

[WolfNCrow1]

This was pretty good, Most animations either lack fluidness but pack in comedy, Or lack in comedy and pack in visuals , This one was like a combined form of both, Awesome Animation, Awesome Jokes, Overall Good thinking behind the project.

[mckeelie]

I love this! I would so watch this if it was on TV!

[kijodragonfist60]

you should watch tta

[dh30xpro]

dude i so sub you

[DNRmt21]

great, you are really talented. just a tip- i think your lineart needs to be thinner, it would give it a much more professional look. it is a great size for closeups but the wide shots need to have thinner lines. keep it up!, i'm waiting for more animations from you...

[BrianStantonTV]

When will more of this be out ? i would be willing to pay for this... its amazing

[SamAzoyh42]

Lmao!! YES!! Make more!!!

[BrianStantonTV]

OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!

[MrBrannfjell]

Yes, I like it. If you can make 20 min episodes like these at least 1 ep each month or even faster, would actually be quite awesome!

[theMODof]

T_T

TEACH ME!!!

[li1959]

do u use a mouse or a mouse pen

[dionsis8]

you are an amazing artist do you use deviant art too ?

[Sigfee]

This...is...BEAST. One thing, "You sir, fail at life." Was corny. use anime talk. :3

[TheDoorIsJammed]

Awesome! It was deleriously good! Are you doing the script or is someone else? I like the voices and the effects- one line was a bit wierd '...I noticed you were doing some nasty exploiting.' Is there any other kind? Also, it might be more dramatic if the 'I take my sword, and stap you with it!' was split for an awesome delivery of 'Mod Powers' :3 Looking forward to seeing more of this!

[smyton4tw]

@TheDoorIsJammed Haha, I can see your a gamer. Do you play MMO's? Thanks for your critic :)

[Dancing406]

@smyton4tw I think the Fight didn't last long enough. it was to fast would have loved to see him Damaged and stuff With Blood on his forehead & all scratched up. But i LOVE IT. :)

[shivers1231]

Awesome.

[NeoHaseo579]

Hey could you teach me some stuf about flash. I can draw and stuff already. But I wouldn't mind some help. :)

[Mirani97]

HAHa, at 1:03 that bad guys hair is behind his ears but at 1:10 his hair is in front of his ears!

Still, this is awesome.

[xSasu]

Just like MapleStory..

[smyton4tw]

@xSasu Have no idea what that is..

[straightlikethat09]

@smyton4tw the naruto style animation is nice dont change it

[KronusFL]

Dude, Awesome :P

But... (not that i could do better) if you compare it with the anime's that are on tv and stuff like that, it still sometimes is a bit 'laggy'... Anyways, i LIKE it !

srry for my bad english -.-

[MegaSaiyanking]

at 0:57 the guy with the green hair. just looks like he is the background image. he is not moving

[PirateNinjaKell]

dear god that was freaking awesome XDDD i loled so hard at the internet references.

btw...who voices the moderator guy gotta say there a talented voice actor xDDD

and i think the voice sasuke in ur other animations too?

well he sounds alot like yuri lowenthal (eng voice of sasuke) sometimes which is really cool! =Dkeep up the awesome

[TheJaspercrawford]

XD HA HA this is awsome

[dakatubes]

holy shit that was awesome!!! looks a LOT of work.

i think i can also do this, except or the backgrounds! how you do them so amazing!!!?!?!

like for example 0:45 .

[chohakkai92]

it should be on Adult Swim ! 2:18 now thats style !

[xXJayRainbowVeinsxXx]

Adult swim it'll be funny as hell!

[MrCrazyLeprechaun]

he has a lot more talent than i do. o_o

not as much as leah, but still! I don't even wanna draw anymore! -_-

[LongFingered]

I would so watch this on tv XD

[KuchikiJ]

you really need to finish this.

[GothicCookiesAndMilk]

Haahaa this is actually funny! I was expecting something a little crap but it's great (*^o^*)

[SgtJohnnyS]

And if you want you can check my work on deviantArt. just search johnny-wolf :)

[SgtJohnnyS]

It's good work really but lets make few suggestions :

1) look a lil on anatomy - I know you like naruto and sometimes you inspire and/or take few pictures of manga and use em on the motion. It will help you if you practice on paper and then scan/re-draw it on PC.

2) in flash it's good to make limbs/body in few layers - it makes it easier to make moves smoother.

But otherwise givin it 99,9(periodic)% of 100

[Morghman]

lol, I was a bit uneasy about it at first but watching it a second time, it's pretty good. Nice job.

[MrSkullcandy96]

r u coppercabs brother?

[VIDSNCRAPProductions]

You sir, fail at life XD

[pikechu90xx]

2:02 trollface

[SouLWarfare42]

love this show if it actually comes to adult swim

[TheMaximumDarkness]

whens the next episode?

[jonathanbasilio]

I see the brother of Kakashi in this serie jajajajaja ... the finish BYYYYE really rLz xD

[KinggyEgg]

Is the 'Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee' part a Retarded Police Man Reference?

[DCPIV13]

there is a anime that is «just» like this. bit i think i like this better

[Burori1]

HOLY CRAP! THIS IS SO AWESOME!

[TheSupersaiyanLegacy]

i get it,its about a game.The man hack the game and went inside the rock wall.LOL i take my sword and stab you with it.

[KingZolem]

It's a little hard to tell what the shows about, whether it's serious or lols. An idea of the tone would be ince, as well as some basic plot ideas. I'm really torn on whether or not I would watch this. Some parts of me say yes, otehrs no, and other parts saying 'yes if this, no if that' and others 'yes if that, no if this'. A better idea of what the show is about would help me form a final opinion.

[li1959]

where did you get photoshop

[li1959]

omg i talked to smyton4tw

[li1959]

where do u get your backgrounds

[smyton4tw]

@li1959 I paint them.

[chao300]

Shabane 2!!!!!

[Theomenz]

The troll face killed it. XD

I'd pay alot to see this get on air. Mixing adult swim and Runescape could kick ass. Good work. :)

[TheMaximumDarkness]

this is hot, i wanna make my own With my main character "Xonart" but i dont kno how 2

[MrCrazyLeprechaun]

i'd watch this...

[gogarith]

wow i gotta say this looks really promising dude good job id love to see it on tv but chances are theyd have you censor it a tad since you cant say shit on tv ( not sure why it offends so many people but it does)

[Colest503]

The dialogue is a little too cheesy and forced. It seemed like you tried too hard to incorporate internet lingo to the point where it sounds unnatural.

The "I take my sword, and stab you with it" bit kind of made me cringe.

Also, as mentioned earlier, I think you need to develop you own unique style a bit more. It is almost a carbon copy of Naruto's style.

If this is going to be submitted to a network to get them to air your show, I would polish it up a bit more as well.

[Colest503]

@Colest503 Make sure your proportions are exact, pretty up the backgrounds and foreground objects, add more detail/shadows to the characters, stuff along that nature.

That being said, the concept is (of course) awesome and if executed properly could potentially be a huge success. Keep up the good work Smyton!

[SilverSaber14]

Wow that troll face is really creepy. LOL!!!!!! :3

[Xgirl9111]

this is seriously funny XD me likie

[eXTRAXE]

Who's the voice actor for the moderator?

[carloruby3]

lol i'd love to see this on T.V knowing that trolls will rise up and destroy the world!

[ImReaching]

"You sir fail at life!" LOL

[MrMoneyMunchlax]

"well maybe i can salvage my dignity if i leave with style"

me: "HA! your dignity jumped out a window was hit by a bus and pooped on by a dog"

[DemonicPickle25]

"How? How can you do that?"

"How? well I take my sword...and stab you with it."

LOLOLOLOL I cant stop saying that.

[Darkwizzrobe]

I really like the use of Shadowbane music its a nice touch