Jonny 5's Rhyme of the Day 11-7-10 "Glimpses" (Survival Story, Chapter 1)

[maxmumridefan]

gotta sat jonny, this is by far my favorite rhyme

[indphi]

Hu... will turn the tide.!? It's ear relevant.

[oMyMike]

AWESOME

[PezaoSystem]

I guess the last verse, it's like, government and midia massificate people patterns, feelings and people.

It was my interpretation.

[cryohazard]

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Become a part of the story.

[princessparsimony]

@cryohazard CT, you can't put a web address in a comment it'll spam you. You can write it like this:

defendatlantis. com or

defendatlantis(dot)com

[rookis25]

heya J5

[Shroudborn]

To address your questions: I live between a world of temptation and a world of realized consequences, and it feels like a struggle. I've always had a hunger for more, but in the last few years I've realized what it is I really want more than possessions. I first tried to turn the tide when I realized everyone around me is drowning in their everyday routine. I held my life in my hands the day i moved for something more, as well as a pencil and notepad to begin writing.

[JayT7]

@Shroudborn defendatlantis  com

[Shroudborn]

Prose means to write commonly or dull, as well as without poetic style, correct? The beautiful thing about art is the fact that many people can percieve it in multiple ways. I'm not entirely sure what it is you're trying to convey, as I see multple possibilites.

[flobot5]

@Shroudborn I don't think it has to be dull! But, yes, prose is the opposite of verse, essentially.

[princessparsimony]

Chapped her one End pros.

Am I getting the hang of this?