My Poetry!!!

[coldblud101]

so u took 2.50 min to start the poem...fuk man!!!

[music4everz95]

love ur poetry :)

[AkiiesThePoet]

I think they are good for starters. You just have to concentrate if you want to expand them but who says poems have to be long anyway... begin appreciating yourself more... you deserve it.

[TheUndertakerSaysRIP]

are u gay 

[EMABand1]

Sometimes I feel like Im average at everything too and I compare myself but thts just bc we limite ourselves with our minds!! U are a very very relatable and deep person I can tell so use tht to reach out into ur talents to make something poetic and beautiful bc u are!! :)

[FatmanTwin]

ya tredmill riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight... sex machine?

[xurbetrayalx]

twilight is the worst thing that has ever hit the planet

[Love2LiveMusic]

=) great job

I write a lot of poetry and songs and i text them to myself too, glad i'm not the only one lol

[bunny21st]

I like ur poetry except the last one sound emo no offense

[SingMeASmile]

You're really talented. As a fellow writer I can really say I respect and enjoy your work. :)

[LovingPoetry]

Some of those poems were kind of deep:) keep them comming!!

[BeautifulHyster1a]

I liked the Cigarettes poem ALOT!!! awww

[xx3LiiS3xx]

you sound ghetto when you read, its so cute! lol

[JoSieLove2Sing4u]

I liked your poetry debut, keep writing love!

[scene608monty]

GREAT!!!

[AprilAthena7]

I love your poetry! :) I subbed you too! I hope you sub me too! :)

[ilykaybby]

your really talented !!!

[darkal13]

The first poem was awesome

[unofficalalicecullen]

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great job :) :P

[PshIMaDITZ]

I read ahead before you got to the other ones, and I totally thought they were one poem. The rhythm didn't exactly flow, but It definately worked.

[boGGbeatDown]

That was really cool. What speech problem by the way? I perfectly understand everything you say! o.O?

[wigginssmith]

omg you're freaking awesome <3

[7justmyluck7]

i feel the same way!! like, i feel like im ok at everything but theres nothing that i really strive in,,its werid haha, but great poems!! i love to write(:

[lordsturgeon]

Make more chappis it was AWESOME!

[ronaldy131]

The first one was awesome TeeHee

the one of cleaning ur self wasLol

and the last of cutting ur self x___x was emo ;[

[Chappis91]

yeah that one was very emo, I told myself, lol.

Thanks! :D

[BeautifulHyster1a]

@Chappis91 even if it was emo, who cares? it was very good

[BeautifulHyster1a]

@ronaldy131 so what if it was emo....i write most of my poetry usually when i feel depressed or angry, they just come out better!!!!

[bdt1619]

How long did you two date?

[Chappis91]

only 3 weeks, lol.

But yeah Cigarettes was a big issue for us. For one, I dont like em, and second, he would smoke it constantly. Just walk away from me and light one up.

The part that hurt me was that he said he would quit for me (which is kinda stupid wen u think about it). And that the next time he smoked would be the end of our relationship. Around a week later, we got in a fight and he lit one up right in front of me. Idk if it was intentional or a coincidence.

[edisonchargerpride]

your really good and i thought twilight was better than new moon to haha i love your videos(:

[Chappis91]

Haha really! :D

Twilight was beautiful, I just like how realistic it looked, it looked like I cute little indie movie. The fog and the trees.

The second one was too much Hollywood special effects. It was just crazy. It didnt stunk though, it had its good moments (jacob).

[meshmesh5577108]

1st yaaaay .ur poetry is rlly good i rlly liked it . and lol at the "i liked jacob ahh jacob" lmfaoo i watched it FOR jacob :P . anyway plzz try making videos sooner cuz i'm like addicted 2 u . XD .xoxox

[Chappis91]

Haha Jacob was hella sexy!

He suprised me, all that working out sure paid off, lol.

And thanks :)

I Have more poetry and "quotes" too.

[BeautifulHyster1a]

@Chappis91 keep writing Fernando! id like to see more poetry vids from u. oh u should check out my newest video...i was watching yer videos on food shopping and what not and the cooking vids and making that ambrosia salad, mmmmm i wanted to make it, i never tried it, so i went shoppinggggggggggggg