Yeah, okay... not bad, but why the conceit? and why do you draw self worth through comparison? why put someone down in a song, especially someone who doesn't know you? What flaw of your own are you compensating for by this need to feel superior that bleeds through? and really, why give a shit about other people's opinions confirming your self wortth? Of course it resonates with a few of the reg narcissists, that's a give me. Yes, I'm talking to all of you. You know who you are.Is he real person?
@sargeantketchup I apologize then, obviously many people find this song funny. Not my comedic cup o' tea. Plus I certainly don't know your character. I enjoy the rhythm, and I get chills from your song several times during strong points, I sincerely commend you, however imo your music could promote a more positive message, perhaps more musical elaboration, especially during bridges. Remember, people feel the music you play, your words largely impact feelings thots. What you sing, you implant.
@liesofpolaris If you'll notice, this song was written a year and a half ago. I have written, recorded, and posted many, many songs since then. Perhaps you'd enjoy listening to some of those a bit more.
OMG, Sargeantketchup not to creep you out or anything, but you really look like my long losted sister. Would your name be Sarah Ludwig by any chance? I haven't seen her since i was like 2 or 3 maybe and I didn't really know her. Her mom and my dad devorced and my sister and her mom lost contact with my father, therefore I don't know her. I have tried to do internet searches and everything. This woman in the video is shocking resemblance to old photos. If anyone knows her please message me!
Your first song is incomparably better than even my best songs multiplied together. I'm still going to share my whole album with the world though, so EVERYONE can be better than me, and not be ashamed of their creations. :)
I must have missed this one when it first came out. Great job! I can see the loser sitting outside with his guitar in arrogantville, wondering why people don't see him for the god that he is!
What a great first original song! You come across as a great story teller, great lyrics and melody and humor or seriousness depends on your point of view. Thanks for brightening my day....Kathy
thankyou!! this song cheered me up after the day that im having today.... i watched whathebuck and he showcased you... turns out your the BOMB!! i like how you make it seem like its going to be one of those cleche love inspiration songs, but in the second verse, i laughed till i almost peed my pants... wonderful voice!!!
Thanks for the suggestion, marinebiogirl1223. Now if you're through telling me how to write my songs, why don't you post some of your own to be critiqued by people your own age? :)
Look at me, I'm a youtube commenter. I will now quote the part of the video that I liked the best, therefore attempting to co-opt some of the awesomeness of the video for my own personal use:
Thanks for the comment. I was thinking about entering but I chickened out, mostly because I've never really written a song before this one. I plan on ghostwriting the majority of this competition just to try it out. Maybe next time. :)
I was hoping to be able to catch it (Song Fu, that is) and get in, but school just started up again, along with musical rehearsals five nights a week. We'll see what kind of mood I'm in when the Fu rolls around.
who cares go get a live!
aiktai 4 months ago
Loved it great job I really want to do Crappy Bagel Guy
, Maybe soon.
debbieswinyer 7 months ago
I think it's a cute song
debbieswinyer 8 months ago
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LOVE IT!!
YOU SHOULD PUT SOME VIDEOS UP ON ANTGIANT.COM
YOU CAN GET SOME MORE SPINS AND A CHANCE TO GET PAID FOR YOUR VIDEOS!!!
msnikkisailor 10 months ago
i really LOVE ur voice like alot!!
RyanandCallieShow 11 months ago
Yeah, okay... not bad, but why the conceit? and why do you draw self worth through comparison? why put someone down in a song, especially someone who doesn't know you? What flaw of your own are you compensating for by this need to feel superior that bleeds through? and really, why give a shit about other people's opinions confirming your self wortth? Of course it resonates with a few of the reg narcissists, that's a give me. Yes, I'm talking to all of you. You know who you are.Is he real person?
liesofpolaris 1 year ago
@liesofpolaris It's a joke, you know, meant to make people laugh? Or at least chuckle?
sargeantketchup 1 year ago 3
@sargeantketchup I apologize then, obviously many people find this song funny. Not my comedic cup o' tea. Plus I certainly don't know your character. I enjoy the rhythm, and I get chills from your song several times during strong points, I sincerely commend you, however imo your music could promote a more positive message, perhaps more musical elaboration, especially during bridges. Remember, people feel the music you play, your words largely impact feelings thots. What you sing, you implant.
liesofpolaris 1 year ago
@liesofpolaris If you'll notice, this song was written a year and a half ago. I have written, recorded, and posted many, many songs since then. Perhaps you'd enjoy listening to some of those a bit more.
sargeantketchup 1 year ago
haha! this is hilarious..... sing it to him!!
af6389 1 year ago
you are the prettiest original song i have seen in several days...at least four...i swear
dwdeclare 1 year ago
lol! this is great! you have a wonderful voice!
Ktpcwriter 1 year ago
you tell em ' guurl ! i love this song (: hah .
singing4everyone 1 year ago
This was beautiful!
kaleyweremusic 1 year ago
OMG, Sargeantketchup not to creep you out or anything, but you really look like my long losted sister. Would your name be Sarah Ludwig by any chance? I haven't seen her since i was like 2 or 3 maybe and I didn't really know her. Her mom and my dad devorced and my sister and her mom lost contact with my father, therefore I don't know her. I have tried to do internet searches and everything. This woman in the video is shocking resemblance to old photos. If anyone knows her please message me!
thejakeludwig 1 year ago
Hey i never heard of you before so this is the first song i have heard of yours. its amazing :-) i will look forward to finding more songs from you.
kingmark53 1 year ago
Your first song is incomparably better than even my best songs multiplied together. I'm still going to share my whole album with the world though, so EVERYONE can be better than me, and not be ashamed of their creations. :)
TheLoonwolf 2 years ago
I must have missed this one when it first came out. Great job! I can see the loser sitting outside with his guitar in arrogantville, wondering why people don't see him for the god that he is!
BoffoYuxDudes 2 years ago
@Zarok63 I think you should not insult a music major about their music unless you actually know what you're talking about...and you obviously don't.
PepperRoxd 2 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
i think if i only had an alright voice and could just about play a few chords id be careful writing a song mocking another person's musical ability..
Zarok63 2 years ago
Sweetie, she's way better than that.
xxxreadysetgo 2 years ago 2
@xxxreadysetgo This comment deserves a high-five. :)
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
@sargeantketchup Lol yay. I forgot to put it on my comment, but my first comment was @Zarok63.
xxxreadysetgo 2 years ago
lol
ThePianoSkitFiasco 2 years ago
Awesomest, awesomest song! Well done indeed
kalearenee1 2 years ago
sounds like you love yourself abit!
bishop199115 2 years ago
this is hilarious haha you have a real orgional pretty voice! nice job
sunx0shine 2 years ago
hahahahh i love this, song! i know how it feels and this song makes me happy. =)
posiedosie 2 years ago
might i ask who is the song about?
catcherkid20 2 years ago
Just some guy in my classes that I can't stand. :)
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
@sargeantketchup i wouldnt mind you disliking me enough to write a song to me <3
QmarcesQ 2 years ago
wow! really bitchy and really good!
springsgian4 2 years ago
this song is awesome! this is way better than some radio songs ive heard...girl you got it!!hahaha keep up the good work ;)
Lov3Hack3r 2 years ago
hahahaha this is amazing! i love the song, it really made my day :)
thepurplepancakes 2 years ago
I've listened to this song like 7 billion times :D
Favourited.
emsyblake 2 years ago 2
This is so catchy!! I love it!! :)
brokenstrings2009 2 years ago
What a great first original song! You come across as a great story teller, great lyrics and melody and humor or seriousness depends on your point of view. Thanks for brightening my day....Kathy
DKMaher13 2 years ago
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I love this song.
whitestripesiluv 2 years ago
wow you're really pretty and have an amazing voice too. keep on rockin. n___n
goodgulgonebadd 2 years ago
This Made Me Smile! It's So Funny :D
6Zombie6Kisses6 2 years ago
So I was watching Buck and I heard this and said "OMG I have someone like that... she sucks at singing, and at guitar!" :P
sampsonrgt 2 years ago
I can't STAND those people! The dude this song is about is in a whole bunch of my classes this year and he's driving me CRAZY!!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
IKR?! i have someone like that too!!!!
xflyingferretx 2 years ago
thankyou!! this song cheered me up after the day that im having today.... i watched whathebuck and he showcased you... turns out your the BOMB!! i like how you make it seem like its going to be one of those cleche love inspiration songs, but in the second verse, i laughed till i almost peed my pants... wonderful voice!!!
ansleygurl 2 years ago
Thanks so much! It always makes me happy to hear that I've improved someone's day. :) thanks for watching!!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
amazing
r33na1 2 years ago
:) thank you!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
this cheers me up everytime i listen to it haha
your so funny
and you facial expressions make it funnier
RickieNathanMarsden 2 years ago
:) Thanks for watching and commenting!!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
:) Thanks so much!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
LOVE THIS! YOU ROCK!
Irishgirl
irishloveblue 2 years ago
:) thanks a lot!!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wildcats14 2 years ago
Wooohoooo!!!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
Haha, I love the lyrics in this song!
XprincessXXconsuelaX 2 years ago
Thanks!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
Sing along!! "they think that I'm way better
Than you" I love your music. Can I have your CD please??
guidetogreen 2 years ago
Thanks for your comments. :) If I ever record an album youtube will definitely know about it!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
funny song
flowingover 2 years ago
Thanks!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
this made me laugh so hard
your amazing
RickieNathanMarsden 2 years ago
:) thank you
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
This is a really amazing song. I'm very happy to have heard it.
This really does prove how hard it is for people get seen on youtube. I mean you are so very talented as a singer and songwriter.
Also, the stupid pants part makes me laugh so hard. You have such disdain for the stupid pants.
hinakiba777 2 years ago
:) Thanks for your comments.
He really does have stupid pants. I get angry every time I look at them.
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
How rad are you found this song on Buck's show he's cool and I liked this song lol I subscribed I like your voice.
Zephyr18zion 2 years ago
:D thanks so much!!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
Your video just made me whole week.
No, my life.
THANK-YOU.
:D!
TravisBatesTV 2 years ago 2
WOW that's a lot of pressure! Haha thanks for watching :)
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
Your really good! I heard about you from what the buck.
JNS470 2 years ago
Thank you!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
You've really got an amazing voice. And this song is hilarious :D
ilovelucy456 2 years ago
:) thanks for watching and commenting!!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
this awesome and funny and mean and silly at the same time. Its perfect!!!!!!!
I wish i'd heard you sooner!
BTW I heard about you today from what the buck.
HastalaVeesta 2 years ago 2
:) Thanks a lot!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
wow, you have a really great voice, by the way, these lyrics just made my day.
TrevorHobbs1 2 years ago
:) Thanks, and glad I could make your day!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
Great song! I'm sure it would be funnier if I knew who it was about but I liked the melody and you have a lovely voice. =)
No1ShamelessFan 2 years ago
Hah, I'm sure we've all known "that guy". He's a jerk :P
Thanks for watching and commenting!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
Yay for Original songs.
-Matt
MusicMatterstv 2 years ago
:) Thanks for watching!
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
gosh people dont be so mean i like her music!
CrazyTeen5043 2 years ago
seriously this is the best song i heard from ppl who dont belong to bands from YT. 5/5 of course
Alinimus 2 years ago
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marinebiogirl1223 3 years ago
Thanks for the suggestion, marinebiogirl1223. Now if you're through telling me how to write my songs, why don't you post some of your own to be critiqued by people your own age? :)
sargeantketchup 3 years ago
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marinebiogirl1223 3 years ago
nicely done. have you tried any contests? theres some online like yobi sing and fame something.
tuberificvideo 3 years ago
This made me laugh SO FUCKING HARD.
SO HARD. I think I may have peed in the couch.
Love, Kaia
lungsareyummy 3 years ago 4
haha I'm glad I could bring so much joy into your life, Kaia.
sargeantketchup 3 years ago
Haha, "your stupid pants!" I know who this is about! You are waaaay better. This song made me smile! See ya at school tomorrow :)
geekchick42 3 years ago 2
who??!
wouldyoulike1 2 years ago
this song makes me happy i'm ur friend ;D
Druid103 3 years ago
Look at me, I'm a youtube commenter. I will now quote the part of the video that I liked the best, therefore attempting to co-opt some of the awesomeness of the video for my own personal use:
"LOL the part where you SING REALLY LOUD lol"
Good work.
nscibetta 3 years ago
yay! i almost want to e-mail this song to him....
the stupid pants part was my favorite. ;-p
jacksink07 3 years ago
oh god don't! he sees me everywhere, he just doesn't know who i am!
parsons1984 3 years ago
This was awesome Parsons! I can't wait to hear the ice cream shop song! <3
pippinroxmysox 3 years ago
Lawls! Right on!
infestedtom 3 years ago
This was nice. You should have entered the Song Fu competition.
CousinoMusic 3 years ago
Thanks for the comment. I was thinking about entering but I chickened out, mostly because I've never really written a song before this one. I plan on ghostwriting the majority of this competition just to try it out. Maybe next time. :)
sargeantketchup 3 years ago
next year ur gonna totally kick ass in the Song Fu :D
Druid103 3 years ago 2
He's right, ya know. This is good, especially for a first song. Any plans for Song Fu #5? Ken says there will be an announcement in September.
RockingJamboree 2 years ago
Thanks so much :)
I was hoping to be able to catch it (Song Fu, that is) and get in, but school just started up again, along with musical rehearsals five nights a week. We'll see what kind of mood I'm in when the Fu rolls around.
sargeantketchup 2 years ago
I'll second that! You'd be great in Song Fu.
cmonkee9 3 years ago