Academic Writing Tips : How to Write an Essay

[TheeUsernameX]

I just want a video where I can hand somebody my essay topic and requirements through the screen and have them do it for me.

[Yashman17]

Why am I watching this?

[reachkid14]

that sounds like a good book

[LitrentaProductions]

um.

[aminoair]

uh, um this is very helpful?

[QueerForCod]

its probably more like atleast 50 lol...

[SouthernVoice75]

Where are we in society today? Are you kidding me? Don't come after a lady just because she says "um" a lot. Are you kidding me? Come after me. I'm a man! I'm forty!

[4343felix]

One question, at the first sentence of the introduction paragraph, do I need to write a very interesting sentence to get the reader's attention like for example... Did you know that Mark Twain wrote a very famous novel? or something like that

[1988badluck]

go get your shiny box.lol

[AliveDog]

umm

[1MsFiness3]

Um. Uh Um Ah UU OO different tones of UMm. so it is a litt;e lesss notesable lol is this a teacher Ummmm Uhh UU OO... oh hell naw!!

[tktkana]

Did you just turn this video to an essay? Introduction, body, conclustion?

[oOVlPraLLaSlVOo]

I would have kept working on my essay had I known this would be so dull...

[triglwi]

um...um.....um...um.......um..­...um.....um

[racheltaylor101]

Okay, back to writing my essay. It's a lot more interesting than this video.

[Disney1466]

I've noticed that some people write very poorly about this clip and some of the comments ain't even about her teaching skills but about whether she says uum or not or just a hate to school in generel.

Well I think poeple should take the fact that it's actually pretty hard to make a cohesive lecture without saying uum a single time especially when taking to a camera into consideration.

At least I'M grateful that she's taking the time to tell what she finds important in an essay. THANK YOU!

[dagstidning]

not helpful

[Yashman17]

more important than walking?

[madeofmoney1995]

Mkay?

[madeofmoney1995]

ummm ummmm ummm umm'

i name is ummmm and ummm paper ummm china ummmm china ummmmm vm ummmmm beijing ummm topic ummmmm paper ummm take umm diffrent ummm pretty well ummm write it ummmm.

SHUT UP

[mystery1229]

um, i dont know how to um talk um. so uh, we're gonna write um an essay uh of something cause um I have nothing better to uhhhh do...

[dquintero2216]

UMM!

[Debedeb]

too many umm

[MissKyasurin]

2:26 Mark Train LOL

[christyvids]

um or uh is not very academic is it

[robpattinsonluvr3]

Thank you for helping me with finding a distraction....I really don't want to write my essay.

[JC9V]

She is doing a book report? That's not an Essay.

[jigmesam]

I never noticed that she said "um" so much. Granted, I'm Australian and "um" is the main sentence structure used here, so maybe I'm um.. used to it.

I was strangely attracted to the woman speaking, and noticed she had a wedding band, so maybe that's why I didn't notice the ums. ;)

[Minal123O]

Im going to write an essay on the word 'um' xD

[DogsRule765]

Lol, I can't stop laughing she says "um" a lot :P

[baharsahin]

I found the topic: Does "um" sound good when a person gives a speech on youtube?

[griphlican21]

so um this really um helped me um get ready um to write my ummmmm essay soooo yeah um thanks

[essayswriting]

This video give a interesting picture about How to write an essay? this give over all idea about writing essay. This very good help for essay writing and school going students.

[SuaveSweetie]

That was extremely helpful. I needed a fresh, clean refresh on how to write a good essay for my short story class essay that approaches me. Thank you so much for this! So helpful!

[JazminB666]

what should i write for my 3 supporting topics for law in greece and rome

[JazminB666]

26 actually!

[GracelessDementor]

Thank you. This was very helpful. And you managed to not make it boing.

[milfern3]

Laura Turner, you are hot.

[ak47justin1]

um um um um um um

[booksandvideos]

Fun fact: she said uh, or um, at least 24 times during this video. I counted :D

[kalervikramsingh]

you are beautiful laura

[Thymonico]

Thanks a lot! :D

However, why would one be assigned to write in a specific manner anyways!?

Is the information that the text contains going to become more informative? I say NO to writing correctelly and NO to having to do there weird tasks in school... And especially NO to nynorsk! XD

[TeamPNYY]

it's "their" not "there"

[brokennarcissist]

Essays are boring exercises in futility. No likes wrting them, no like reading them.

[michellexwhang1]

If essays are boring then just dont watch this video.. It's as simple as that ._. don't go downing on other people's videos over stupid opinions... I thought her video was very informative and interesting.

[brokennarcissist]

Could you suggest a more productive distraction for me while I avoid writting my essay?

I was merely taking a jab at fact everyone is forced to write about stuff they don't care about for people who don't want to read it.

[CrayolaRawr]

@brokennarcissist If you like taking pointless jabs then go ahead. But I think the jabs you are making are not only rude, but very offensive.

[brokennarcissist]

I was taking a jab at the writting essays, not the video. Get a grip.

[CrayolaRawr]

Then why comment on the video? Please keep your opinions to yourself in the future.

[brokennarcissist]

why so serious?

[Kimyx3Angel]

whats a ''jabs''?

[n8iveidiot13]

maybe because your a  bad writer DUH

simple really

you are a bad writer = people don't want to read it

other people are great writers on the other hand and people would gladly read it twice

[brokennarcissist]

Well, I get crack 80 in all my courses with minimal effort while remaining critical enough call the education system out on being a completely depressing waste of time that crushes vocabularies and enforces normative standards (at the expense ofexpressions and construction of meaning). It actually suffacates 'greatness'.

Thanks for your insightful comment though, it was so terribly interesting, I'll be chewing on it for sometime.

[SAXORXIII]

23 ums and one uh ...i hope she doesn't write her essays like that lol

[SweeTdeviL889]

WOW! that really helped!

i was having a hard time figuring out where and how to start writing the essay.. thanksx10000!!

[MrTorresanfield]

um um um um um i think uh uh uh uh im going to give you asome tips um um um on the essay um,common doug um um

[WaterBenderz]

lol

[NResistance]

your beautiful!

[UKEssays]

Great video with some useful information

[juvenileprince]

she isn't an expert. she is just reading out

[Kurupt24687]

Your not a good speaker to be honest. You said "um and Uh" more than 30 times.

[1holybladex]

acutally it was 24+

[roboedar]

the best writers are not necessarily the best speakers. furthermore, do you mean to tell us that obama is not a good speaker because he says, "um" too much?

stay on topic. this is a video about writing, not speaking.

[dslite12344321]

Your Scary

[strongbret1]

if u r writing an expository essay what r the main points u need. And also how do u form your thsis statement