The City

[jefftheworld]

Okay, you look weird as a white person.

[LuneFromage]

I enjoyed that. The close-up image of your closed eye covered in paint was a particularly powerful image in conveying the sadness of the realization that we are not the heroes of our own folk lore and that lack of control of our lives. Really lovely. :) It's something I had to watch a few times, and that's good, because it made me think. It's good to have to really look closely in order to understand.

[blackheartedelffairy]

@LuneFromage thanks :) and thanks for taking the time out to comment

[matrixknight88]

This was a very brave choice. It also looks really cool. The poem is really interesting as a comment on human nature.

[POETRYSTHEKEY2UANDME]

Cool poem and video, it was very creative! The meter was perfect! I am also a poet. I am thinking about expanding my horizens, and doing a little bit of art. Just wanted to share that, thanks.

[blackheartedelffairy]

@POETRYSTHEKEY2UANDME Thanks for sharing! Please don't hesitate to link me to some of your own poetry :)

[Darkangelp26]

Creepy!! O.o

whats that on your face? lol

[avatarfan4lyfe]

wtf lol:)

[WhiteRAZOR]

Creepy.... I hope those contacts don't hurt your eyes :P

[blackheartedelffairy]

@WhiteRAZOR It wasnt more of the contact but the combination of the contacts and getting white face paint in my eyes. >.<