Well you can chew my ear out anytime. I like to discuss songwriting. I understand where your teacher is coming from. Folks today dont have a lot of patience. so getting to the chorus quick is advantagous sometimes but I think you need to play it how you feel it. Great song!
Just me, Shaz. Nice comments - influences of a female randy newman on "fast forward my day" or the cars ric ocasek influence on "trip, trip" or the kinks. Good stuff. I told you. It's a nice little tune to work with. lata (i rated you 5 already)
I also have to tell you... on another vid I recorded in my bathroom... the acoustics were good... but I had to move the equipment out after... but it was cool. :)
I certainly didnt want to fast forward this one. Interesting song and vocals. I think this song has got an eighties feel about it and the backdrop to your stage area is also retro, all good stuff you got it going on girl !
Good stuff! Vocals kind of remind me of the kinks....and the verse chord progression reminds me of something...can't put my finger on it. Sounds great!
Excellent. I know it is still evolving well you are on a good track. I like the key changes, and you will have a great song your hands once you weed out the things you feel aren't working or add to what you already have. I would love to hear any changes you make, so send it my way when you finish it. I don't know how much you really need to change though. Pretty good how it is.
Pretty good how it is... I like that... thanks :) a tambourine.. perhaps...or a little percussion... it's a slow go... but it's good...... Thanks, Josh.
great mellow song & perfect lyrical marriage between the music & words.
(great arrangement) i hear influences that make me think of a female version of randy newman in verses, maybe band america on "fast forward my day"
a bit of the cars ric ocasek influence on "trip, trip",last "fast forward my day" even with incidental influence traces that make it even more interesting its still all you my dear.completely authentic, nice use of verses, chorus's, bridge, intro's, outro's etc. great work!
Andy, thank you for your comment. It's really introspective... seeing so much in this song...
I'm in this songwriters workshop now... and it was an assignment ... and this song isn't like my regular songs... it's more like a day in the life.. almost.. haha.. or what I'm thinking at this time.. well....
Thank you again for your comment....
Peace, ~Sharon (and I look forward to more of your stuff, too).
Nice lyrics & versatile in many areas of where it can be performed as a Rock Folk Country & Even a Dance Number.. You as a musician should know that it could be performed in many styles. The lyrics make it so. -Z
Really... I wanted to make it sort of punk in a way... I did a few takes... but I used this one.. (whatever)... I just wanted short tight sentences... experimenting... I guess.
Loved it! Nice job :-)
AlSaysIt 1 year ago
Sharon***** I have always loved your style of music and I still love him, this song is very beautiful!*****
iaco4ever 1 year ago
great :))
twistgrave 1 year ago
Hey Sharon,
great work !
We wish you all the best
REMOODS
remoods 1 year ago
Hi Sharon:) This is one of my fav's from you:) jackie
JackiesOriginals 1 year ago
@JackiesOriginals thanks Jackie. I'm glad you like it :)) ~Sharon
sharbohemia 1 year ago
I think this song is great!
keep rockin' in the free world!
Y.
yaronam 1 year ago
@yaronam Rocks!! Thank you Y. Peace <3
sharbohemia 1 year ago
this is so subtle....sneaks up on ya....really like this....great chorus...
then I'll go somewhere else....if you know what i mean....
reliablebow 1 year ago
u cool
keolif 1 year ago
You really have a great gift Sharon.... I enjoyed this:) Have a super Sunday:) jackie
karaokewoman4life 1 year ago
@karaokewoman4life Jackie, you are a very special and talented woman! Have a wonderful Sunday, Peace and thanks! Sharon <3
sharbohemia 1 year ago
@karaokewoman4life she has the cutest voice on this one
nobodysfool454 1 year ago
So well done!
Full of Spirit and Emotion!
Endless Thumbs up!
Bear
austinsplace1 1 year ago
exelente video que buena vos
alberto51608 1 year ago
I really love this song, Sharon.
Mbokittycat2 2 years ago
Thank you, E.J.!
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
another great song of yours 5*****`s
coffee489 2 years ago
Hi Sharon thats a good tune.SWEET..
Love pulls me up..Yes love is all..
You shuld produse it..Add some drums and bass it really wourth it..I like this song
:) Rock on Girl.
Peace Roger
TEMPRAMENTE 2 years ago 2
Thank you for your nice comment !
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Great song! You play very well :)
wags126126 2 years ago
Thank you very much!
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
I like your song . Very well done!!!
namnoiz 2 years ago 2
Thank you, Namnoiz.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Thanks for sharing a cool video!
plattform5163 2 years ago
Thanks, platform. I appreciate your comment.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
I can hear a bassline laying a cool groove to this one - it would kick in and give the song an immediate jolt after the little guitar-only intro.
The movement at the end of the chorus is well done. Very creative. You don't just stick to the standards do you? Very reminiscent of No Doubt.
Oswlek 2 years ago
I don't know what I stick too, actually... I'm sort of all over - but definitely not certain things. Finding myself....my sound.
I like this comment, as well... Very cool.
Thank you, Oswlek.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
its all right.... fine!!! john lopes from brasil...
invernofrio 2 years ago
Thank you so much for your comment....
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Hey, Beautiful, you make it like you want it lol. I'll talk to you later. -Z
Eckzachly 2 years ago
You know I will ... haha.. Thanks, Zach.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Oh Shar! I love this one! Those chords are sounding so cool! I feel it is done evolving my friend! Excellent just as it is!!
sherrilynn115oo 2 years ago
Thank you, Sherri, I appreciate your comment. You put a smile on my face just now... God Bless You, Friend,
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Hi, I like this very much. Very good lyrics.
Hans :o)
outtakes1and2 2 years ago
Thank you very much, Hans, I appreciate you comment.
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
A very entertaining young lady to be sure! Don't go swallowing that pletrum. Thanks for sharing.
SafeRoughneck 2 years ago
LOL... I'll be careful =)
Thanks for your comment, Safe.
~Shaz
sharbohemia 2 years ago
hey sharron sometimes if you dont work on em straight away you loose em, and that first spark is allways the best ,
great song 5****
love is all
trevor sizzle
Sizzletube 2 years ago 2
What an awesome comment Trevor - and thanks for the sub!! Yeah.. that first spark...=)
Peace ,~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Hey Shar!
You're best yet I think!
Thank you!
larrygoldin 2 years ago
Larry, thanks so much for your comment - I think you're a fantastic musician!!
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Thanks Shar! I know you're just being nice, but you rock!
larrygoldin 2 years ago
So do you, Larry !!
sharbohemia 2 years ago
You did good really nice Song
>>Sherif
SherifG1 2 years ago
Thank you, Sherif... I appreciate you comment! ~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
very good work ! keep it up,, I really enjoyed ! 5*
ronb15 2 years ago
Thanks ronb15. I appreciate your comment.
I'll try to keep it up.. and have fun at the same time....that's the ticket.. right? :)
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Most definitley Sharon ! keep up the good work !! :-)
ronb15 2 years ago
Sharon this is AWESOME hun!!! 5*
sistermoonshine13 2 years ago
Thank you, sistermoon. I appreciate the comment!. ~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Ciao sei braissima, un caro saluto dall'ITALIA
RenatoVentura54 2 years ago
Thank you, Renato, I appreciate the greeting :) ~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
very sweet, nice sounds
ruotze 2 years ago
I'm glad you liked it, ruotze. Thanks for your comment. ~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Real nice performance Sharon.
I really enjoyed this video.
PackedFunk 2 years ago
Far out - thank you for your comment!
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
pleaseant music ,great regards
chintoomsingh 2 years ago
Thank you, Chintoo, I appreciate it!
~Shaz
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Cool song, Sharon, you're getting better all the time. Keep it up, sounds great.
2wheelsturnin 2 years ago 2
Thank you, 2weehsturnin...
I appreciate it!
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Hi ! Yeah, it's comin' up forward and good ! Simple things woven into a thoughtful song ! Keep it up ! Cheers !
OlympicSong 2 years ago
That's right... live life and write about it...
Thanks for your comment... it's cool.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Your music is a pleasant trip worth a listen and a second and a third. Good goin Shaz!
ajapaws 2 years ago
Thank you, C. I appreciate your comments.
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
nice song,life is what happens..........then write about it. :)
mcbump 2 years ago
That's what trying to do... :) Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
"It's Getting Better All The Time". Keep writing and keep singing. I enjoy your music.
tommyboyz212000 2 years ago 3
Thank you, Tommy.
"I'm doing the best that I can.."
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Hallo Sharon, I didn´t hear from you for a long time. I like your song.
Friendly greetings :-)
Anette
TanteA 2 years ago 3
Thank you, Anette. Good to hear from you!
I'm glad you like my song.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Thank for your song.
marcam73 2 years ago 3
Thank you, marcam73. I appreciate you comment.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Cool tune!
mindfulmusic78 2 years ago
Thank you, mindfulmusic78. I appreciate it:)
Rocks, ~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Good music and lyrics :-)
..getting out of bed ;-)
KrisShred 2 years ago
Thank you, Kris!
~Sharon :)
(that last line was my daughter' input :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
That was awesome, I love it :)
wizardeal 2 years ago 2
Thank you for your comment.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
ur music is 2 good..from heart. great . regards
chintoomsingh 2 years ago
Thank you for your comment :) I try to make it from the heart...
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Excelente....
BETTY5391 2 years ago
Thank you, Betty5391. ~Shaz:)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Well you can chew my ear out anytime. I like to discuss songwriting. I understand where your teacher is coming from. Folks today dont have a lot of patience. so getting to the chorus quick is advantagous sometimes but I think you need to play it how you feel it. Great song!
coolanddark 2 years ago
Thanks.. I need to sometimes... chew ears :)
But play it like I feel it... yeah..well.. .that's what I did... and I'll probably just do.. (with this song)...
Whenever and whatever we create... it's a growing experience... so...
Thank you again coolanddark...
Keep rockin!!
Sharon ^_^.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
coming along very nicely I say! Great song!
coolanddark 2 years ago 2
very good wonderful by Paolo Lahguna :)
lahguna 2 years ago
Thanks, Lahguna... I'm glad you liked it.
~sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
I really like this! Great!!!
heks9966 2 years ago 2
Thank you for your comment,Frédérique I really appreciate it!
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
hey how are you
you move on better and better
big job
rudi
kampi48 2 years ago 2
Rudi, thank you. I am fine. Thank you for your video response, too.. very cool song.
One hopes to move on and get better... or at least different... evolve.
Peace, my friend, ~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Cooool !
This is a good job Sharon - Kisses
Jean
jeanchemla 2 years ago 2
Thank you, Jean. I appreciate your comment. ~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
sweet
fengshui66 2 years ago 2
Sweet is nice - thank you for yor comment. ~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
cool !!! bravo
josexara 2 years ago 2
Thank you for your comment, Jose.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Wow, what a cool song and singing! And I love the guitar and lyrics! :)
KarenEng 2 years ago
Thank you, Karen. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Just me, Shaz. Nice comments - influences of a female randy newman on "fast forward my day" or the cars ric ocasek influence on "trip, trip" or the kinks. Good stuff. I told you. It's a nice little tune to work with. lata (i rated you 5 already)
-Z
Eckzachly 2 years ago
Zach, I really appreciate this comment! Thank you...
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Hi,thanks sweet sista for the message,go a head and more support for your cool and fantstic videos...all best wishes and have a nice weekend.
EqualbalanceI 2 years ago
You are very most welcome :)
Thank you for your support....
~Shaz
sharbohemia 2 years ago
It's been a while since I've stopped by. I love your tunes. You have a distinct style.....I miss it! I dig the new song. Trip, trip...uh.
igot1i 2 years ago
Yes, it's been a while.
Thank you so much for your comment.
I'm glad you dig my new song...
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
awesome!5*****
JesseGuitar07 2 years ago
Thank you, Jesse!
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
wooooooooooooooooow
really awesome vocal line-up
GREAT ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡
Five
eddiesinner 2 years ago
Thank you, Eddie...
I'm glad you liked it.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Really cool song Shar!! LOVED IT!! jackie
jackiesplace01 2 years ago
Jackie,
Very cool of you to comment - thank you!!
Still experimenting... still evolving... we always are... and that's what makes it interesting... Have a great weekend.
Peace, ~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Very coooooool. Congrats. =D
EthanSoRockz 2 years ago 2
Thank you, Ethan.
.. and I enjoyed your new vid, too.
I guess no matter what our age, we struggle to find ourselves.... an on going adventure.
Peace friend.
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Hi Sharon, I totally agree, and yes, we do, my parents say they still struggle with this. =D
EthanSoRockz 2 years ago 2
Keep Rockin and making music!! :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Oh...dear..this song is terrible....I think you should give up song writing and become a Playboy Bunny in Vegas..
FOSEEBOY 2 years ago
You're so sweet....
Thank you for comment, Foss.
~Sharon =)
(it would be logical... huh???? haha
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Really nice original girl! Popping in my this ones for the girls playlist! Great job! *****
Cameragirl803 2 years ago
Jane, very nice of you to comment on my song. Thank you. I really appreciate it.
A girls playlist sounds cool.
~Sharon ^_^.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
I also have to tell you... on another vid I recorded in my bathroom... the acoustics were good... but I had to move the equipment out after... but it was cool. :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Lovely original song
faffytunes 2 years ago
I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you. :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Awesome!! Thanks for sharing:)
Grandma Mary
Fr3derick 2 years ago
I appreciate the comment, Grandma Mary.
Thank you.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
lovely performance my dear friend Sharon!
~Rajesh
hannahmontanarox3409 2 years ago
Thank you for your nice comment, Raj.
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
You are welcome Sharon:) ~Raj
hannahmontanarox3409 2 years ago
I certainly didnt want to fast forward this one. Interesting song and vocals. I think this song has got an eighties feel about it and the backdrop to your stage area is also retro, all good stuff you got it going on girl !
davemorag1 2 years ago
Groovey :)
Thank you for your comment.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
great!
ERICROBILLARD1 2 years ago
Thank you. :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
im digging the vocal changes!! and of course the melody!!
fantastic! =)
elviradark6 2 years ago
Awesome. Thank you, Elvira!
Very cool!!
~Sharon ^_^.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Good stuff! Vocals kind of remind me of the kinks....and the verse chord progression reminds me of something...can't put my finger on it. Sounds great!
//dan
dvnobles 2 years ago 2
Thank you, Dan.
That's awesome. It all makes me think..
you think of stuff when you perform the song.. (when doing it live...). Thanks, Sharon.
sharbohemia 2 years ago
cool to hear from you again--and I never get tired of your Zen background :p -- 5 stars
DavidRandallCurtis 2 years ago
Dave, always a pleasure to have your comments grace my page.
Thank you. ~Sharon
(and yup.. same background :p (smile).
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Excellent. I know it is still evolving well you are on a good track. I like the key changes, and you will have a great song your hands once you weed out the things you feel aren't working or add to what you already have. I would love to hear any changes you make, so send it my way when you finish it. I don't know how much you really need to change though. Pretty good how it is.
deimosianrocks 2 years ago
Pretty good how it is... I like that... thanks :) a tambourine.. perhaps...or a little percussion... it's a slow go... but it's good...... Thanks, Josh.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
...and Josh thanks for your message...
it was really cool and from the heart!
~S :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Great Job ~~~ ! all round playing , singing & writing !
I know just what you mean by evolving ! & you get down what you got before it goes away on you....... !
Rock on
Stephen
crawleykakes 2 years ago
Yeah... if you don't get down (either here or just tape) it gets lost in the would have/could have pile (sometimes)... :)
Thanks for your comment, Stephen.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Well take one was exceptionally good Sharon!!! Wonderful song and performance!!!!
classican 2 years ago
Do you really think so? lol.
Thank you, Pete. You always say nice things about my music!
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Yes I really do think so!
classican 2 years ago
(whispered) I believe you :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
grat big song !! and beautiful girl hi baby
lahguna 2 years ago
Thank you...
... I didn't know what to wear in this vid...
it was cold today... even indoors, so I threw on a blazer.. haha..
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Its very good Sharon, I like your chord structure very much. -Ron
rhopen 2 years ago
Thanks Ron.
I use a capo on the second fret... and the songs in D.
And then I wanted to do something with a jazz chord.. that's been in my mind for many months.... so there's the Fmaj7...
I'd like to do more with those in the future:)
Thanks again for your comment!
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
great mellow song & perfect lyrical marriage between the music & words.
(great arrangement) i hear influences that make me think of a female version of randy newman in verses, maybe band america on "fast forward my day"
a bit of the cars ric ocasek influence on "trip, trip",last "fast forward my day" even with incidental influence traces that make it even more interesting its still all you my dear.completely authentic, nice use of verses, chorus's, bridge, intro's, outro's etc. great work!
andyfedel 2 years ago
Andy, thank you for your comment. It's really introspective... seeing so much in this song...
I'm in this songwriters workshop now... and it was an assignment ... and this song isn't like my regular songs... it's more like a day in the life.. almost.. haha.. or what I'm thinking at this time.. well....
Thank you again for your comment....
Peace, ~Sharon (and I look forward to more of your stuff, too).
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Nice lyrics & versatile in many areas of where it can be performed as a Rock Folk Country & Even a Dance Number.. You as a musician should know that it could be performed in many styles. The lyrics make it so. -Z
Eckzachly 2 years ago 2
You have me thinking here, Z... thank you.
~Sharon :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Really... I wanted to make it sort of punk in a way... I did a few takes... but I used this one.. (whatever)... I just wanted short tight sentences... experimenting... I guess.
Thanks... haha...
sharbohemia 2 years ago
Nice song
robindavies24 2 years ago 2
Thank you for your comment.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
great song
AeroBeatlesDoorsLed 2 years ago
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
~Sharon
sharbohemia 2 years ago
nice song, good stuff
guitaoist 2 years ago
Thank you!! :)
sharbohemia 2 years ago