Wow! This short film by Dark Heart Productions was interesting, surprising and enjoyable to watch. Even though this short film was less than 10 minutes in length, the movie still made it's point in a great way! Two thumbs up once again!
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Never stop making films. Have enjoyed them all. Thank you, it truly gives a person something to think about and take a closer look at their lives. Keep touching people's hearts.
I actually just uploaded a short film I made in school, it's on my channel. It's my first one. It would be cool if I could get some comments and views to know how to improve next time or what I did good
I actually just uploaded a short film I made in school, it's on my channel. It's my first one. It would be cool if I could get some comments and views to know how to improve next time or what I did good
horrendous acting! GEESH! I couldn't get passed the first 3 minutes. Plus with their accents and the bad audio kind of a pain to follow along. Try perfecting your recording craft before you put this stuff out.
This was good. it made me cried in the end. Thats because I'm into dreams and living in the moment. Regardless what people's comments are; there is always room for improvement but the concept of this film stills brings you to the story. Good job.
P.S i like the black button too. From Los angeles, CA - Angelina
Good one. The acting isn't that great, except for the father. The British accents aren't too convincing, but the overall idea is great. Reminds me of the movie "Stay."
ok, I'm confused!! so he was dreaming he was having a conversation with his father while in reality his father talked to his kid in a coma and then they pull the plug on him. i get that. but what was the whole part about the mom supposed to mean?? could someone explain the significance of her in the movie??
this couldve been made better.. it was too obvioius what was going on. i knew before it ended what happened. i wish it was shorter, more twists. great concept tho.
This is the second time where I've thought the main character was a poor actor. This one wasn't that bad but it just seems so unnatural his acting. It's also the second time I thought the co-star did great. His dad was an awesome actor.
Wow! To the people below-- drop the religious discussion. This video can apply to all people of all faiths. It doesn't matter who's Christian and who's not. We are all human; the process (and actual event) of death happens to us all. The same accounts of predeath flashbacks has been documented in various cultures and religions around the world. So can we just enjoy the video without overanalyzing each other in the process?
Also, near the window at the bar there is a sign that says "X-mas function at the clare castle." I believe this is also intentionally symbolic, alluding to the "Crystal Palace", a title designated to a utopian society that could never be realized (I think that's it), or, on other words, a "mere dream" So perhaps the phrase is designed to symbolize redemption(X-Mas) in the sublime world, or perhaps as an extension of the human will. Hence the vanishing of the word "window." The fleeting reality
This reminds me a bit of "An Occurence at Owl Creek Bridge" by Ambrose Bierce, which also deals with a character who is having a drawn out delusion during the moments before death. The fact that the entire film takes place in one minute reminds me of the way the issue of the subjectivity of time was dealt with by Bierce. The presence of the black scissors in the medicine cabinet was an interesting use of symbolism representing the severing of life. The bar was called "The Window", also symbolic.
What most christian people believe is that when you die, you will have a glimpse or a vision, in the middle of dieing, and this glimpse is presented by heaven, so the light, the mother, his dad, both crying, love, it's the glimpse. Now my mother died of cardiac arrest, she was straight line for 25 minutes, and then she woke up. She told me (her thirteen year old son) that she saw a man, and when she was talking to him, she felt everything was okay. This movie is an example of that.
Huh? Who told you that? I thought what Christian people believed is what the Christian Bible taught....... Interesting how non Christians, Muslims, and others tell people what they believe.
are you saying I'm not a Christian? FYI I go to church EVERY Sunday, and I take in what my pastor is reading from scriptures and teaching. Yes, the majority of Christians believe what I said; AKA "Life flash before your eyes" is sort of like what it is. Now considering it's the "Majority" of people who believe that, and if you ARE a Christian, (you didn't tell me), it's okay if your part of the minority, because figuring out what happens before afterlife doesn't effect afterlife.
@sdbdrum What the hell?!?!!!! is what i said. It looks like it disappeared but notice how the camera is closer to the actors when the plate "disappears".
i cant help thinking you have copied the idea, of not realising you are dead from a film about a plane crash(cant remember what it was called unfortunately)
@1bludyeffintube1 I didn't really get it either, but I think he was in the a coma or something and his dad was talking to him aaaaaaaand when he opened the door we went to heaven? Maybe? Yeah I didn't really get it...
very good you people have talent, talent that deserves praise well done you rock carry on and you will achive more than you will ever imagine keep up the great films
what camera and editing software do u use, i need a new camcorder and i dont no what to get, great film, i cant wait to watch more, i subbed and added, 10000/5 definealtly
i see it as a guy who had been in a coma and how all of his friends and family come together spiritually one last time just for him before he dies. but thats just me. i watched it 5 times, and each time it made me cry
I just finished it during my lunch break and I agree with your take on this video. Although very difficult to watch, it did not bring me to tears.....not yet. I didn't "get it" until I saw him at the end. It all made sense then.
Wonderful Film! The quality was great, the audio was great, and the overall concept was amazing! The quality was good, and the editing was great. The audio was very clear except at some points in the bar. I thought it was a wonderful idea to keep the back round people talking so that it seemed more realistic. Even though there were people talking in the Back round I was still able to hear what the main characters were saying. The overall concept was great and execution of the main idea was even>
better. I had two problems with this short film. One was that when the main character said Shawn can i talk to you for a second 3:01-3:03 it seemed as if he didn't have to tell him something that important. The actor should have put more emotion into that line. My final problem is when the father says the dream quote the first time 4:33 he seemed rush and it seemed as if he didn't think up a response he just says it. This was a great film with many spiritual implications. 8/10. SCG
ok next time your in a funeral home or at the bed side of a person in a coma think about you talking all your bullshit and them if they can here you trying to reply but obviously they wont be heard like you saying mum will be here in a bit them in the box thinking they saying whys she comeing here then you saying your dads outside not actualy answering the coments from the dead person
i may be thick as shit but do you realy get anything out of calling people names cunt?
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nice film, great storyline as always. in comparison to black button, i thought this one came across as somewhat amateur. just in the way a number of shots were framed (specifically in the bar-at the beginning) and the audio levels (again in the bar)...i gound the background audio was far too loud. nonetheless, the writing makes up for any lacking technical areas, in fact, pretty much makes them invisible when not analyzing the film. great work
i just think,that they wanna show how it could be when you´re almost dead. this guy had an accidant or something and now he´s meeting all his friends, his dad, his dead mom, and his dad explain him that he have to leave this place now. and in that moment he go out of the door, and leaving the restaurant, he died in the hospital. in my opinion it is a very good short flim:) greetings from germany, you should check out 'sign' also a short film
the son is im a coma or something, in the bar is is his mind, him hearing everyone around him in the hospital, and him seeing all his old friends in his mind as they say goodbye
You guys gotta switch up your themes a bit... I understand death as an inevitably is a popular choice, but a short film should be able to not only operate independently of itself, but also fit into the context of a feature.
This wouldn't work as a scene in a feature, therefore it comes off pretentious and contrived.
However, you have a GREAT eye for detail, and I personally liked the editing choices.
All in all, as a fellow filmmaker, I would give this a 7/10.
Hey what equipment did you use? Did you use some kind of railing for the camera side sliding shots? Do you rent it? I think its the first time you used something like that and it def added something to the result although you might have overused it a bit at times. Nonetheless, you improve a lot with each new one. Good luck.
i guess the dream he spoke of at the beginning where he said he heard his mums voice was when he had a near death experience what hes going through now is people closest to him helping to send him off so he can die happy
I liked it! A good film all in all.. and for all who ask what is this about.. sometimes that's the point.. a film that will make you think about something may be all that the director was going for. For what it's worth I thought it was fairly str8 forward and self explanatory.
great short. the acting is good. the father was realy good. i can easý imagen him on the big drama movies. he is to profiseonal. so its true. a good
movie( script, lights, story, directing, editing and stuf big buget movie) with a bad actors is not as good anyway. but a low buget movie, with a bad cam, lights. with a good actor can still safe the movie. so imagen if you mace a good movie with a good actors and a good music. it will be a masterpice
Not bad. Some lighting issues. Your main problem is that the actor playing the father outshines everyone else in the piece (in terms of acting ability) to such an extent that he alone is convincing to an audience, or at least this one. Don't compromise with your actors - pay someone if you have to. Don't rely on friends simply because they're keen and readily available.
This one was absolutely superb. I really don't think I've seen anything quite like this yet in my search for more amature-but-not-so-amature-film-works-on-the-internet. lolz congrats. four stars from me(I rarely give more than 2.)
There was one that I recently watched. I'm sure you've seen "My Name is Lisa". Not too bad. But alas, there was another one... I just cannot remember what it was... Umm... It was about this old gentleman in a hospital, and his new roommate turns out to be homosexual. If I could remember the title I would tell you.
He reminds me of Ashens.
twiikimchi 5 months ago
Wow! This short film by Dark Heart Productions was interesting, surprising and enjoyable to watch. Even though this short film was less than 10 minutes in length, the movie still made it's point in a great way! Two thumbs up once again!
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Sunhil should of been the main character. Barrel of laughs that bloke.
burnerzRocks 7 months ago
I really love the style. The plot is predictable though. At the very last moment of life, I hope we all go surrounded by our love ones.
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kevinmarkfilms 9 months ago
pretty good!
Thsiscool 10 months ago
... and then he pressed the black button.
Awesomeman37 10 months ago 7
Great short - by the way commenters - if you have nothing kind to say - then shut up! I love these shorts from DHP!!!
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MrGegiGhambashidze 11 months ago
Never stop making films. Have enjoyed them all. Thank you, it truly gives a person something to think about and take a closer look at their lives. Keep touching people's hearts.
monkhino 1 year ago 2
acting was horrible
brownukelele 1 year ago
sad story
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Rober Grubb is a brilliant actor. The premise, however, is a bit cliche'.
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Garethmalone1 1 year ago
Beautiful.
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TechnoJunkie20 1 year ago
im impressed...and jealous lol
TheBTBproduction 1 year ago
i didnt get it ...@_@
kissxofxblood 1 year ago
Not as good as Black Button but still not bad.
Acting is very good and I don't know why people are saying it isn't. They probably can't act for shit
MEareCAT 1 year ago
this sorta reminded me of the last episode of lost.... obviously this came first, but... yeah. just similar.
in2myheart 1 year ago
horrendous acting! GEESH! I couldn't get passed the first 3 minutes. Plus with their accents and the bad audio kind of a pain to follow along. Try perfecting your recording craft before you put this stuff out.
CrazedWolfen 1 year ago
@CrazedWolfen fuck you
adameverill 1 year ago 4
meh...
cruiser514sb 1 year ago
This was good. it made me cried in the end. Thats because I'm into dreams and living in the moment. Regardless what people's comments are; there is always room for improvement but the concept of this film stills brings you to the story. Good job.
P.S i like the black button too. From Los angeles, CA - Angelina
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TJVProductions1 1 year ago
mediocre acting, pretentious concept. still a bit engaging so it wasn't bad.
icyofnoobtoob 1 year ago
its pretty much the same concept as the movie, awake. Not a great story. And the actor was shit. Sorry about being real. But don't give up.
placebo4yo 1 year ago
very gripping!
PatelSuchana 1 year ago
horrible..
Chrisjwill87 1 year ago
Good one. The acting isn't that great, except for the father. The British accents aren't too convincing, but the overall idea is great. Reminds me of the movie "Stay."
toastedskater 1 year ago
@toastedskater They're Australian...
Indextic 1 year ago
thats a pretty cool film
check mine out its pretty funny
craig931509 1 year ago
ok, I'm confused!! so he was dreaming he was having a conversation with his father while in reality his father talked to his kid in a coma and then they pull the plug on him. i get that. but what was the whole part about the mom supposed to mean?? could someone explain the significance of her in the movie??
tickyj45 1 year ago
@tickyj45 the mom was dead
the kid in the coma is moving on to be with his mom
f16pilot92 1 year ago
this couldve been made better.. it was too obvioius what was going on. i knew before it ended what happened. i wish it was shorter, more twists. great concept tho.
LasVegasBarbie 1 year ago
theese guys are genius.......
you should REALLY make a studio and a full movie featuring hollywood actors..
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Sheimii 1 year ago
I don't understand this...
:O
Oh, he's like in a comma?
:_S
Suerocks11 1 year ago
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Yes, the young man is in a coma, and he's "dreaming" as his father talks to him before the physicians pull the plug.
Vaskre 1 year ago 2
the boys dad sounds like anthony hopkins somtimes
gearsofshock 1 year ago
i sort of had it sussed from watching black button.
but it wasnt quite what i expected.
i really enjoyed this (:
courageousvictory 1 year ago
the actor is pretty bad....i know i suck but damn...
lonesn1per 1 year ago
The actor is terrible.
flamablesteve 1 year ago
looks very good. if it would have been longer, maybe showing what ever happened to him and his mom, it would have been more sad.
gregchance324 1 year ago
good to see they kept putting product in his hair even during the coma
oligophagy 1 year ago
Very good. Touching
Cotugno33 1 year ago
This is the second time where I've thought the main character was a poor actor. This one wasn't that bad but it just seems so unnatural his acting. It's also the second time I thought the co-star did great. His dad was an awesome actor.
b7i7l7l7y7 1 year ago
Fucking great short film mate. :)
JoeBetrosFilms 1 year ago
hey, very nice video :) really liked the concept...though you could have done with a lill better camera quality
pavandaxini17 1 year ago
This reminded me of "El Sur" by jorges luis borges. It was great!
niaTHEpain 1 year ago
this is sooooooo good!
GeorgiaaQuinn 1 year ago
woah, thats a twist
SIRJAMESORR 1 year ago
at the beginning i was all confused then i was like omg thts weird and then i was crying at the end i was like AWH!!!
Katogirl1 1 year ago
oooh got goosbumps!! VERY good
Cornonmycob 1 year ago
\yooo
BradBRAUNSTEIN 1 year ago
hmm. my sixth time watching this.
xxxhannahxzx 1 year ago
Wow! To the people below-- drop the religious discussion. This video can apply to all people of all faiths. It doesn't matter who's Christian and who's not. We are all human; the process (and actual event) of death happens to us all. The same accounts of predeath flashbacks has been documented in various cultures and religions around the world. So can we just enjoy the video without overanalyzing each other in the process?
JoshDee84 1 year ago
Also, near the window at the bar there is a sign that says "X-mas function at the clare castle." I believe this is also intentionally symbolic, alluding to the "Crystal Palace", a title designated to a utopian society that could never be realized (I think that's it), or, on other words, a "mere dream" So perhaps the phrase is designed to symbolize redemption(X-Mas) in the sublime world, or perhaps as an extension of the human will. Hence the vanishing of the word "window." The fleeting reality
drezler5 1 year ago
This reminds me a bit of "An Occurence at Owl Creek Bridge" by Ambrose Bierce, which also deals with a character who is having a drawn out delusion during the moments before death. The fact that the entire film takes place in one minute reminds me of the way the issue of the subjectivity of time was dealt with by Bierce. The presence of the black scissors in the medicine cabinet was an interesting use of symbolism representing the severing of life. The bar was called "The Window", also symbolic.
drezler5 1 year ago
that was great, loved it
luvcomedy123 1 year ago
What most christian people believe is that when you die, you will have a glimpse or a vision, in the middle of dieing, and this glimpse is presented by heaven, so the light, the mother, his dad, both crying, love, it's the glimpse. Now my mother died of cardiac arrest, she was straight line for 25 minutes, and then she woke up. She told me (her thirteen year old son) that she saw a man, and when she was talking to him, she felt everything was okay. This movie is an example of that.
Manifest222 1 year ago
Huh? Who told you that? I thought what Christian people believed is what the Christian Bible taught....... Interesting how non Christians, Muslims, and others tell people what they believe.
cyorkgo 1 year ago
are you saying I'm not a Christian? FYI I go to church EVERY Sunday, and I take in what my pastor is reading from scriptures and teaching. Yes, the majority of Christians believe what I said; AKA "Life flash before your eyes" is sort of like what it is. Now considering it's the "Majority" of people who believe that, and if you ARE a Christian, (you didn't tell me), it's okay if your part of the minority, because figuring out what happens before afterlife doesn't effect afterlife.
Manifest222 1 year ago
watch the plate around 4:20-4:30
sdbdrum 1 year ago 83
good catch, didnt notice that ay
luvcomedy123 1 year ago
@sdbdrum lol
courageousvictory 1 year ago
@sdbdrum What the hell?!?!!!! is what i said. It looks like it disappeared but notice how the camera is closer to the actors when the plate "disappears".
BroncoFanForever1 1 year ago
@sdbdrum cool
fretryu 1 year ago
@sdbdrum Whoops lol
padlockd 1 year ago
@sdbdrum lmao, nice catch
turtwig533 5 months ago
that guy carnt act looool
teabagnose 1 year ago
agreed -_-
papayabadger 1 year ago
Well, I'm sorry, but i didn't find it a chef-d'oeuvre...@ the beginning is pretty boring and the main actor faked a lot.
But congratulations for the effort.
madsoncampos 1 year ago
Fuck people!! What don't you get??? The movie it's so simple to understand!!!
Great movie but the idea it's been used in so many other films!! Still good movie!!
montyhades 1 year ago
i cant help thinking you have copied the idea, of not realising you are dead from a film about a plane crash(cant remember what it was called unfortunately)
dinglis91 1 year ago
i dont get it :/
1bludyeffintube1 2 years ago
@1bludyeffintube1 I didn't really get it either, but I think he was in the a coma or something and his dad was talking to him aaaaaaaand when he opened the door we went to heaven? Maybe? Yeah I didn't really get it...
EmilyCat200 1 year ago
very good you people have talent, talent that deserves praise well done you rock carry on and you will achive more than you will ever imagine keep up the great films
fretryu 2 years ago
why does every single short movie start with a guy waking up? bored me too much to watch till the end.
fallenepitaph 2 years ago 3
very cool guys
4thbeast 2 years ago
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Barbacudas 2 years ago
Damn, bravo!
ntelekt1 2 years ago
if u need an aftereffect man in ur team it s a pleasure to do it 4 u
ahmedselimjouhar 2 years ago
what camera and editing software do u use, i need a new camcorder and i dont no what to get, great film, i cant wait to watch more, i subbed and added, 10000/5 definealtly
95bradders95 2 years ago 2
You guys are amazing!!! This is the third short film i've watched from you guys and they've all been superb.
MrTRWright 2 years ago 3
i like it! good job! high five to you!!!
luvrgurl94 2 years ago 2
whew! it got me goosebumps...
coolcyberblue 2 years ago 2
work on the acting and script.. concept was ok though
jebestus 2 years ago
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Wow this is fake
Glitchstream 2 years ago
really nice!
23moloko 2 years ago 2
I am also glad I stumbled upon this. It is a joy to watch. Thank you.
ourhousetx 2 years ago
This is amazing. Randomly stumbled upon it. Thank you :)
melllabunnny 2 years ago
you guys really are creative and have other views in life which is brilliant
hahyunlee 2 years ago
this was pretty good..
mikeysgirl314 2 years ago
no lightening? not so good..
immoren 2 years ago
5 star for the concept of the movie.....
andysubba01 2 years ago
meh
lovehatething 2 years ago
neither me
nileshcamera 2 years ago
I dont get it
faceSSScase 2 years ago
i see it as a guy who had been in a coma and how all of his friends and family come together spiritually one last time just for him before he dies. but thats just me. i watched it 5 times, and each time it made me cry
xxxhannahxzx 2 years ago 16
I just finished it during my lunch break and I agree with your take on this video. Although very difficult to watch, it did not bring me to tears.....not yet. I didn't "get it" until I saw him at the end. It all made sense then.
applejax19562 2 years ago
i loved this film
5/5
KaslarProductions 2 years ago
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donttouchmethere 2 years ago
check the halloween movie i made
PaulJTV 2 years ago
I didn't like it at all :(
DosntMatter666 2 years ago
Wonderful Film! The quality was great, the audio was great, and the overall concept was amazing! The quality was good, and the editing was great. The audio was very clear except at some points in the bar. I thought it was a wonderful idea to keep the back round people talking so that it seemed more realistic. Even though there were people talking in the Back round I was still able to hear what the main characters were saying. The overall concept was great and execution of the main idea was even>
SuperCriticguy 2 years ago
better. I had two problems with this short film. One was that when the main character said Shawn can i talk to you for a second 3:01-3:03 it seemed as if he didn't have to tell him something that important. The actor should have put more emotion into that line. My final problem is when the father says the dream quote the first time 4:33 he seemed rush and it seemed as if he didn't think up a response he just says it. This was a great film with many spiritual implications. 8/10. SCG
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mikeknowseverything 2 years ago
lyked it...
towhidabid 2 years ago
in my opinion black button was better
mataingradina 2 years ago 28
hence is why black button won awards, while this is just a finalist, but to be able to make into the finalist is till wicked
XfaCTor94 2 years ago
@mataingradina Black button is way over-rated. Strangers is better short film.
donbear1983 1 year ago
Very very good, keep the work up.
ferroemusculo 2 years ago
this would of been better if it was the characters speaches to the dead guy and his replies not herd
eg its nice to see you i couldnt believe when i herd i came straight the way
he replies came where? what did you hear but the person talking just carries on with what there saying
what do you think?
DjGizzo 2 years ago
you're an idiot
yeenar 2 years ago
ok next time your in a funeral home or at the bed side of a person in a coma think about you talking all your bullshit and them if they can here you trying to reply but obviously they wont be heard like you saying mum will be here in a bit them in the box thinking they saying whys she comeing here then you saying your dads outside not actualy answering the coments from the dead person
i may be thick as shit but do you realy get anything out of calling people names cunt?
DjGizzo 2 years ago
you're really stupid
yeenar 2 years ago
Didn't you call him a name? Hypocrite.
jackbuttking4 2 years ago
cool vid, and at 0:55 the tree looks like a toilet. lol
jandrez21 2 years ago 7
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kane5250 2 years ago
wow, that was so cool
lizbug27 2 years ago
nice film, great storyline as always. in comparison to black button, i thought this one came across as somewhat amateur. just in the way a number of shots were framed (specifically in the bar-at the beginning) and the audio levels (again in the bar)...i gound the background audio was far too loud. nonetheless, the writing makes up for any lacking technical areas, in fact, pretty much makes them invisible when not analyzing the film. great work
MajicPictures 2 years ago 3
amazing.....loved it....<3 respect from india to dark hearts production,,,!!
pinkybarbie1989 2 years ago 2
greetings from the philippines! more power to dark heart productions!!! XD
chadsenga 2 years ago
lolololololololololololololololololololooloollolollolollolololololololololololololool
marcelledbetter1011 2 years ago
The dad was in the Road Warrior!
ccmlvnev 2 years ago
The dad was also in Black Button wasn't he??? lol Aussie's smaller than we think.
dschaafnz 2 years ago
yeah i thought of the same :D it's funny.
and i really like the dark heart productions!!
AurorasTears 2 years ago
whoa
horsewhisperer990 2 years ago
nice plot
CAPSrCHAMPS 2 years ago
good acting. nice concept!
iamubu 2 years ago
I dont get it, can someone fill me in?
warrenandfriends 2 years ago
i just think,that they wanna show how it could be when you´re almost dead. this guy had an accidant or something and now he´s meeting all his friends, his dad, his dead mom, and his dad explain him that he have to leave this place now. and in that moment he go out of the door, and leaving the restaurant, he died in the hospital. in my opinion it is a very good short flim:) greetings from germany, you should check out 'sign' also a short film
johnsonrouge 2 years ago 2
the son is im a coma or something, in the bar is is his mind, him hearing everyone around him in the hospital, and him seeing all his old friends in his mind as they say goodbye
8pezzer8 2 years ago 3
You guys gotta switch up your themes a bit... I understand death as an inevitably is a popular choice, but a short film should be able to not only operate independently of itself, but also fit into the context of a feature.
This wouldn't work as a scene in a feature, therefore it comes off pretentious and contrived.
However, you have a GREAT eye for detail, and I personally liked the editing choices.
All in all, as a fellow filmmaker, I would give this a 7/10.
SuperMarioJedi 2 years ago
beginning is weird but end was pretty good. 3/5
ilusionist11 2 years ago
Hey what equipment did you use? Did you use some kind of railing for the camera side sliding shots? Do you rent it? I think its the first time you used something like that and it def added something to the result although you might have overused it a bit at times. Nonetheless, you improve a lot with each new one. Good luck.
ponggr 2 years ago
?.....idont get it...... ?
littlevampiresis 2 years ago 2
i guess the dream he spoke of at the beginning where he said he heard his mums voice was when he had a near death experience what hes going through now is people closest to him helping to send him off so he can die happy
jonanice 2 years ago
Spastic editing, and the first 5 minutes should be cut out
styxman09 2 years ago
Beautifull, made me almost cry... had to thought about my life & and my dead familymembers
In my opinion: Awesome Film!
CrunkSouljah 2 years ago
I liked it! A good film all in all.. and for all who ask what is this about.. sometimes that's the point.. a film that will make you think about something may be all that the director was going for. For what it's worth I thought it was fairly str8 forward and self explanatory.
CrisVangel 2 years ago
took awhile for me to figure out what was going on but it was beautifuly shot and the direction was brilliant
filmmaker456 2 years ago 4
The colors of the video are bad i can do better at home lol but i liked the story hmmm its kinda complicated but goood !
pianolla1 2 years ago
fuck you Slaveeck that was amazing
BoGator111 2 years ago
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I don't like it,unprofessional ... good luck!
Slaveeck 2 years ago
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fuck off
fmKUBRICK 2 years ago
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fuck of u ... it's my opinion about this "film"
Slaveeck 2 years ago
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well, ... FUCK YOU
fmKUBRICK 2 years ago
great short. the acting is good. the father was realy good. i can easý imagen him on the big drama movies. he is to profiseonal. so its true. a good
movie( script, lights, story, directing, editing and stuf big buget movie) with a bad actors is not as good anyway. but a low buget movie, with a bad cam, lights. with a good actor can still safe the movie. so imagen if you mace a good movie with a good actors and a good music. it will be a masterpice
Gaprielll 2 years ago
Wow the father is an AMAZING actor and he's even better in The Black Button good job guys :)
DenziCloud 2 years ago
so this is a dream and its him dying?
crazy89mex 2 years ago
ok kinda figure.
cybermonk2005 2 years ago
i was confused tbh. the main point was very late in the short film. but otherwise it was well done.
LogicOfLife90 2 years ago
really great job. very interesting. amazing amount of intrigue and mystery packed into this for a short.
afficionado81 2 years ago
Very interesting. I'll have to watch it again to get all of it, I think, but very good.
cylobaby 2 years ago
Not bad. Some lighting issues. Your main problem is that the actor playing the father outshines everyone else in the piece (in terms of acting ability) to such an extent that he alone is convincing to an audience, or at least this one. Don't compromise with your actors - pay someone if you have to. Don't rely on friends simply because they're keen and readily available.
kidastronaut 2 years ago 4
Wow, that was amazing, well done mayne'.
BANGONEM 2 years ago
more positive response
isismelting 2 years ago
what cam did you shoot this on? looks great
fredrickkinsman 2 years ago
does anybody else see the toilet seat in the tree at 0:58?
urikohoshichan 2 years ago 3
what the hell are you talking about?
TheBlackenedWHITE 2 years ago
Um. That was weird, but well executed.
Slipbak101 2 years ago
i cryed really badly
kometmoment 2 years ago
nice bounceboard lol.
lostintheabiss 2 years ago
I have no Idea what that was or what happened, but it was great!
john6380 2 years ago
wow excellent peice, made me cry. thanks for as great film! 5 stars!
angie4josh 2 years ago
good one .
nonas36 2 years ago
excellent...very dramatic
dharmesha13 2 years ago
i didn't get it ...soo confused ...
MMCBF 2 years ago
This one was absolutely superb. I really don't think I've seen anything quite like this yet in my search for more amature-but-not-so-amature-film-works-on-the-internet. lolz congrats. four stars from me(I rarely give more than 2.)
un0m3asa13ah 2 years ago
i've been looking for good short films. what i look for is a captivating, interesting and amazing concept/ story. any recommendations?
jetsterx 2 years ago
There was one that I recently watched. I'm sure you've seen "My Name is Lisa". Not too bad. But alas, there was another one... I just cannot remember what it was... Umm... It was about this old gentleman in a hospital, and his new roommate turns out to be homosexual. If I could remember the title I would tell you.
un0m3asa13ah 2 years ago
look up 'short film spin' amazing.
courtneyTbitch 2 years ago
Yeah spin is one of the best shorts you should also check out still life (my favorite one) 10 minutes, more
TheDUDE184 2 years ago