Hey bro. So, where to start? Your vocals are kinda sloppy, the lyrics are kind of good in places. You made a mistake breaking the fourth wall in your line about writing another song. Either write a song about a song, or don't mention that this is a song. Suspension of disbelief my friend. And notes. Take a music theory class. You've got to take the listener on a journey through your song. You have to make them want a certain chord. That's what makes people listen.
You sound like some shitty emo fag.
superpyragas 4 days ago in playlist Uploaded videos
This song is offensive to my ears.
superpyragas 4 days ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Hey bro. So, where to start? Your vocals are kinda sloppy, the lyrics are kind of good in places. You made a mistake breaking the fourth wall in your line about writing another song. Either write a song about a song, or don't mention that this is a song. Suspension of disbelief my friend. And notes. Take a music theory class. You've got to take the listener on a journey through your song. You have to make them want a certain chord. That's what makes people listen.
CellotasticallyYours 4 days ago