Performance Feedback Revision - Hammersmith Apollo

[MrMois007]

new eminem



[BeBoBli]

@MrMois007 eminem is some garbage christian wigger

[JonathanBX]

Certainly not the greatest flow but I love this all the same :)

[osmosisbrown1]

Sheer excellence - loved it!

[tuckerch]

Search for BBC Nerdstock 2010 via BitTorrent. This clip was part of the show.

[sanQ]

Why do you women love this guy so much?

[sefifteen187]

baba.... just be my fucking boyfriend already

[UncleMark13]

when did the audiance at the appollo turn white?!?

[dl432112311]

Nice, but if sounded sketchy, like he was about to crack

[azarecTor84]

what a crap, 4 minutes of my life wasted...

[xxVIKxx100]

@azarecTor84 You're illiterate, learn to form complete sentences you fucking dolt.

[LifeIsForEmos8D]

@azarecTor84 you're mistaken, it's the other 26 years, 11 months, 6 days, 23 hours and 56 minutes you wasted.

[HHKvancouver]

I had no idea who this guy was and he came to Hip-Hop Karaoke last week and he KILLED IT! NAS IS LIKE!

[Nancysissypants]

3 people have devolved

[wartimepeace]

dude you suck

[vGRAFINATORv]

most rappers cant do a legit freestyle... lil wayne cant. theres a vid of it

[healthyurbankitchen]

I removed my comment because of the typical Youtube commentary. Had some of you actually read my comment, instead of emotionally responding and defending your hero, you might have seen the first sentence: ' great lyrical content - the world needs more truth in order to evolve '

His freestyle - in this performance - is weak. That's not a personal attack, its a fact. Any performer who gets on stage knows there will be both positive & negative feedback. Some of you peeps need to lighten up.

[oliversenord]

This guy stayed over at my house in England, as part of a Evolutionary conviention. Hes a really nice guy even watched some of the world cup with him.

[johnnyp76]

this sends shivers down my spine. pure genius.

[njfilar]

Worst

Freestyle

Ever

[texasspirit314]

Pretty good, but you need to find a way to breath quieter.

[Teraneo]

He's a step above spoken word. Good lyrics but not good at rapping.

[xsexybambix]

@healthyurbankitchen

fuck off, you don't know anything about him- he came to my school today and did a workshop with us. and he is an AMAZING rapper live and an INCREDIBLE freestyler! you dont know what your talking about shut the FUCK up and if you dont like him stop watching his videos.

[death8kami]

his gasps of air is the only thing that's bothering me.

[jaytonbye]

@healthyurbankitchen I'd really like to hear you stay on topic about a subject as technical as evolution.

[healthyurbankitchen]

@jaytonbye Jay, this is a music video, not a dissertation. my first comment on his topic was supportive, but his freestyle was weak - that comment was about skill, not the topic.

[NeverReality]

@healthyurbankitchen

What, because he's white? I don't understand people. I actually thought you were trolling at first, but I looked at your Youtube profile.

I'm really curious, in what way shape or form does this guy sound or seem anything like Eminem?

And that Freestyle was pretty decent, especially since he stays on topic and involves the crowd and where he is at the time. And this song, whenever performed, always has a freestyle in it. Gonna hit and miss occasionally. I liked it though.

[healthyurbankitchen]

@NeverReality I like it as well. Elements of his tonality and style resemble Eminem. Maybe my language was a bit harsh, but this is a music video, this is expected, its not a NY Times book review & its also the Apollo - people get destroyed there. My first statement (that no one seemed to notice) was that his content is great and the world needs more of this, but the freestyle was weak. Why are commenters (not you) so sensitive and defensive?

[UnderseaCaveman]

PHENOMENAL

[MsTicker1]

I saw u on Rachel Maddow too and I wanted to hear more. I love that intellectual rap! Ur the bomb like Eminem's got a geeky side..lol

[1jyoung]

just saw u on the Rachel Maddow show on msnbc. Would love to catch your act live. I'm adding u to my favorites playlist.

[dossiify]

this guy is stonking!!! (good)

[IThinkdoU]

OMG!!!!  Love it!!!

[jaytonbye]

this was great

[G0trex]

I really liked the smooth transition in the beginning from talking to rapping. You are like an intelligent Eminem. Keep up the good job!

[anthonya1g]

@G0trex  LOL agree.

[loosekarrott]

YOYO

THE ORIGIN OF SPECIES AIN'T NO FECES

DOG

BELIEVE ME

what

[loosekarrott]

so fucking epic

[narudis]

Amazing job baba :)

[Oortkuiper]

Smacked it!!!.....again. Bless

[Craigipedia]

wicked

[ScentedNectar]

Excellent. I really don't know what else to say here. I'd help with some negative feedback for you, but I just can't see any need for further revisions to that song. Hope you don't mind some positive feedback missing suggestions for further revisions, because I really like this video just as it is in its current state. :)

[CosmicScout]

Awesome.

[jakebowerbank]

This is brilliant!

[rogan71]

I saw this live...No one was expecting it. It It blew everyone away, and for me stole the show....Even Richard Dawkins had a hard time following it - Now there's a job well done. "Peer reviewed rap" indeed.

Respect

[bettySwollox]

@rogan71

Have you seen this one by him too?

watch?v=e5cGFJuMgXo&playnext_f­rom=TL&videos=wfUpXML5CBQ&feat­ure=sub

[calspace]

Dude, the reason they aren't responding is because as soon as we start laughing, we can't hear what you're saying, and there's no rewind at the Apollo.

[mossytree]

i'm getting excited about science for the first time in my life ;). good job baba!

[quasarsphere]

It took me a while, too. I gave not a shit about science until I discovered Carl Sagan when I was 30. Now I'm 35, and science is the closest thing there is to God.

[CosmicScout]

That's unfortunate.

[donnyblue]

When Eleanor Gwyn-Jones send me a bit to watch, I pay attention. Find your biggest fan here: @eleanorgj

[EdwardWhelanPiano]

I don't much care for rap, but this is quite interesting. More like poetry than music though.