Dragon Ball Helios Warriors episode 1

[cam281993]

story is original writing could us some work ill check out the next few maybe it gets better

[davy2233]

name of music intro

[Solo718]

Overall it's excellent I'd have to agree with @MrSMBZ though the intro is a bit long

[xit111]

born in the milky way from different stars?

[Maximos4]

@xit111 yes, the milky way has many stars

[MrSMBZ]

dude no offence to you or you're videos because there totally awsome but please make the intros shorter

[Mafiaptwarrock]

name of music 0.00 > 2.27 ??

[Maximos4]

@Mafiaptwarrock Ameno from Era

[MrSMBZ]

@Mafiaptwarrock it's suppose to be like this 0:00 > 2:27

[MrAssasin7]

it's the best

[DennyA5]

great fanfic



[CtCnJB28]

Not going to lie, this has got to be one of the best ff storylines that i've heard/seen. I really like your plot, and presentation. Very well done dude, im impressed.

[SSJProtecter]

It's good, very original. You turned something form the show, the dragonballs, into your own original idea.

[Maximos4]

Thanks dude =)

[iamhereforever]

@SSJProtecter actualy there is nothing from the show lol. those are gameplay records but not the cartoon

[lilmoe1228]

Unbelivable man,this is just fantastic!

[Maximos4]

ty  =)

[nearthe2nd]

looks great so far

[bababydell]

the part when gogetq tells thqt he has become 70m q sayen can live 1000 years but gerat story

[Maximos4]

Well I don't know if a saiyan can live for 1000 years, but I do know that in my series saiyans' life span is similar to humans, with the diference that saiyans don't get weaker or more unhealthy as they grow old.

Also, with saiyan genes they are capable to fight until the last minute of their "natural" life. They are a fighting race after all.

Hope I made clear my point of view.

Thanks for watching

[Giovanni123456789101]

Your story is very good.

And the music is great!!!!

10/5!!!

[THEBOOK34LIFE]

Hey dude I seen u comment on another fanfic saying to watch ur's and I'm actually glad that I did because It's very gud.

[KrystalKlear20]

Hey this is awesome! =D Your English is pretty good. The storyline seems welcoming. =)

[ZegetaX1]

nice episode

[T33KAY1]

I can't believe this is your first one. The storyline is great and I actually watched all of it. This is one fanfic that I'm gonna follow. Some improvements though. Maybe change the font style make it more "funky" and write the subtitles one line after another, this way it looks like they're talking. But dude seriously other than those there's nothing else. Well done!

[ograndebatata]

Bem, o que eu posso dizer disto é que a ideia parece interessante. Há alguns erros ortográficos e de sintaxe, mas nada de muito grave. Além do mais, eu dificilmente sou do tipo que deve ter moral para criticar. Parabéns. Gostava de ver o que acontece depois.