Creative Writing Story Structure- advanced Part 9/12

[SnidebotJENKINS]

Off with your penis, bob!

[ddsharper]

Where did you get the music? It's great and nonintrusive.

[Theblizzardking]

Nobody deserves their penis cut off, you sicko.

[architectus777]

@Theblizzardking lol, yeah, but there are characters who believe rapist need their penises cut off. Others support capitol punishment, which I am totally against. I am also against chopping off penises.

[ImDrunkOnBaileys]

this is were iron man 2 went wrong. These videos are great thank you *****

[TheTopBloke]

LOL Does that spacey music help you come up with this stuff?

[Gooodwitch]

my goal isn't revealed until the final 3/4 of story.

its kind of mystery suspense. but once everyone figures out what the goal is they will have diverse viewpoints because is controversial and people have to make big decisions.

[Flaoither3]

@Gooodwitch

when you say "peaple"  do you mean the characters in your story or the readers?

[totallymoah]

Desire.

Need.

first Immoral action.

plan to reach goal.  Got it! :D

[Nades129]

The yanomamo culture is like that.

[L3G3ND14]

by the way, the link to the story structure doesnt work, or maybe im doing it wrong...

[L3G3ND14]

hey man, why dont u mind ur own business. This helps a lot, u need to do something to show what he means, u know "for example.'

[koldkase77]

hey man, why not do a new video without making up a story as you go along and also keep it organized. I could do this series in two videos, the rest is your story

[architectus777]

Because like me many learn by examples. If you wish to make a two part video, please do so. You can link to it here.

[Starfall3]

by him telling this story, he shows what is needed in a plot.

[whoopsiedoop]

You're confused. Nobody deserves to be raped. Ergo, if you can't control yourself, your penis needs to be cut off.